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Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Simi,
I just caught up with this FF and it's really great.
The parts was really awesome, I loved them.
Their bonding is really amazing, I am completely loving it.
Poor ridzi met with accident, I was glad to see all concerned for her and taking care of her.
I hope Armaan-Ridhima will fall in love soon, along the other friends.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.


Luv u<333
Kashish

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

hey simi..

very well written part. armaan shouted on riddhima and then the way everyone took care of her that was sweet . and theis surprise birthday party ..enjoyed reading the whole update..
looking forward to their first day at the college...

continue soon and thanks for the pm..

loads of love...

Caramel...

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

4th part was fantastic
loved every bit
continue soon
love
debadrita

PART 4 ON PAGE 12

RECAP: RIDDHIMAA MET WITH AN ACCIDENT

AND SHE HAD A FRACTURE IN HER LEG

EVERYBODY GAVE RIDDHIMA AND ADITYA A SURPRISE BIRTHDAY PARTY

ALL THE BOYS GONE TO COLLEGE

FIRST DAY IN COLLEGE

IT WAS A BUSINESS INSTITUTE FOR ADVANCE STUDIES AND BUSINESS MANAGEMENT

AS THEY ALL WERE MORE INTERESTING IN DOING BUSINESS LIKE THERE PARENTS DID SO THEY JOINED THIS COLEGE.

ALL THE GIRLS WERE JUST WATCHING THE THREE OF THEM FROM THE TIME THEY ENTERED THE COLLEGE.

they went to the principle cabin

principle room

principle.: well boys [to the three of them] i know that your parents r well known personality of this town but still you r completely new person to this college and you have to creat your own identity here with your ability

all : yes sir.

principle: all the best for your new life

all: thank you sir

principle: you can go now

[they left the principle room and went out a group of 3 students was standing there in the corridor they went near them]

a boy from the group: hi new addmission ?

dev: ya hi i m dev

boy: hi i m sameer u can call me sam and [towards the girl and boy standing with him ] this is ria and ranbir

and they all had there intro

[and walked to have a look of the college everyone noticing that all the girls were staring at them.]

ria: hey not bad yahaa saare girls sirf aapko hi dekh rahe hai.

armaan: ya except for you ,,kyon did'nt you liked me [in his usuall flirting tone]

[rai smiled and before she can answered sameer replied]

sameer: vo..uska to koi chance nahi hai..kyonki ria ko to allready koi aur bahut pasand aa gaya hai. kyon

dev: [a bit confused] what do you mean?

rajeev: [the other boy with ria and sameer] actually ria is my girlfriend

adi: oh ok

dev: hey thats great ..ha well sameer tumhare girlfriend kaha hai

sameer: ab hamaare rajeev jaise kismat kaha tum batao.tum teeno ki girlfriend kaha hai i mean i m sure tum jaise cool looking boys ki to girlfriends hoge hi

armaan: hai na per permanent nahi

sam: oh okk

[as they were chatting a voice from behind came.]

voice: hey guys [an arrogant and a bit rude voice]

[they all turned back there was a boy sitting on a bike., surronded by a few gang of people around him]

sameer: [very normally]..hey hi rocky..

rajeev: [to armaan dev and adi] thats Rocky the most arrogant and rude kind of boys of this college creating problems for others fighting etc r type of his hobbies ....take my advise and just stay away from him

armaan: [in his usuall attitude armaan style] thanks for the information, you don't worry we can handle this.

rocky: [coming close]...so new addmision [to dev . adi and armaan and staring them from up to down very strangely.]

adi: ya hi i m aditya.

[adi bought his hand out for a hand shake very friendly but rocky was not in a friendly mood he was really jeolous to see all the girls getting crazy for them.]

rocky: [ with full arrogance] soo new addmission well there is a rule of this college for all new addmission

armaan: [armaan with same attitude] rule oh really and whats that ?

rocky: well you will have to doo whatever wee will ask you to doo

dev: oh really what do you mean [with attitude]

rocky: well now you all also need to doo somethink for us what say guys.[to his gang]

everyone of his gang screamed.

rocky: well well soo what shall we doo with them

a boy from his group: well rocky i think they need to give an introduction of there talent how about a competition

rocky: why not soo what will you guys show us

armaan: anythink dude lets a competition but for what

rocky: ok lets have a race

adi: race.!!!!

rocky: kyon darr gaye

armaan: no ways lets go for it [with full confidence]

[armaan got a bike and got ready for a bike race with rocky]

THE RACE BEGAN,,ROCKY WAS A DAMM GOOOD RIDER BUT NOT BETTER THAN ARMAAN STILL IT WAS A TOUGHT COMPETITION

BUT FINALLY ARMAAN WON IT

everybody cheering now for armaan and everybody was really impressed by him rocky was jeolous but still he shaked hand with armaan and left

and like this armaan aditya and dev all became really popular in college on there first day only

NEXT DAY

AS TODAY SANJANA AND ISHIKA WERE ENTERING THE COLLEGE AND WITH THEM ARMAAN AND DEV CAME .ADITYA WAS NOT THERE HE WAS WITH RIDDHIMA

AND SO THE GIRLS WERE JUST SAVE NO RAGGING AT ALL AS THEY WERE WITH ARMAAN AND DEV

AND LIKE THIS.

SOON THEY 5 BECAME REALLY POPULAR IN COLLEGE AND WITH THERE FRIENDLY NATURE HAD MANY FRIENDS THERE. ONLY RIDDHIMA WAS NOT A PART OF THERE COLLEGE LIFE TILL NOW THEY ALL ATTEND THERE CLASSES IN THE COLLEGE AND AS COLLEGE HOURS GET OVER THEY JUST RUSH BACK TO THERE HOUSE TO BE WITH RIDDHIMA

ALLMOST A MONTH HAD PASSED AND NOW THEY ALL WERE NOT AT ALL NEW TO THE COLLEGE

RIDDHIMA FRACTURE WAS REMOVED AND NOW SHE WAS PERFECTLY FIT AND FINE.

RIDDHIMA SITTING IN HER ROOM.

IN HER THOUGHTS

ridd: i think now i am fine and i can even goo to the college now

entered sanjana.

saanjh: hey riddzs

ridd: hi saanjh you did'nt went to the college ?

saanjh: no actually

[before she can explain the reason.]

ridd: ok first you get ready we both will go to the college together today

saanjh: [surprised] today but you were supppose to join the college from tommorow with everyone right

ridd: yaa but now i m getting bored i want to go to the college now lets goo na ....

saanjh: but i can't come today actually dad had called me home for some work i m going there today

ridd: okkkk [sadly] no problem you complete your work we will go to the college from tommorow

jh: ok bye

[sanjana left .and then riddhima talked to herself.]

ridd: koi baat nahi main akele hi chale jaate hu .it will be fun

[RIDDHIMA GOT READY AND LEFT FOR THE COLLEGE]

SHE WAS LOOKING REALLLY BEUTFUL SHE WAS WEARING A TIGHT FIT BLUE JEANS AND A WHITE TOP LOOKING REALLY PREETY

AS SHE ENTERED THE COLLEGE GATE SHE WAS JUST LOOKING AT THE COLLEGE AND LOST IN WATCHING THE BUILDING SURRONDINGS

AND ALSO SEARCHING FOR HER FRIENDS

ONLY THEN AGAIN THE SAME GROUP ROCKY'S LOOKED AT HER

BOY IN ROCKY GROUP: hey rocky look there i think its a new addmission

[rocky watched her]

rocky: wow beutiful [he mummered slowly] i think we need to wellcome her properly lets go guys

[soon everybody got near riddhima and the group surronded her]

riddhima was a really confident girl and so she was not at all scared she stand there with full attitude and confidence

rocky: new addmission? hi i m rocky [getting his hand for hand shake]

[but riddhima did'nt shaked hand as she was least interested.]

ridd: just excuseme i need to go

[as she was about to leave rocky stopped her with his arm blocking on her passage]

rocky: whats soo hurry please allow us to first wellcome you properly miss

ridd: [with attitude] riddhima

rocky: oh really nice ..name soo ms riddhima what can you doo for us

ridd: just excuseme , i have to go .[with attitude]]

rocky: attitude not bad but let mee inform you for an entry in this college you have to obey us properly

ridd: oh really is that so fine soo what i have to do

rocky: i really like your attitude ok soo you don't have to doo much just

[after thinking for a long]

rocky: yaa first you have to goo to a person whom i will point too and then you have to talk to that person atleast for five minutes and yaa this is a dare soo r u ready for it

riddd: ok [very normally as she has confidence on her that she can manage the situation] fine i m ready

rocky: cool so you have to talk to that boy there [pointing towards the gate.].atleast 5 minute and mind it i m sure that arrogant boy will not even reply to your single hello its gonna be a tough job

[riddhima turned back and to her surprise it was ARMAAN she had to talk to armaan for 5 minutes she laughed to herself and then turned back towards rocky ]

ridd: [with same expression as she dont wanna disclose that the guy was her best friend] ok done, now just wait and watch.

[riddhima moved towards armaan ]

[ meanwhile dev came there he was with sameer]

dev: whats happenning why is here soo much of croud here

sameer: i don't know lets go and find out

[dev and sameer came in between rocky and his group who were now just waiting to see what will happen]

a boy from the group: rocky .i m sure this girl would not be able to talk to him for even 30 seconds

rocky : i know that girl had soo much of attitude .now she will come to know wee all have seen that girls goo mad to talk to armaan but he don't even see towards them i m sure he won't talk to her for even a second lets wait and watch

[dev by now understood the situation that they are ragging a girl then he looked at the girl surprised and shocked to see riddhima and then thinking about there dare laughed to himself on rocky's stupidity ]

sameer: wjat happened why r u laughing

dev: just wait and watch its gonna be a real fun

BACK TO ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA

RIDDHIMA CAME NEAR ARMAAN

HIS BACK WAS FACING RIDDHIMA

SHE MOVED TOWARDS ARMAAN FACE

NOW EVERYONE CAN SEE RIDDHIMA FACE BUT NOONE CAN SEE ARMAAN FACE OR HIS EXPRESSION

ridd: [very normally] hi

armaan: [surprised and really happy][excitedly] hey riddhima tum yahaa

[armaan about to hug her but she just stoped her]

ridd: armaan just listen to mee first

armaan: [confused] what happenned

[riddhima explained him the situation]

armaan: oh toh ye baat hai ok then lets add some excitement to this

riddhima: [confused] means ?

armaan: just a small drama ......us rocky ke attitude ki to main what say partner ?

ridd: oh like that [understood the planning of armaan]

armaan: ya like that

[meanwhile everybody were countinuosly staring at them]

sameer: [to rocky] rocky 5 minute are allmost about to end i thikn you lost it today

rocky: [in angry look] why the hell is this armaan talking to this girl for soo long i thought he would treat her also as he did with all the girls who run behind him

[armaan and riddhima now comming towards the group]

rocky: why r they both somming over here strange

[they both came there so that now there conversation is audible to everyone there]

AND THE DRAMA BEGAN

armaan: it was really nice meeting you [to riddhima]

rid: same here i think i shall goo now

armaan: [drama begans][said loudly] no you can't leave me like this now

ridd: what what r you saying? [dramatised a confused look]

armaan: yaa i think i have fallen in love with you in this 5 minutes only and i can't live without you now please don't goo

ridd: what r you saying ....listen

[everybody confused shocked except dev ishika had also joined him by now and they both were really enjoying this scene and attemting very hard to controll there laugh rest everybody were speechless they all were trying to digest the situation armaan becamming soo serious for a girl all the other girls there were fumming with anger ]

entered dev to the drama

dev: armaan mere bhai ye tujhe kya ho gaya hai [dramatically]

armaan: pyaar pyaar ho gaya hai mujhe Dev you just get aside now i can't live without her [towards riddima holding her hand ] i can't stay away from her

dev: really theek hai [giving riddhima hand in armaan's hand] jaa armaan jaa je le apni zindagi [said in a filmy manner]

[now came ADITYA near the group he was shocked to see all this as he was unaware off the drama]

aditya actually got serious And angry rather more shocked listning armaan saying all this for his SISTER

adi: ye kya ho raha hai armaan [questioning them]

[armaan naughty mind again charged up how about confusing aditya a bit more]

armaan: haan haan adi tune bilkul sahe sunna main riddhima se aur riddhima mujhse

adi: shup up armaan ye kya bakwaas hai

ridd: [adding to armaan drama] nahi adi aise mat kaho main aur armaan bas ab hum dono

adi: riddhima tu paagal ho gaye hai kya what the hell r u saying and armaan first you leave her hand right now

armaan: nahi adi hamme judda mat karo [full filmy style]

[almost full college was shocked and now it was high time a lot of drama was through]

ishika: ok guys thats it bahut ho gaya. ab bas kare.

[on this dev armaan and riddhima starting laughing]

ridd: kya ishq itana achaa drama chal raha tha tu bhi na

adi: drama to tum sab drama kar rahe the ?

ridd: yes adi [moving towards rocky] he needed to have some entertainment in his college hope kaafi achaa entertainment milla hoga aapko.

[rocky again got a defeat he was annoyded ]

sameer: wow not bad kya nehle pe dehla tha really rocking by the way [towards riddhima] hi i m sameer and for you samm [flirting ]

[before riddhima can speek]

adi: and this is riddhma my sister [empasses on word sister]

sameer: oh ok thats really nice.

ridd: hi anyways

THIS was riddhima DHAMAAKEDAAR entry in the college

NOW AS IF LIKE IN SCHOOL THERE FRIENDSHIP THERE GROUP BECAME REALLY POPULAR IN THE COLLEGE

AND THEY WERE PART OF EACH ACTIVTY IN COLLEGE

RIDDHIMA AND ISHIKA PLAYED BASKET BALL

ARMAAN AND ADITYA ALSO

DEV PLAYED FOOTBAAL

AND AS USUALL SANJANA AND ADITYA AGAIN TOPPERES OF THE COLLEGE

TIME PASSED AND PASSED

AND AS IT IS SAID NOTHING IS PERMANENT NOT EVEN HAPPINESS SOMETHINK BAD WAS DESTINNED TO HAPPEN AND IT HAPPENNED

WELL ARMAAN MOM THERE ONLY PARENT LIVING WITH THEM SUJATA .....SHE HAD MET WITH AN ACCIDENT

SHE MET WITH AN ACCIDENT AND LIED ON AN HOSPITAL BED HAD FEW LAST MOMENTS OF HER LIFE EVERYBODY SURRONDED HER

they have informed there parents regarding this and they were on there way to india

riddihma sitting her bed side and crying armaan and aditya on other side while dev ishika and sanjana were standing there close to her bed

sujata: riddhi nahi beta bilkul nahi rona main kahe jaa thode na rahe hu, main to yahe hu beta tum logo ke saath tumhaare dil mein

ridd: you don't speak please it will hurt you

sujata.: nahi beta aaj mujhe kuch kehna hai please first you all promise mee one think tum log mujhe yaad karke kabhi nahi rona promise mee you all will not cry at all ,hammesha khush rahoge saath rahonge

armaan: haan mom we promise wee will never cry mom but [wiping his tears ] please mom matt jaao na [like a kid] [crying keeing his head on her palm ]

sujata: armaan itane badde hokar roo rahe hoo please armaan nahi beta tum akele nahi ho sab hai naa tumhaare saath

armaan: i love you mom [and he left the room crying dev followed him ]

sujata: tum sab ek doosre ka khayal rakhna aur adi sabse jyada riddhima ka

adi: haan chotima., we all will allways take care of each other

sujata: riddhi beta i want a promise from you please will you give me that

ridd: haa choti maa aap jo kahenge main karunge

sujata: dev aur aditya bahut strong hai jaante hu , they can take care of each other but armaan , beta he is very emotional please promise mee you will take care of him you will allways be by his side

ridd: yes choti ma i promise

[and then she died but keeping her words in mind nobody cried on remembering her it was true she was armaan mom but she was a mother to all of them as she was the only parents living with them and allways taking care of them she was there mother and teacher too she had taught all of them to live a life ]

after her death everyone supported each other taken care of each other aditya was allways a mature person and behaved very strongly inspite of the fact that he was really hurt too and at that time sanjaana was a great support for him she acted like his strength

and too everyone surprise riddhima behaved the one being really matured and strong

next day there parents came over there and that was the time all the kidds broked down dev aditya and riddhima were there with vikram pallavi ...raj and shalini the elders took care of them it was just armaan ..armaan he had not talked a single word from the time of her death sitting in his room balcony looking towards the sky

riddhima came to armaan room with some food for him as he not had even a glass of water from yesterday

riddhima moved in balcony and sat near him complete silence after sometime armaan spoke

armaan: patta hai hameesha se suntaa aaya tha ki mere dad ne mom ko chod diya tha ... mom ne hameesha akele mera khayal rakha tha aaj main akela ho gaya riddima

ridd: nahi armaan main hu tmhaare saath .....hum sab hai tumhaare your firnds your family '

armaan: tum bhi mujhe ek did chod ke chahe jaaonge riddhima mom ki tarah

ridd: nahi armaan kabhi nahi main tumhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaaonge kahe nahi jaonge

she hugged him tight and tried to console him later dev and aditya also came there and now four of them sat together when sanjaana and ishika got food for all of them and they all fedded each other

its the truth that friendship can heal up everythink and it worked well with them

there parents have many times requested armaan dev adi and riddhima to come to london but all of them just don't wanna leave there home there town

so now they all live there alone but they are allways in touch with there parents specially dev's dad Raj as now after his sister death his love and care for them had increased specially for armaan he never maid any difference between dev and armaan

time passes away like this and soon they all were comming back to normal it took all of them time to be back like before now they all have became more close with many more emotional attachment with each other

like this 2 years passed

NOW THEY ALL ARE IN THE LAST YEAR OF THER COLLEGE

EVERYONE ENJOYING THERE COLLEGE LIFE

AND TIME FOR LOVE TO ENTER THERE GROUP AND THE LOVELY CHEMISTRY TO BEGAN actually love have allready enterred its just time for anyone to realise that

IT WAS A NORMAL DAY BUT NOT SO NORMAL IN THERE HOME

ACTUALLY RIDDHIMA WAS NOT WELL SHE HAD A LITTLE FEVER

BUT AS THE TIME HAS PASSED ADITYA HAD BECAME MORE CONSERNED FOR HER PRINCESS

AND THERE LOVE HAD BECOME MORE STRONG

riddhima lying on the bed COMPLETELY irritated and aditya was sitting on one side and sanjana was on the other

ridd: oh god adi main bilkul theek hu ab ab tum jaao Tum kab se yahaa baithe ho

adi: nahi nahi you just goo to sleep and rest and i will sit here only with you

ridd: fine i will go to sleep but you also leave and takesame rest

[riddima pretended to sleep soo that aditya can goo and takce some rest now but instead of that adi was still sitting there ]

sanjana: adi you don't worry she is fine now you goo and take some rest i will be here with her

adi: thanks saanjh you have helped me a lot in taking care of her

saanjh: thanks!!!! ab hamaare beech mein ye thanks jaise word kaha se aa gaye tumhe aisa kehne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai ok

adi: oh [laughing] ya offcourse tum hum sabko kitne achee se samajhte ho specially mujhe

[and then a bit eye to eye contact as if some messeges were passing on ]

saanjh: [distracting it] ok hum bahar chalte hai, ridzs ko sone dete hai,

adi: haan

[they both moved out of the room and after they left riddhima who was till now pretending to sleep sit up on the bed ]

she just very confused utter to herself

riddhima: YE KAB HUA ,adi and saanjh

[pinching herself]

ridd: ouuch sapna to nahi tha, matlab [now she actually became very happy ]

[RIDDHIMA HAD TODAY SEEN WHAT WAS THERE IN ADITYA AND SANJANA EYES SHE WAS REALLY CLOSE TO BOTH AND SO SHE CAN READ WHAT THERE HEART SAYS , SEE THERE EMOTIONS WHICH EVEN ADITYA AND SANJANA ARE UNAWARE OFF ....... MAYBE]

ridd: aggar jo main soch rahe hu vo sahe hai to mujhe kuch karna hoga

[only then dev came to her room ]

dev: kya karna hai ridzs ?

[riddhima still in her thoughts did'nt even noticed dev]

dev: kya hua kya soch rahe hai ridzs

[dev shaked her a bit and so she came to reality]

dev: kya, kya hua

ridd: haan kuch nahi bas u hi

dev: na koi baat to hai batta na

ridd: main bahut confused hu ,kuch samajh nahi aa raha ye saanjh aur adi hameesha

dev: [concerned] kya hua saanjh aur adi ko ?

ridd: hua kuch nahi magar tujhe nahi lagta kuch ho sakta hai adi aur saanjh dono

dev: [surprised] have you gone mad ye kya keh rahe hai

ridd: tu rehne de main adi aur saanjh ko jaanti hoon aur un dono ki aankhon mein ek doosre ke liye kya hai ye samajh sakti hu , bas ek baat samajh nahi aa rahe , ke vo dono ye kyon nahi samajh rahe

dev: maine to aisa kabhi nahi dekha

ridd: vo isliye ki tum sab ko apne masti se time kaha milta hai ,, waise bhi sochne ke liye dimaag ki jaroorat hai aur vo to bhagwan tumhe dena bhool gaya hai

dev: oh please to saara dimaag bhagwan ne tujhe hi diya hai kya

ridd: haan vo to hai

dev: oh really riddhi tu na [pointing a fingure]

ridd: [also pointing a fingure] kya main dekho dev

dev: kya, kya, dekhu haan

ridd: [getting back] ok ok now focus lets focus on adi and saanjh

dev: ya YA we shall per ab hum kare kya ?

ridd: vo hi to soch rahe hu, adi aur saanjh ,ek duusre se pyaar karte hai ye confirm karna hoga

dev: haan lekin kaise tu to un dono ko jaanti hai na dono ek se badkar ek 'sharmeele types' , dono mein se koi kuch nahi kahega

ridd: yahi to problem hai ab kare kya ek minute vo dono sabke saamne,,kuch nahi kehte na , aggar dono akele mein mille to

dev: akele mein kaise? i mean vo dono akele kaise

ridd: i have got an idea!!

dev: what is it ?

[riddhima explains her plan to dev that they should arrange a private meeting for adi and sanjana they need to send them on a date]

dev: what a plan all rubbish !! jaise hum unhe date pe jaane ko kahenge and vo chale jaayenge aisa kabhi nahi hoga

ridd: hum unhe kaunsa date pe jaane ko kahege vo to adi saanjh ko khud bulaayega aur saanjh adi ko

dev: [confused] matlab ?

ridd: you know naa how to copy there handwriting ?

dev: yaa i can copy that but why ?

ridds: great then you write two letters ,, first letter from aditya to sanjana in aditya handwriting and second from sanjana to aditya in sanjana handwriting

dev: ok , but what should i write in that letters

ridd: write in both letters to meet at the lovers point restaurant at hill top at 5 in the evening tommorow

dev: not bad , the place is allready soo romantic i m sure they will definately gonna express there feeling over there

ridd: ya i hope so

[then they send the letters to adi and sanjana and now they both were just waiting for the evening ]

PRECAP: ADITYA AND SANJANA MEETING

WILL THEY BE ABLE TO SHARE THERE FEELINGS

OR SOMETHINK WRONG GOING TO HAPPEN WITH RIDDHIMA'S PLAN

TIME PAASED AWAY...........

EVERYONE IN THE LAST YEAR OF THERE COLLEGE........

RIDDHIMA....REALISED.....ADITYA......AND SANJANA.LOVE FOR EACH OTHER

and lots of masti waiting ahead

GUYS UPDATED PART 5 ABOVE PLEASE DOO READ IT AND COMMENT ON IT WILL WAIT FOR YOUR REPLIES

heyyy....😊
yeah i hav read this ff in the dmg blog.....😉
pretty amazing ff...nicely written.....👏
loved it a lott...😳
wiating 4 the nxt part in the blog..😃
thnxx 4 the pm....😊

simi yaar i love it! totally rocking part :D ridz college entry was so good...and now 2 years have passed! but armaans mom dieing was really sad :(
adi sanjh love story starting!!!! very exciting! really like how ridz is the one planning all this! great stuff
please cont sooon!

hey Simi