I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 2

awesome waiting for it..😊

@ Surya: Thnx for commeniting.....it really means a lot.

I love you too much to lose you

Well, there will be no intro due to the storyline but it has RAJEEV KHANDELWAL n........................ in leads.

And here it goes................................

Part # 1

It's a beautiful day....and we're right now at the airport. Flights r landing from different places...sum ppl r returning home whereas sum hav left their home behind to visit the beautiful country India'.or to be more precise'.to visit the beautiful city of Dehradun. And here lands the flight we were w8ing for n also cums out the awaited person. Finally''it starts!!!

Next night....

Now we r in the city of Dehradun n now lets get into one of the most eye-catching things of the town....a mansion....it names "Shergill Mansion". Shergills r the most prestigious n the richest ppl in the town n it can be very well seen by the look of the mansion. But......there is one more reason behind the house's magnificent look....it's the engagement of the eldest child of the family.....n its no less than a grand festival for them.

Now inside the house.......there is a lot of commotion as the engagement is to be held on tomorrow evening.....all r involved in the preparation....also many relatives hav cum from distant places n they will be staying here only till the marriage which is to be held in one month's tym. Well...it has been quite late n the preparations that had to be done tonight are completed....n all r off to sleep......since they r extremely tired. But still.....there is always an exception. We see a girl who is still awake n staring at the moon with a far away look as if asking the moon a lot of questions but being disappointed for not getting any ans. Well......she is ASMI SHERGILL.... (played by whoever u like wid Rajeev)

Its her bro Samay's engagement tomorrow...its not that she is not happy for her bro or has any problem wid him.....and thats y is staring at the moon like this for answers. In fact she shares the most lovely relation wid her bro....he is the one who tries to understand her.....But their parents don't understand either of them. Asmi's father (Mr Anumesh Shergill-AS) is a famous businessman....but he has been so much into his business that never cared to look after his children....n Asmi's mom (Mrs. Nitya Shergill-NS)....she too has been so much blinded by her husband n her duties towards him that she has almost forgot her duties towards her children....though she tries her best to understand them n truly cares for them....but sumhow her devotion towards her husband has been so much strong that she never tried to realize the fact that they both were ignoring their children. But then it was an inside story....to every1 they seemed to be a very happy family.

And so Asmi has always felt this void in her...despite having everything she lacks sumthing....sumthing which is more than everything...n deep inside she wishes to fill up that emptiness....may be she w8s for sum1 to do that.......however she goes to bed soon as tomorrow is an eventful day.....its her dearest bro's engagement.

I knw its a short part....but its kinda prologue. Hope u like it n thnx to every1 for commenting.😊😊😊 And guys, I hav sent u all a buddy request...it will help me to PM u easily. Pls accept soon.

Luv,

Sumaiya.

hey sumi dear.......nice start.................thanks for the pm...............so the female lead is asmi......nice name...............n its her bro's sagaai but shes still somewhat aloof...................cont soon dear n hope she gets that person whom shes waiting to complete that void feeling...............

hiiiiii dear

Hiiiii Sumi...... 😃

Sumaiyyaaaaa!!!!

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sumi, Hi Guglu

Nice update. 👏👏👏And Asmi is a nice name too. thnx So she and her brother nave been neglected by their parents. 😭Dont get upset dear...shayad hero ate hi sab thik ho jayega😉😉
That was a nice prologue. And yes if u have left it on us to imagine the actress in Asmi's role then definitely I'll imagine Priyanka Bassi.😊 But imaginations can run riot sometimes. So we girls can even imagine ourselves in Asmi's role.😆Thats the best idea actually....isse koi jhamela hi nahi hoga😆😆 provided Rajeev is there in front of us.😉😆😉Aah....I wish I cud make him sit in front of me all the tym....but then uska kaam kya main karti? Aur agar karti to kayamath aa jati😆

Post the next part soon. And plzz make it a bit longer. I knw it was a puchku part😆😆😆 aur next part shayad zyada long na ho...but promise uske baad sirf long long parts....kasamh se😳😳

Love
Guglu

Thank u so much for commenting😊😊

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hiiiii Sumi...... 😃

yeh toh hadh hi ho gayi yaar...😲 😲 😲!!! tumne nayi fic start kiya aur purane dost ko bhul gayi...😲 😲 😲kam se kam ek baar inform toh kar hi sakti thi na...mujhe...???😕 😕 😕 Mujhe lag hi raha tha mujhe daant padegi....but am extremely sry dear...kya karu.....nervousness k chakkar me dimag se sab chala gaya....achha khasa bhashan de diya starting me ki reader se writer banungi...but its really hard yaar....😆😆😆but no probs....Rajeevian hu....hard work achha lagta hai😉😉😉 and am again sry for the stupidity😳😳😳

very nyc start......👏 👏 👏 Thanqqqq dear

Asmi nyc name......😃 😃 😃 Sab ne heroine ka naam pasand kiya....ab hero ka?? Lets c...anyways thnx for liking the name....though its not my creation 😆😆

yeh achha kiya tumne ki female lead me kisi ko bhi nahin rakha hai...!!! ab main apne aap ko imagine karti hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Go ahead....ye sabse best hai.....😉😉😉 and I guess bahut se readers aisa hi chahte hai😆😆

now abt the first ud......😃

Asmi ek aisi ladki jo apne family k kareeb hote hue bhi sab se dur hai...!!! kareeb hai toh sirf us ka bhai samay...jis ki engagement honewali hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab jaldi se next ud post karo...😃!!! yeh part toh kab suru hua aur kab khatam ...pata hi nahin chala...!!! thoda sa looooooooong ud post karna...ok...???😃 I knw ye chhotu-motu sa part tha😆😆😆.....iski bharpai k liye main kal hi next part post kar dungi.....though wo zyada long nahi hai but promise age se har part longggggggg hoga.....pakka promise😃😃

Thnx for commenting dear n glad that u liked it. It really helps to encourage me.😊😊
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