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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#601

hey.....awesome promo......the update seems to b very romantic......hope it is.......plzzzz update soon!!!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: rajpalyogesh81
<font size="6">I luv their romance! ❤️

Best couple eva! </font>

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thanks....at last bhai tumne comment kar hi diya apni is bechaari behen ke ff par........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey.....awesome promo......the update seems to b very romantic......hope it is.......plzzzz update soon!!!

thanks......yet it is romantic......

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
waiting for update

thanks.....i will update soon.........

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 15 years ago

#605

gr88 update mahak
eagerly w8in 4 da next part!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#606

hi friends.......this is a late update coz u know i got busy with my gallery of short stories.......i had to update everyday for "mayur forever" so i didn't got time for it.....but since today is saturday...i am updating it for u all.........

Mayank and Nupur often met after shooting their movie "aur pyaar ho gaya" at different places.......

they lived in different apartments but in the same flat.....

One day mayank asked out Nupur for a date.....

Mayank- angel, chalo ab hum date par chalet hain....

Nupur- kya? Mayank tum bhi na....koi zaroorat nahi hai.....hum roz to milte hain.....

Mayank- toh kya hua.....

After much argument......

mayank finally won over Nupur...

They went to a restaurant which was lightned up by candles......

there was no one in the restaurant....

Nupur- mayank yahan par to koi aur hai hi nahi

Mayank- kyunki maine yeh poora hotel hamare liye book kiya hai...
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Nupur- iski kya zaroorat thi mayank?

Mayank- tum meri zindagi ho.....aur main apni zindagi mein khushiyaan bharna chahta hoon....

Nupur was impressed and she got very emotional so she hugged mayank lovingly....

Mayank after some time said- aur vaise bhi tum mujhe public mein toh apne gale kabhi bhi nahi lagaati....

Nupur just blushed realizing what she had done just now...she broke apart from him.....

Mayank- tum kitna sharmaati ho......shaadi ke baad bhi kya itna hi sharmaaogi?

Nupur- haan....tum yeh batao tumhe main kaisi lagti hoon?

Mayank- theek ho to suno...tum mujhe aisi lagti ho jaise ek pyaase ko paani lagta hai.....kisaan ko baarish lagti hai.....ek andhe insaan ko roshni lagti hai....

Tere husn ko shabdon mein kaid kar raha hoon,
jo rahe nakaam woh koshish kar raha hoon,
amber pe hain lakhon tare chamakte,
ek ko is zameen par chamkane ki koshish kar raha hoon.
lines by me originally but were copied by some copycats to various net working sites...

Ab samjhi ki nahi? Ki mujhe tumhe samjhana padega.....aur vishwaas karo mera pyaar jataane ka tareeka tumhe shaadi se pehle acha nahi lagega.....lekin tum kaho to main tumhe batadoon????

Mayank was expecting a blushing nupur but instead when he looked up he saw....

Nupur had tears in her eyes.....

she was deeply touched by his words....

Mayank- tum kyun ro rahi ho angel?

Nupur- kuch nahi mayank.....wo main soch rahi thi ki koi mujhse itna pyaar bhi kar sakta hai.....maine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki tum mujhse itna pyaar karoge......mujhe ab darr lagta hai ki kahin main tumhe kho na doon....kahin yeh sapna to nahi hai na?

Mayank- main tumhare saath tha, hoon aur hamesha rahoonga....yeh koi sapna nahi hai.....i love you..

And she hugged him once more......this time they did not wanted to get separated....

After some time they broke apart....

Mayank then ordered some food while they ate it with full interest on what they were saying......

they were hardly having any food.......

they were simply staring at each other.....

lost in each other's gaze or perhaps......

lost in each other's eyes...

which told only the truth.......

that they loved each other....

they loved each other more than they thought they could.....

But they had to go to their homes.....

which only separated them by a wall...

the wall which would break down after.....

their marriage.......

When Nupur was leaving, mayank said- nupur ek baat kahoon?

Nupur- hmmm.....

Mayank-Logo ko aksar kehte suna:
"Zinda rahe toh phir milenge".
Magar aap se mil ke
nupur dil ne mehsoos kiya hai ki,
"Aapse milte rahe toh Zinda Rahenge".

Nupur was like dumbstruck.....she did not knew what to say......she hugged mayank....

Nupur after breaking apart- ek baat batao kit um aaj itni shayariyan kyun bol rahe ho???

Mayank- kyunki meri shayari ke baad tum mujhe apne gale jo laga rahi ho......isiliye...

Nupur then blushed....she said- woh to main......

Mayank- woh to kya?

Nupur- woh kuch nahi......tum kitna acha bolte ho......koi book padhi thi kya?

Mayank- nahi....jab se main tumse mila hoon.....tabse main poori duniya ko bhool chukka hoon....I LOVE YOU.....

Nupur- bye....

Mayank- sirf bye?

Nupur- haan......bye....

Then mayank said- Tammana se nahi tanhai se darte hain,
pyaar se nahi ruswaai se darte hain,
milne ki to bahut chahat hai,
par milne ke baad judaai se darte hain
lines originally by me but copied by some fools to various net working sites...

Ab tum yeh batao ki tum jawaab kab dogi? Tum batao ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho? Tum mujhse kabhi nahi kehti ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna main tum se....tum open mein affection kyun nahi show karti? Kyun nahi kehti sirf ek baar ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho?????

Nupur- Sookh Jaate Hain Lub, Lufz Milte Nahi,
Hota Nahi Humse Ishq Bayaan,
Unhe Kaise Bataoon Dil Ki Lagi,
Kaise Sikhaoon Aankhon Ki Zubaan.
lines by me copied
Mr. mayank sharma, har baat kehna zaroori nahi hota hai........kuch baton ko ankhon hi ankhon mein samajhna padta hai......samjhe?

And before mayank could give an answer, she ran away in her apartment......

leaving behing mayank who was left completely stunned......

to???? he is not the only one affected.....

hmmm interesting......

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#607

woah!! bachchi tu toh sach mein badi ho gayi....😆....waise woh lines teri hain ya kisiski maari hain...😆...watever the lines were awesome and so was the update...and me first on eto comment so well everything was great........😆...btw loved ur update and the romance in it....sweet and cute..😳.......plzzz update soon....

Edited by zoya_me - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#608

Hey mahak

tum to kamal hi kar diya.

its a very nice and sweet update.

Zoya is right- a bacchi to saach-much bara ho gaya.

loved it baby.

keep updating

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jigisha kulkarni

@mayur_fan

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#609

wow, osssssum mahak, thanx 4 suchhhh an romantic upd8.👏

it is reallllly refreshing 2 read about mayur's deeep love 4 each other after all d misunderstandings on the show.😃😃

thnx for the pm, plzzzzz upd8 soooon & dont 4get 2 pm me...😆😆

love u loads,😃😃

jigi.

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437810

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Posted: 15 years ago

#610

wow di...this was such an xelent coment!!!
i just luvd it...
and yes, it was romantic =)
u really cheered me up...frm the curent mayur trak!!!
thanx a lot...
pls cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm...

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