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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Dear....u do hav brains n iss fic ko padhne k liye mujhe bhi brains ki sakht zarurat hai....hehe. I mean its so mysterious....but u knw wat....i luv it this way....if its all to predictable n understandable....then nothing is fun na....but ye end me kya hua....I mean Raj n Naina were together..involved in their passionate intimacy....par Raj k samne Prem aur Aditi ka chehra kyun aa gaya....and ye Aalekh-Sneha-Ritika gang kya hai, kaun hai....Raj k saath hai ya nahi....agar haan...to iss Ashnak ko Raj se kya problem hai....I mean....see yaar....I hav so many queries...I assure u....mere sawalo se hi tum pak jaogi....aur tumhara dimag shayad kharab bhi ho jayega....lolz!!! And now even Naina is in danger bcoz of that Solanki....huh!!! But the jealous n insecure act of Raj was extremely nice!!

W8ing for the next part eagerly dear....pls continue soon.

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Hi dear, how r u? sorry i cudnt commented on the previous parts....
superb update...just fabulous... suspense is getting deeper n deeper...
so Alekh n team saved Prem...
Naina drugged Rajesh n got all the info...but Raj saw her n misundertood her... 😔
gud u have solved their misunderstanding in the same update..thank god...actually thank YOU for that...😊
So Raj showed naina he is not jealous or insecure...hehehe..loved his way of showing it to her... 😉
But now naina is sad... heartbroken..hope theres not another misunderstanding is going to create betwn them...!!!
lovely update...pls cont. soon....

Edited by sweet_shona - 15 years ago

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Fantabulous update !!!

Naina's reaction is really shockin n u written this part soo beutifully that i just can't say anything.it's simply gr8 from first word of this update to the last word.
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

fantastic update guglu.👏 👏 👏

when u write such fantastic ud while having no idea of what u have written,just think what u'll do if u do have an idea of writing it.😍don't ever underestimate yourself.you are what you are-a fabulous writer who only deserves👏

some of the suspense has been cleared in this ud.Raj is a Major,impressive.and Prem is also safe,that's a relief.but still the role of Aalekh and co.,is not clear yet.and also how Naina know about Raj.

no need to say but still need to say that RN scenes were too good.very passionate.but Raj's behaviour in the end is really weird.

plz yaar continue sooooon,waiting eagerly............................😛

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Superbbbbbbb Ud yaar... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

par sach kahun toh mujhe yeh ud thoda chota laga...!!! oye...gussa mat ho...aur mujhe maarne k bare me sochna bhi mat...agar mujhe kuch ho gaya...toh mere Lucky (mangoose) ka kya hoga....???😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ab no nautanki kaam ki baat karti hun...!!! vaise bhi tym aaj kal kamm hi milta hai

sab se pahle ek hug🤗...kyoun ki jiss tarah se tum sare suspense ko open kar rahi ho...voh style mujhe sabb se jyada achha lagg raha hai....Bole toh..gr88888888 job...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

toh prem missing hai...aur aditi pareshaan...!!! yaar...aise situation me hi kisi k ahmiyat ka pata chalta hai...aur sayad isiliye aditi ko feel hua ki prem kitna imp hai us k liye...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

prem toh safe hai ab...par phir bhi yeh baat aditi aur raaj ko kyoun nahi bataya...??? ab yahaan par tumhara dimag kya panga karnewala hai yeh toh tumhi behtaar bata sakti ho na...???😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ek hug aur post karti hun🤗...isiliye ki naina aur solanki ka scene tum ne as usall serial type ka nahi banaya...!!! after all yeh tumhara dimag hai jo CAT ki xams de chuka hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

par mujhe bhi bura laga...naina ki tarah...raj k behaviour se...!!! par raj ne sorry kyoun kaha...???😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

okkkk...yeh ud lamba jarur tha...par maine short isiliye kaha kyoun ki main kafi maze le kar padh rahi thi...aur achanak mujhe laga ki yeh ud end ho gaya...!!! isiliye kaha...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab jaldi se next part ud karo...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#116

HI GUGLU HOW R U ?
FANTASTIC
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
AWESOME
ROCKING
ITS REALLY DIFFERENT FROM OTHERS
I LOVED IT
MUJE RN KE CHARACTERS BAHUT PASAND AAYE
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY

LOVE
DEEPA

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

awesome darling.👏 👏 👏
I know i am a bit late par same reason again, itne saare fics padhne padte hain na.
Superb n well written. 👏 👏 👏
Now the story is getting cleared in my head. Prem was missing n Solanki kidnapped him. He knew about the true identity of Rajveer n his group that's y he did it.
Abhi, Ritika, Alekh n Sneha saved Prem , thank god otherwise pata nahi kya hota us ka. Finally Aditi realized n now accepted her true emotions for Prem, all thanks to Naina who did a perfect work.
She gave her full support to Aditi when she needs her and Raj got a g8 support in Naina too. I knew that Naina can never be with that Rajesh Solanki but Raj's anger was also right.
Naina did a brilliant job by showing that she can do whatever she wants. She knew about Raj's identity earlier, i was surprised but good that she didn't budge to tell it to anyone.
Their scene when Raj proved her his love was amazing, so passionate. 😳 😳 😳 Loved that.
update soon dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
wow,wonderful update.

it's superb part. just too good.

bahut suspense create kia tumne but very beautifully.

prem was missing , adit pareshan ho gaye.

update soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

Thanks a lot Rakhi...
Aur maine suspense create kiya hai... mujhe to laga ki maine kuch suspense clear kiya hai...😆😆😆
Haan... Prem ke gayab hone se Aditi toh pareshan hogi hi...
M working on the next update. Hopefully will post it soon.

Thanks for commenting Rakhi...

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#119

guglu tujhe pata hain raj kitna dhukhi hain...kehraha hain mujhse ki naina us din sad ho kar chaligayi ..aur main usko manaya bhi nahin kyun ki pata nahin na guglu kis tarah wo scene likha agar main apne aap kuch karunga to guglu gussa hojayegi..n he requested me to ask u ki jaldi scenes likhe...ab bechare ko naina ko mana ne ke liye jaana haina ..nahin to badhi problem hojayegi..tu samjha kar na

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: guglu088

Thanks a lot Rakhi...
Aur maine suspense create kiya hai... mujhe to laga ki maine kuch suspense clear kiya hai...😆😆😆
Haan... Prem ke gayab hone se Aditi toh pareshan hogi hi...
M working on the next update. Hopefully will post it soon.

Thanks for commenting Rakhi...

Welcome guglu.nehi re mere liye iye suspense se kam thori na hain.

ha, re,....

kk dear.I'll wait.

welcome dear.chal aur thanks mat bol.