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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey Simi,

waow that was an awesome promo,
only Armaan and Riddhima cool update soon.

hey tzahra
thanks for the comment sweety i m glad that you liked the promo
well will update with a part soon may be by today evening
soo stay tuned
till then take care
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey friends
thanks a lot for your lovely response i m glad that you liked this ff
will update a part in few minutes
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 4
recap: the friends were in 12th standard armaan and aditya basket ball match and there fight with a person missbehaving with riddhima
then they all studying for there board exams
armaan and riddhima had a bet on who is gonna get more marks and
riddhima have to arrange a date for armaan if she get less marks then armaan

THE EXAMS ARE OVER NOW ..........AND ALL SIX JUST MANAGED THERE EXAMS.

TODAY IS THERE SCHOOL FAREWELL PARTY


EVERY BODY ARE DRESSED FORMALLY

GIRLS ARE WEARING SAREE AND BOYS ARE WEARING SUITS

AND EVERYBODY WAS LOOKING JUST TOO BEUTIFUL

ARMAAN WAS WEARING A BLACK SUIT WITH A JEANS OFFCOURSE AND HE WAS AS USUALL LOKKING...U ALL KNOW THAT

ADITYA WAS LOKKING THE SECOND MOST HANDSOME GUY THERE FOLLOWED BY DEV THEY BOTH WERE PERFECTLY DRESSED

SANJANA WEARING A PINK SAAREE LOOKING SIMPLE AND SWEET AS USUALL

AND ISHIKA WEARING A BLACK SAREE SHE LOOKED GORGEOUS AND STUNNING IN IT

AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST

RIDDHIMA WAS WEARING A WHITE NET SAREE AND SHE WAS JUST LOOKING LIKE A BEUTIFUL ANGLE


THE PARTY WAS ALL SET ON FIRE

EVERYBODY WAS BUSY CHATTING AN REMEMBERING THERE SCHOOL MEMORIES

when an anouncer came went on stage to make an anouncement

announcer: friends as per your mass request wee have stored a special performance for you all.....ok now girls apne dil thaam lo

"aankhon se dil mein utarna inka kaam hai
dosto ke saath masti karna inka maan hai
ye vo hai jo har ladki ke
dil ka ARMAAN hai."

[all the girls start screaming ARMAAN ARMAAN...]

yes its .MR ARMAAN SINGH

and with that armaan started with dancing on the song koi kahe frem movie dil chahata hai

armaan : red ,
dev : blue
and aditya : pink
armaan: koi kahe kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewaana -2.
hum logo ki thokkar mein hai ye zammaana

soon dev joined him

dev: jab saaz hai awaz hai
phir kis liye hitkichaana-2

and then came aditya

aditya: hoo gaayenge hum
apne dillo ka taraana

armaan: bigde duniya

adi: bigadne bhi doo

armaan: jhagde duniya

dev: jhagadne bhi doo

armaan: ladde ye duniya

ladne bhi doo

tum apne dhun mein gaao

duniya ruthe

ruthne doo

patther toote

tootne do

koi choote

chootene do

naa ghabraao

all : hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2

soon riddhima sanjana and ishika joined them with the dance , everyone dancing together

haatho mein hai bijleeya
saanoo mein toofaan hai

darr kya hai aur haar kya
hum isse anjaan hai

hammaare liye hi to hai aasmaan aur jamme

sitaare bhi hum tod lenge humme hai yakeen

ambar see hai aage hammaara dhikaana

all: hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2

soon the 3 girls left them and armaan and dev busy flirting with other girls

sapno ka jo desh hai
haa hum wahhe hai palle

thode se dilphek hai
thode see hai manchalle
[flirting with the girls n the crowd]

jahaa bhi gaye apna jaadoo dikhaate rahe [going towards girls]

mohaabat haseeno ko hum sab sikhaate rahe [holding a girl dancing with her]

aaye humme dil aur neende churaana [waiving towards other girls who just wanted to dance with him]

all: hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -2


koi kahe kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewaana -2.

koi...kehta ......kitana bhi humko deewaana

hum logo ki thokkar mein hai ye zammaana

jab saaz hai awaz hai phir kis liye hitkichaana-2

hoo gaayenge hum apne dillo ka taraana

armaan: bigde duniya

adi: bigadne bhi doo

armaan: jhagde duniya

dev: jhagadne bhi doo

armaan: ladde ye duniya

ladne bhi doo

tum apne dhun mein gaao

duniya ruthe

ruthne doo

patther toote

tootne do

koi choote

chootene do

naa ghabraao

all : hum hai naye andaaz kyon hoo puraana -4

they were having there full on masti time

AND THEN ON EVERYONES REQUEST ARMAAN TO SING A SONG ON STAGE AS THERE BAND WAS REALLY POPULAR IN SCHOOL..THEY SIX JUST LOVE TO SING CASUALLY

RIDDHIMA AND ARMAAN HAD A GREAT VOICE AND SO THEY WERE THE MAIN SINGERS

AND ADITYA AND DEV LOVED TO PLAY MUSIC INSTRUMENTS

WELL THEY SANG THE SONG "HUM RAHE YAA NA RAHE KAL ....KAL YAAD AAYENGE YE PAL"

[i know a farewell party is never completed without this song ]


AND SO AT THE END EVERYONE JUST ENJOYED THE PARTY AND HAD FUN SINGING AND THEN DANCING ON THE FLOOR

AND LIKE THIS THE PARTY ENDED UP

SAME DAY...AFTER PARTY

[THEY ALL LEFT THE PARTY HALL AND REACHED ISHIKA RESIDENCE IN THERE CAR.....THEY DROPPED ISHIKA AND THEN SANJANA.....AND THEN APPROACHED TOWARDS THERE HOUSE.]

AT THE GATE.

dev: ok now i m tired ..good night guys..

[he hugged adi .armaan and riddhima and get inside the house towards his room]

adi: bahut late ho gaya aaj

ridd: yaa but it was too fun naa specially when we all danced

armaan: [laughing] dance !! were you really dancing there dumbo tum to sirf ye saare [holding riddhima's saree pallu to point at it]...hi sambhaalne mein lage hue the.

ridd: [commanding tone] armaan first you stop calling me dumbo i m not a dumbo ok and secondly ye saaree sambhaalna pata hai kitna mushkil hai tumne pehne hote to pata chalta.

adi: bachaa,,[REALLY SWEETLY],..,,,ab hum to lucky hai na ki hame ye nahi pehnna padta..i feel pitty for you girls who have to wear all these stuffs .

ridd:.thanks bro ......you r just the best...[hugging aditya]...atleast tum is ..jumbo ki tarah nahi ho. [pointing towards armaan]

armaan: [surprised] Jumbo........riddhima .....main aur jumbo.

riddh: haan.....aggar main .... dumbo to tum ....jumbo...got it

armaan: ok ok got it..now i will not call you that ...happy

adi: ok lets get in ..its to late and then wee have to do soo many arrangements tommorow as wee have to go to GOA day after tommorow

armaan: yaa man ....i have also not done any packing yet

ridd: no adi ..just stay for sometime naa comeon lets sit in the garden

adi: [just casually as he was actually very tired] ...no not now

armaan: [ supporting riddhima] come na for sometime

adi: nahi yaar i m really very tired u both go ahead

armaan: ok as you say [casually]

[adi hugged armaan and riddhima wished them good night and went to his room armaan and riddhima were walking in the garden this was there ussual activity they many times chatted in garden late night]

armaan: finally school over and now new life a new beggining.

ridd: [cutting him ] but same old friends.

armaan: oh really.[smiling] how strange is this ...riddhi.....the more wee stay together the more wee feel like being with each other ....wee never get bored of each other

ridd: koi dosto se bhi bore hota hai kya ..............aur phir we all are just like a cute little family ...

armaan: absolutely right and hamaare family ki mom tum ho mummy

rid: [very innocently] why ?

armaan: its just because you allways keep on giving instructions like a mummy and even scolds us soo much

ridd: armaan doo i look like a mummy to you [upset like a small kid ]

armaan: yaa and you know what's the biggest think

ridd: [with anger] what that i m like a mummy ...aunty types ....bhenji types. yahe naa

armaan: [very sweetly] nope its that you take care of all of us like a mother... you r really adorable.

ridd: [with those cute looks very sweetly ] really ?

armaan: .yes....[getting emotional]

rid: what happenned why have you became soo sad like this

armaan: [holding her hand]. you will never forget mee naa ?..[getting really emotional]

rid: why r you saying like this armaan ?

armaan: bas mujhe tumhaare aadat ho gaye hai i got really scared if wee get seperated then what

rid: [smilingly].stupid why will we ever get seperated armaan we all will allways remain together our friendship will never break promise. ,.

[armaan satisfyingly hugged riddhima]

ridd:[to change his emotional mood] let me see let me see .armaaaaan ..THE ARMAAN SINGH turning emotional

armaan: [lovingly] .shup up.

ridd: [casually ] ok as you say

[as they were walking in the ground .riddhima just lost her balance due to saaree and was about to fall when armaan hold her.]

armaan: careful riddhi

ridd: why should i you will allways be there naa ........to take care of mee

armaan: [just laughed] paagal ho tum

[as they were chatting dev ..shouted from his room's window]

dev: guys. don't u think its too late

[listening this adi came in his room window]

adi: leave it dev,in dono ki baate to bas .

armaan: [from the ground] oye itni hi problem hai to tu bhi aa ja na chit chat ke liye.

[and so dev and adi came there and they went to there tree house in the garden]

[the four just chaated almost 2 hours there and then all just fall sleep over there only. there was just few beddings placed on the floor there]

THE NEXT MORNING

[RIDDHIMA HAD TO DO A BIG WORK THAT IS GETTING PERMISSION FROM SANJANA AND ISHIKA PARENTS TO ALLOW THEM TO GO WITH HER TO GOA]

AT SANJANA HOUSE.

ridd: uncle [to sanjana dad] please saanjh ko hamaare saath jaane do na.

mr sharma: beta i don't have any problem but going soo far and that too alone

ridd: akele kaha uncle hum sab hai na and i promise hum saath saath rahenge please uncle jaane dijeye na

[before mr sharma can say anythink his wife said]

mrs sharma: jaane do na waise bhi kaun sa vo humaare saath rehna chahati hai [taunting her]

[actually mrs chopra was sanjana step mom and she really don't love sanjana she always scold her without reasons and so now sanjana,also dont feel bad on her taunts as she was completely used to it she always avoid to be at her home even in nights sanjana usually have overnight stay at riddhima or ishika place]

[riddhima ignoring her as she is familiar of sanjana's mom nature]

ridd: uncle pleaseeeee

sannjana: please dad.

mr chopra: ok ok jaao enjoy yourself and haan take care of yourself to

sanjana: [happily] thanks papa u r the best

[and then they left sanjana place and reached ishika house]


it was not much difficult to convince ishika parents as they both were really cool parents

finally they all were set to leave for there holiday.


and so they did..they got a straight flight to goa and landed up there they booked 2 rooms facing each other in a beutiful resort there

one room occupied by the girls and other by boys

it was almost night it took really long in there settelment and now everyone were really tired after that long journey and so they all just prefer resting in there rooms

NEXT DAY MORNING

everyone wake up early as they all were really excited to watch the place

they all went to the beach first for there morning walk and just walked on sand for an hour

then they played volly ball there on the sand with

armaan ,riddhima ,and aditya, in one team..

and , dev , ishika and sanjana in the second

[this was there usuall team distribution as riddhima always wanted to be on aditya and armaan side]

they played there for a long time it was just a friendly match and so noone won or lost

and now everyone was really tired

they got back to there rooms freshenup and then went to market and spend the whole day shopping

at night they had there dinner in the resort and then all of them sat in one room and chatted for long hours


they stayed for almost 2 days there and then they returned back to there home.
[the trip was not soo important thats why i have not given a proper description or brief explanation ]


FEW DAYS PASSED

NERVOUSNESS GOT HIRED AS IT WAS THERE RESULT TIME NOW

ALL OF THEM PASSED
ADITYA TOPPED THE TOWN AND GOT HIGHEST PERCENTAGE

SANJANA ALSO GOT A REPUTATED RANK

AND REST DEV , ISHIKA ALSO PASSED WITH NICE PERCENTAGE


AND SO ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA

BUT AS IT WAS

ARMAAN SCORED HIGER MARKS THEN RIDDHIMA


AND SO ARMAAN WON THE BET AND FINALY RIDDHIMA HAD TO ARRANGE ARMAAN DATE WITH PRIYA

THIS WAS NOW ARMAAN'S 25'TH DATE


[riddhima talked to priya and riddhima repeated her magic and priya was ready to go out with armaan on a date]

[armaan was really surprised how she all the time do that]


[both were chatting in riddhima's room]

RIDDHIMA ROOM

armaan: r u sure.

ridd: what!!!

armaan: i mean does she really agreed on going on a date with me

ridd: yes armaan she will be waiting for you at 6 in the evening today at cafe

armaan: how did you did this i mean in school she used to remain as if she don't have anyinterest in mee at all

ridd: really then you consider that i created my magic on her

armaan: come on riddhi tell me naa

ridd: ok ok i will tell you actually armaan you r not soo smart as much you act to be

armaan: [a bit confused and angry] excuseme what do you mean by that.

ridd: well who told you that priya was not interested in you she was so much interested in you infact she did friendship with mee just because i was your friend it was just you who never noticed her

armaan: [really happy on listening that how much girls fall for her] ohh really

ridd: yes armaan. [ lokking least interested]

armaan: [putting his arm on ridhhima shoulder and holding her ] now what can i doo there r soo many girls falling for mee ab ek-do to ignore ho hi jaate hai na

ridd: ohhhhhh really [hitting on armaan chest through her elbow as armaan was standing there with her]

armaan: ouch [with pain]

ridd: now .how many girls fall for you armaan

armaan: [ trying to show anger as he was not at all angry] shut up and just go ok i need to get ready

ridd: excuseme this is my room and by the way i don't have any interest in your soo called date ok soo you just leave from here now

armaan: okkk i m going bye

[ armaan left the room and riddhima talking to herself]

ridd: waise mr armaan interest to mujhe bahut hai aapke date mein...no rather in spoiling it now you just wait and watch what i m going to do you will allways gonna remember this date i promise

[this showed some type of shararat was cooking up in riddhima's mind

But her bad luck ARMAAN was still Standing outside and he listened that]

armaan : [to himself] ok not bad riddhi now lets see who is gonna remember this date more you make plan to spoil my date and i will plan to make it a special one the bet begans now.

AT THE CAFE
ARMAAN DATE WITH PRIYA

[THE COUPLE WAS SITTING IN A CORNER HAVING COFEE AND PRIYA WAS REALLY HAPPY SHE JUST CAN'T BELIEVE TILL NOW THAT SHE WAS THERE SITTING WITH HER DREAM BOY, ARMAAN. SHE WAS FEELING AS IF SHE WAS THE MOST LUCKIEST GIRL OF THE WORLD]

ARMAAN WAS SITTING REALLY COOL EVEN AFTER KNOWING THAT RIDDHIMA WANT TO SPOIL HIS DATE

HE WAS BUSY ROMANCING WITH PRIYA RATHER FLIRTING

RIDDHIMA AND DEV ENTERRED THE CAFE

[they both went on a table away from armaan so that armaan can't see them]

dev: ridzs why have we came over here...please tell me atleast

ridd: aareee yaar see over there armaan [pointing towards armaan table]

dev: [looking at armaan] riddzs i know he is armaan and he is over here on his date soo what's the problem ?

ridd:[happily] problem!!!! thats gonna began soon

dev: means ? [confused]

ridd: actually i have called armaan's five ex dates by the name of armaan over here

dev: [shocked] .what !!! but why?

ridd: he think he is very smart naa he had made me organise date for him now he will come to know when he will have to handle five dates together

dev: ridzs [smilingly] tu paagal hai poor armaan bechaaraaaaa

ridzs: chod na vo koi bechaara nahi hai

[dev and riddhima were waiting for the blast but nothing happened NOT A SINGLE GIRL CAME THERE ]

ARMAAN AND PRIYA ENDED UP WITH THE COFFE AND WENT OUT OF THE CAFE

RIDDHIMA WAS SURPRISED AND UPSET AS HER PLANNING FAILED

dev: armaan is allready gone where r rest of the girls

ridd: i don't knew i have old all the girls to be over here at 6 in evening but noone came i don't know why [confused]
[ and then only a voice from behind replied riddhima and she immediately turned around]
voice: because riddhima you r not soo smart as much you act to be
[it was armaan ]
ridd: [shocked and surprised] armaan ..... tum ..... yahaaa
armaan: haan riddhima main yahaaa
dev: hey dude soo tell me buddy how was your 25th date
armaan: very nice dev haan kisse ne [towards riddhima] problems creat karne ki bahut koshish ki but u know na problems and armaan never goo together [with attitude ]
dev: ohh so you allready knew that why we came over here
armaan: yaa actually you know what i saw this dumbo calling that girls and later on i called them again and said no to come here
dev: not bad ammy. riddzs you plan got failed [ making fun of her]
armaan: well your planning was nice but you know naa that your these planning can never get successful on armaan
rids: shup up [ she was really annoyded and upset]
armaan: [again making fun of her] riddhima when will you understand this that you can never defeat mee
ridd: [controlling her anger]. dont worry armaan one day i will make you loose from mee
armaan: ya ya and that day will never come
dev: ok guys no more fights lets go back home

[on there way home in the car dev was driving and armaan was sitting with him in front and riddhima was sitting on back seat]

dev: hey riddzs r you through with all your preparations
ridd: preparations [confused].........for what ?
dev: for the college yaar our college will start from next week we all will go to the college together it will be soo fun naa i m just so excited
ridd: ya i know i m also very excited about that
[they reached home] [ and now everythink was normal again]
IT WAS A NORMAL DAY AND EVERYBODY WERE JUST BUSY IN PREPARATIONS FOR THERE NEW LIFE there COLLEGE LIFE

THEY ALL WERE OUT FOR SHOPPING
IN THE SHOPPING MALL

[THE GIRLS WERE selecting SOME CLOTHES THEY 3 WERE TO BUSY IN THAT AS GIRLS USUALLY ARE AND BOYS GETTING BORED AS BOYS USUALLY ARE]
ridhh: [to sanjana] thisone is looking very nice [holding a dress in her hand]
sanj: yaa but i think that red one is better what do you think ishq
ishq: [after a thought] hummmmm no i like this one i think this is nice [holding another dress]
ridd: yaa ishq i also liked this one [pointing towards ishq dress]
ishq: [a bit confused] yaa but on second thought i think that red dress which saanjh has selected is more better than this
ridd: no actually the one i selected is the best
sanjh: i think the one ishq selected was also nice
[the boys who were till now very patiently listening all this conversation rather argument finally broke there silence]

dev: oh god girls what r you three doing [really irritated]
armaan: mera to sar[head] dard ho raha you girls r only arguing from soo long
adi: ya really. tum girls kabhi quick decetion nahi le sakte na.
dev: haan saare decetions itna serious hokar lete hai jaise ki [very dramatically] ye zindage aur maut ka sawaal hai.
[boys keep on laughing]
ridd: haha very funny guys you goo and doo your shopping why r you guys disturbing us
adi: wee would have never disturbed you bachaa [to ridhima] but what can wee do ...we all r allready through with our shopping long time back
armaan: ya and since last half hour wee r just listenning to your so called discussion
ridd: ok ok leave it [to sanjana and ishika] lets doo one think we shall buy all these 3 dresses
sanj: yaa that will be fine
ishq: ya offcourse ok then lets go and have somethink i m feeling hungry
dev: [showing a sign of releef ] ohhhhh finally your shopping is over
ridd: yaa dev now lets go.
[they all finally moved out of the mall and then they all went to a restaurant to have lunch]
they entered the club where they usually go
adi asked a waiter for a table for 6
they all occupied a table on pool side
they all comfortably settelled there...and ordered there desired lunch

dev: so hope now all your shopping is complete [towards girls]
ridd: complete ? no dev abhi kaha we have only bought dresses till now .stillsoo many thinks r left
ishq: [ in countinuation with ridd] ya ..... new shoes , new bags, matching jewellry
armaan: hey hey hey hold on girls dont u think its getting too much i mean we all r going to college not in any marriage
dev: armaan they r doing it like this now .....i wonder if they have to do shopping for any marriage then what they gonna doo
ridd: guys just relax ok and well one think is for sure that if we have to do shopping from next time we will never come with you atleast
armaan: oh thank you for saving us from your this shopping torcher
ridd: just stop it ok
[ they all and there lunch and proceeds towards there house it was about 6 in evening]
IN THE EVENING
AT RIDDHIMA HOUSE
EVERYONE WERE COMFORTABLY SEATED UP IN ADITYA'S ROOM .THEY ALL WERE BIT TIRED DUE TO SHOPPING AND SO THEY ALL RESTED THERE

ridd: ok guys enough of resting ...now what's the plan
sanjh: plan !! for what ?
ridd: just like that for dinner
dev: i got an idea
ishq: and whats that?
dev: lets have party tonight
adi: party !!! but why whats the occation
ridd: oh god adi you don't need to have any particular occation for enjoying
armaan: ya [excitedly] ya lets just have a blast what say guys
all together : okkk
dev: but where to go?
armaan: ok lets go to the royal club
adi: thats cool lets go to the club
ridd: but we will go in the disco
adi: ya ..lets goo to the club's disco
dev: yaa thats nice lets go
[everybody got ready and when't to the disk and everybody was on the dance floor]
they all were busy dancing and enjoying there night to the fullest.
after an hour everybody ended up and occupied a corner table and ordered some drinks]
ishq: it was fun
saanjh: ya
adi: waise riddhima when r you going to learn ho to dance
ridd: what do you mean that i don't know how to dance ?
dev: ya adi riddzs is such a good dancer then why r you saying this
adi: really she is more than just a good dancer you know what she hit mee so hard with her foot while dancing my foot is paining soo much till now
ridd: ok relax may be i did it by mistake
armaan: mistake riddhima don't you think you doo many mistakes like this
ridd: shup up ok i said naa i did it by mistake.
dev: riddzs ye achaa hai pehle maar lo then keh do ki galti ho gaye.
ridd: aree tum log to mere peeche hi pad gaye ho kaha na galti se lag gaya [she got angry]
adi: ok ok just relax [trying to calm her] tum bhi na bas chote chote baat per gussa ho jaate ho
ridd: achaa u mean main hi gussa hote hu. aur tum log jo mujhe har baat per irritate karte rehte ho vo kya
adi: main maine tumhe kab irritate kiya ?
ridd: [in anger] leave it i just don't wanna talk to you jab dekho mujhe pareshaan karte rehte ho
armaan: look adi ye phir gussa ho gaye riddhima.....tum har baat pe gussa ho jaate ho
[all the boys specially armaan just love to irritate her and so they are just fighting without any reason.]
ridd: armaan just shut up ok.
adi: riddhima ko gussa aa gaya [ making fun of her]
ridd: [stood up] leave it mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karne. main jaa rahe hu.
[riddhima moved out in anger]
dev: dekho phir naraz ho gaye
saanj: tum teeno bhi na [towards the boys] kyon usse pareshaan karte rehte ho gussa ho gaye na
adi: haan vo to gussa hokar chale gaye now what to do ?
armaan: arree kahe nahi gaye hoge yahi kahe hoge main dekhkar aata hu...
[and so armaan also left the disco]
[riddhima outside the disco]
ridd: [to herself] pata nahi kya samahjate hai apne aap ko abhi aayega mannane main bilkul baat nahi karunge ab
[armaan came out he was a bit distant away from her..........but he called her from there only]
armaan: riddhima
ridd: please armaan i just don't wanna talk to you
[and saying this she went towards the road ......and did not noticed that a car was coming towards her]
[armaan saw the car and tried to stop her and ran to her]
THE CAR WAS REALLY CLOSE TO RIDDHIMA AND AS IT WAS ABOUT TO CRASH WITH RIDDHIMA ARMAAN JUST JUMPED HOLDED HER AND ... TOOK HER TO THE OTHER SIDE BUT A BIT LATE
THE CAR HAD ALREADY HIT RIDDHIMA ON HER LEG
RIDDHIMA'S LEG WAS PAINING AND SHE CRIED WITH PAIN

MEAN WHILE INSIDE THE DISCO

dev: yaar i think riddzs sach mein naraj ho gaye hai
adi: yaa i think so we shall go out to see for her
saanjh : ya lets go
[they all went out THEY ALL SEE THAT RIDDHIMA WAS LYING ON THE FLOOR and CRYING OUT OF PAIN AND ARMAAN WAS TRYING TO PICK HER IN HIS ARMS]
EVERYBODY WAS SHOCKED AND THEY ALL JUST RAN TOWARDS THEM

adi: [he came near riddhima and hold her hand] riddhi riddhi [very tensed] kya hua tujhe ARMAAN WHAT HAPPENNED TO HER [MORE TENSED]
ridd: [holding adi hand tightly ] aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh adi [she just cried ]
armaan: actually her leg is been injurred ....dev [who was just there near him.]....get the car wee need to go to hospital
dev: yaa [he just ran towards the parking and bought the car.]
[armaan carefully picked ridhima up in his arms and just put her inside the car and they all just rushed towards the hospital]

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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
PART 4 COUNTINUED
IN THE HOSPITAL

doctor were just examining riddhima ,in an emergency room and all of them were waiting outside

meanwhile ......armaan explained everyone how the accident happened

everyone were really tensed especially adi he was really hurt as her llittle angel was in pain.

doctor came out

adi: doctor....how's my sister

doc: relax ....mr aditya...she is fine. just a leg injury

[a sign of relief came on everyone faces]

armaan: is leg injury serious doctor

doctor: actually its a fracture

dev: fracture when will it get fine

doctor: well it will take 20 to 25 days to cure but i would prefer 1 month rest for her

adi: you don't worry doctor we will take proper care of her

dev: well can we meet her now

doctor: ya sure and you can even take her to home now i mean she is perfectly fine just a complete bed rest for few days

adi: thank you doctor

[and then they all went inside towards riddhmaa she was just lying on the bed. and all the five move close to her and adi ....sat beside riddhima on one side........and armaan came on the other.]

[riddhima know that adi was angry ...... how can she be so careless to ...... move on road like this ]

ridd: [she said softly] adi

adi: [in angry tone] .... baat mat karna mujhse ....... dekh kar nahi challa jaata tumse.


[he was angry but he loved riddhima a lot and so he was not able to get more angry when he actually saw her face his anger just vanished ]

adi: [now holding her hand] bahut dard ho raha hai [very caringly]

ridd: [put her hand on adi heart] yahaa se thoda kam

[now actually adi got emotional as it was true that there was lot of pain in his heart tears came in his eyes]

ridd: adi please i m fine now ab tum ye roona-dhoona band karo please

armaan: [who was till now just standing there controlling his emotions] tum theek nahi tum paagal ho and blind too

ridd: what!!!

armaan: what.... what.... kya... aree itane bade car tumhe najar nahi aa rahe the bas chalee ja rahe the agar jyada lag jaate toh

ishq: haan armaan...riddzs ..u r so bad......baby aggar tujhe kuch ho jaata tho

ridd: [very sweetly]........ishqq..sweety i m fine now...its just a fracture...

dev: just a fracture.....ridzs...... ab tum bilkul chup ho jaao......and sirf araam karogi ab tum.....got it [giving instruction]

ridd: oh please yaar...[trying to calm him]

adi: he is saying absolutely right

armaan: yes adi ab tum bas rest karoge ok

ishq: yaa complete bed rest.

[riddhima now needed help .........she looked towards sanjana]

ridd: [politely]. saanjh atleast you support mee

sanj: no ridzs not at all. adi tum bilkul tention mat lo. ab ridzs ka khayal hum rakhenge

ridd: saanjh tu bhi. main tum sab mein se kisse se baat nahi karunge

adi: [gettinng emotional] please ab dubaara aisa mat kaheyo.

ridzs: ok adi nahi kahunge...[emotionally]

dev: achaa hum saare formalities puure karke aate hai chal adi

[adi and dev just leave the room]

[and both the girls also went out following them]

now only armaan and riddhima were left there.


[armaan eyes were filled with water riddhima noticed it ]

[she carefully tried to sit on the bed now she was half lying half sitting on the bed]

[she hold a tissue in his hand and offered it to armaan]

ridd: ye lo le lo..

armaan: main ro nahi raha tha vo to mere aankh mein kuch chala gaya tha [trying to defend himself]

ridd: haan pata hai mujhe [said casually as she know the truth that he was actually crying...but still he will never accept that he was crying]

[suddenly riddhima expression changed to a bit serious one]

armaan: now what happenned to you

ridd: vo actuaaly thanks.

armaan: thanks. for what [surprisingly]

ridd: haan vo actually tumne mujhe, accident mein.

armaan: [he understood what she was to say and he really felt bad ridd was his best friend and how can she say him thanks he felt bad]

armaan: [a bit angry] haan thanks offcourse aggar main tumhe nahi bachaata to bhi mujhe kya pharak padta main tho tumhara kuch hu hi nahi

ridd: armaan i m sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha, armaan

[now he was actually getting emotional and so he just hugged riddhima]''

ridd: armaan main theek hu

[armaan didnt said a word but his silence said a lot to riddhima and she also understood that how would armaan be feeling]

[entered dev]

dev: ok guys [ they parted away]

dev: ghar chale riddhima

ridd: yaa

dev: naahi aggar chaaho tho yahaa per bhi reh sakti ho itane burre nahi hai ye jagah [joking]

ridd: shut up ..dev and now help me i need to get up

[seeing this armaan and dev helped riddhima and armaan picked her up and seated her on a wheel chair ]

dev: ok lets go


[then they all proceeds towards there home ]

AT THE HOME

aditya picked riddhima from the car and took riddhima to her room and rested her on the bed.]

adi: ........[he was giving instruction to all the servents on how to take care of riddhima]

adi: [to a servent] hope you got everythink ...i have appointed a nurse for riddhima and she will remain with her all the time

dev: yaa that would be fine adi

ridd: per iski kya jaroorat hai adi i m fine and i can manage well

armaan: [in a commanding tone] there is noo need for you to manage anythink riddhima you just take rest we all r here to manage everythink

dev: yaa riddzs you will need a nurse for you

riidd: ok ok as u all say ok now i think its too you all go and take some rest u all must be tired

[everybody left after greeting riddhima, except adi he just sat beside riddhima bed and holding her hand after an hour he slept there only]

[armaan visited the room twice at night to see riddhima to see her that she was fine or not]

FIVE DAYS LATER


it was just 2 minute left to 12 in night, ridhima was sleeping in her room


only then armaan entered her room

he came close to riddhima's bed she was in sleeping

he tried to pick her in his arms riddhima....surprisingly opened her eyes and she was about to shout as it was dark and she can't see armaan she actually got scared,

but before that armaan put his hand on riddhima mouth and stop her from shouting


riddhima really scared tried really hard,to escape but she just can't and it was too dark there to see anythink

armaan picked her up she tried hard to free herself but she was not able to do so....as she had a fracture in her leg

armaan came in the hall it was completely dark over there in the hall also and seated her on a sofa, and then removed his hand from riddima mouth

and riddhima just shouted


ridd: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, adi ..adii

aditya was also sleeping in his room but listenning to riddhima sound he just ran towards the hall to see riddhima

IT was dark there in hall

adi: riddhi riddhi kaha hai tu ? [very tensed]

[but riddhima could not reply as armaan had again put hand an her mouth]

as adi entered the hall

then only the lights go on and a loud voice came.

voice: surprisee

[adi was shocked......................it was dev . sanjana . and ishika standing there and the hall was fully decorated

and he can see riddhima sitting on a sofa and armaan standing behind her with his hand of her mouth she was also in a state shock

armaan removed his hand from her mouth she did'nt shouted now as now she knew that it was armaan who just kiddnapped her...from her room to hall

riddhima and aditya were surprised

and other four except adi and ridd were singing together

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U

[ACTUALLY IT WAS ADITYA AND RIDDHIMA's BIRTHDAY AND ALL THIS WERE OTHERS PLANNING FOR THERE BIRTHDAY]

dev sanjana and ishika came close to aditya ........and all of them were hugging and greeting aditya.

and on the same time armaan as he was there standing near riddhima just hugged her and wished her

armaan: happy birthday ridhi

ridd: [happily] thanks................[now getting angry] but is this any way to give a surprise .? you know how hell scared i was

armaan: [cutely] ohhh really miss ridhhima khanna ko darr bhi lagta hai

riidd: shup up ...armaan

[then all reached riddhima after wishing aditya]

dev , sanjana ,and ishika ,hugged riddhima and wished her.

and finally at the end aditya came to riddhima and hugged her

ridd: [ to adi] happy birthday adii

adi: [completely filled with emotions] same to you LITLE SIS.

ridd: [getting apart fron adi] what litle sis... adi we were born together on same day

adi: [cutting her in between] ya but i was born few minutes before you soo i m you elder brother got it

ridhh: yes boss

dev: ok guys lets cut the cake

[sanjana bought the cake and then riddhima and aditya together cutted the cake first they both fedded each other and then both together to armaan

resulting in armaan face spoiled with the cake

then to dev ,ishika and sanjana

finally after that they all sat there and began to chat


ridd: guys only cake where r my gifts

dev: [with fake attitude] dekh liya madam ke liye itana achaa surprise organise kiya lekin nahi uski koi value hi nahi madam ko to abhi bhi gift chahiye.

ridd: oh just shup up ok chup chaap mere gift nikaalo [with fake anger]

dev: ok soo tell us princess kya .pharmaaesh hai aapke kya gift chahiye aapko

ridd: well .... mujhe [thinking deeply] [then realised somethink] ek minute mere birthday gift bhe main bataonge ki mujhe kya chahiye

[armaan who was sitting there only.inturupted in between]

armaan: haan dev , tumhe nahi pata ki riddhima ko to uske birthday mein ek hi gift chahiye hota hai here you goo madam [giving riddhima a packet] your gift

ridd: [taking it ] how sweet ammy you know mee soo well ...you very well know that i only want this dairy [getting the diary out of the packet] as my gift every year

[actually riddhima allways want a dairy this was a special dairy which riddhima got every year and in this she and all other friends used to capture there special moments these dairies were the special memories of there lovely friendship]

ridd: ok now lets start with this dairy the first saanjh will write in this

saanjh: ya sure, give it to mee i will write somethink in it for riddhima so that she gets well soon [pointing towards the fracture in riddhima's leg]

ishq: yaa then its my turn to write ok

dev: yaa sure wee all will write in it but before that aditya you tell now its your birthday too what gift do you want

armaan: yaa adi tell me what gift do you want

adi: mujhe ....mujhe kuch nahi [very politely]

ridd: aree aise kaise kuch nahi chahiye batao na kya gift chahiye

adi: gift bas tum jaldi se theek ho jaao [holding riddhima hand] i just want this gift only

[riddhima did'nt said anythink further she just hugged adi ]

armaan: ok this was riddhima gift to you and as per as our gifts ...so your gift is due ... you ask it whenever you want a gift ok

adi: promise sometime in my life i will definately ask for a gift

armaan: yaa sure jab chaahe maang lena jaan bhi de dunga

adi: chup kar jaan nahi maangunga.

ridd: not bad armaan kya .....dostana hai ek vaada mujhe bhe de do. main bhi kabhi kuch maang lunge

armaan: je nahi tumhara bharoosa nahi pata nahi kya maang loge tumhe to ye vaada nahi de sakta

ridd: bas itana hi jaante ho mujhe., ek vaada bhi nahi de sakte,

armaan: itana jaanta hu tabhi to vaada nahi de raha.,


ridd: ok okk guyss [changing the topic] ots too late now lets go to sleep

adi: yaa its too late

ridd: well guys you all r going to college from tommorow rigth [as riddhima leg was still fractured soo she will have to join the college late ]

dev: no riddzs wee all will go from next month with you only

ridd: what !! [shocked] but why ?

adi: what do you mean by why how can we leave you alone like this [pointing towards riddh fracture]

ridd: soo what adi i mean you all can't spoil your studies just because of mee

armaan: no riddhima , we all will go college together

ishq: ya you get well first then we all will go together

riddhi: not at all ..nothing like this will happen you all will go to the college from tommorow and thats it no more arguements on this [commanding them]

saanj: no riddzs we will not go leaving you alone here


ridd: but i will not be alone over here there will be soo many servents at home to take care of mee and moreover college will just be for 6 hours only

dev: but

[riddhima cutting dev before he can speek]

ridd: bas thats it you all r going to college from tommorow and thats final [she ordered them]

adi: ok ok we will go but not all of us i mean anyone from us will allways remain with you

saanjh: ya adi that would be fine so now its decided for tommorow i will stay with her

ridd: ok ok fine but only one of you fine now you all go to sleep

[everybody agreed and then went to sleep]


NEXT MORNING

[ all the three boys getting ready for the college riddhima was sitting there helping them to select there clothes,]

ridd: armaan green shirt this shirt does'nt suits at all with you this jeans God !!!! [bit frustated] when will you learn to select proper colour

armaan: excuseme my selection is better than you ok i was going to wear this red one i was just seeing this green one just like that

ridd: ya ya i know ...go and get ready fast

[after armaan got ready]

dev: hey dude .not bad you r looking really handsome today

armaan: really well you r also looking very nice

adi: ok now ready guys

[only then entered sanjana and ishika]

ishq: hi guys

armaan: hey hi ishq [huggging her] r u ready for the college

ishq: no actually

saanjh: no actually ishq is also staying with mee for today we will go from tommorow

adi: ok thats fine well frankly speaking riddhi i don't feel like going like this leaving you here

ridd: adi thats it now you three goo and yaa ..you also try and set 2-3 girls like these two r going to doo [pointing towards armaan and dev]

dev: excuseme riddzs what do u mean we r going to the college only to doo settings with the girls

riidd: [confidently] yes offcourse.

armaan: ya actually you r right college and girls not bad

adi: ok ok now lets go [lokking least interested in this topic]

ridd: ok bye and all the best

[all 3 boys hugged the girls and left for there frst day in colllege]


END OF THE PART


PRECAP: THREE HANDOME BOYS IN COLLEGE.

GIRLS GOING CRAZY

BOYS JEALOUS

AND RAGGING

and masti in college life

OK FRIENDS NOW THIS WAS MY PART PLEASE DO COMMENT ON IT

LOTS OF LOVE
SIMI

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY FRIENDS
HAVE UPDATED PART 4 ON PAGE 12
PLEASE DOO READ IT
WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS
LOTS OF LOVE
SIMI
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
hey Simi
awesome part
I loved the way the 5 of them were taking care of Ridz after her accident
the birthday surprise was really sweet
I can't wait for the next part
thanx for the pm & plz update soon
Rabia
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

hey Simi

awesome part
I loved the way the 5 of them were taking care of Ridz after her accident
the birthday surprise was really sweet
I can't wait for the next part
thanx for the pm & plz update soon
Rabia

hey rabia
hi how r u sweety well i loved your comment thanks a lot for it
i m glad that you liked the part
take care
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

very nice part............continue soon.

hey aanchal
thanks a lot sweety
will countinue with next part soon
till then you take care
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Simi,
that was awesome wht can i say that was amazing,
their friendship i am so loving it great,
aaw they annoy Ridz to much and she met with an accident aaw emotional was so emotional,
college life well lets see wht will happen now do continue the next part thanx for the pm.
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hey simi
nice update
continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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