I Hate You For Loving Me RN FF ch15pg64 - Page 7

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent superb part sur 👏 …….ab main jitni bhi taarif karu wo kam hain

I simply loved the action scenes……… u described really well …….naina is too good kitna tez chalthi haina naina ki dimag………wo koi bhi situation ho she don't panic ……..kitni cooly handle karti hain……..too good

Wo log jin hone raj pe hamla kiya wo log police nahi hain……….to wo log kis ke aadmi hain……….raj is so sharp……..see itni tense situation mein bhi usne pehchan liya ki wo log police nahi hain balki local hit man hain

Accha hain ki raj is safe n once again naina saved him……….par darr bhi lag raha hain……..naina pe uski trust aur bhi bad tha ja ra hain…….kahi aage jaake naina usko dhoka na de……..tum to raj ke feelings ke bare mein bata rahe ho ……..par naina ke bare mein kuch bata hi nahi rahe ho……….ki wo kya feel karthi hain…….. exactly wo kya sochthi hain…. don't mean that aisa likhna chahiye she also developed soft corner for raj……….aisa hota to its good but I know its not possible now…….. I hope u understand what I am saying……hamesha kaam ke bare mein hi wo baat karthi hain……… aur is sab ki wajah se meri shak aur bhi batdha jara ha hain………..kahi ye attack naina ki plan to nahi…….aisa hi ki wo jaanthi hain ki karan uske bare mein shak kar raha hain isi liye ye sab kiya………see ab karan bhi ye sochne ke liye majboor hogaya ki naina sahi in saan hain……..well ye baat aur thi wo poore tarah sure nahi ……..bilkul meri tarah……..pehle to karan naina ke liye uska shahk ke bare mein hundred percent sure tha ab itna sure nahi hain

Wo tunnel wale scene is too good……..

Naina goli lagne ka baad bhi wo ghadi chalayee aur raj ko safely ghar bhi pahooncha aur uske baad hi wo behosh hogayi……….raj usko apni bahon mein legkar gaya andar ..........haiiiiiiiii 😍.......aur naina ke liye uski concern………too good jab naina hosh mein aayee then he talked to her n then only he felt releived......... i think he is slowly falling for her

Waise ye naina kya adjust kar rahi hain apni ankhon mein………..is it any sort of clue

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The action sequence was described very well!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kya dhamakedar entry maari Naina ne!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is looking very beautiful and stunning!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved the way Naina answered back Devraj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina reminded Devraj of his own persona and her elegance and charm were quite impressive and she was boldly confident!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina has started working for Samuel!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Samuel is scared that Devraj would think he had sent them to kill him but Devraj said he knows that he is not that foolish!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj ne kaha ke uski jaan bachakar Naina ne uspe ehsaan kiya hai aur Devraj par kisi ka ehsaan khali nahi jaata!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj asked her to ask anything from him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Naina se woh nahi marti toh shayad palatkar uspe goli chalata and so usne koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj is impressed by Naina and wants her to work for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I loved his dialogue kaam jo main chahu, keemat jo aap chahe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina said she in under contract for two months and will work for him after it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was after a very long time and maybe the first time that a female had managed to capture and hold his attention!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj is thinking that Naina will be a big help to him in his next venture!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved the part where Devraj asked Naina for a dance and they waltzed to the soft music!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina thinks parties are a waste of time and doesn't like them!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

She is Samuel's bodyguard tonight!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Impressive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I hope she starts working for Devraj soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj already Naina ki chanbin karwa raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanx a bunch

The action sequence was described very well!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏glad u liked it

Kya dhamakedar entry maari Naina ne!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is looking very beautiful and stunning!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏ya she is

I loved the way Naina answered back Devraj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina reminded Devraj of his own persona and her elegance and charm were quite impressive and she was boldly confident!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳she has her own charisma,doesnt she?

Naina has started working for Samuel!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Samuel is scared that Devraj would think he had sent them to kill him but Devraj said he knows that he is not that foolish!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊ya now who dares 2 mess wid him?

Devraj ne kaha ke uski jaan bachakar Naina ne uspe ehsaan kiya hai aur Devraj par kisi ka ehsaan khali nahi jaata!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊attitude problem u see

Devraj asked her to ask anything from him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Naina se woh nahi marti toh shayad palatkar uspe goli chalata and so usne koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj is impressed by Naina and wants her to work for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hmmm..he likes such people

I loved his dialogue kaam jo main chahu, keemat jo aap chahe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏filmi dialogue hai na....

Naina said she in under contract for two months and will work for him after it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was after a very long time and maybe the first time that a female had managed to capture and hold his attention!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊ab kuch to baat honi chahiye na jo use sabse alag kare

Devraj is thinking that Naina will be a big help to him in his next venture!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved the part where Devraj asked Naina for a dance and they waltzed to the soft music!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina thinks parties are a waste of time and doesn't like them!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔well dey are...even i dont like parties much

She is Samuel's bodyguard tonight!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Impressive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I hope she starts working for Devraj soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊bilkul, vrna story kese agey badhegi?

Devraj already Naina ki chanbin karwa raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼adat se majbur hai na bechara

Originally posted by: manatated

Hieeee Sur!!😃Hey Mana!

Brilliant update!! must tell u......thanx a lot dear

Oh god ! U r too good at writing Action sequences and I loooveeee Action!! i love action as wel, but i dont know k im able to pull it off or not, so m glad k u liked it!

And i appreciate you more letting you know the fact I'm very bad at writing those😆 And so i really admire the way you've written!! I could visualise it all!!👏thanx again...nd dont say u cant write, ive read a part of ur fic, its gr8!

And though i don't trust Naina at all....I'm glad that she saved Devraj this time too. And her idea in the tunnel was brilliant! yaar ye sabko naina pe kyu shaq hota hai? ladki kuch bhi kar le...ab mujhe uspe daya ane lagi hai...

Don't know why but i feel like Devraj is the guy who shot that gal in the beginning of ur fic and Naina has something to do wid that gal..... hmmm uske liye u hav 2 wait

But must tell u, this fic is really getting more and more mysterious and i honestly feel u can handover this script to some of our film directors....atleast their standard of suspense thriller's will get better !😆arre aisa kuch nhi hai😳

And dear....don't worry about response.... Very few actually comment but there are lots of readers.....and it's worth writing atleast for those few people who love your fic (I mean ME!!😃 for sure ....) isn't it? thanx so much dear..im nt depressed ryte nw...ap sab k comments jo a gaye!!!

So don't get depressed and continue the fic as it is awesome! thanx again dear

And yes......UPDATE SOON😉hehe i wil try, par is baar to pata nhi knose janam me kar paungi!!!

Originally posted by: Xx-Reena-xXX

ooow great story plz continue

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice one.....thanku so much mam I'm glad Devraj is saved.....tumne kya socha mai usey kuch hone deti??? no way!!!but as u must knw....I still dont trust Naina....yaar maaf karo bachi ko... not until she is on Devraj's side....abhi thodi na uske dushman ke sath hai! and so I simply dont care wat happens to her....sumi dear agar usey kuch hua na, to devraj ki lovestory start hone se pehle end ho jayegi, nd rn fans mujhe jaan se maar denge😆but I really wish its just not the way it seems to be....well, watever it is....I hav full faith in my Surili Sur...hehe.thanx dear...mujhe bada acha lgta hai wen u say dat..nd i cant sing 2 save my life! And dont get depressed dear...ur fic is awesum....may be readers ko tym nahi mil raha hai comment karne k liye....ab sab meri tarah thodi hote hai....jo subah shyam net pe rehte hai....haha.hey im happy now...tumhara comment jo a gaya!

Anyways, this fic is dam mysterious....n I knw this mystery is not gonna end so soon....pls jaldi se UD karna thik hai...waise I guess the next UD will be after 19th only....right?yeah..only after 19th... well, thats better in a way as u knw even I'm not free...hehe.chalo fir thik hai....hehe

with luv,
Sumi.

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Though Devraj knows beauty always conceals danger, he could not stop himself from getting attracted to Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He could sense that she had the ability to control people and could possibly control him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

The description of Devraj's palace was beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved the description of Devraj's room and its almost a palace in itself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

When he closed his eyes Naina's face came in front of his eyes!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

What did Naina remind him of that he was not willing to remember??😔 😔 😔 😔

Who was that girl whose face he saw??😕 😕 😕 😕

Was that connected to the girl who was shot??😔 😔 😔 😔

Or was that girl Naina herself who maybe he knew when he was young??😛 😛 😛 😛

Devraj ko nightmares kyun aate thhe??😔 😔 😔 😔Aisa kya hai uske past mein??😕 😕 😕 😕

He got drunk to get rid of that image!!!!!!

Devraj received information about Naina and started reading it excitedly!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He was impressed and satisfied that she was the perfect dedicated worker who would take him to new heights!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina's character reminds me a little of Sunehri of Dhoom 2!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Maybe she is sent by the New York Police or even Sam to help them catch Devraj!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Karan was the only person who Devraj had brought along from India and his only friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj is happy to see Naina and is gaze kept constantly flitting to Naina!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He thought she looked gorgeous but when she looked at him he averted his gaze!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Devraj wanted Naina and he asked Samuel for her and was willing to pay any price!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Samuel himself was very fond of Naina and would have refused anyone but Devraj didn't fall into the anyone category!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Samuel agreed to give Naina to Devraj and said in one meeting he had guessed her worth!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Devraj ne Naina ko haasil kar liya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏