I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

hey janu very beautiful dear......................i loved it very much................so now iqbal n neha also here very interesting.................and i really loved their convo..............samay is completely frustrated n betaab hai to see n speak to his love...................wonder who the 2 guys r...............hope one is raj..............wow cant wait for the next part..................ur writing is very good............first time but still made it very perfect.................cont soon dear..............

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

very nice update yaar

beautiful

loved the update

great going

plz continue soon

waiting for Raj's entry

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Very nyce ud Summi...par itni galat jagah pe kyu chor dia? D talk bw Kinjal nd Samay was sooooo cute...Vese naam bade ache rakhe hai tumne... Ab bas jaldi se humare hero ki entry kara do...I hope he is one of dose guys...

Cont soon

pm me wen ud

Luv

Sur

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

@ sweet_shona:

Thnx a lot for commenting dear. Glad that u liked it. U hav read the first part n am w8ing for ur view over the 2nd part. Yes, Asmi n Samay hav been neglected, though quite unintentionally by their mother. Lets c wat it turns out to be.😃😃

@ Varshita:

Well, ya an RN fic for u as undoubtedly u take Priyanka as the female lead.😉 And yes, Vartika is really fast but u read the parts earlier. 😉😉Thnx for commenting. Glad u liked it. Will surely UD soon.😃😃

@manatated:

Hi dear. Glad u liked the part. Yes, our wud be groom is really frustrated n Asmi as a perfect sis is irritating him all the more. Thats her duty n right after all.😆😆 And the two guys.....hmm....yes u'll knw them better in the next part. But havnt u already guessed sumthing?😳....Will continue soon dear. Thnx for commenting.

@sania:

Glad u liked the part dear. And Raj's entry will be soon. After all I cant keep him away for long😉😉....pata nahi ab tak uske bina kaise manage kiya😆😆😆. Thnx for commenting.

@Sur:

Glad that u liked Samay n Kinjal's convo. Our wud be groom is seriously effected by the cupid's arrow😆😆😆. Gud to knw u liked the names.....I guess it was for Kinjal. And our hero....two boys.....hmm....kinda obvious....yet not so obvious😉. Watch out the next part dear. Thnx for commenting.

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

grt story dear

both d parts arre jus so gud.

can't wait for nex prt.

pls cont soon as i can't wait for asmi (aamna )n our very own rajeev meeting,their romance,their life n much more b/w dem.pls do cont soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
Hiiiii Sumi......😃 Hi Priya...😊

sweet ud......👏 👏 👏Thnqqq

samay & kinjal ...dono ki sagai hai...par sagaiwale din bhi ladai kar rahe hain...chalo pyar se hi sahi...😃 😃 😃!!! ladhai pyaar ka hi ek namuna hai na?😉😉 vaise yeh sach hai ki gulz 143 kahne se pahle boys ko kaphi pareshan karti hain...!!! aur yeh un ka haq bhi hai...!!!😆 😆 😆 Aah...so rightly said😃😃

vaise Asmi ne achhi tease ki hai Samay ki...😛 😛 😛!!! ye to behen ka farz bhi hai aur haq bhi😆😆😆 vaise jo do mahashya aaye hain...itne fashionable tarike se...un me se koi apne hero toh nahin...???😉 😉 😉.....hmm u found that fashionable.....cool complement....dekhte hai ye dono mahashay actually hain kaun aur hamari story me kya karte hai....w8 till next part sweety

phir se chutku sa ud tha😳😳😳Kya karu iss point pe nahi chhorti to achha nahi lagta na😉😉😉...par koi baat nahin...agar tum regular ud karogi aur aise hi sweet sweet ud deti rahogi...toh tumhare sare gunah maaf...!!!😃 😃 😃 Awe thnqq sweety...but next part long hoga...so dont worry....hamesha mere ye chutku parts se kaam nahi chalana padega😃😃😃

do cont fast......😃 Sure...

Thnx for the comment.😊😊

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi Sumi,😊Hey Guglu...

Nice update dear.👏👏👏 But as Priya said, a chutku update.😆😆😆Hmm....agar aur continue karti to maza nahi ata na....but next part long hoga....pakka😃😃
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So Samay is irritated ki Kinjal ne usse baat nahi ki.😛 Dont worry Samay, shaadi ke baad toh zindagi bhar Kinjal ki baat hi sunni hai, tab ye shikayat hogi ki Kinjal ki baat sunni padti hai.😉Hahaha....well said dear.....shaadi k baad wo shayad yehi kahega ki Kinjal ki baatein bandh kyun nahi hoti😆😆😆
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Ye do naye entries kaun hai? 😕Kahin humare dear Rajeev inme se ek toh nahi?😉 Lets c dear.... Par ye toh sirf tum aur tumhara next update hi bata sakta hai.😊Ya thats ryt....but u'll knw the ans very soon.

Keep updating and we will keep on commenting.😊Thnx a lot sweety.

Love
Guglu

Thnx a lot for commenting. Am glad u liked the part.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: spvd
hey janu very beautiful dear Thank u sooooo much......................i loved it very much Am glad abt that................so now iqbal n neha also here very interesting.................and i really loved their convo My pleasure..............samay is completely frustrated n betaab hai to see n speak to his love ya bechara lovaria ka newest patient jo hai😆😆😆...................wonder who the 2 guys r...............hope one is raj Lets c....btw even I cant keep him away for long😉😉😉..............wow cant wait for the next part..................ur writing is very good............first time but still made it very perfect. Awe.....that was a big complement....I am really happy that u liked my writing....thnx for the encouragement................cont soon dear..............Sure dear😊😊
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Thnx for commenting.😊😊

@ Pinky:

Welcum to the ff dear.😃😃 Gud to c u here. Another SK fan...hmm. I am glad u liked both the parts.😊😊 And ur w8ing for the hero-heroine meet. Ya that will cum up soon. And u r also w8ing for their romance, their life n lots more...wow....lets c wat happens😉😉...hope I live upto the expectations.😊😊 Thnx for commenting dear.

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Hey abhi maine fic ka first part padha.
Sab se pehle to ek suggestion dena chahti hoon tujhe, may be u will not mind. Suggestion ye hai ki tune jis role me jis ko bhi imagine kiya hai us ka naam de de. I mean for the role of Asmi , vo is liye kyounki jab ye pata hota hai ki kis ko cast kiya hai to imagine karna easy ho jaata hai.
Asmi n Samay ka realtion bahut khoobsurat hai ye baat to samajh me aayi fir Asmi itne pareshaan kyoun hai ye samajh bhi nahi aaya. Aur engagement kis ki ho rahi hai?
Lovely start, update soon. 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey abhi maine fic ka first part padha.
Sab se pehle to ek suggestion dena chahti hoon tujhe, may be u will not mind. Suggestion ye hai ki tune jis role me jis ko bhi imagine kiya hai us ka naam de de. I mean for the role of Asmi , vo is liye kyounki jab ye pata hota hai ki kis ko cast kiya hai to imagine karna easy ho jaata hai. Actually main khud kabhi female leads ko imagine nahi karti so it was a bit difficult for me to cast any1 like that....so I gave the liberty to the readers to imagine whoever they like.....as far as I knw u r an RN fan so Asmi might be Priyanka for u......well, I am glad that u suggested this to me n I surely didnt mind.....but kyunki maine pehle hi apne readers ko female lead khud imagine karne ki liberty di hai....I cant change my words now as I knw it will definitely hurt their feelings.....coz sum of them like RN n sum like SK......sum take Priyanka as Asmi n sum take Amna.....and I thik I shud be hurting any of them by casting any1 at this point.....hope u understand wat am trying to say....
Asmi n Samay ka realtion bahut khoobsurat hai ye baat to samajh me aayi fir Asmi itne pareshaan kyoun hai ye samajh bhi nahi aaya.Well thats due to the fact that she never got the true happiness of her lyf as I had mentioned her parents were quite negligible towards them.....but haan, shayad main ye baat zyada clearly samjha nahi payi....sry abt that.....actually first tym likh rahi hu so thodi garbad ho jati hai.....I'll definitely try to do better next tym so that u dont hav nay confusion Aur engagement kis ki ho rahi hai? Dear maine pehle part me do baar mention kiya Its Asmi's bro Samay's engagement....😕😕 donno tumhe samajh me kyun nahi aya?😕😕 But again I am sry that u had these confusions
Lovely start, update soon.👏 👏 👏Thnx 😊

Thnx for replying. And I hope I hav been able to make myself clear abt the suggestion. And yes, if U hav any problem to imagine the female lead, I'll suggest u take Priyanka as Asmi as u r an RN fan. But anyways, thnx for the suggestion😊😊.
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