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aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

hey loved the update honey..very nice..continue soon..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

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nishi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hey!!

wonderful part. continue soon. thanx for the pm.

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Hi Sanam
very cute update .
like A-R very much.
Waiting 4 mayur.
Keep updating
Faria

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Mithila

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

loved the 1st part....it is awwesum....sisters' bondong i s tooooooooo gooood....

i loved their family....what has hppened to riddhi?

neways update soon....

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

great so far cant w8 to read it

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey great start by da way wts wrong wiv ridz

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218739

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

hey hun, just read the part sooo cute, i loved nupur and riddhi relation, they are soo sweet. also whats wrong with riddhima, i mean does she have a diease, or something, hopefully arman will help her out!!!!!!, anyways can't wait for mayur and sajan to meet hurry up and intorduce them sooooooooonnn, con't soooon

love sanam!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

when are you updating ???????

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218739

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

sorry won't bother again but hun, update soon, okay and pm me soon your repply waiting!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 2

Parents Bedroom
Ajay and Shefali are in their room talking about how riddhima gets so emotional at times and it really scares them. Ajay hopes everything will be fine. He says " shefali please tell riddhima not to run because then she can't breathe and her lips turn blue". Andila nods and replies " Ajay aap sahi hain par ab riddhima bari ho rahi, or hume yeh bi nahi pata age kya hoga" Then Ajay asks " shefali when is riddhima next check up?", shefali looks through the diary and says " tomorrow", He thinks for awhile and replies" don't worry i'll talk to the doctor we should not loose hope riddhima will be fine, it's finally the right time to talk about it to the doctor", saying this ajay leaves and shefali thinks to herself "We both were so happy upon the birth of riddhima, but when the doctor told us that the little baby in their hands had a hole in her heart, i still remeber how hard it was for us to stop our tears".

Park
Ramsha is walking with her friend kripa and says "kripa the lecture was useful i think it was good we attended it rather then skipping it like last time". kripa smiles and nods says "Nupur I thought you wouldn't come since yesterday was uncle and auntys anniversary". Nupur smiles cheekily and replies "yea, by god it was a lot of fun and this time papa again wished mama in a beautiful, unique, and inetresting way". Kripa then asks" accha nupz when are you going to india with your papa for your......", she winks at nupur at which nupur blushes a deep red, Nupur says" i don't have any clue anyway i want to finish my studies before going anywhere", sternly to kripa who just smiles and teases her saying " but nupur what about the one who is waiting for you in india". Nupur replies" let him wait a little more usse bhi toh pata chale nupur ke liye tarapna kya hota hai" laughingly. Kripa then thinks about what nupur said and explains" nupur kya pata he might lose hope by the time you decide to give him a lift". Nupur just smiles and her kripa says" i know your know worried because you are already engaged to him so basically he is your",nupur decides she had been teased enough now it was kripa time to be teased so nupur says "I had offered you; the handsome guy next to him in the picture...I can talk to him if you want",Kripa says "no, I already have one and he is enough to handle", nupur realzies that kripa already has someone in her life and asks, "what if you start liking someone else?" Then kripa then says, "we will see then,. Okay tell me one thing, do you really love samrat?" Nupur remembers the old days and says, "Our engagement had our parents' consent in it and in my eyes, my parents' couple and marriage was ideal which was arranged. I just hope samrat also thinks the same". Kripa then asks "what if he doesn't?" Nupursays, " i don't know it doesn't really matter because i strictly believes that compatibility and love emerge after marriage. Now see, my mom is 10 years younger than my dad, but their love developed after marriage and I feel that if me and samrat have a difference of a year or two in our ages, if I am older, that doesn't matter because love, compatibility, and understanding develop after marriage". Kripa replies by saying " you still haven't answered my question nupur whether you love Faraz or no?". Nupur says, "I will, just like my mom".she smiles and then both sit in the car and drive away

At home

Arman is looking around when shefali comes and pats him on the back asking " kab aye arman beta?" He replies" aunty I just came and also happy anniversaryi thought i'd come early and wish you", he smiles, shefali smiles at his warm wishes and says, " thanks beta, par aap kal nupur aur riddhima ko hotel chorne ke baad unke saath ghar kyun nahi aye'. arman frowningly says " woh aunty kisi ne invite hoi nahi kiya toh...", but beofer he could comeplete his sentence shefali cut him off "oh toh arman beta, now we have to send an invitation to our family members",Arman nods no , and looks down in embarrassment shefali just smiles and tells him to be careful next time and he says "okay". He then remebers what happened with riddhima yesterday and decides to tell shefali, " woh aunty yesterday riddhima was'nt feeling well" Shefali's face turns sad, She asks him "kya hua tha". He seems confused and asks" aunty aap ko kisi ne nahi bataya", she nods no, " beta muhje sach sach batoa riddhima ko kya hua tha kal?", she said worriedly, Arman nods and says " kuch nahi bas, woh she was having troblue breathing", he looked up to shefali fearful face, " par thori der mein theek hogayi thi", he said quickly,but by then riddhima came in the room, seeing arman her face lit up," hey ammy!", seeing no response she saw arman and shefali very tensed," kya hua mama, is everthing okay?", Shefali decides not to tell riddhima anything and covers, up by saying, " woh kuch nahi bas arman thora exams ke bare mein pareshan tha!, , but riddhima replies, " but arman the exams are really far", she sighed, " kuch khana hai?", she said changing the topic, both arman and riddhima nods, shefali goes away on the pretext of making something leaving arman and riddhima alone in the room, " arman mere saath aoa", she said once shefali left, she walks outside and arman follows her

Outside
They both go out and sit on the stairs by the front door. She tells him " ammy tum bahut stupid ho" she exclaimed, he replies by saying, " riddhi tum bahut strange ho...sometimes driver, sometimes stupid", Riddhima smiles at his comment, " accha yeh batoa why did you tell mama?", arman looks around acting as if mothing is wrong, saya," i didn't tell aunty anything".Riddhima says " you know ammy that when you lie, you look more like a joker", she says jokinly, Then arman tells her " you since yesterday, this is the second title you have given me... Joker where do you get these stupid names from" he laughed trying to change the subject, but riddhima saw right through it, and said, " ammy don't try to chnage the subject, why did you tell mama?", Arman knew how stubborn she was so he replied" riddhima she should know because it's a serious matter".Riddhima frowned "so what ammy, it won't make me better, instead, mama will get more worried and you know how streesed she is about me", Arman nodded his head, " i didn't think about that!", and she replies saying obviously, you don't have brains to think about it". He ask "now what?" She says, "now what? Punishment? naughtily" ,Arman says "I took you dinner a few days back, you have already emptied my wallet" .Then she says "well ammy this is the penalty and dinner is a must". He says "okay fine, I will take you out, but for now, can we eat the pasta that's made inside?" She agrees to it and gives him her hand saying "let's go" He takes her hand and they both go inside.

Nupur Bedroom

Nupur is walking around in her room thinking why samrat hasn't called then she says " by god nupur tu bhi ktini stupid hai, woh busy hoga isl liye call nahi ki", she smacks her forehead lightly. She goes towards the wall where two photos are hung, one of hers and the other one is of samrats, she smiles seeing the pictures, and goes into her dream mode.

India

We go into a restaurant and zoom into a guy with its back towards us, and we see its samrat he is sitting in a restaurant when his friend, Angad, comes and samrat asks him " kahan the tum ". Angad smiles and takes a seat then he replies "it's his friend's wedding".samrat says "what if someone sees you angad then what?". Angad just smiled and said "nothing will happen and you know how many plans I made for this day, just bacause of your emergency, it's all ruined ,anyway, you car has to be decorated just like your bride who is waiting for you". Samrat says "I am very confused". Angad nodds & says " samrat that has to happen and I don't get what you're doing. I am only living upto my friendship with you. I keep feeling bad for the girl whose photo you have in your wallet and to whom you talked over the phone for hours".Samrat frownily says " angad that I was really an idiot and I didn't know what's love then but now i know, I really pity nupur and I know I am doing wrong and I'll regret it, but what should I do, I have no control over my heart and I am crazy in love.Angad says "just think about it she has said no". samrat stops right then and thanks angad who inturn just smiles. Then he tells Angad " yaar if dad finds out about this, he will kill me", Angad pats him for support & says" that if you change your decision now, will bahbi spare you? , samrat smiles and looks up, " see now you're confusing me again" Angad is like there is no one as courageous as you" First, you got engaged your dad's friend's daughter and now you're marrying your dad's personal secretary". Samrat says" everything will be okay and you don't have to worry about it". Angad gets a call and he says" yes, we're going to be there in a little bit". After hanging up, he tells smarats that they have to get to the mandir bhabi and her mom are waiting for us.

Preveiw: will samrat go through with the wedding?, what will happen to nupur?

There you go guys hope you like the part worked really hard to write it, hope you all like it, please commment they mean alot to me, because you all are really special!!!!!!!!

love, sanam