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Posted: 15 years ago
@dolly
actually dolly u may find it a bit surprising but i dont read novels at all...so couldn't guess anything likie that...but pls answer my query over your incomplete fanfiction...i am actually dieing to read its next part!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyashika

@dolly

actually dolly u may find it a bit surprising but i dont read novels at all...so couldn't guess anything likie that...but pls answer my query over your incomplete fanfiction...i am actually dieing to read its next part!!!

oh that ya umm mallika actually i have no idea how i am carrying with this ff ,,, n that one was long back,,, infact i actually have no link 4 the topic neither do i remembere what i have written in it,,,,, pls give me some time so that i can relocate it ......if u can help me in any way with it then u r most welcome dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh ofcourse dolly i will surely help u and actually i am asking for just one next part with a VERY ROMANTIC SCENE ....the name of the ff was izharre ishq...i know dear that u wrote it way back but pls if u can take out some time and write just one part on sajan in this ff i will be so happy!!! here goes the link
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyashika

oh ofcourse dolly i will surely help u and actually i am asking for just one next part with a VERY ROMANTIC SCENE ....the name of the ff was izharre ishq...i know dear that u wrote it way back but pls if u can take out some time and write just one part on sajan in this ff i will be so happy!!! here goes the link

thanku so much mallika 4 the help ok i promise that i'll write its next part b4 updating 4 this ff next
now i am posting a part ,,, its basically a flash back with mayur,,, but something strange will be unvieled in next update,,, beware guys good mayur scenes r ahead
thanks mallika again 4 making me feel so special
lov
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

update

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FLASHBACK

Mayank looked around himself in awe ,,the red cum off-white drapes, the orchids and roses that covered every nook n cranny of the mansion dazzled him completely or may be he felt dazzled because of the shimmering lights that were reflected upon the centre of the living hall by that grand chandelliar….

It no longer looked like their hostel mansion . it looked like a palace ,,,,

really samrat and dia had been through with the arrangements for the day…

The arrangements for his engagement ceremony ….

He circled around the spot once more ,to make sure he wasn't day dreaming ….

"sapna nahin hai yeh dude … aaj finally tum humari morena express k official driver declare kiye ja rahe ho"

Mayank stopped playing merry go round n turned around to look at his best buddy ,samrat…

Both smiled at each other n then something else caught samrat's attention which made him smile….. wickedly!!!

"Or yeh aayi humari morenna express apne naye driver ko ghayal karne…"

Mayank turned around yet again,,he had started filling dizzy from all this circling around on the spot exercises….but this time he was sure he'd die …

Not because of a spinning head but because of a heart attack….

He was left speechless n stunned ,,,nupur was standing there in front of him looking like an angel,

No,, hell ..angel was no comparison to her,,,,

nupur blushed at the intense scrutiny by her fiance

"mayank its embarrsing atleast apna muh to band rakho dude"

Saying so samrat slapped him hard under his chin to make mayank close his mouth,,,

A silent trail of laughter travelled through the guests… samrat guffawed but shutup the next second ,seeing gunjan's stern glare….

He looked down n gunjan looked at her di,, who was blushing so much,, she noticed that nupur's face was changing colouts from light pink to maroon to a beautiful red ….

She giggled and said out aloud…

"ladies n gentlemen ,,,I invite u to see a most amazing sight ,, infact to the eighth wonder,,, miss nupur bhushan is blushing"

This time it was mayank's turn to slap shut samrat's opened mouth…

Nupur's face colour changed to dark red as she tried to give murderous glares to her sister,,, but she was too happy to succeed even an inch…..

Banji n uday pushed mayank forward who lost his grip n collided with nupur , who in turn lost her balance n started to fall back….

But mayank held on to her with his one hand and caught her, balanced her midway of the fall,,, how could he let his princess get hurt????

A collective sigh ran through the crowd ,, everyone present there adored the couple silently….

"hai mera mayu ,kab socha tha maine k mera phadaku bacha kabhi mujhe is posture mein bhi dikhega"

This inenudo by maaynak's mother made the couple to straighten up immediately….

Finally after a lot of jokes n teasing the priest cut in n said the clichd diologue

"muhorat ka samay bita jar aha hai , jaldi se sgayi ki rasam shuru karien"

Rings were brought out.. one by the girl's sister n other by the boy's best friend….

"dude ,, dhyaan se , agar ek baar ring pehna di to sari zindagi ise sehna padega…. by god"

"benji tujhe meri behen ki koi tension nahin hai kya??soch mayank aur meri behen !!!"

"uday beta hummein nupur ki nahin teri tension hai ,, afterall mayank tera jija hai"

At this reply from shilpa aunty everyone laughed ,,,even mayank..

"mohtarma shubh ghadi biti jarahi hai,, kripya jaldi karien!!!"

Benji beckoned samrat close to him n said

"yaar yeh pujari ko kaunsi train pakadni hai,, tu bol mein ise chada ke aaun???"

"lets give him one more chance .. agar yeh phir bola to……"

"to……"

Both the boys exchanged wicked smiles eyeing the pujari ,, who instantly felt uncomfortable… and decided to keep his mouth shut 4 the rest of the ceremony…

Maynak n nupur exchanged the rings while everyone else clapped n cheered and in case of benji n uday howled and made strange noices…

Mayank's hands were shaking and so were nupur's ..finally the day had arrived ,finally they belonged to each other for life….

After the ring ceremony both maynk n nupur proceeded to take blessings of their elders …. Nupur's dad didn't allow them to touch his feet instead he hugged his daughter n son-in-law tightly … this gesture was reapeted by mayank's mom too, with the only difference being her wet eyes..

"aaj tere papa hote to khushi se phule na samate "

mayank smiled n hugged his mom back,,,,

the next step in the party was the dancing ,,, both mayank n nupur were pushed forward just to the centre of the dance floor right under the magnificent chandelier…

the music played ,,it was a soft n sweet violen number,,, slowly mayank put his arm around nupur's waistwhich made her shuddere,their hands tweened with each other n they started swaying……

along the tunes ,with the beat both mayank n nupur danced gracefully along the floor..

people clapped ,,though the sound of the applause wasn't reaching the couple yet ,,, they were too much lost in each other to notice each other …

a lone tear clinged with nupur's eyelashes ,, mayank placed his finger beneth ith and waited for the tear to arrive ,,which it did after an few second….

Holding the finger in front of nupur mayank said

"I feel blessed"

Unable to control herself nupur moved forward to hugged mayank .

They stood their for few minutes until…..

"ahem ahem "

"haan nupur ahem ahem"

Nupur let go of mayank with a groan ,,she really wanted to strangle gunjan n samrat 4 this ….

"di thoda to sharam karo ..pls"

"gunjan mein na tujhe.."

"ahem ahem ,,, han nupur tu gunjan ko?????"

Nupur kept quiet ,, she knew if she spoke even a word more ,,she'll have to run back to her room blushing …

"mayank sir agar aapki ijazat ho to kya ab miss nupur bhushan k hone vale dewar unke saath dance kar sakte hain pls….thank u"

N without even waiting for mayank's reply samrat skipped nupur's hands into his n whirled her away from him ….they circled around the dance floor while mayank stood there in the centre throwing murderous glares at his best friend"

Gunjan laughed n approached his to be jiju…

"May i??"

Mayank smiled n took gunjan's hand n started swirling around…

"u look happy mayank ,, I have never seen u like this b4 never "

Mayank blushed n avoided gunjan's eyes

"oh u r blushing u r actually blushing !!!wait I have to make samrat see thi SAM-----"pls gunjan …"

Stopping gunjan with placing one of his hand over her mouth ,mayank looked around tensely ,, nervous at the possibility that samart might have heard her voice …

By this time a lot more couples had started dancing but the centre of the stage was empty with just a nupur standing there,, she was alone…

Mayank scanned the rest of the room in search of samrat n found him standing beside his mother… samrat was having his ears pulled by her…

"bravo mom!!! I lov u "

He heard a tinkling sound n turned his head in its direction ,, he saw nupur standing their alone , she was adjusting her dupatta ,, the tinkiling sound came again…

Only this time it felt a lot harder n harsher …

Mayank looked up just in time to see the chandelier hanging down in inclined position with just one screw holding it back in its position , he looked horrified at nupur who was standing just below the chandelier, still trying to adjust her dupatta…..

By this time many of the people had noticed a strange sound but hardly did anyone had any idea as to where the sound had come from ……

The next the guests saw mayank running wildly to the centre of stage …. They were puzzled by the terror that had shown distinctly on his face….

They got their puzzle solved when they heard a crash n saw the magnificent chandelier laying broken on the floor,,,,

Samrat n gunjan ran forward… both of them had no idea to where mayank n nupur were…their hearts thudded violently against their chests ….

Then samrat spotted nupur who had fallen down a few meters away from the broken chandelier …..

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sory guys 4 late n short update ,, but i'll update soon n the next part has story moving on real n this time it'll be just mayur...
hope u people don't get bored by it....
do reply soon guys
critisize enen if u want
love
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update dolly šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘...it was lovely and more than mayur it was a full gang part!!! just loved everyone...mayur...sajan..benji...uday and mom!!! and cant beleive gunjan has become so naughty being with samrat...but just love her like that!!! so just write the next part as soon as possible.i will be surely waiting for your next update and ya thnx so much dear for agreeing to update your ff izhaare ishq...i will be looking forward to your pm asking me to read the updates of both your ffs.
till then have a nice day and keep smiling.
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr888 prt
thanxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear it was nice update.
i loved it
engangement ceremony was too good
n samrat teasing nupur n mayank was really too cute
it was a grat update
bt plz post ur next soon ok
cant wait to read further...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great ff totally diff concept loved every bit of it plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 Part! Please continue soon! And PM me!

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