cool dudes and morena probs-mn & sg ff pt 10 pg 31

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hey guys i just thought of writing a short story on the current morena track so just read and please review. tell me whether i shud continue here it goes....

Mayank was very angry with nupur about the whole spilling the relationship-secret issue. He was hurt and furious. It was a bad combination. The day after the fight he reached college. He headed straight to the class. He didn't find nupur in the class. He thought she was late as usual. But nupur didn't turn up for the whole lecture, infact she didn't attend any lecture the whole day. Mayank was really worried now. Though he was still very angry with her, he wanted to know whether she was fine. Afterall he was very rude to her last night. He finally admitted that he might have hurt her feelings too. He had promised her that he won't ever hurt her and although she had hurt his feelings it wasn't right to do the same with her.

After the classes got over mayank rushed to see if nupur was anywhere in the college, but he didn't find her. he thought perhaps gunjan would know. While he was looking for gunjan he saw samrat sitting on a bench. He thought maybe samrat might Have an idea about gunjan. He went to him and asked,

"samrat tumne gunjan ko kahi dekha hain?"

Samrat looked up to see mayank and said, "nahi dude!! subah se main bhi usse hi dhund raha hun. pata nahi kahaan hain. Aaj class mein bhi nahi aayi. Aaj tak chashmish ne eik class bhi bunk nahi ki aur aaj pura din who class mein aayi hi nahi."

"nupur bhi class mein nahi aayi. Mujhe laga ki gunjan ko kuch pata hoga par gunjan bhi nahi aayi'.", mayank trailed off.

He was worried now. Either something was wrong with gunjan and nupur had stayed home to take care of her or something was wrong with nupur and so gunjan had stayed home. He brushed away this thought. The thought that he was responsible for her pain agonised him.

Just then he saw dia, benji and uday coming towards them.

"hi guys!!", they said.

"hi", mayank and samrat said gloomily.

Dia sensed problem and said, "waise mayank nupur aur tumhaare beech jhagda hua hain kya?"

"kyun?tum aisa kyun punch rahi ho?", mayank asked.

"nahi'aise hi. Actually nupur kuch pareshaan lag rahi thi. Waise tumne usse isliye toh nahi daanta naa ke hum log tumhaare ghar aa gaye the kal raat? Tumhaari date spoil karne?", dia asked grinning.

"who actually'"mayank started.

"dekha maine kahaan tha naa mayank ne hi kuch kiya hain. Nupur se kahaan tha mayank aur romance eik sentence mein aa hi nahi sakte. Bechari nupur!!", uday said and benji and dia laughed.

Mayank glared at uday. He was already furious with nupur and worried for her. and now these idiots were annoying the hell out of him.

"tum logon ko mayank aur nupur ke bare mein pata hain?", samrat asked surprised.

"dude iska matlab tujhe bhi pata tha?", benji asked and samrat just looked at mayank.

"who kya hain naa dude pyaar chupaaye nahi chupta. In donon par toh mujhe kaafi dinon se doubt tha. Aur uday ko bhi. Lekin kal jab nupur mayank ke haathon par pyaar se ointment laga rahi thi toh sab clear ho gaya. Phir humne nupur ko baton mein uljha kar usike muh se Kabul karwaadiya.", benji told samrat.

Mayank was shocked to hear this. It meant that it wasn't nupurs fault. They knew everything before nupur told them. he felt guilt rush through him. He had hurt nupur and for what? He needed to speak to her. right now.

"nupur kahaan hain?", mayank asked impatiently.

"mayank nupur ne tumhe bataaya nahi ki who aur gunjan waapis morena chale gaye. Kisiki shaadi ahin. Hume bhi invite kiya hain aur hum holidays mein jaane waale hain.", diya said.

Maynk and samrat were shocked to hear the news. Nupur had left without informing mayank. He felt his previous anger coming back to him. But then he realized that he had hurt her too much and she was very upset. He needed to speak to her. but how?

Here samrat was also having same kinda thoughts. Gunjan had left without telling him. But why? Did she come to know that he was in love with her. he ahd to speak to her.

"tum log morena kab jaa rahe ho?", samrat asked impatiently.

"do din baad sam. Par tum kyun punch rahe ho?", uday asked.

"hum bhi aa rahe hain.", mayank said instantly. He understood samrats urgency.

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The gang reached morena on Monday morning. Samarat and mayaank had requested dia to not tell gunjan or nupur about their coming to morena.

Nups dad had asked all of them to stay at their house.All of the gang settled in the house. Mayank and samrat were sharing a room. Samrat was lost in his thoughts when mayank called him.

"samrat tum itne pareshaan mat ho. Gunajn tumhe batana bhul gayi hogi.", mayank assured him. Though he knew the real reason he didn't want to talk to samrat about it. He wondered why samrat was not getting gunjans dilemma. It was quite evident from samrats face that he loved gunjan madly. Why samrat was not understanding them was beyond him.

"pata nai dude!! chashmish bahut delicate hain. Meri kisi galti ki wajah se agar who mujhse naaraz hui ho toh? Main usse khona afford nahi kar sakta. Waise nupur ka kya scene hain?", samart asked.

"maine usse hurt kiya and I need to talk to her now.", mayank said.

"I understand dude!! par who log ahin kahaan?", samrat asked.

"bauji!! Bauji!!", they heard nupurs voice and they both grinned at each other.

"finally", they said together and smiled. they went downstairs to see why nupur was causing such a ruckus.

"bauji yeh gunjan ko samjhayiye naa. Kabse keh rahi hun isse ki kitaab chodke bhi kuch dekha kare. Lekin isse apni kitaabon ke alaawa kuch dikhayi de tab naa.", nupur said dramatically.

Suddenly her eyes fell on where mayank was standing. She couldn't believe her eyes. She was very happy though she didn't show it on her face. But then she thought it must be her dream. Why would mayank come to morena?

"tumhaare dost kuhc derr pehle hi aaye dia aur uday ke saath.", bauji told her following her gaze.

Nupur was shocked. Mayank was in morena. But why? He was furious with her for splling their 'great secret'. Then why was he in morena? Did he feel sorry for what he had said? No nupur diont fool yourself. He must have just came along with rest of them. she was happy to see him. Though all her anger returned the nxt moment.

index
pt 1:pg 1
pt 2:pg 4
pt 3:pg 7
pt 4:pg 10
pt 5: pg 13
pt 6:pg 17
pt 7:pg 21
pt8 :pg 23
pt 9:pg 28
pt 10:pg 31
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Zoya, Pls write for MJHT..pls yaar, u write so well n if only the actual serial shows one-tenth of what u wrote...i'll be grateful...
love ya🤗
Posted: 15 years ago
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this is fab!!
i so wish something like this happens in mjht
anyways u r gonna continue ryt? plz do so n soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey zoya.. this is fantastic...
i wish the show goes this way.
wat u said wat apt and perfect.
loved ur track more than the show....
thanks for the pm dear... loved it.. are u gonna continue it????????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey zoya, plz plz plz plz do continue yaar!

cnt wait to read more yaar! truly awesome!
pm me plz!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowzoya nice start
continue soon
and pm me too



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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thanks alot guys
i'll update tonight...hopefully
please keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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zoyaaaaaa..................my dear...............wht an amazin mini ff.............i'm in love with....it.........abosulutely perfect........awesome......uff......each n evry bit...i lovd it to d core.......plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooon...........as possible as u can........plzzzzzzzzzzz.........nw wanna c more n more mayur moments....sayank moments also....😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8
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do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start..!!
I'm totally loving how you wrote the scenes...!
and mayank finally knew it wasn't nupur's fault..!
awesome part.!
do continue soon..!

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