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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 17 was amazingly writen

I really liked the scene were u showed how desperate sujal was to hear kashish's voice and after ringing her he was releived to find out that she was ok i really liked the way u guys potrayed the emotions of Sk.The scene between sujal and ali was amazingly potrayed i actually could understand the confusion sujal was going through regarding kashish and the park girl and also he didnt know how to react after what happened between him and kashish.The way u guys showed how nervous kashish was whilst going to see sujal was well presented.The scene related to the fax machine was really good ireally liked the way u showed how sujal got lost in kashish when she was trying to take her hair out of his shirt button.Finally sujal got2 know that kashish was the park girl i really likedthe way u showed how sujal reacted after knowing the truth and it seemed he felt releived after finding out the truth.The Aarzii pehali was mindblowing i really enjoyed reading that scene.The last scene between sujal and Ali was amazing as usual.

Part 18 was written nicely

Finally Heer found out the truth and poor padma died that was a shocker i didnt imagine taht heer will find out like this but i liked the way kashish handle the situation even though she did not have to tell Heer the truth she still did in order 4 Heer to spend time with her mom during her last breaths.Cant beleive that Heer left the house it seems she is really hurt to know that kashish lied to her,but im glad she had prem with her.The news scene was intresting because it helped us see how much kashish loved sujal even though she didnt want to admit to it and i really liked the way u described how lonely kashish was and how much she was missing sujal.The last scene between sujal and kashish was very emotional because kashish was trying to hard to hide her emotions and sujal didnt want to hurt her more by saying to much.

Part 19 was mindblowing

Finally sujal proposed to kashish in the same place were they first met and also infront of the whole media i dont have words to describe tah scene i really like the way u got sujal to propose to kashih sitting on his knee with a ring im glad kashish finally acceptedthe proposal.Sujal is so sweet he left his acting for kashish and also for his future.Im glad sujal fullfilled his promise of making heer understand everything and the scene betweenthe to sisters was amazingly potrayed im glad finally everything is back to normal and kashish has got everything that she wanted.Heer and prem scene was cute.Sujal and kashish's first date was really nice sujal is such a romantic i cant beleive he actually tried cooking 4 kashish.it was really sweet of Heer to give all of sujal's pictures to kashish and know she can start collecting pictures of prem lol.The scene were sujal climbs the pipe was really awesome it seems he really is a modern romeo.

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice job Summi and kashish... waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow,
awsome update,
too good,
superb,
loved the update,
ek hi update main itna progress, fantastic,
but Sujal acting chor raha hai, not fair,
yeh ek compromise nahin ho raha hai, acting to Sujal ka sapna & uska career tha naa, then??????????
i know he loved Kashish, but uske liye aapne aap ko bhul jaana
Kashish ko jab Sujal se pyaar hua tha tab woh ek actor tha, to ussi roop main woh usse aapna sakti thi naa????
main criticize nahin kar rahi hu, its just my opinion.
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was really good
contd soon
finally they confessed
waiting to see what happens next
so sweet sujal goin to work
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part kashu really loved it gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Kashish,Summi sweethearts superb part ya yeh kahun ke ab tak ka aarzii ka best part.👍🏼Main bohot hi khush hoon kyunke yeh part padhne ke liye mujhe ek din ka intezaar nahi karna pada.Maine yeh part 6th ko hi padh liya tha.Mujhe yeh lag hi raha tha ke sujal kashish ko special tareeke se propose karega aur propose karne ka tareeka hi nahin jagah bhi kaafi special thi jahan dono pehli baar mile thein.To mera guess sahi tha sujal ne acting chod di aur finance mein business shuru kiya.Pyar❤️ hoto aisa yeh to sirf career hi tha warna sujal kashish ke liye kuch bhi karsakta hai.Saare media waale shocked😲 thein ke sujal ne acting chod di.Dears agar sach mein rajeev ne apne pyar ke liye kabhi acting chod bhi dega to bhi mujhe dukh nahi hoga kyunke aap jise chahte hai agar woh khush hai to aapko aur kya chahiye.Aur jaise ke socha wahi hua sujal ne heer ko mana hi liya aur kashish ne bhi usse maaf kardiya aur kashish ne wahi saree pehni jab kashish pehli baar sujal ke baahon mein thi😳 neha ke boutique mein.Kahsish sujal jab sujal ke ghar jaarahe thein tab car mein unka convo accha tha.Sujal ke ghar ke bahar jo woh purani baatein yaad kar rahe thein jab sujal ne kaha ki yeh mera tumse vaada hai ke isse pehle koi bhi khwab tumhari aankhon ko chuye main usse haqeeqat me badal dunga yeh mujhe bohot hi accha laga.Sujal ne jis tarah kashish ko surprise diya yeh bohot hi accha tha aur it's so sweet of sujal ke usne kashish ke liye khana banana sikha aur khana banaya.Mujhe tumdono ki fics mein yehi baat acchi lagti hai ke tum log usse real touch deti ho tum dono ko pata hi hoga ke jab Rajeev se dream date ke baare mein poocha gaya to usne kaha ki woh apni girlfriend ko apne ghar bula kar apne haathon se khana bana kar khilana chahega.Sujal kashsih dinner karte waqt jo convo tha woh bhi mujhe accha laga.Dinner poora hone ke baad jab sujal kashish ko apne kamre mein jis tarha baahon mein uthakar lejata hai yeh accha laga aur jo sujal ne kaha ke tumhe pata hai...jab tum shaadi karke pehli baar is ghar me aaogi..to main aise hi tumhe uthake humare kamre tak le jaaunga😳 yeh accha laga aur dono ka room mein convo accha laga.Heer ne kashish ko accha surprise diya sujal ke saare posters kashish ke kamre mein laga kar aur heer ne sahi kaha ab sirf aapka haq banta hai...main bas inhe inki sahi jagah par pohanchana chahti thi...jo ke yahan pe hai...aapke kamre me..aur heer jis tarah se sujal ke naam par kashish ko ched rahi thi accha tha.Sujal ne sach mein romeo ki tarah pipe chadkar kashish se milne aaya aur sujal ne kashish se accha valentines day gift maanga dono ka convo bohot hi accha tha jab kashish ne kaha ke Sujal...kya aaj kuch mang sakti hoon tumse....ple ...ple mana mat karna aur sujal ne kaha ke tumhare maangne re pehle hi main tumhe dene ka vaada karta hoon..kaho kya chahiye tumhe yeh accha laga aur jis tarah se sujal ne kashish ki sone mein madad ki bohot hi accha tha.Sujal ne pehle to kashish ki change karne mein madad ki phir woh ladakh mein kiss aur ab to dono ek hi saath so bhi gaye dears isse pehle ke aur kuch ho indono ki shaadi karvado.Main to yeh part padhkar jaise behosh hi hogayi khaas kar woh last scene ab jab inki shaadi hogi to pata nahi main aur romantic parts kaise padhoongi.Bohot hi romantic part tha dears ab agle part ka mujhe intezaar rahega.Thanks for PM.Plz cont soon. BYE AND LUV YOU BOTH
Edited by crystal fantasy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

soorryyyyyyy 4 late reply i m really busy in my exams..............................buhat muskail se time milta hai fic read karne ka aur comment karne ka..............................

for the last 5-4 parts story ne buaht he acha turn lia................................i love the chemistry between prem n heer............................their sweet n cute fight............................n ofcourse really happy for their enagegement...........................buhat he acha part tha jab prem ke mom n dad heer ke ghar par aa the hai.................................sooo romantic scenes between sujal n kashish..............................while reading dil mein kuch kuch ho raha tha..............................n sujal ne jo gana gayia tha engement par mera tu dil sujal per fida hoga............................totallly romantic one......................................sujal ne kashish ko kia birthday surprise dia aur wish kia mera dil garden garden hoga tha..............................sujal ne kashish ka kitna saath dia suki har problem mein specially uski masi ki problem mein.......................................he is very helpful 2 her............................................enagegment ke baad wala scene jab farm house per sirf sujal kashish the ............................................wooooooooo scene tu mindblowing, too romantic mujhe tu yakeen he nai ho rha tha.......................................dosti itni aage ja rahi hai..................................out of the world tht scene................................................laddakh trip so awesome trip n some about emotional.......................................kashish ka childhood kitna acha ur woh bilkul bachi ban gai us place per dobra ja kar..........................sujal ne tu kashish ki birthday kuch zyada heeee special ban di thi.....................................the dress was perfect , dinner place was also perfect.......................................n last not the least the kiss was also perfect..............................................us lady ki baat sach hogi thi aur kashish ko jab pata chala tu kitni toot gai thi yeh jan kar ky woh sujal hai .............................................n sujal kisi aur se pyaar karta hai........................................buaht he acha acha scene tha ........................................when i read it i was shocked sujal in sooo much love in with her but didn't accept it..................................................feeling so sorry for heer kitna bada sach uske samne aagaya.............................uski mom lekin unki bhi dead hogi but heer ne kashish ko galat kyun samjha..........................................ghar bhi chor dia n kashish ko bhi.................................kitni akeli thi kashish heer bhi nai thi aur sujal bhi nai tha..................................but now sujal ko uska pyaar mil gaya woh parkwali n kashish eik he hai sujal ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya....................................................really happy for them...................................last part were awesome one .....................................finally they get thier love...................har eik scene buhat he acha tha kia likho samjh nai a raha.....................................heer ne bhi kashish ko mafi kardia.......................................

plz con't soon............................i will not be able to comment for next few days bocz of my exams .............................................

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi kashish di
sorry for replying late as i was reading the starting parts of the story
but it is really mindblowing and wonderful di
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Edited by _Jiya_ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great parts!!
Thanks for the PMs .....
Sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-20

Next morning...

At 8am Heer gets ready to go to the hospital because she has a early shift that day.......she goes down to the kitchen looking for Kashish in the kitchen...usually Kashish is in the kitchen getting breakfast ready but today she isnt there.........Heer gets a shock at seeing the kitchen empty....she walks back upstairs to Kashish's room to see if she is there......she is about to knock on the door but decides against it just incase Kashish is sleeping.....so she slowly holds the door handle and opens the door a little...and gets the shock at seeing the scene inside the room......Sujal and Kashish are peacefully sleeping in each others arms......Heer just stands there with her eyes wide open looking at them sleep....slowly a smile forms on her lips at seeing them sleep so cutely........she decides to let them be and closes the door gently and leaves for the hospital......Its now 9 am.....Kashish turns around trying to get the blanket as the sun is shining inside the room and disturbing her sleep......she feels a arm laying across her waist....she looks at the arm than at Sujal...she gets shocked at seeing herself in Sujal's arms like this....so she just looks at him for a moment then realizes last night's events and how she ended up in Sujal's arms.......she moves her hand down to his gently lifting it off her waist....her eyes fall on his wrist watch and sees the time flashing 9:05 am...Kashish remembers that today is his first day at the office and he will be late if he slept any more.......

Kashish: Sujallll...utho.....subaah ke 9 baj gaye..

Sujal stirs in his sleep a little bit.....he places his head on her shoulder in his sleep.....

Sujal: hmmm...sone dona...muje neend aa rahi hai

Kashish: Sujal aaj sone ka din nahi..utho.....tumhe office jana hai

Sujal: kiske office..mera koi office nahi.aaj Sunday hai...so jao..

He just pulls the blanket over both of them then places his hand back on her waist....

Kashish: Sujallll.....chodo muje....tumhe office jana hai....aaj sunday nahi monday hai....idiot ab utho....

Sujal opened his eyes as he heard Monday and sat up on the bed with a jerk...realising what he was doing...

Sujal: i'm really sorry Kashish...maine subah subah tumhe pareshan kiya..woh pata hi nahin chala ke main neend me kya karta hoon...

Kashish: lekin muje ab bahot kuch pata chalta hai...ab utho aur jake fresh ho jao...main neeche tumhara breakfast karti hoon....

Sujal: arre nahin Kashish...tum rehne do...main ab nikalta hoon...main ghar pe ready hoke office me nashta karlunga..

Kashish: thik hai nahi rokungi...lekin ek cheez khaye bina aaj main tumhe yaha se nahi jane dungi chahe tum kitna hi na jaldi me ho...ab chalo utho

Sujal: acha theek hai baba...mein abhi uththa hoon...

He moves the duvet back and is about to get up..when he turns back and kisses her forehead...

Sujal: goodmorning Kashish

Kashish: Goodmorning Sujal...

He smiled then gets up...

Sujal: main washroom hoke aaya...do minute haan...bas abhi aaya main,.

Kashish: main neeche hoon...

Sujal: theek hai...main abhi aata hoon neeche...

Sujal goes to the washroom whilst Kashish takes her night robe and puts it on.....then she gets up from bed and makes the room presentable.....after that she goes downstairs......5 minutes later Sujal comes out of the washroom and goes downstairs...Kashish is in the kitchen when she hears him coming down...she comes out with a bowl and a spoon in her hand....Sujal looks at her as she comes out and stands near him...

Sujal: Kashish...yeh kya hai?

Kashish: kuch nahi aaj ke din ka sagoon hai...ab muh kholo..

Sujal looks at her and smiles whilst opening his mouth so that she can feed him..

Sujal: thanks Kashish...par iski zaroorat nahin thi...mera good luck to tum ho..aur tumhe jabse maine apni aankhon me basa liya hai..mera din acha hi guzarta hai...

Kashish: aur aaj ka din sabse achcha hoga....Good Luck Sujal....

She bends forward and places her lips on his forehead...Sujal smiles and closes his eyes for a moment as her lips touch his forehead...he looks at her and places his palm on her cheek whilst looking in her eyes...

Sujal: thank you so much Kashish...ab tumne kehdiya to wake main aaj ka din acha hoga..i love you

Kashish: I love you too....ab tum jao...tumhe dair hogi..

Sujal: theek hai...main chalta hoon...lekin shaam ko waapis aunga...hamari shaadi ki tareekh leke..

Kashish: thik hai...bye...Good luck..

Sujal: thanks Kashish...bye

He is about to go when he turns back to her and gives her a quick hug...he kisses her head then rushes out....

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10:15 am......

Sujal reaches his new office feeling something light and happiness in his heart because he is doing everything like Kashish dreamed......today marks a new begining for him and he is enjoying every moment because there is no media following him finally he has his freedom.......at this moment he is an ordinary person who is starting his career...a careeer that he knows he will succeed in along with his company........the day started of amazingly good because all the staff seemed hardworking and dedicated....as the day passed by Sujal kept thinking and missing Kashish........its now 4:30 pm and he couldnt wait anymore to talk to her so takes out his mobile and dials her number......Kashish is busy cooking dinner picks up her cell phone without looking at the caller Id.....

Kashish: Hello...Kashish Sinha here..

Sujal: maaf kijiye..kya main Mrs Kashish Garewal se baat kar sakta hoon?

Kashish: Sujalll tumm....aur yeh kya hai Mrs.Kashish Garewal...

Sujal: yeh hai tumhara future name...jo bohat hi jald tumhari pehchaan banjayega..

Kashish: matlab tumhari panditjee se baat ho gayi.....batao na Sujal..

Sujal: haan ho to gayi hai...

Kashish: to batao na kabki..

Sujal: ahaan itni jaldi nahin...aake bataunga..

Kashish: Sujal batao na...ab isme kya surprise..muje janna hai..

Sujal: surprise ki baat nahin hah...muje tumse milne ka bahana chahiye...

Kashish: to iska matlab tum nahi bataoge...jane do muje nahi karni tumse baat..

Sujal: arre Kashish naraaz kyun horahi ho...please mere liye thoda sa intezaar karlo..

Kashish: thik hai kar lungi..batao phone kyun kiya..

Sujal: hmm..tumhari bohat yaad arahi thi isliye..

Kashish: joothe....kaam nahi kya....

Sujal: arre main sach kehraha hoon...aur kaam to hai par mera dhyan baar baar tumpe chala jaata hai

Kashish: kyun...mujpe kyun chala jata hai....tum apna kaam aur muje apna kaam kyun nahi karne dete...is tarah dono ka kaam ho jayega...

Sujal: kyun...aap kaunse kaam me busy hain?

Kashish: Sujal 4;30 baj gaye hai.....thodi dair me Heer aur Prem aa rahe hai....aur meri Aliji se baat ho gayi hai ...aaj shaam ka dinner ab tum dono yaha karne wale ho..

Sujal: arre wah kya baat hai...yaani sab planning pehle se hogayi aur muje kuch pata hi nahin

Kashish: ab tumhe batati to tum lunch ke time pe hi yaha aa jate sara kaam chod ke isi liye maine tumhe nahi bataya...ab batao aa rahe hona..

Sujal: ofcourse aaunga...tumse milne ke liye tadap raha hoon

Kashish: achcha yeh to batao ki aaj tumhe kya khana hai...woh tumhare liye bana dungi...kyunki Heer aur Prem apni apni pasand ka bolke gaye hai..

Sujal: tum apni pasand ka kuch bhi mere liye banado..kyunki humari pasand ek hai

Kashish: Sujal kyun meri muskeli badha rahe ho....ab batao na kya khana hai...

Sujal: hmm..tumhare haath ki banni kheer khaani hai muje..

Kashish: woh ...woh to ab nahi ban sakti...I am sorry...

Sujal: kyun kya hua?

Kashish: woh to sabse pehle hi ban chuki hai........

Sujal smiles..

Sujal: to tumhe pehle se hi pata tha...ke main yahin khaana chahunga

Kashish: tumse jyada janti hoon main tumhe....ab batao aur kya khana hai...kyunki aaj main bahot khush hoon ...isi liye bolo aur kya chahiye khane me...

Sujal smiles at her...

Sujal: ek cheez to hai jo muje khani hai...par tum dogi nahin

Kashish: kya chahiye batao...main abhi bana dungi...

Sujal: banane ki zaronrat nahin hai...woh already perfectly ban chuki hai

Kashish: achcha ab aisa kya mere kitchen me ban gaya hai jo muje hi nahi pata..............

Sujal: hmmm...tum aur kaun...

Kashish: yeh mazak tha...kya ab muje khane ka irada hai..

Sujal: mazak to nahin tha...aftell all tum itni tasty to ho...muje to tumhe hi khana hai

Kashish: hey bhagwan....kya insaan banaya hai aapne....kuch bhi nahi chodta..

Sujal starts to laugh...

Sujal: aur kissi cheez ka to pata nahin lekin main tumhe kissi bhi haal me nahin chod sakta...muje tum chahiye..woh bhi poori ki poori..

Kashish: tumhara muje pata nahi..lekin main her hal me apne aap ko kisi aur ke saath batnewali nahi....main puri ki puri tumhari amanat hoon...main abhi se keh deti hoon..

Sujal smiles at her love for him...

Sujal: aur main bhi to sirf aur sirf tumhari amanat hoon...Sujal ki har saans me...uske dil me..uski dhadkan me to bas Kashish hi basti hai

Kashish: haa to achcha hai na ki sirf Kashish hi hai...agar kisi din dusri aayi to muje to tum bhul hi jana lekin itna yaad rakhna ki main tumhara woh hal karungi ki tum...ki tum..

Sujal: ki mein kya?

Kashish: tum....tum kabhi aisa mere saath karoge hi nahi to maine kabhi iski saza ke bare me socha hi nahi..

Sujal: itna bharosa hai mujhpe?

Kashish: haa hai.....tabhi tumhare saath aadhi raat ko bhi muje kahi jane se darr nahi lagta..

Sujal: sirf aadhi raat?..aur jo kal ki puri raat humne saath guzari thi uska kya..

Kashish: Sujal...main phone rakhti hoon.......

Sujal: kyun...mujse baat nahin karni ab?

Kashish: muje us bare me koi baat nahi karni.....

Sujal: acha theek hai...lekin sunno...apni khidki aaj khulli rakhna...main raat ko phirse araha hoon..

Kashish: thik hai rakh dungi...tum aake so jana....aaj main Heer ke saath uske kamre me sonewali hoon.....mere kamre ko bura na lage isi liye tum aahi jaana...thik 11 baje...

Sujal: kya!tum Heer ke kamre me...to main aake kya karunga...main to tumhare liye...khair chodo...jaane do...waise bhi kuch hi din baaki hain...tum reh lo sukoon se...ek baar shaadi hojaye phir dekhta hoon tum kiske kamre me bhagti ho..

Kashish: tumhare ghar me woh samne wale guestroom me..waha nahi to neeche library me...

Sujal: tum jahan bhi jaogi...muje wahin paaogi...agar tum library me sona chahti ho to muje koi problem nahin...main bhi wahin sone waala hoon tumhare saath..

Kashish: woh main tumhare ghar aake tai karungi..

Sujal: mere nahin...humare...acha ab main rakhta hoon...abhi thodi dair me milenge..

Kashish: thik hai...bye....sambhal ke aana aur waqt pe aana..

Sujal: main sambhal ke bhi aaunga..aur waqt pe bhi...tum bhi apna khayal rakhna aur cooking ko lekar stress mat hona...bye..i love you

Kashish: Bye...I love you Sujal..

Sujal just smiles and cuts the call then rests his head back on his chair for a moment thinking about Kashish......after sometime he straightens up and tries to do some work..on the other side Kashish puts her phone down white getting a spoon from drawer...she smiles thinking about Sujal while making Kheer other day....she gets some kheer to taste it and gets lost in his thoughts and of course feeling happy that her dreams are coming true...

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7.30pm.....

Heer and Prem are home from the hospital and are setting table for dinner which Kashish just finished making......she is on the side impatiently looking at the door every few seconds waiting for Sujal to come home......while Heer is watching Kashish silently and with a smile on her face.....

Heer: di aap pareshan mat hoiye...jiju abhi aajayenge...waise bhi woh aapse zyada dair tak dur nahin reh paate...

Heer slightly giggles remembering the events from early morning..

Kashish: ab isse kya matllab hua tumhara....jaise tu hamesha Prem ke saath rehti hai.....atleast main aur Sujal saath me ab kaam to nahi kar rahe...

Heer: kaam to nahin kar rahe...par haan aap phir bhi dur thodi na reh paate ho...abhi kal aap dono...mera matlab hai dinner pe gaye the...aur aaj woh phir dinner pe arahe hain...

Kashish: aaj ka dinner to family dinner hai...aur kal to valentine dinner tha ......jaise tum Prem ke saath gayi thi.

Heer: uff di...yaad mat dilao kal ki...aaj se pehle main itni boring jagah pe nahin gayi...aur wahan ki entertainment ka kya kahun..wahan se bhaagne ka mann kar raha tha...

Prem:ab muje kya pata tha ke wahan woh opera singer bitha denge...tum hi entertain kardeti itna boring tha to..

Kashish: bas bas...ab lad kyun rahe ho...isse achcha hota tum dono ghar pe hi dinner banake kha lete ....

Prem: agli baar ghar pe hi rahenge...

Heer: waise di...aap kahan pe gayi thi kal?

Kashish: kahi nahi SG Mansion pe hi hum log to the..

Heer's face lightens up...

Heer: arre wah...kya baat hai...aap dono ne valentines day SG Mansion me manaya...how romantic...waise jiju kaafi samajdaar hain...isliye bheed se dur hi rakha unhone aapko...taki koi kebab me haddi na bansake...

Kashish remembers the time she and sujal spent at SG Mansion...and how they were all alone..noone to disturb them.......and tries to hold back her blush.......

Kashish: main paani lekar aati hoon...

She is about to go into the kitchen when the doorbell rings and she stops in her tracks then turns towards the door...

Prem: main dekhta hoon di...

Prem walks towards the door whilst Kashish looked to it impatiently...Prem opens the door to find Sujal standing there holding some beautifully wrapped baskets.....Ali was standing next to him holding a tray..

Prem: aaiye...aap hi ka subaah se dilojaan se intzaar ho raha hai...oh sorry...main nahi...Dii kar rahi hai aap ka intezaar...

Sujal looks towards Kashish with a smile whilst she looks down...

Sujal: kaise ho Prem...

Prem; kaisa matlab...shaadi aapki honewali hai lekin meri honewali biwi aur sali mujse itna kaam karate hai ki pucho mat..

Heer: Prem!..tum baaz nahin aaoge na...tumhe to main baad me dekhti hoon...

Sujal: Prem...aisi baat hai to tu humari side pe aa ja...khush rahega.

Prem: sahi kaha aapne....aaj se main officialy party change kar raha hoon....aur aap sab mere gawah hai...

Heer: thankgod...kamsekam tumse to jaan chutegi humari...aur tum na idiot ho...unhe darwaze pe khada karke baatein kiye ja rahe ho...yeh nahin ke andar bulalun...ab hatto..

Heer nudges Prem to the side and tells Sujal and Ali to come in.....Ali places the tray on the coffee table whilst sujal places the baskets beside it.. Kashish who is looking at him manages to speak a little....

Kashish: bahot dair kar di aane me aaj...

Sujal smiles...

Sujal: woh kuch zaroori samaan pick karna tha isliye dair hogayi...i'm sorry...maine tumhe itni dair tak intezar karwaya..

Kashish: nahi woh bas.....aise hi puch rahi thi..tum betho main tum sab ke liye pani lati hoon...

Sujal; its ok..hum theek hain..waise bhi muje kuch batana hai....aaj main pundit jee se milla tha...hamari shaadi ki tareekh nikalne ke liye...aur jo sabse pehla mahurat hai woh aaj se theek 7 din baad ka hai...meri taraf se to yeh tareekh theek rahegi...aap sabko koi problem to nahin haina?

Heer: saat din.....itna jaldi...itne me kya hoga...

Prem: i know....abhi to mom aur dad ko batana hai...woh log aayenge....itna jaldi.....

Sujal: meri unse baat hogayi hai...woh parson ki flight se arahe hain..maine tickets bhej diye thay...aur baaki sab bhi hojayega..

Prem: tab to saat din kya...aap do din me Dii se shaadi karke apne saath le ja sakte hai....I am sure Dii ko koi aitrazz nahi hoga....unless aapko koi ho..

Sujal: main to aaj bhi shaadi karne ko taiyaar hoon..agar tumhari di ko koi problem na ho

Prem: dii...aapko koi problem to nahi...chalo abhi mandir chalte hai...

Heer: right Prem...waise bhi dii ne red dress hi pehni hai...waqt bhi bach jayega...jaldi chaliye..

Kashish: tum dono chup rahoge...itni jaldi kaise...aur mahurat ke hisaab se hume chalna chahiye

Sujal: nahi Kashish...aaj kal to kaun muhurat me yakeen karta hai...chalte hai abhi....

Ali: main abhi panditjee ko phone karta hoon.....chaliye chalte hai...

Kashish: tum log meri taang kheench rahe ho?

Prem: yeh lo...zindagi me pehli bar hum log serious baatein kar rahe hai aur inko humpe yakeen nahi....aapko humpe nahi apne pyaar pe to hai...wahi keh rahe hai aapse..

Kashish: main Sujal ko achi tarah se jaanti hoon...aur muje pata hai woh muje tang karne ki koshish kar raha hai

Sujal: nahi Kashish sach me...main pehli bar sach keh raha hoon...tumhe yakeen nahi to main kasam khata hoon...lekin tumhari nahi...Anisha ki...

Kashish: dekha maine kaha tha na...yeh mazaak kar raha hai...meri jhooti kasam Sujal nahin kha sakta...

Ali: haa....ab to paka tumne hum sabko pakad liya...waise anisha ki joothi kasam....good job ...

Kashish: lekin Sujal tum Anisha kh baat kyun kar rahe the

Sujal: ab main aap sabse bahot pyaar karta hoon to aap sabki thodi joothi kasam khaunga.,....isi liye Anisha ki....i hate her for what she did to her child...

Kashish: jaanti hoon.,usne jo kiya woh bilkul galat tha...koi insaan apne bache ki jaan jaise lesakta hai,.

Heer: Dii...kamse kam aaj ke din to yeh sad si baatein aap dono na kare....aaj ghar me khushiyaan aayi hai....aapki shaadi ka sagun aaya hai..

Kashish looks at Heer and smiles...

Sujal: theek hai...nahin karte...ab baaki batein baad me..pehle dinner kare....

Kashish: haa karte hai...chalo betho tum sab log....i will serve today..

Sujal: nahin tum betho...hum kar lenge...waise bhi tum tak gayi hogi khaana banane ke baad

Heer: to kya hua...aap hai na dii ki thakan dur karne ke liye..

Sujal at Heer in surprise...

Kashish: Heer kuch to sharam karo..sab ke saamne tum

Heer: main sharam karoon....dii aap bhul rahi hai ki main saali hoon...kuch bhi kar sakti hoon....aur abhi tak to maine kisi ko kuch bataya hi nahi..

Kashish: kya nahin bataya?

Heer: aap sach me sunna chahti hai dii...sabke samne..

Kashish lookes confusingly...

Kashish: Heer tum kya kehrahi ho muje kuch samaj nahin aaraha...

Prem: Heer tum kis baare me baat kar rahi ho?

Heer: kal puri raat ke bare me aur nahi to kya....kal puri raat Jiju aapke saath the...

Kashish looks at Heer in shock and Sujal is equally shocked thinking about how Heer found out...

Sujal: ai...sa..kuch nahin hai Heer...tumhe galat fehmi huyi hai...main to raat ko apne ghar pe tha...

Ali: ek second ek second...tu to kehraha tha ke tum office me tha raat bhar...kal ki taiyaarian karne me busy tha...to phir ghar kaise...

Sujal signs Ali to keep it quiet with his eyes..

Heer: aur aaj subaah maine jo dii ke kamre me dekha woh to jooth ho hi nahi sakta ....waise dii aap to itni dair tak nahi soti..

Kashish looks down totally embarassed not knowing what to say...

Sujal: k..k..kya dekha tumne subah...

Kashish: Heer jaisa tum soch rahi ho...waisa kuch nahin hai..

Heer: after all sab yahi kehte hai kyun Prem..

Prem: haan...yeh baat to hai...

Sujal: Kashish sahi kehrahi hai...woh...hua yun ke raat ko jab main ghar jaane waala tha...to achanak car kharab hogayi...isliye main ruk gaya...aur koi rasta nahin tha

Ali: aisa kaise ho sakta hai...tum office to waqt pe apni car me aaye the..

Sujal: Ali tu chup karega please...

Sujal looks at him angrily...

Sujal: subah try kiya to chal padi thi...

Heer: achcha ab pareshan nahi karte....aisa kuch nahi tha...dii was on bed....Jiju was on sofa...thats it..

Prem: Heer tum bhi na...pehle nahhn kehsakti thi...khamaka itna ched diya inhe...

Sujal looks at Heer silently thanking her for the cover up

Heer: ab thoda to sata sakti hoon main Jiju...hakk banta hai..

Sujal: haan banta to hai...ab khaana khaayen...bohat bhook laggi hai

Kashish: hmm..tum betho main deti hoon..

Sujal sits down while Kashish serves him but she doesnt look in his eyes as she was feeling embarassed.....once she serves everyone she sits down next to him to have dinner...Sujal looks at her from the corner of his eyes...waiting for her to take the first bite before he eats...once she ate her first bite he ate his.....soon everyone starts talking and eating....once they finished Kashish gets up and starts to clear the table.....Sujal also helps her clear the table......everyone goes and the lounge to sit......

Sujal: erm...Heer...waise to maine apne hisaab se sab kardiya hai...kuch aur chahiye to batadena...main intezaam karlunga..

Heer: agar aap chahe to main sagun abhi dii ko deke kar sakti hoon...

Sujal: tum baad me araam se dekh kar muje bata sakti ho its ok...

Heer: thik hai....main kal hi hospital se ek hafte ki chuti le lungi...i will be fine..

Sujal: ok...lekin kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho to mujse kehdena

Heer: dii ko bol dungi woh aap tak meri request pahocha degi..

Sujal looks towards Kashish from the corner of his eyes as she is looking down...

Sujal: theek hai...to ab hum chalte hain...raat kaafi hogayi hai to..

Kashish: Sujal woh...

Sujal: haan...kaho

Kashish: woh..woh tum muje marine drive chod doge..ple..

Sujal: marine drive...haan...kyun nahin...main chod dunga...

Kashish: thanks chale...Heer main abhi aayi..muje kuch kaam hai..

Heer: its ok di...take your time...

Sujal: erm Ali tum apni car me chalo...main baad me milta hoon...

Ali: theek hai...main bhi nikalta hoon...bye

Sujal: bye...chalen Kashish?

Kashish: ya sure...chalo....

Sujal says bye to Heer and hugs Prem...all three of them leave together...Ali goes to his car while Sujal looks at Kashish and he opens the car door for her....she sits inside...he sits in too then drives off...

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After 30 minutes of driving...Sujal stops his car at Marine Drive then looks towards her... who is just sitting there lost in thoughts

Sujal: Kashish...hum pohanch gaye hain...lekin ek baat to batao...tumhe is waqt yahan pe kaunsa kaam tha?

Kashish: bas ...aise hai muje kuch dair ke liye apne liye waqt chahiye..

Sujal looks at her understanding her situation...

Sujal: main samaj sakta hoon Kashish...kabhi kabhi zindagi me aisa waqt bhi aata hai jab hume kuch waqt apne liye chahiye hota hai...main tumse aur koi bhi sawaal nahin karunga...you take your time..

Kashish: thanks....ab tum ja sakte ho...i will be fine...main taxi me chali jaungi...

Sujal: itni raat ko tum taxi me jaaogi...bilkul nahin...main yahin tumhara intezar karunga...tum jab bhi ghar jaana chaho hum tabhi jaayenge...

Kashish: Sujal...ple muje waqt lagega....isi liye tum jao....ple..

Sujal: Kashish...maine tumse kaha na main tumse ek bhi sawaal nahin puchunga...tumhe apne liye jitna bhi waqt chahiye woh tum le sakti ho...main raat bhar tumhare liye yahan ruk sakta hoon...please muje yahan pe rukne do...main nahin chahta ke tum itni raat ko akele taxi me jaao..

Kashish: thik hai...main bas abhi 5 min me aayi...

Sujal: Kashish...tum apna poora waqt le sakti ho...agar tum mere liye jaldi karogi to muje bura lagega..

Kashish: nahi karungi....main abhi aayi...

Sujal: theek hai...main yahin pe hoon...

Kashish looks at him for a moment then gets out of the car...Sujal watches her as she walks towards the road holding the wall with one hand then she sits down and starts looking at the waves...a gentle breeze blows her hair whilst the waves crashed against the thick wall...

Kashish: aaj main kitni khush pata hai aap sabko....lekin meri khushi batnewala koi nahi hai mere saath....aajse pehle maine aapko itna kabhi miss nahi kiya....aaj mera shagun karnewala koi nahi tha....aur nahi meri nayi zindagi ke liye aashirwad dene ke liye....kyun Dad aap ne bachpan me hi muje chod diya....aur Mom aap...jab muje aapki sabse jyada zaroorat hai tab hi aapne bhi....aur mom maine masi ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya...lekin ab to woh bhi aapke pass aa gaye....kisi ko apni Kashish ki fikar nahi huyi...ki aap sabke bina woh apni zindagi kaise shuru karegi.....Mom....Dad...aap dono ka to sapna tha na ki Kashish ki shaadi me aisa karenge waise karenge to ab kya hua....ab nahi aayenge apni beti ki shaadi me....mujse naraz hai kya...jo aaj mujse baat bhi nahi kar rahe aap....

Kashish cant hold her tears back so she starts to cry.......because she is feeling so lonely without her parents....she had no elder to bless her to guide her or to just support her.......she just shatters down at thinking about her all the loved ones she lost.........from the car Sujal sees her holdining the wall and crying uncontrolably and doesnt know what to do.....he wants to give her the space that she needs but he cant see her cry and broken down like this......so he decides to go to her......he rushes out of the car and goes to where she is then sits down next to where she is......and places his hand on her shoulder for comfort........

Sujal: Kashish!..kya hua!...tum is tarah ro kyun rahi ho?...Kashish please batao na

Kashish: Sujal....muje mere mom aur dad ki bahot yaad aa rahi hai....main...main unhe aaj bahot miss kar rahi hoon ...

Sujal looks at her helplessly because there is nothing he can do to bring them back or fill in the emptiness of her parents loss...so he kneels in front of her and holds her face in his hand while wiping her tears....

Sujal: Kashish...main tumhari haalat ko samaj sakta hoon...jaanta hoon ke maa baap ki kammi kabhi poori nahin hosakti...main to yeh bhi nahin janta tha ke mere parents kaun hain...lekin tumne to unhe jaan kar khoya hai...to tumhara dard to mujse kahin zyada bada hai...kaash main tumhare dard ko kam karne ke liye kuch kar paata..

Kashish: Sujal...tum bahot kuch kar sakte ho...hamesha mere pass rehkar...muje isi tarah sambhalte...

Sujal: main tumse vaada karta hoon Kashish...main tumhara saath apni aakhri saans tak nibhaunga...main tumhe kabhi bhi nahin chod ke jaaunga..tumhare mom dad ko to main waapis nahin la sakta...par main tumhe itni khushian..itna pyar dunga ke tumhe unki kammi kabhi bhi mehsoos nahin hogi..i promise..

Kashish: I love you Sujal....I love you so much....

Sujal: i love you too Kashish...more than anything in this world..

She looks into his eyes which shows his intense love for her and tears start to flow from her eyes again......he looks at her for a moment then slowly brings his face close to her and places his lips on top of the tear drop rolling down her cheek...then moves his face a little bit up to her eye and kisses the tear drop that was forming in her eyes....Kashish closes her eyes as soon as she feels his lips on her eyes.......she tries to lower her gaze but cant do it because he is holding her face in his hand.....Sujal wants to take all of her pain away and shower her with his love.....he gently moved his lips to her forehead and kisses it softly...telling her that he always be there for her....he keeps his lips on her forehead for while closing his eyes.....Kashish closes her eyes while moving her hands around his neck holding him close....Sujal opens his eyes and moves back a little as he looks at her...then he pulls her close into his arms hugging her tightly whilst running his hands along her back and digging his head deep between her neck and shoulder......he gently kisses her neck while she moves her hand into his hair and runs her fingers through his hair softly while going deeper and deeper into her own world...Sujal also feels complete at holding her close to him.....he relaxes when he felt her soft fingers in his hair and he kept digging her deeper and deeper in his embrace as the tip of his nose gently caresses her neck...

Kashish: Sujal...

Sujal realises what he is doing and quickly opens his eyes and moves back.....

Sujal: i'm sorry...woh main..chalen

Kashish: nahi mera woh matlab nahi tha....i was just asking...office kaisa tha...

Sujal: oh...office...haan office ka pehla din bohat acha tha...sab staff bohat hi hardworking hai...i'm sure un sabki mehnat se aur tumhari duaon se yeh company ek din zaroor kamyab hogi..

Kashish: hmm....sirf ek saal me....

Sujal: shayad...shayad isse bhi kam hosakta hai...ya zyada bhi...depend karta hai ke humare kitne contracts kaamyaab hote hain...par muje sabpe aur sabse zyada tumpe bharosa hai...waise Kashish...main tumse kal raat ke liye sorry kehna chahta tha...meri wajah se tumhe itna sharminda hona pada...muje aise nahin aana chahiye tha..

Sujal kal tumhari galti nahi thi...kal meri hi galti thi...maine tumhe apne swarth ke liye roka....aur muje aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...

Sujal: nahin Kashish...tum khud ko kasoorwaar mat thehrao...agar kal raat main pehle aata hi nahin to yeh sab nahin hota...khair koi baat nahin...tum hi kehti ho na ke jo hogaya usse bhool jao...tho tum yeh baat bhi dheere dheere bhool jaogi...

Kashish: bhul gayi abhi....

Sujal smiles at her...

Sujal: tum jaanti ho na ke tum kitni achi ho...kabhi bhi...koi bhi baat ka burra nahin maanti tum...aur tumhara dil itna bada hai ke chahe kissi ki galti kitni bhi badi kyun na ho...tum unhe maaf kardeti ho...main sach me bohat bada khushnaseeb hoon ke tumhare dil ne mujse pyar kiya hai..

Kashish: nahi Sujal...main khusnaseeb hoon ki muje tumhara pyaar mila...kyunki main itna samaj gayi hoon ki tum mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho..

Sujal: tum jaan bhi maango gi na to main woh bhi haste haste dene ko taiyaar hoon...

Before she can say anything he places his hand on her mouth...

Sujal: main jaanta hoon ke tum kabhi iske baare me soch bhi nahin sakti...lekin main to sirf tumhe yeh batane ki koshish kar raha tha ke main tumhare liye kis hadd tak jasakta hoon..

Kashish moves his hand from her mouth...

Kashish: bol liya jo bolna tha...ab main kuch bolu..

Sujal looks in her eyes and nods s head cutely....telling her that she talk.....

Kashish: itna yaad rakhna ki jis pal tumhe kuch hoga uske agle hi pal yeh Kashish apni jaan de degi..samje.

Sujal moves his hand and covers her mouth again..

Sujal: tum aisa kuch nahin karogi Kashish...agar kabhi bhi muje kuch hua to tum mere liye jiyogi...tumhe mere hisse ki bhi zindagi jeeni paregi...aur main thodi na itni asaani se tumhe chod ke jaunga...abhi to saddiyan saath me bitani hai hume..

Kashish moves his hand in hers looking down....

Kashish: I am sorry...lekin main tumhari yeh baat nahi manungi...tum jaha jis hal me rahoge waise hi main tumhare saath rahungi...

He lifts her face by placing his other hand below her chin and tipping her head forward...

Sujal: phir to main kabhi bhi tumhara saath nahin chodunga...hum humesha saath me rahenge...yeh mera tumse vaada hai...

Kashish: thanks sujal.....ab hum chalte hai....Heer soch rahi hogi ki main kaha reh gayi..

Sujal: haan tum theek kehrahi ho...yeh na ho woh phirse...aur is baar to humne kuch kiya bhi nahin hai..

Kashish: kya...tumhara kuch karne ka irada tha...woh bhi yaha marine drive pe...

Sujal smiles...

Sujal: tha to...aur Marine drive pe kya problem hai...waise bhi yahan pe raat hone ki wajah se dur tak koi nazar nahin araha..

Kashish: main ja rahi hoon...tum durr tak aane ka intzaar karo..

She is about to get up when he pulls her back and starts moving his face closer to her...now he is few inches away from her face as he gently blows the strands of hair on her face..

Sujal: muje chod ke kahan jaane ka iraada hai?

Kashish: tum...tumhe chod ke thodi..thodi hi kahi jaungi..

Sujal gently moves a little close...breathing slowly on her lips while wisperring his words...

Sujal: acha..par abhi to tum jaa rahi thi..muje yahan pe chodke...

Kashish: k...kya sach me ja sakti thi...

Sujal rests his forehead against hers...his lips still hovering above hers...

Sujal: nahin...

Kashish: to....to phir..

Sujal: to phir....chale...

He smiles then moves back as Kashish opens her eyes when she feels herself in his arms as he starts to walk back to the car..

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