I Hate You For Loving Me RN FF ch15pg64 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanx a lot shaina

Though Devraj knows beauty always conceals danger, he could not stop himself from getting attracted to Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳yeah she is attractive...dats y

He could sense that she had the ability to control people and could possibly control him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊smart guy

The description of Devraj's palace was beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanx again

I loved the description of Devraj's room and its almost a palace in itself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

When he closed his eyes Naina's face came in front of his eyes!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊asar ho raha hai uspe naina ka

What did Naina remind him of that he was not willing to remember??😔 😔 😔 😔u wil know really soon dear

Who was that girl whose face he saw??😕 😕 😕 😕later...

Was that connected to the girl who was shot??😔 😔 😔 😔again later...😆

Or was that girl Naina herself who maybe he knew when he was young??😛 😛 😛 😛keep guessing dear...

Devraj ko nightmares kyun aate thhe??😔 😔 😔 😔Aisa kya hai uske past mein??😕 😕 😕 😕ab ye to sirf wahi janta hai na....

He got drunk to get rid of that image!!!!!! poor guy...

Devraj received information about Naina and started reading it excitedly!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He was impressed and satisfied that she was the perfect dedicated worker who would take him to new heights!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼yup

Naina's character reminds me a little of Sunehri of Dhoom 2!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊ye shayad pehle bhi kisi ne mujhe kaha tha...but i dont like sunehri...thodi bewakuf thi na

Maybe she is sent by the New York Police or even Sam to help them catch Devraj!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔u think so?

Karan was the only person who Devraj had brought along from India and his only friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊hmmmm

Devraj is happy to see Naina and is gaze kept constantly flitting to Naina!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...

He thought she looked gorgeous but when she looked at him he averted his gaze!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳he wont give in dat easily

Devraj wanted Naina and he asked Samuel for her and was willing to pay any price!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊yaha aise hi kaam hote hai

Samuel himself was very fond of Naina and would have refused anyone but Devraj didn't fall into the anyone category!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊ab itna spl priviledge to milega hi na

Samuel agreed to give Naina to Devraj and said in one meeting he had guessed her worth!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Devraj ne Naina ko haasil kar liya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hey Sur...Hey Priya...hw r u nw???don't worry main hamesha tumhare uds par apne pagalpan ko post {comments} karti rahungi...!!! kya karun yeh FEVICOL ka jod hai tutega nahin...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 i hope so k ye jod kabhi na tute...tumhare comments na mere fic ki shaan hai!!!

ok now abt d ud...😃

asusall ...JUST PERFECT...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanku sooo much dear*bows down*

pata hai tumhare likhne ki khaashiyat yeh hai ki tum har chiz ko perfectlly likhti ho...ki kisi ko koi shaq hi nahin rahta...kisi part me...!!! at least main apne nazariye ki baat kar rahi hun...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃hehe thanx im glad u think so...actually i hate bloopers u know....

maine toh pahle hi kaha tha ki mujhe action scenes pasand hain...mujhe bhi aur jab kabhi koi ladki (just lyk naina) aise scene deti hai...toh meri siti bajti hai. mujhe yaha tak sunai di thi u know..hehe tumhe toh pata hi hoga sirf isiliye main bhi action scene de rahi thi aur kaanch k tukde ghus gaye mere poiaron me...aur mujhe SHOLEY ki BASANTI ki tarah dance bhi karna pada tha. magar yeh aur baat hai ki mujhe bachane na toh JAY aaya aur na hi VEERU...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆arre jai veeru to outdated ho gaye, tumko bachane to raj ayega! dont worry! aur i think i wud prefer k tum apna action apni fics me nikalo instead of ur feet and kaanch ki cheeze!!!

khair mujhe sab se jyada achha laga naina ka satir dimag...!!! badmash ladki hai jis tarah se us ne tunnel me raj aur karan ko apne spl idea se chaunkaya...mujhe baht achha laga. is ka matlab naina ki bettery hamesha high charge par rahti hai...chahe koi bhi prob kyoun na ho...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛roz horlicks nd bournvita mix karke peeti hai!

toh ma'am ko bullet lagi hai...phir bhi unhone badi hi tezi se drive karte hue DEVRAJ ko bacha hi liya...!!!hehe agar devraj ko kuch ho jata to sab milke mujhe jaan se maar dete na...i was scared. pahli baar raj kisi k liye worried hua...!!! mujhe sab se jyada ek aur scene achha laga jab raj ne naina ko turn k dekha...jab voh so rahi thi injured hone k wajah se. kya hai na is scene par raj baht handsome lagta hai...!!! haaiiii...i love him like dat! jab raj ka koi scene ata tha na lrl me wen he used 2 turn back and look at d camera, i used 2 b like...i m lost....aur main us tym sab kuch imagine kar rahi thi...k kaise naina behosh hui, kaise raj ne use bahon me uthaya hoga...n etc...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

vaise traitor koun hai...???abhi pata chalega... mujhe bhi us driver pe shaq hai, par plz naina ko -ve role me mat rakhana.meri aisi mazal! no mam not at all! pata hai tumhare is fic k tittle se mujhe kabhi kabhi naina par bhi shaq hota hai...!!!yaar sabko hota hai kya karu... vaise bhi tumne is ud me likha hai ki naina kuch adjust kar rahi thi apni ankhon me...!!! may b raj k liye nafrat...ya phir aur kuch...???arre koi nafrat kaise adjust kar sakta hai? neways wait nd watch... ab mujhe sach me darr lag raha hai...!!!arre daro mat mai hoon na! pata nahin tere dimag kya gul khilane wala hai...hamare sath...matlab tere readers k sath...!!!lol i think yaha sabke dil me raj hai, so kisi ko heart attack nahi ayega...

is ud me mujhe yeh line sab se jyada achhi lagi "i dont want to lose you" aur us k baad raj k ajeeb feelings...jo voh naina k liye mehsus kar raha tha...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉lol, i had 2 use loads of brains fr dat scene....u c im a dumbo at romance..

aur haan depressed honewali koi baat nahin hai. tum ne apne viewers dekhe???toh beta SUR intezaar ka faal mitha hota hai...aur jarur tumhe bhi dher sari mithayiyaan bhi milengi...!!! chalo ab mushkurate hue ud kar do...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃tumahar comment padhne k baad im always smiling ear 2 ear dear!

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n maam...maine jo kaha tha voh hua ki nahin...!!! tum likhti jaayo aage comments itne aayenge ki tum pareshan ho jayogi...!!! kahte hain na sachhe dil ki dua jarur lagti hai...aur bishwash hamesha jitta hai...!!! ab natiza tumhare samne hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛arre ye to kamal hi ho gaya!! i wasnt expecting dis at all! lagat hai tumhari dua kubook ho hi gai finally! nd ye kaafi bhari bhadkam dialogue tha...lol

thnx a bunch fr commenting priya...u always make my day!

love

sur😊

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

an amazing fic you've got here,😊 i've just come across it and i'm warning you from now, i might be slightly irregular with comments, because i'm really busy, but i will read your your updates and press the like button 😃 thanx a lot yasmin....

Now that said and done, i just love the characters of raj and naina,😳 so completly different to how they are normally portrayed, yet slightly the same with all the bravery and their strength 😃, specially naina's character has bowled me over, love her attitude ..😆 but i'm with karan on this, theres somthing fishy about her .. what is she upto ?? 😕ofcourse your not going to tell us that now, but i will wait to find out ..😊hehe read carefully nd i wont be able 2 surprise u!..thnx fr liking d characters

oh yes before i forget to say i love what she did to those morons lmao .🤣. that taught them a lesson.its imp 2 teach dese people a lesson...

and yes who's that girl raj was thinking about 😕 in the second update i think, hope it's not any girlfriends🤢.

no dont worry no gfs...just wait nd find out!

Anyways once again, a brilliant fic ..👍🏼👏thnx a lot again

do continue soon 😊i wil try asap....

take care🤗

yasmin

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Part 1 is really interesting.
U described about Devraj nicely, good that he is doing the same job which is of Police. Sam really hates Devraj i think but y i don't know the exact reason. Devraj's character is really powerful.
Who shot the bullet in the party? Kahin Devraj to target nahi hai na?

Originally posted by: nihatri

jaldi update karo yaar.its fantastic

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent superb part sur 👏 ''.ab main jitni bhi taarif karu wo kam hain Thanx a bunch yogitha! ye sab tumhare pms ka kamaal hai!

I simply loved the action scenes''' u described really well ''.naina is too good kitna tez chalthi haina naina ki dimag'''wo koi bhi situation ho she don't panic ''..kitni cooly handle karti hain''..too good...thanks a lot dear again

Wo log jin hone raj pe hamla kiya wo log police nahi hain'''.to wo log kis ke aadmi hain'''.raj is so sharp''..see itni tense situation mein bhi usne pehchan liya ki wo log police nahi hain balki local hit man hain bhai ab wo sharp hai isiliye waha par hai na...

Accha hain ki raj is safe n once again naina saved him'''.par darr bhi lag raha hain''..naina pe uski trust aur bhi bad tha ja ra hain''.kahi aage jaake naina usko dhoka na de''..tum to raj ke feelings ke bare mein bata rahe ho ''..par naina ke bare mein kuch bata hi nahi rahe ho'''.ki wo kya feel karthi hain''.. exactly wo kya sochthi hain'. don't mean that aisa likhna chahiye she also developed soft corner for raj'''.aisa hota to its good but I know its not possible now''.. I hope u understand what I am saying''hamesha kaam ke bare mein hi wo baat karthi hain''' aur is sab ki wajah se meri shak aur bhi batdha jara ha hain'''..kahi ye attack naina ki plan to nahi''.aisa hi ki wo jaanthi hain ki karan uske bare mein shak kar raha hain isi liye ye sab kiya'''see ab karan bhi ye sochne ke liye majboor hogaya ki naina sahi in saan hain''..well ye baat aur thi wo poore tarah sure nahi ''..bilkul meri tarah''..pehle to karan naina ke liye uska shahk ke bare mein hundred percent sure tha ab itna sure nahi hain.hehe tumhe tension lene ki zarurat nahi hai bilkul bhi....naina k point of view se mai agey likhungi...actually i like describing a story from one person's point of view...my style u can call it...i fully understand ur views..and jaha tak naina k kaam ki baat hai, wo kafi professional hai na dats why...aur attack ki mystery nxt ud me clear ho jayegi pakka! ab ye karan k itne fans ban gaye hai k mai kya batau!

Wo tunnel wale scene is too good''..glad u liked it..ye idea mujhe vele baithe hue aya tha...hehe

Naina goli lagne ka baad bhi wo ghadi chalayee aur raj ko safely ghar bhi pahooncha aur uske baad hi wo behosh hogayi'''.raj usko apni bahon mein legkar gaya andar ..........haiiiiiiiii 😍.......aur naina ke liye uski concern'''too good jab naina hosh mein aayee then he talked to her n then only he felt releived......... i think he is slowly falling for her.hehe raj is losing it, isnt he?

Waise ye naina kya adjust kar rahi hain apni ankhon mein'''..is it any sort of clue.samajhdar ko ishara kafi!

Rocking update dear

thanku again dear

Ab next time se na tum thoda lambha update diya kar ''..main kitni bhi padthi huna mujhe chote hi lagthe hain aur ek baat ''..ye kya sirf month mein eki ud har weekly ek baar karna''ab ye tum par depend kartha hain ki isko tum request samjo ya dhamki 😆arre mai darr gai...im trembling..hehe..yaar mai jitna bhi likhu, mujhe khud bhi chota hi lagta hai...par tabtak itna late ho chuka hota hai na k i feel a short ud is better dan no ud!

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina joined the gang of Devraj in a position where everyone dreamed of working!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

She was allotted the room directly opposite to Devraj!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The magnificent beauty of his mansion failed to draw a reaction from Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is more interested in locating secret cameras and this impressed Devraj!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone is shocked to see a woman included on their ranks on equal basis!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Karan is right that there is something fishy about Naina!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

I loved Naina's style of working and the plan she came up with!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Karan was Devraj's only friend in the whole world who knew every chapter of his life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

They had grown up together and seen the ups and downs of life together!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan is right ke Devraj Naina par thoda jaldi hi bharosa kar raha hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔Ab yeh toh hona hi tha!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan being a true friend is concerned about Dev aur usse lag raha hai that Dev is being carried away by his emotions!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Devraj decided to test her and control himself in the next few days!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Naina's style of working!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Woh toh apne har kaam mein perfect hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I am sure she will do the job given by Devraj to her perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Devraj wished her and Naina left while he watched her with a smile!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shahrukh in Don said, "Mujhe do tarah ki ladkiyan pasand nahi ek woh jo mere paas aane mein bahut der lagaye aur dusri woh jo bahut jaldi aa jaye" aur Naina kuch jaldi hi Devraj ke paas aa rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj told Harry to follow Naina and help her if she needs it!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The way Naina shook off Harry she is surely a professional!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Maybe she is a cop like Salman in the film Wanted!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Karan asked Devraj the right question ke Naina par shaque kar rahe ho ya uski chinta!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne kitne confidently kaha ke nakamyad hona uski kismat mein nahi hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Usne kaha agli baar kisi ko uske piche na bheje as she hates distractions!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan ne puccha ke usse itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai agar koi uspar nazar rakh raha hai woh bhi yeh jante huye ke woh admi unka hi hai??😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ne kaha woh kaam apne hisab se karti hai result jo woh chahe aur tareeka jo Naina chahe!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is definately more than she is pretending to be!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

I hope Karan jaldi Naina ke baare mein pata lagaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Akhir kaun hai yeh Naina Roy??😕 😕 😕 😕

Ab Steve and Alex Naina ke peeche pade hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I am sure Naina will teach then a good lesson!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼