cool dudes and morena probs-mn & sg ff pt 10 pg 31 - Page 11

hey....just caught up with all the parts....and its amazing..man, how i wish u were the writer for MJHT. i sooooo wanna see something like this in the morena track..man this is brilliant..please continue soon
and in this ff..im loving both...SG and MN...not just one.....please update soon and pm me

wonderfully written zoya
nice part
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm



sana

zoya!!! u rock man!! what an update!! awesome, brilliant!! i loved it alot!!

part 6

Mayank was standing with uday and benji. Nupur along with dia was sitting with the rest of the girls. All the girls sitting with dia and nupur were staring in myanaks direction and giggling. Nupur was too busy to notice any of this but dia noticed it. She smiled at the thought of getting a chance to annoy nupur.

"nupur yeh tumhaari morena ki ladkiyan mayank se kaafi impressed lagti hain.", she whispered in nupurs ears.

Nupurs eyes immediately shot in the girls direction and saw that they were indeed checking him out. she turned to look at mayank and he gave her one of his killer smiles. The smile made all the girls around her sigh loudly which annoyed nupur to the core. She was furious with the girls for staring at her mayank and furious with mayank for giving his killer smile. What was the need to smile like that? Wasn't he aware of the fact that his smiles could make any girl go weak in her knees? Idiot. Suddenly she saw one of her friends approach mayank. She stiffened watching her with mayank.

"ji aap ko koi pareshaani toh nahi hain naa?", a girl came towards maaynk and asked.

mayank was surprised at her question. More so bcoz he had taken part in all the activities taken place and suddenly a girl whom he had not even seen before asks him whether he was having any problems.

"nahi. Mujhe koi problem nahi hain. Main thik hun.", mayank replied politely.

"haan hume pareshaani hain.", benji and uday said in unison.

The girl ignored them. and spoke to mayank, "ji mera naam kirti hain. Aur aapka?"

"main mayank.", mayank replied smiling. He wasn't paying attention towards her. his attention was solely taken by nupur.

"aur main uday. Aur yeh benji.", uday butted in quickly.

She ignored them once again.

"aap mere saath dance karenge?", she asked mayank.

Mayank looked at her and smiled.

"actually main apne dance partner ke alaawa kisi ke saath dance nahi karta.", he replied politely.

"hum dance karte hain naa apke saath.", benji and uday said in unison.

The girl just shook her head and went from there.

Nupur was watching this very intently. What the hell was kirti doing with mayank? To see him with someone else was unacceptable. Only she had the right to be with mayank and no-one else. She got up from her place and walked upto mayank.

"tum usse kya baat kar rahe the?", she asked sternly.

"who nupur who naa mayank ke saath dance karna chahti thi.", uday told her.

She glared at mayank who was glaring at uday. Uday and benji left before mayank could say anything.

"tum uday bhaiyya ko kya ghur rahe ho mayank? Tumne usse kya kahaan?", she asked.

"yahi ke main apne dance partner ke bina dance nahi karta.", mayank replied smiling at her. and nupur again heard the sighs from the girls present in the hall. Her temper was already flaring now.

"mayank tum aise smile mat karo.", she ordered him.

He looked curiously at nupur and asked, "kyun? Ab main smile bhi nahi kar sakta?"

"kar sakte ho. Par yahaan nahi.", nupur replied.

"aare yeh kya baat hui? Ab smile kya jagah dekh ke karni padegi? Aur waise tumhe toh meri smile pasand hain naa?", he asked again smiling at her expression which was somewhere between a blush and irritation.

"mayank kahaan na aise smile mat karo. Who tumhaari sadu smile hi do.", nupur said almost requested.

Mayank was amused now. He wanted to know why she was saying that. Probably he hadn't heard the sighs and all the attention his smile was drawing from the girls in the function.

"who….woh tumhe saari ladkiyaan dekh rahi hain.", nupur told him hesitantly.

Mayank almost choked with laughter. She was getting upset bcoz of that?

"nupur iss wajah se tum mujhe smile karne se rok rahi thi? Nupur yeh toh Mumbai mein bhi hota hain.", he said proudly.

"jyada udo mat mayank. Aur tum smile nahi karoge. Samjhe.", she ordered him.

"nupur agar morena ke saare ladke tumhaare deewane hain toh mere bhi toh thodi fans hone chahiye naa? Maine kabhi kahaan hain tumse kit um smile mat karo kyunki yahaan ke ladke tumhe dekh rahe hain? Nahi naa? Toh?", mayank asked laughing.

Nupur just glared at him.

"nupur meri har smile sirf tumhaare liye hain. Aur tumhe toh maine pehle hi keh diya tha naa ki meri life mein tum akeli ladki ho.", mayank told her.

She blushed at his reply.

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Gunajn took samart to the kitchen. He was goofing around as usual. She was searching for a glass while samrat sat on the counter just next to her.

"chashmish tum uss ladke ko jaanti ho?", samrat asked. he wanted to ask her this question badly ever since he had seen her talking to him the other day.

"kis ladke ko?", gunjan asked. she still hadn't found a glass.

"ussiko jisko tumne MERA glass de diya.", samrat said childishly.

Gunajn laughed at him and said, "arre saahil? Haan who mere class mein padhta tha."

"um…tumhaara dost hain?", samrat asked trying his best not to sound like his life depended on it.

"umm…nahi. Mera matlab hum kabhi kabhi baat karte hain par dost nahin hain.", gunjan replied.

"great. So who tumhaara friend nahi hain. Cool!!", samrat said smiling from ear to ear.

"umm…haan par tum itne khush kyun ho?", gunjan asked confused.

"uhh.. nahi aise hi. Par tum uss din usse kya baat kar rahi thi? I mean jab hum morena dekhne gaye the.", samrat asked.

" who actually saahil ki behen meri bahut achchi dost hain. Who thodi bimaar rehti hain. Who bas mujhe bata raha tha ki ab shreya thik hain.", gunjan said having a glad expression on her face as her friend was now fine.

"oh…good. That's good.", samrat replied.

Gunjan was poring the soft drink in the glass when suddenly samrat asked, "maine nupur ke toh itne saare fans dekhe par tumhaara koi fan nahi dikha?"

'agar dikhta toh usse chodta nahi', samrat muttered under his breath.

"samart tum bhi naa. Di toh hain aisi ke unka toh koi bhi deewaana ho jaaye. Aur main toh…", gunjan replied but samrat cut her in the middle.

"tum toh aisi ho ki jiske liye koi kuch bhi kar jaaye. Kuch bhi", samrat said seriously.

She almost spilled the contents of the glass she was filling. Something about the way samrat said it and the look in his eyes made her blush. Samrat saw her blush and smiled.

"chashmish tum jab blush karti ho na toh aur bhi cute lagti ho. Aur bhi beautiful lagti ho.", samrat said leaning towards her.

Gunajn got flustered at his comment and turned red. What was wrong with samart?

"kya chashmish aise kya dekh rahi ho? Kuch hua hain kya?", samrat asked smiling at her.

"umm…kya hua hian? Kuch bhi toh nahi.", gunjan was looking everywhere but him. Something about his gaze on her was different although he was goofing around as usual. She was finding samarts behaviour towards her a bit different these days. She refused to what her heart was telling her. she had done that mistake twice. Not again will she do it. Samrat was just fooling around and that was it. She was trying hard to explain herself.

"chashmish kahaan kho gayi? Main yahaan hun.", samart said.

"samrat yeh tumhaara glass. Jaldi se pilo. Hume baahar bhi jaana hain.", gunjan said changing trying to change the topic.

"hum date par jaa rahe hain? Tumhe mujhe batana toh chahiye tha naa chashmish. Main toh date ke liye tayaar bhi nahi hua.", samart said looking at her from the corner of his eyes and smiling.

"date? Samart tum kya keh rahe ho? Main baahar… mera matlab function mein jaane ki baat kar rahi thi. Chale?", gunjan asked still a bit red.

"oh toh hum date pe nahi jaa rahe? Ok date nahi toh yeh mehendi hi sahi. Chalo.", samart said smiling at the expression on gunjans face on mentioning 'date'. His chashmish is so sweet and innocent.

note: guys this part isn't that good. actually i have a lot of work and so i didn't get time to work on this part. i'm really very sorry for any mistakes.

😊these smileys make me smile gotta watch the episode so i'lll edit tomorrow⭐️😊

oh an amazing update.................i love Mayur, i hope PD reads this.............

it was sooo goodd

but i want this time more sajan!

hey huni. no it was awesome part!

i found it really cute.mayanks smile scenes and gunjan and samrat scenes in kitchen were very good😊