Mayur FF: Lost and Found - V Day Spcl. - Pg 94 - Page 73

Originally posted by: Sunita182

hello debby,

:) how are you ???

This is brilliant as always .. :) I enjoyed reading it veryyyy muchh ... I wish all tat happend to me . lol :D

You are a gem. You write beautifully. There is no doubt , tat you are one of the best writers we have HERE On IF. Personally , your work is the best I've read on here. and no lie , you parallel with a professional.

Reading ur FFs always makes my day :) ... n this has definitely added some colour to my otherwise very dull , unromantic day lol ..


Also, I have missed quite alot of parts in the middle but which i promise to read wehn i get time . :)

I hope you are ok ..

Happy Valentine's Day .

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Debby, that was an wonderful story! I read it all start to finish over the past two days. Your writing style and character development are so perfect, I don't even know what more to say. Actually everything about this FF has made me completely speechless.

My favorite chapter would have to be the one where Mayank and Nupur had the fight and split up. I know you must think that's strange since that was such a sad chapter...but what can I say....you just did such an excellent job with the emotions, thoughts and dialogue that I couldn't help feeling like I could completely understand what Nupur was going through. I could imagine the scene unfolding around me and wished I could give jer a hug and tell her that everything would be okay.

Now about your characters...absolutely brilliant work! Not only were all the characters unique and likeable but they were also true to life and realistic. I can totally see a little of Samrat in one of my guy friends...and Gunjan reminded me of my cousin. This definitely made the story more relatable for me.

Great ending! After all the anger and tears, it was nice to see Nupur and Mayank happy. I kinda wish it hadn't ended so soon though...I miss the story already...

Thanks for the opportunity to read such an amazing FF. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

debby!!! 🤗 yayyy!! u updated!!! bt last part....soo soon!!!:((
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debby!!! really sorry for the late comment...had exams n den fell sick so i was barely ol!! :((( and i miss u!!! :(
OMGGG i can't tell u hw happy i was wen i saw ur PM!!!! 😃 but den i realised dat dis is ur las part...not fair debby!!! i'm gonna miss ur FF loadss!!! and nw u havta write a few FF soon!!! or maybe...considering the fact dat ur soooo busy u can write oneshots!!😉😆
anyways... LOVEDDDDDD the updateee!!! the gunur convo was sooo gunur-ish...i loved how nups got angry wid mayu n gunji was trying to calm her down!!! and mayu...OMGGGG!!! i never knew he cud get soo naughty....troubling nupur and telling her he won't be home bt he does cum bt den goes once shes abt to wake up!!! OMG!!! awwww....and dat poem!! its was shooooooo sweet!!! awesome, fantastic, wonderful, brilliant updateee!!!! and hav i ever told u i love how u portray nupur and mayanks characters in ur FF?? i loved this update and ur whole FF!!! thanks for the PM!!