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Posted: 16 years ago
hey simi wow yaar super long prt yaar lvd it it ws mindblowing us rocky ki to hehehe watt laga di so much showing off huh nd ridz dhamakedaar entry mahashallah yaar rocking hehehe nd tht pyaar drama hehe nd adi is so much carying fr his ridz awwwwwwwwwwwww lvd it totally hm kuch changs the arridz nd all friends friendship lts wait n watch ridz ki dimaag ki batti chali nd now plan begibs lts ssee i knw cnt wait
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hey gr8 part....
thanx for the pm...
keep updating............
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey simi
great part
r u going to update this ff on blog???
continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah Simi its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteur rockstar dear so Armaan mom is no more u said everyone is in love nit explain AR waiting to know it plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I wanna thank you,
For everything you have ever done,
To make my life better.
You all touch my life with your kindness,
You know just what I need."






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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Simi,
waow that was so great and awesome,
their friendship is so sweet and cute,
the drama was so funny haha stupid rocky,
but Sujata death part was so sad poor her,
so one love story is going to start soon lets see if Riddhima plan is going to work or not i hope it does,
so now other 2 are on the waiting list thanx for the pm do continue the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey Simi,

waow that was so great and awesome,
their friendship is so sweet and cute,
the drama was so funny haha stupid rocky,
but Sujata death part was so sad poor her,
so one love story is going to start soon lets see if Riddhima plan is going to work or not i hope it does,
so now other 2 are on the waiting list thanx for the pm do continue the next part.

hey tzahra
thanks a lot for your comment lovely sweety i m glad that you liked the part soo much
i reallly loved your comment thanks agian for it
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey simi...

rocking update...armaan -riddhima ragging getting ragged was quite funny and then the sad part about armaan mom death...and now riddhima setting adi and sanjana..totally enjoyed reading the part...

looking forward to the next update...

hope nothing bad happens..

continue soon and thanks for the pm..

loads of love...

Caramel...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Simi its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteur rockstar dear so Armaan mom is no more u said everyone is in love nit explain AR waiting to know it plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"To me you're like an angel, sent by God above,
To cleanse my soul of sadness, and fill it with love.
You are my inspiration and I wanna thank you,
For everything you have ever done,
To make my life better.
You all touch my life with your kindness,
You know just what I need."






Nidha

hey nidha
thanks a lot sweety i m gad that you liked the part
thanks a lot for your comment
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

hey simi...

rocking update...armaan -riddhima ragging getting ragged was quite funny and then the sad part about armaan mom death...and now riddhima setting adi and sanjana..totally enjoyed reading the part...

looking forward to the next update...

hope nothing bad happens..

continue soon and thanks for the pm..

loads of love...

Caramel...

hey caramel
thanks a lot for your comment sweety i m glad that you liked the part soo much
thanks once again for that lovely comment
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago
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PART 5 ON PAGE 15
PART 6
RECAP:
Armaan and riddhima in college ,there ragging on there first day
armaan's mom death and there bond becamming even more strong after armaan's mom death
time passed away like this and now they r in the final year of there college
riddhima realised aditya and sanjana hidden love for each other

AND SHE MAID A PLAN FOR THERE DATE

riddhima and dev entering the restaurant

[it was a beutiful open air restaurant on a hill top at ane side there was a big valley that was a popular lovers point or suicide point and sitting in the resatuarant you can easily see the beutiful valley and the beutiful hills it was a beutiful veiw of nature ]


ridd: [a bit tensed] dev tumne sab kuch theek se set kar diya hai na ?

dev: don't worry ridzs maine saara plan set kar diya hai

ridzs: isse baat ka to darr hai !!!!

dev: achaa ek to main tere help kar raaha hu aur tu meraa hi majaak banna rahe hai !
ridd: what do you mean by 'mere help' adi aur saanjh tere kuch nahi lagte

dev: [folding hi hand] ok ok galti ho gaye mere maa mujhe maaf kar dijeye

ridd: yaa better

dev: well maine un dono ke liye corner table reserve kar diya hai and waiter ko bhi samjha diya hai reservation aditya ke naam se hai

ridd: i hope ab vo dono bas aa jaaye

dev: don't worry i m sure vo aayenge ,achaa hum dono wahaa us table pe chalte hai [pointing towards a table in another corner] ,wahaa se hum un doono ko dekh sakte hai

ridd: ok

they satted there on the corner and aditya reached the restaurant

ridd: adi aa gaya ! saanjh kyon nahi aaye ab tak ? [worried ]

dev: ridzs relax aa jaayege tum tab tak ye juice peeo

[as he offered juice to riddhima the juice fell on riddhima dress ]

ridd: [annoyded] dev ! ye kya kiya tumne

dev: i m sorry vo galti se anyways tum jaao and clean it up

ridd: ok main abhi aate hu

[riddhima went to the washroom and as she was coming back somebody pulled her towards the corner]

[she was shocked and closed her eyes and as she opened , it was ARMAAN ]

ridd: armaan [very confused]

armaan: darr gaye ?

ridd: [confused] tum! tum! yahaa kya kar rahe ho ?

armaan: kyon yahaa aana manna hai kya

ridd: NAHI I MEAN achaanak aise

armaan: waise ye to main bhi tumse pooch sakta hu ! ki tum yahaa kya kar rahe ho ?

ridd: [confused dont know what to reply] main....vo main ...

armaan: [immitating her] vo main vo ! kaho na ! ki aditya aur saanjh ki date pe aaye ho

ridd: kya [shocked] ,tumhe kaise patta i mean

armaan: [with over confident] riddhima.... i m the armaan singh and armaan ko sab patta hota hai

ridd: achaa very funny ....

armaan: ok ok dev ne battaya to main aur ishq tumhe company dene aa gaye

ridd: ishika vo bhi hai yahaa , kaha hai vo ?
armaan: dev ke saath ab jaldi chalo saanjh bhi aane waale hoge

[they when towards there table dev and ishika were allready siiting there looking towards adi table ]
ridd: [hitting dev from back] dev!!! dev ke bachee tere pait [stomach] mein koi baat nahi reh sakti

dev: arre to ab armaan ko hi to bataaya hai
ishika: riddzs relax leave that aur tu batta tuune humme kyon nahi bataaya akele akele saare plan banna liya
ridd: ab sab itana jaldi ho gaya ki anyways leave that saanjh aane waale hoge

[and as planned sanjana reached there and she went to meet adi and they both sat on there table ]

dev: dono saath mein kitne achee lag rahe hai

ridd: [very seriously ] shhhh and let me hear there talks

armaan: haan kitne paas bathe hai na vo hammare [sarcastically] jo tujhe unki baate sunaaye de rahe hai

ridd: [confidently] i can hear then armaan

[she bought a headphone out of her ears ]

dev: ye kya hai

ridd: speaker hai maine unke table ke neeche microphone lagga rakha hai ab vo jo baate karenge humme yahaa speakers mein sunaaye denge

armaan: not bad riddhima mere saath reh reh kar tum bhi kaafe intelegent ho gaye ho

ridd: thankyou armaan now please let me listen to them [not in a mood to argue]

[they put the speakers on and listened to there chat ]

[but they both were sitting quitly ,as they both were feeling shy to talk ]

dev: ye dono kuch bol kyon nahi rehe hai

ridd: patta nahi oh god kuch to bolo [pleading to them]

[adi and saanjh speaked to order coffee and then again quite ]

then saajh just to start the chat to break that acqward silence

saanjh: this valley is really beutifull [pointing towards the valley]

adi: haa [very simply] yaa you know what this valley is around hundred
years old

saanjh : oh ! [again they kept quite then again after sometime she tried to break the silence] vo adi .....

adi : hmm you said somethink

saanjh : haa hmmm voo [lokking here and there ] haa vo that temple is really beutiful na

on the other side


armaan who was hearing all this from the speaker spoked.

armaan: ye dono to yahaa site seeing kar rahe hai [sarcastically]

ridd: shhhhh [keeping fingure on his lips ] dekhnaa abhi baat karenge


on the other side
aditya and sanjana

aditya: yaa that temple is very nice , you know that temple is also allmost hundred years old


[riddima listening this talk got irritated ]

ridd: [putting her hand on her head] hey bhagwaan!! mera bhai bhi sau [hundred] saal puraana hai , adi please koi to baat kar

dev: relax riddzs karega tu dekh abhi karega

riddzs: itne saal tum dono ke saath raha hai [pointing towards armaan and dev] tum dono se bhi kuch nahi seekha [cursing aditya] ki date pe kya baat karne chahiye

on other side
[they both chat again ]

saanjh: adi why did you called me here ?

adi: [confused] i called you ! noo i don't you called mee


on other side

ridd: shit saanjh ko ye kehne ki kya jaroorat the ab !

dev: gayaa hamaara plan


on other side

saanjh: no adi you wrote me the letter

adi: saanjh you send mee a letter

saanjh: if i did'nt write that and even you did'nt then who has written that
letter ?

adi: i got it i m sure this is done by

[before adi can complete ]

saanjh: riddhima [as if conforming from him and aditya to nodded]


other side as saanjh took riddhima name

ishq: all the best riddzs now you r gone

ridd: shut up ! anyways its not mee its dev who wrote those letters

armaan: then all the best to you dev come on now lets goo to them

ridd: main ghar jaa rahe hu [tried to escape from there and moving towards the exist]

only then adi saw riddhima there

adi: see over there

[and they went there]

adi: hi riddhima [sarcastically]

[looking towards armaan dev and ishq]

adi: oh to aap log bhi hai yahaa kya main jaan sakta hu ye sab kya
tha ?

dev: adi vo

saanjh: kya vo ye kaisa majaak tha

ishq: majaak ! [a bit serious] vo hota hai jo tum ek doosre ke saath kar rahe ho

adi: matlab ?

ridd: matlab ye adi ke tum dono ek doosre se kuch kehna chahate ho , to kehte kyon nahi ?

saajh: stop it riddzi

armaan: aaj nahi saanjh , aaj nahi , its high time tum dono ko ab accept kar lena chahiye

adi: armaan please stop it right now

ridd: armaan sahe keh raha hai adi hum to bas tum dono ko khush dekhna chahate hai isseliye ye sab i m sorry aggar tujhe burra lagga to

adi: nahi riddzs mujhe burra nahi lagga infact tum sahe keh rahe ho,

[moving towards saanjh ]

adi: saanjh main tumse kuch kehna chahata hu, [looking straight in her eyes] we became friends years back , since then you have you have allways been with me , allways supported mee , allways given me the strength to move adead in life , you were allways there my side in all up's and down of my life and now i have became used to this ,, mujhe tumhaare aadat ho gaye hai sanjana ,

saanjh: [she was scared] ,adi please stop
adi: [ignoring her pleading] kya tum hameesha meraa saath doge ?

saanjh : [having tears in her eyes] adi ........main ..

adi: kuch nahi sirf haa ya na [after a pause] I LOVE YOU

[tears were there in sanjana eyes and even in riddhima's she was really happy ]

Sanjana blushed a bit and just ran away Armaan followed her

dev: arre ab isse kya hua ye aise kyon chale gaye ? [confused]

ishq: [smiled and said] kuch nahi ..... sharmaa gaye

dev: oh like that [ happily towards adi hugging him ] kya baat hai adi ye hue na baat , aaj lag raha hai kuch to assar hua hammare dosti ka

ishq: stop it dev , but seriously adi , i m soo haapy for you both aur haa sanjana hammre bahut pyaare dost hai you better take care of her

adi: achaa ! sanjana dost hai aur main kuch nahi hu ?

ishq: tum bhi ho magar saanjh thode jyada hai kyun sahe kaha na maine riddzs ? [teasing adi]


[adi looking towards riddhima , she had tears in her eyes]

adi: riddi [emotionally going towards her she hugged him]

ridd: aaj main bahut khush hu adi , i m soo happy for you

adi: really main bhi

ridd: i love you adi

adi: i love you too

dev: [with cute face] and mee ?

ishq: and meee too

adi: yes offcourse i love you all

[they 4 hugged each other together]



meanwhile

ARMAAN AND SANJANA


she was happy and she was smiling now , blushing to herself thinking about what aditya said yes they were silent lovers love birls ....just a confession was left there heart had accepted each other long time back just a mere confession was left

armaan: [teasing her] tu wahaa se bhaag ke aa gaye , aur jawaab bhi nahi diya , iska matlab tumhe adi kuch khaas pasand nahi

sanjh: aise baat nahi hai [instantly]

armaan: [smiled] to fhir kaise baat hai

sanjh: [shyly] armaan please

armaan: oh ho , not bad , waise bahut badde chupe rustam nikle tum dono chupke chupke

sanjh: [now with fake anger] armaan !!!

armaan: okk okkkk , kuch nahi kahenge , ab to adi ki permission ke binna hum aapko kuch keh bhi nahi sakte [again teasing her]

she blushed again

armaan: come on yaar last time ek dost ki tarah hugg de do , ab iske baad to you know

[they both hugged ]

armaan: allways be happy , come on lets goo now


[actually sanjana was more like a sister to armaan then a friend , and soo he was really happy for her , as he knew that sanjaa step mom never loved her , she was taken in for more care ]

[armaan dropped sanjana and then returned back home where adi , riddhima , and dev were sitting in there tree house and chatting ]

armaan: hey guys

ridd: soo you came back after dropping 'sanjana bhabhii' [stressing on the word] to her house

adi: riddhima , , abhi sirf maine [blushing then he wanna say that onlyhe had confessed and thats all sanjana have not even confessed her love till now]

ridd: koi baat nahi adi , practice to karne hai , aaj nahi to kal , mere bhabhi to banege na vo, haina dev

dev: yaa offcourse mine too

armaan: but not mine

ridd: kyon , adi is your friends too then

armaan: yaa , adi is my friend but saanjh , is just like a sister too me

ridd: ohh , ok then adi will be you jiju right adi [teasing ]

armaan: [now seriously going near adi] yaa but he will have to take proper care of my sister then

[they both hugged each other]

armaan: i just can't tell you haw happy i m for you , today you got what you wanted , allways remain like this ok

dev: ya today if bua would have been here she would have said this only ,

adi: yaa i wish choti maa was here with us

armaan getting serious and emotional with the mentioning of his mom , riddhima noticed it

ridd: what you mean adi by 'if she would have been' she is here with us only , she was allways here and she will allways be here with us in our heart right armaan [holding armaan hand giving him her support]

armaan just nodded armaan allways wonder how she allways came to knew that he is upset , why she is allways there for his support , and she was his best friend his great strength allways and specially in the past 2 years after armaan mom's death she was allways there with armaan and have never let him feel alone or sad]



EVERYONE HAPPLY FOR ADITYA AND SANJANA AND THERE NEW RELATION BUT STILL SANJANA CONFESSION WAS LEFT

NEXT MORNING

riddima and ishika in riddhima room

ridd: hi ishq what happenned you ever here soo early in the morning anythink serious ?

ishq: hey riddzs actually i m going to delhi for 3 days with mom dad


ridd: this is not fare you r going like this and that too for 3 days [like a child ] anyways u just enjoy yourself and please come back soon

ishq: ya i will ok bye will miss you

ridd: i will miss you too

[ishika went after bidding bye to riddhima and now a again a plan is cooking up in riddhima mind ]

[riddhima immediately maid her way to armaan room]

armaan was sleeping it was around 10 am now

ridd: armaan [moving towards his bed ]

ridd: armaan get up [shaking his shoulder]

[after no reply she shaked him really hard]

ridd: [angryly] armaan its allready 10 , get up now

armaan: [irritated] what is it let me sleep

[by then entered dev]

dev: hey riddzs ye abhi tak soo raha hai

ridd: armaan that's it get up in a second or else

armaan: oh god mummy let me sleep

dev: riddzs leave him yaar , you tell me is there any problem

ridd: ya we have to leave this house right now

dev: [confused] what ?

ridd: actually saanjh is comming

dev: so what's a big deal in that , she come over here everyday

ridd: dev you don't get anythink , saanjh is comming and if we three will be here then adi and saanjh will not get a chance to talk alone

dev: oh , ok so you ean we three have to goo on a picnik for today

ridd: yaa thats what i m saying , thats why i was waking him up [towards armaan] but he is just not listenning to mee , saanjh will be here in an hour and we have to leave before that

armaan: [still in half sleep] you both goo i m not going anywhere

ridd:[irritatedly] armaan

[dev , pointed riddhima towards the water jug kept on the table and riddhima got an idea of wakeing him up she quikly picked the jug and was about to pour water on armaan when armaan just got up and holded her hand ]

armaan: ye kya ho raha hai riddhima ji , you were trying to puor this on mee

riddhima tried to free her hands but armaan was more stronger ,
armaan took the water jug in his hand and emptied the whole water on riddhima ]

[riddhima all wet now]

ridd: [angryly] armaan how dare you , i m not going to leave you now

[she got up from the bed to hit armaan but before she can do anythink
armaan was quick enought to run into the washroom and close the door ]

[dev can't doo anythink except for just keep on laughing]

ridd: i m not going to leave you armaan just wait and watch that

AFTER AROUND HALF HOUR

ridd: [ standing outside armaan rooms washroom] armaan jaldi karo

armaan: [shouting from inside the washroom] ha ha aa raha hu

ridd: oh god , ladkiyo ko bhi itana time nahi lagta ready hone mein jitna
tumhe lagta hai

armaan: [coming out of the wastroom still not dressed , wearing a vest and a capery] aa gaya , chal ab mere maa , let mee see mujhe kya pehnna hai


[ armaan now went towards his wardrobe and started thinking what to wear , first selecting and then rejecting and riddhima simply getting irritated]

dev: [entering the room , and seeing armaan soo confused ] armaan why r you soo confused , just pick any of the clothes and wear them whats a big deal

ridd: [irritated] try and understand dev , armaan ki reputation , town ki saare girls isse hi to dekhti hai [sarcastically]

armaan: excatly , saare girls marte hai armaan singh per

ridd: ya right , why not , per unhe kya patta ki armaan singh ko ready hone mein girls se bhi jyada time lagta hai

armaan: shut up now and let me see what to wear

ridd: oh god ! you r taking soo much of time in dress selection i wonder what you gonna do in office how you gonna take that big big business decetions there

[armaan and dev confused lokking ar her]

ridd: what ? don't look at me like this , uncle raj had allready told me that you three r planning to join our business soon and gonna work on few projects in india to learn from them

dev: yaa that yes dad said that we should learn how to work in office and afterall after few years we three only have to handle all this business so we thought of starting with few small small projects infact aditya has allready started working on one project

ridd: but i wonder that if you three start working on business projects then when r you guys gonna attend the college we still have our finaly year of college left

dev: riddzs we will go to college regularly , this office work is a part time , just to learn a bit , and to get famillier with our business

ridd: yaa thats why adi is soo bust in that new project since morning , i m sure he is going to be the best business man

armaan: you don't worry riddhima not only along with adi we will also become perfect business

ridd: you and perfect , forget it

armaan: listen you what do you mean ?

ridd: [irittated] shut up you stupid ,idiot, moron we r allready very late and that to just because of you now you go and wear some clothes first

armaan: i think tere dimaag ke saath saath na tere aankhein bhi kharaab ho gaye hai , i m allready wearing clothes

ridd: [trying hard controlling her anger] , you moron , apne is stupid sence of humour ko apne paas rakho and now get ready because we have to go and that to before sanjana arrives here

armaan: ok madam ok 2 minutes i will be there

[riddhima and dev went down stairs and r waiting for armaan in the living room aditya was sitting there on a sofa busy with the files]

adi: whats the matter ? you guys soo perfectly dressed and why r you roaming from here to there ?

ridd: nothing adi actually me , armaan aur dev are going out

[now ridhima don't want to tell aditya that they r going out of the house soo that he and sanjana can spent some time alone]

adi: but where ?

ridd: we r .....we
[ thinking a perfect excuse but before she can say armaan said from behind ]

armaan: actually we r going on Date

adi: [ confused] on a date , whose Date ?

dev:[controlling the situation] Mine....mine yaa adi , its my date today

adi: oh , all the best then to you and you both [towards armaan and riddhima]

armaan: we both r also going on a Date

adi: [shocked] what ?

ridd: [to shocked] what !!

armaan: riddhima , we both were going to help dev with his date ,, right [armaan signalling riddhima through eyes to just say yes]

ridd: [nervously] haa ,, haa ,, adi we thought that you were busy with your project today , so we just goo and hang out like that only

adi: oh ok ....great wait i will also come with you

ridd: [instantly] no adi ! you can't come with us

adi: [confused] why ? can't i hang out with you guys ?

ridd: yes you can but you have [ confused , thinking what to say ] , yaa you have to work on this project

adi: [a bit sadly] yaa i have too , ok you guys goo ahead , we will hang out later

ridd: ok then bye [hugging him]

[riddhima moved out off the house , she than took a deep breath , it was next to impossible for her to lie to aditya ,it was a difficult work and she very well know that aditya was not at all convinced by her , but still she tried]


armaan also now came out

armaan: riddhima can't you lie properly , abhi saara plan fail ho jaata
ridd: kya karu armaan i don't have PHD Degree on 'HOW TO LIE PERFECTLY' like you have

armaan: that's why you r simply a dumbo

dev: ok no more fights please lets goo

[they prooceeds towards there car , armaan and dev sat in front and riddhima on the back seat ]

armaan driving

armaan: soo what's the plan , what shall we doo now ?
ridd: let me think first let goo to the mall , lets do some shopping with lunch and then we will watch some nice movie and at the end dinner in some cool place

armaan: oh god ! what a boring plan

ridd: ok fine soo you only make a plan mr supercool [angry]

armaan: offcourse i m going to make it now [now seeing riddhima angry from the car mirror] ok ok lets go to mall

[armaan was too good at heart , he don't wanna dissapoint riddhima , so he just agreed with that boring plan]


MEANWHILE SAME TIME AT THERE HOME


adi still sitting in the living room busy in his work , sanjana came there standing on the door

sanjana: [very politely] hi
aditya raised his head from the files and saw sanjana silence for a second

adi: hi, come in [ackwardly]

saanjh: [politely] actually main riddhima se

adi: ridzs is not at home she is gone out with armaan and dev

saanjh: what! i told her that i m comming still she went away

adi: she knew that you r going to come [now adi understanding the story a bit] now i got it

saajh: what you got

adi: nothing , nothing at all hey why r you still standing you can sit over here

saanjh: [ackwardly] no .....no its ok i will come later

adi: [understanding her ] its ok saanjh , you can come over here

[they both were really cute both wanna spend time with each other , but both feeling shy to say that ]

saanjh: [looking around in the house there was noone there except the two] where r all the servents adi ?

adi: ya actually today is everyone's off you come and sit will you like to have somethink to eat i was just about to order the food from a hotel

saajh: fron hotel , if you dont mind shall i cook somethink for you ?

adi: no its fine i will order from a hotel

saanjh: its ok adi , i will manage and i knew that you like home cooked food only i will get it for you

[and she got up and went towards the kitchen]

only then aditya mobile rang up , he looked at it , it was riddhima

adi: hello

ridd: saanjh aa gaye [very casually]

adi: [calmly] so it was all you planning right , tu kabhi nahi sudhrege [with fake anger]



ridd: [laughing] stop acting as if you r angry with me adi cause i m sure dil hi did mein you r thanking me for this and you r thinking that i m soo good to doo all this for you right

adi: [he laughed because actually riddhima was right] ok .....well where r you guys right now ?

ridd: you don't worry at all adi ....wherever we r , we canassure you that we will not disturb you guys till tonight

adi: [shyly] ridds
ridd: [irritated] oh ho , adi now stop blushing like that and go and be with her and yaa don't talk about that valley and temple's hundred yers back story like you did in the restaurant [teasing him]

adi: ok my princess now can i put the phone down

ridd: [laughing and teasing] oh ho , someone's really eager to cut this call and be with someone

[dev and armaan were just laughing on the chat as she was talking with adi on loudspeaker]

armaan: riddzs stop irritating him yaar , come on cut the call now just stop teasing him [agian sarcastically teasing adi]

adi: [irritated] shup up armaan

ridd: ok adi bye , all the best

dev: and yes adi enjoy yourself

[riddhima end the call , three of them were laughing and giving a high 5 , as there plan was succesful now]



AT THE HOUSE
AFTER THE CALL

[adi went in the kitchen to help sanjana]

[helping each other and sometimes lost in each other eyes , they were having there best time together]



BACK TO AR
THEY REACHED THE SHOPPING MALL

they went inside , to a simple garments shop

dev: riddzs now don't tell me that you r gonna shop for you and taking hours to do that

riddzs: no dev , acctually i just wanna take somethink for adi you know naa i just wanna give him some gift

armaan: ok then lets go to the men section

armaan entered the shop and as usuall start flirting with the sales girl and dev and armaan busy in there work

riddhima [complitely ignoring them] started choosing a shirt for adi

riddhima noticed armaan

armaan: [to a sales girl] hey gorgeous

sales girl: yes sir , how may i help you [politey] [and not ignoring armaan charm she was soo busy with him and armaan in his usuall style flirting]


riddhima noticing all this from the shirt counter

ridd: [to herself] ye kabhi nahi sudhrega


suddenly riddhima heard sameone commenting from behind [a voice from behind ]

voice: bewaakoof hai , itani khubsoorat ladke saath hai , aur vo sales girls ke saath flirt kar raha hai


riddhima turned around , she was bit angry hearing this comment there was sameer standing {remember sameer , he became there friend in college on there first day , he was impressed with riddhima from the very first day ,since then he is trying his luck on riddhima but never got a chance as riddhima was either with armaan or dev or aditya all the time]

ridd: hey hi samm , tum yahaa ?

sameer: [trying to flirt] yaa i was just following you

rid: oh really sameer tumhe main hi mille hu flirt karne ke liye

sameer: mille , to bahut magar tumhaare jaise nahi mille

ridd: enought , enought sam bahut ho gaya stop kidding now [just unaware of his intention .,riddima thought that he was just a harmless flirt just like armaan and dev ]

sameer: ok ok se my real feeling are looking like a joke to you

[armaan noticed riddhima chatting with sameer , dev comes to armaan]

dev: ye sameer iski problem kya hai , jahaa riddzs hote hai wahe aa jaata hai

armaan: means ?

dev: can't you see how is he trying to flirt with riddzs

armaan: [armaan was feeling the same but still ] dev he is a our classmate in our college may be he is just

dev: armaan you did'nt knew anythink , do you know anythink about his intentions

armaan: i don't knew i mean i find him weird at times , but i think he is just a harmless flirt

dev: not at all actually one of my friend overheard his discussion in his group regarding riddzs and then only i came to knew about his intention he is such a cheap guy i tell you armaan

armaan: [angry , how can anyone think like that about his riddhima ] why did'nt you told me all this earlier , i m not going to leave him [moving forward towards sameer]

dev: [stopping him] armaan , relax they were just talking about her , please don't get soo hyper

armaan: talking about her , how dare he even think about riddhima like that

dev: armaan calm down please don't get so angry

armaan: ok ok dev , i m relaxed don't worry i will not fight with him


[so he went there ok now time to admitt armaan do feel jealous that how can anyone think about his best friend like that and this sameer is allways behind riddhima]

armaan: hi sameer , how r u [very cleverly coming and standing between riddima and sameer]

sameer: hey ammy , i m fine , you tell hope you r fine too

armaan: ya i was earlier , but i don't knew about now [sarcastically]

ridd: [noticing armaan comment]. armaan are you ok ? [calmly]

armaan: [to riddhima] can we leave if you are through with your damm Shopping [ANGRYLY]

ridd: [a bit scared of armaan reaction] armaan r u

armaan: [still angry] riddhima just leave

[dev took riddhima away from ther and dev and riddhima went out , and armaan stayed there ]

armaan: [very calmly controlling his anger] listen sameer , this is my first and actually last warning to u , stay away from riddhima , i don't even wanna see your damm face near riddhima otherwise

sameer: [arrogantly] hey ammy relax i was just talking to riddzs

[as he said riddhima as riddzs armaan anger raised up]

armaan: RIDDHIMA , her name is Riddhima , and you don't you even dare to take her name got it

sameer: ok cool ammy relax , i will never take this name again ...ok

[armaan left the mall angryly and sameer left behind]

sameer: [mummering to himself] not the name armaan now i will take the full riddhima away , now you just wait and watch

[riddima was hell angry with armaan with his behavior with her ]

in the parking lot


ridd: armaan whats you problem , why did you reacted like this [very angry]
armaan: please riddhima lets go from here right now
ridd: what you did'nt even let me talk to samm

armaan: samm [angry on listening her calling sameer as samm] listen i m telling you this , you just stay away from him

ridd: [calmly] armaan

armaan: no arguments riddhima that boy is not at all good soo you just stay away from him

ridd: what is this armaan , saty away and all this is not done , dev atleast you speak somethink

dev: [supporting armaan] armaan is right riddhima , just be away from him and thats all

ridd: ok fine [and she angryly sits in the car mummering to herself] ' allways used to take care of mee like i m a small kid , jab dekho , gussa karte rehte hai ,i can very well take care of myself, idiot ,donkey , monkey '

dev: [outside the car] armaan ,relax , i think you shall say sorry to her , you actually overrected on her ,

armaan: [calming his anger] what should i doo yaar ., i was not able to control my anger as i saw that sameer , i just can't take him in front of mee

dev: armaan relax its ok , now you think about madam's anger she is damm angry

armaan: oh god please save me from her anger

ridd: there is no need to ask for help from god because i m not going to get angry with you and i m not even gonna fight with you , infact i just don't wanna talk to you

armaan sat inside the car and start driving again , and riddhima actually not interested in talking
armaan: [to gain her attention] well dev , i m feeling damm hungry
dev: yaa me too and its allready lunch time soo where shall we go for lunch ?
armaan: lets do one think , lets goo to hotel maharaja
[armaan thought now riddihima will argue , with him because he knew very well that riddhima hate that hotel and never want to go there]
[but seeing no reaction he understood she was really angry ]
armaan: [very politely] riddzs , ok now thats it , kitna bhaav khaaege [silence] say somethink atleast
ridd: first you scolded me in the mall and said me to keep quite and now you r asking me to speak [very innocently like a child]
armaan: ok , promise i will never doo like this ever agian
ridd: pakka promise
armaan: yaa promise
ridd: better [coming back to normal] and yaa don't you even think of going for lunch in that cheap hotel

armaan: [smilingly] ok as you say madam


[they had there lunch and then they went for a movie , as per riddhima plan but all the time in movie , armaan and dev were just irritating riddima with there comment everytime on the movie , as they were really getting bored by that movie after sometime riddhima also start feeling that the movie was damm bore soo she also joined dev and armaan with there useless commenting session on the movie and enjoying disturbing others in the hall]
Later in the Evening
They planned to go to there favorate CLUB
in the disco they were enjoying themselves
THEY DANCED TOGETHER ON THE SONG DESI GIRL FROM DOSTAANA JUST LIKE IN HE MOVIE
sorry was not able to write the lyrics soo here's the you tube link for the song
PLEASE CONSIDER DEV And ARMAAN as abhishek and john and RIDDHIMA as priyanka

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2C0SEIjc7A


so at the end they were soo tired that they went back home
Aditya and Sanjana had there really good time together talking with each other just like that the bit of shyness was still there between them


EVERY THINK WAS GOING NORMALLY
THEY 6 WERE HAPPLY LIVING TOGETHER IN THERE BEUTIFUL WORLD UNTILL SOMEONE ENTERED THERE LIFE TO MESS UP EVERYTHINK
PRECAP : a new entry in college
and a very serious fight betwenn riddhima aditya and armaan
riddhima really upset with adi and armaan
THATS ALL FOR NOW
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED THIS PART TOO
PLEASE DOO LEAVE YOUR COMMENT AS THEY MEAN A LOT TO MEE
LOTS OF LOVE
SIMI
Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago

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