Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN fic) PT7/PG25 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome fic

too good
superb
loved your fic
very interesting
great going
plz continue soon
& Happy Diwali




Thanks Sania,
And A very Happy Diwali to you too.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi Guglu. Hi Yogitha!!!
The update was awesome πŸ‘ Thanks dear.

Raj n naina met once again'.raj spotted her before but he thought that his mind was playing tricks n he couldn't stop himself from thinking about her'''..haiiiiiiii πŸ˜‰ eki mulakat mein naina ne jadu kar dala Ab kya karen, apni Naina toh hai hi jadugarni, isliye uske jadoo ne chalna shuru kar diya.πŸ˜‰

Naina n raj had their lunch together''..so sweet 😊

So rajveer is the boss of prem n additi,additi is surprised to see naina with raj n she was so curious to know how naina met him ,n she started asking her questions one by one,prem told her to atleast allow naina to come inside she let her in n again started'''''too funny Aditi is a bit too curious.πŸ˜†

when raj n naina r talking additi staring at raj open mouthed'''so funny ,πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I think she was highly surprised to see her boss speaking to a girl in this way Ab Raj jaisa insaan ho toh kisi ko bhi ascharya to hoga.πŸ˜‰

Raj didn't let naina to go out of his sight,naina also didn't mind his presence n she found him highly dependable'''.good going πŸ˜‰ thanks.

"The most eligible bachelor in our group has finally decided to sacrifice his bachelorhood"'''this line is so good Thanks for liking it.😊

Prem n additi arguments r nice,to ye prem always argues with additi n he thinks that she had the uncanny ability of spotting romances even if its not there n all the time he proved wrong πŸ˜ƒ Now girls are sharper at such predictions than boys.πŸ˜‰

prem is thinking that rajveer is friendly because its necessary to establish contacts n he is so sure that this time he is right n additi is wrong'''..hehehehe πŸ˜† poor prem he don't know this time also he failed miserably at the guess work n once again additi was right. Prem is a dumb where spotting romances is concerned. Now, Aditi is sharp.πŸ˜†

Kya baat hai '''sirf do hi mulakaton mein raj kaffi acchi tarah smajgaya naina ko ke wo kehra hai..... she is not the type to indulge in pretty girls talk πŸ˜‰ Hehehe. raj hai hi aisa. Samajhne wala.πŸ˜‰

waiting eagerly for the next part

totally good update πŸ‘ Thanks again.



Thanks for such detailed comments Yogitha. It was lovely reading your comments. Will update soon. Till then take care.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Guglu

Gr8 ud
Raj and Naina spending time with each other is really nice...D way Raj helped her around and asked her out for lunch is sooo sweet... Aditi is jumping 2 conclusions a bit 2 soon...but it seems she is right... story progressing very nicely
do ud asap
thnx fr d pm nd sorry fr commenting late
love
sur



Thanks a lot for liking this story sur.
Lets see whether Aditi is right or not.πŸ˜‰
And no problem over late reply. Better late than never.
Will update soon.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Nice update!

Aditi is very cute....just like pooja!
RN are already feeling for eah other!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Prem as usual composed like Ali.....
But i didnt want you to stop!!
Y da hell u stopped😑
Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey guglu...sweet ud tha yaar...πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ !!! n sorry for d late dear...
ab mujhe lag raha hai ki tum is fic k name ko dhire dhire aage badha rahi ho...matlab tujh pe dil kurban...!!! ab dhire dhire RN k dil jo ek dushre k bare me sochne lage hain, toh mujhe lagta hai ki voh din dur nahin, jab yeh dono kahenge ki tujh pe dil kurban...!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
naina girnewali thia ur raj ne bachaya, ab hero hai vohi toh bachata na...!!! aur yeh us ka farz bhi banta hai. raj last night se bass naina k bare me hi soch raha hai...aur naina ka lunch par jane ko haan kahne se hi voh kuch jyada hi khush ho gay. vaise main bhi khush ho gayi thi.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
mujhe voh scene sab se jyada achha laga vohi lunch ka scene...!!! dono hi ek dushre ki company pasand karte hain...!!! dono k dil ki uljhan aur khushi ko baht achhe se likha hai tum ne. kuch confusions aur kuch ehsaas...perfect mixture...❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
prem aur aditi k jhagde bhi mast the...!!! toh raj finally sacrifice kar raha hai...!!! mujhe bhi us k is sacrifice ka bada be sabri se intezar rahega...!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
cont soon.
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: manatated

Nice update!

Aditi is very cute....just like pooja!
RN are already feeling for eah other!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Prem as usual composed like Ali.....
But i didnt want you to stop!!
Y da hell u stopped😑
Update soon!



Thanks for commenting Manali !!!

I'll try to update as soon as possible.

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey guglu...sweet ud tha yaar...πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ !!! n sorry for d late dear... Its okay Priya.😊 Doesn't matter.

ab mujhe lag raha hai ki tum is fic k name ko dhire dhire aage badha rahi ho...matlab tujh pe dil kurban...!!! ab dhire dhire RN k dil jo ek dushre k bare me sochne lage hain, toh mujhe lagta hai ki voh din dur nahin, jab yeh dono kahenge ki tujh pe dil kurban...!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Ab dekhte hain,tumhari forecast kab tak sach saabit hoti hai.😊
naina girnewali thia ur raj ne bachaya, ab hero hai vohi toh bachata na...!!! aur yeh us ka farz bhi banta hai. raj last night se bass naina k bare me hi soch raha hai...aur naina ka lunch par jane ko haan kahne se hi voh kuch jyada hi khush ho gay. vaise main bhi khush ho gayi thi.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Par mai khush nahi thi. Kash ki wo Naina ki jagah mujhe lunch ke liye le jaata.πŸ˜‰
mujhe voh scene sab se jyada achha laga vohi lunch ka scene...!!! dono hi ek dushre ki company pasand karte hain...!!! dono k dil ki uljhan aur khushi ko baht achhe se likha hai tum ne. kuch confusions aur kuch ehsaas...perfect mixture...❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ Thanks.
prem aur aditi k jhagde bhi mast the...!!! toh raj finally sacrifice kar raha hai...!!! mujhe bhi us k is sacrifice ka bada be sabri se intezar rahega...!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›πŸ˜› Well, sabko rahega, aur shayad mujhe bhi.πŸ˜‰
cont soon. Jarur!!!



Thanks for commenting Priya. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

updates were just fabπŸ‘i loved the basic concept of the fic....its very different and fresh....that's the usp of this fic....loved aditi ad prem's characters too...and raj especially....he is very different in the fic...and i m loving this change😳waiting to see raj-naina's relation grow...plzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooon😊and thanks for sending me the updates...i really appreciate this😊😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thanks dear.

Naina had a very busy day and she was satisfied with her progress!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was about to fall when Raj caught her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiii!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

So Raj and Naina met again at the fair!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Ab milna to tha hi. Warna kahani aage kaise badhegi.

Raj had spotted her before but he thought his mind was playing tricks with him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

He hasn't been able to stop thinking about her since last night!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍Haaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ek hi mulaqat mein Naina ne jadoo kar diya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Naina hai hi aisi jadugarni.πŸ˜‰

Raj asked Naina for lunch and when she didn't reply his heart sank!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Yeh toh gaya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina said yes and was thinking this is all for work but hoping it won't be and maybe he wants to spend time with her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj samajh gaya Naina kya soch rahi hai and was determined that Naina should know that he just had wanted to spend some time with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved it when Raj held Naina's hand during lunch and maintained his grip!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He assured her that he will help her with her project report!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

So Raj is Prem and Aditi's boss and Naina realised he is the Chairperson of Singhania Group of Industries!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aditi was surprised to see Rajveer with Naina and very curious about how she met him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

She pounced on Naina the moment Raj went outside and started asking her questions one after the other!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Prem intervened and told Aditi to atleast allow Naina to come inside as she was still standing in the doorway!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When Naina was seated, Aditi again started and Naina laughed!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 Ab kya karen, Aditi hai hi aisi.

She knew that it was very natural on Aditi's part to be curious abour her boss' affairs!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Especially if the boss is a handsome hunk like Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina narrated what had happened the previous day to Aditi and Prem and they were thankful for her safety!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When Raj and Naina were talking Aditi was staring at them open mouthed and Prem poked her to shut her mouth!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲It was too funny!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

It seems like Aditi is hignly shocked to see Raj talking in this way with a girl!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Lagta hai Raj zyada ladkiyon se aise baat nahi karta aur itni jaldi toh bilkul nahi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is also wondering the reason for Aditi's surprise!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj aur Naina ke tastes bhi milte hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj didn't let Naina go out of his sight and Naina was also comfortable with Raj's presence!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She found him highly dependable and didn't mind his presence around her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Good going!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved Aditi's comment that the most eligible bachelor in their group has finally decided to sacrifice his bachelorhood!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Prem and Aditi's arguments are cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prem is thinking that Raj is friendly because it is necessary to establish contacts in their job!!!!!

Prem thinks Aditi always had the uncanny ability of spotting romances even when it was not there!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Aditi usually turned out to be right!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Prem is confident that this time Aditi won't be right, not where their Rajveer Sir is concerned!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

Poor Prem!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†This time also he has failed miserably and once again Aditi is right!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yes, prem ko pata nahi hai toh baad me pata chal jayega. Pyaar zara chupa hua ho tabhi toh mazaa aata hai. Sabko pata ho toh kaise chalega???πŸ˜‰

Seeing Raj and Naina laughing, Aditi and Prem started again!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Prem is defending that Raj is being friendly while Aditi said he is being over friendly!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj and Naina surely are enjoying each other's company!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj sirf do hi mulaqaton mein Naina ko kaafi acchi tarah se samajh gaya hai and knows she is not the type to indulge in petty girly talks!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prem glaring at Aditi and Aditi trying to stiffle her laughter was very funny!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†




Thanks for commenting Shaina!!!


Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

updates were just fabπŸ‘i loved the basic concept of the fic....its very different and fresh....that's the usp of this fic....loved aditi ad prem's characters too...and raj especially....he is very different in the fic...and i m loving this change😳waiting to see raj-naina's relation grow...plzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooon😊and thanks for sending me the updates...i really appreciate this😊😊😊


Thanks for commenting dear.

Yes both Raj and naina are very different in this fic. Their characters are differnt. I have tried to treat them differently. I'm glad you liked the changes.
And Aditi and Prem-well, Aditi is just the catalyst who tries to bring our lead pairs close to each other. Now lets see what happens.

I have updated the next part. Waiting for your comments on it.

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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