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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
cool FF start huni....so nups n ridzi are sisters.....nice....
conitnue sooon....looking forward to it.....i think m inur pn list already...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sweetheart...
sorry for the late replyyy sweetyyyyy....
but awesome introo!!!! looking forward 2 it!!!! add me 2 the pm list again!
hope ur school is going wellll!!!!! my replies may be a lil late cuz my uni starts this week but i will reply asap 2 ur pmz!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 1

The camera zooms into a huge lavish mansion, as we get inside the house we come to see its decorated very nicely, we move upstairs, and suddenly a white door opens and we see Nupur is getting ready in her room when her sister, another girls comes nehind her her and we see its Riddhima, she goes closer to nupur in and yells in her ear " hurry up" since they're getting late. The bell rings and Nupur says "it must be Arman", Riddhima smiles to herself and goes to open the door.


Living Room
Arman is looking around the living room in a curious way. He wonders to himself " kahan hai sab, why is the house so empty", Just then, riddhima comes there and they both start talking and she teases him saying " he can live without her for even a day", arman blushes at her comment, " accha toh yeh baat hai" he said and then started to run after her to catch her, they both start running around the house when riddhima suddenly gets some sort of pain and she starts gasping for breath, " riddhima are you okay" Arman asked worriedly as he took her to the sofa and poured her water in a glass for her.Nupur came downstairs and sees riddhima sitting on the sofa and arman beside her looking worried, she runs up to them, " riddhima are you okay should i call dad?".Riddhima doesn't say anything she just keeps quite and thinks to herself, Nupur realizes something happened, turning to arman " arman kya hua?", she asked tensely she couldn't see her sister like this, Arman looks to see nupurs tense face, he explains to her how they were just playing around and riddhima started running, hearing the word running nupur got mad, " Arman are you out of your mind? you know she is not okay, then why didn't you stop her, what if something happened huh?", she yelled at him, making arman look down in shame, he realized nupur is right he should have stopped riddhima. Riddhima didn't like the idea of arman getting yelled at because of her, she relized she had to do something, getting up she said, " di it's okay it's not arman fault i just started to run on my, i should have realized it but you don't know how much i want ot be like a normal person and do normal things" arman then turned riddhima to face himself," riddhima sorry please forgive me", he said looking down, Riddhima smiled," dont worry ammy i wont die soon okay" she declared, Nupur and arman looked shockingly at her as if riddhima was out of her mind.Nupur left the room in a fury after hearing riddhimas last sentence.

Riddhima realized she said to much, and she didnt like nupur angry at herself, handing arman the glass of water, " arman yeh pakro i will be back", arman looked up, " par riddhim..", but by then she had run upstairs by then. As she went upstairs, she went into nupur room, but as she walked in she saw nupur crying terribly, running up to her, she hugs her, " di i am sorry please forgive me, i promise i wont say anything like that ever again okay!"Nupur wiped her tears and looked at riddhima" riddhi you dont have any feelings, why do you say things we can not even imagine", riddhima face had regret on it," i am sorry di, please forgive, but di you what has to happen will happen for sure", Nupur quickly stood up, " shut -up riddhi nothing will happen to and if you ever talk like that again, i swear i will never talk to you again" riddhima walked over to nupur and leaned her head on her shoulder, " di who knows whats going to happen", she declared, realizing what she said. she quickly added," accha nupur di quickly wipe your tears because we have only 15 minutes", and then she left the room quickly before nupur could say anything.

Dining table
Shefali( Ridz/nupz mom) is sitting at a table with balloons on the floor and she's wearing a maroon sari with matching jewelery all dressed up, when Ajay walks in smiling and sits next to her and asks, "May I have a dance with you?" Shefali replies, "I'm sorry, but I'm waiting for my beloved". Ajay then makes a sad face and tells her to deny a sweet request, shefali melts at his cute face, and gives him her hand. They both start dancing and ajay says, "Years ago, at this very place, I brought a beautiful girl for dinner on the wedding evening, then we dance. Those were magic moments", shefali blushes hearing this and replies "Where is that girl now?" He looks at her smiling face and says ," that with every passing moment of life, her love gets stronger" and shefali says" wow you have so much faith on your love". ajay replies by saying," I trust her more than myself". Shefali sughs and says, "I have seen many loves stories dying" Ajay then says" that today is the day when we held each other's hands and our hearts united, never to separate again", but then looks at the time and says ," your lover must be coming", she replies" yes", and he says "thank you for the lovely dance", leaves the place smiling.

Ajay leaves and shefali is left thinking, then suddenly from her back, a rose appears, held by ajay. He hands her the rose and says "that beautiful girl is in front of me once again". sheflai blushingly accepts the rose and says "I'm very lucky". They both say "I love you " to each other in chorus. They both start dancing .Then shefali thinks to herself "I feel comfortable in your arms, your love gave me the trust that how complete I am with you, how complete our family is; you, me, and both of our jaans, Nupur and riddhima" tears form in her eyes suddenly and she whispers to herself f "Why, why, will we lose her? Will she leave us never to come back?" Ajay notices her tears and he says, "shefali, you promised..." shefali looks up to meet his eyes and asks, "whether something will happen to her..please save her her ajay she can't leave us",she begs him crying on his shoulder. Ajay assures her" shefali don't worry nothing will happen to our daughter, have faith in god., everything will be alright".

Nupur and Riddhima suddenly come there with a big cake and flowers in theirs hand and yell, " HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MAMA AND PAPA" Ajay and shefali lovingly look at their daughters, they kiss heir forheads and thank them for the suprise, " mama come hurry up and cut the cake i'm hungry!!", riddhima said hungrily looking the cake, nupur looked at riddhima childish behaviour, " by god riddhima aur kitna khaigi, dehk kitni moti hogayi hai",riddhima just shows her tongue to nupur and and hugs her mom, Then ajay and shefali blow out the candles, cut the cake, and feed each other, lovingly,shefali goes to feed nupur, but riddhima yells, " no me first mama!", nupur signals her mom to agree with riddhima's demand, and finally they all are done feeding each other cake.

Later at night

The family is sitting in the living room, playing a game riddhima wins so she has to ask her dad for a gift.She cries and says " she wants their love and the feeling that she will always be surrounded by them, like their heartbeat" ,Then she says I love you papa and mama, and nupsi you guys are my life, i love you all soooooooo much", she hugs them all

There you go guys part 1 is posted hope you all like it!!!!!! Also would like to say priya = Kelly89 will be helping me with ff, so if i'm busy you might get an pm from her okay !!!!!
love sanam
Edited by PheliNazar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
hey awsome part hun
i loved it it was soo cute how you showed ridz and nupzz relation awsoommmmeee totallyy
but whats rong with ridz does she have an illness or what
Anyways love the first part con't sooonnn
luv priya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hey awesome part
plzzz update soon
Edited by zoya_me - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Hey Sanam
nice start
good job
update soon and do pm me
okay

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
awesomeee n vry nice update dear.......plzz continue soon..😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute what's Ridhima's disease plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


From Armaan"Gazing into her green eyes when we first met,
I knew then she was heaven sent.

All I ever dreamed of, an angel from above..
She had no idea from the start
True love, I'd found in my heart.

One of a kind, Love that LASTS a lifetime
All I ever dreamed of, an angel from above.

Still, her smile, my breath it takes away
Wanting, needing, to hold her, so much to say.
All my prayers answered when into my life she came
to me, she is everything.

All I ever dreamed of, an angel from above." To Ridhima


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Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
grt part continue soon
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
awesome start yaar
thanxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next part soooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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