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Posted: 15 years ago

#711

debby!!! 🤗 yayyy!! u updated!!! bt last part....soo soon!!!:((
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debby!!! really sorry for the late comment...had exams n den fell sick so i was barely ol!! :((( and i miss u!!! :(
OMGGG i can't tell u hw happy i was wen i saw ur PM!!!! 😃 but den i realised dat dis is ur las part...not fair debby!!! i'm gonna miss ur FF loadss!!! and nw u havta write a few FF soon!!! or maybe...considering the fact dat ur soooo busy u can write oneshots!!😉😆
anyways... LOVEDDDDDD the updateee!!! the gunur convo was sooo gunur-ish...i loved how nups got angry wid mayu n gunji was trying to calm her down!!! and mayu...OMGGGG!!! i never knew he cud get soo naughty....troubling nupur and telling her he won't be home bt he does cum bt den goes once shes abt to wake up!!! OMG!!! awwww....and dat poem!! its was shooooooo sweet!!! awesome, fantastic, wonderful, brilliant updateee!!!! and hav i ever told u i love how u portray nupur and mayanks characters in ur FF?? i loved this update and ur whole FF!!! thanks for the PM!!

Edited by drishti_sajan - 15 years ago

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#712

Heyyyy debby
Fab update yaar
Really loved reading it

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#713

It was Fab liked it

Mayu did so much for her

But agn u didnt pm me

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#714

loved it yaar..is it the end??so soon...gonna miss it...

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#715

Debby, that was an wonderful story! I read it all start to finish over the past two days. Your writing style and character development are so perfect, I don't even know what more to say. Actually everything about this FF has made me completely speechless.

My favorite chapter would have to be the one where Mayank and Nupur had the fight and split up. I know you must think that's strange since that was such a sad chapter...but what can I say....you just did such an excellent job with the emotions, thoughts and dialogue that I couldn't help feeling like I could completely understand what Nupur was going through. I could imagine the scene unfolding around me and wished I could give jer a hug and tell her that everything would be okay.

Now about your characters...absolutely brilliant work! Not only were all the characters unique and likeable but they were also true to life and realistic. I can totally see a little of Samrat in one of my guy friends...and Gunjan reminded me of my cousin. This definitely made the story more relatable for me.

Great ending! After all the anger and tears, it was nice to see Nupur and Mayank happy. I kinda wish it hadn't ended so soon though...I miss the story already...

Thanks for the opportunity to read such an amazing FF. Looking forward to reading more from you.

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#716

hey debby! this was an amazing FF.i read all the parts in one go & loved it the core! u r a gifted writer........plz add me to ur buddy list.i don't wanna miss any other amazing FF of urs!!!!!!!!!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#717

Originally posted by: Senny
hey debby,

How have you been? it has been agesssssssssssss and agesssssss since i have spoken to you, misss you loads and loads debs.

I lovedddddd the last part and i am sooooooooo glad that we got one from you hehe. i love surprises and i loveddddd this one too, i have always loved the way you write and it reminded of all the old parts and especially, most importantly of you man, I really liked the poems and the meaning of those words were so touching and so mayankish, he has always been so intense yet subtle and calm.

I lovedddddd the hyper nupur and i loveddddd the way naughty mayank came out and rang the door bell to bug nupur. i love the way you portrayed the husband and wife relationship.

Excellent work debs, misssssss you and your posts loads and loadsssssssssss.

Love you always.

God bless.

@Senny: hey Senny! *hugs* Seriously, its been SO very long. Hope you are doing great. I miss talking to you too... hope we can catch up soon sumtime.

I am glad you liked this last chapter. Wrote it after such a long hiatus...You have always been so supportive of all I come up with. I am blessed to have a critic like you. ;) Thanks a lot darling!

🤗

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: myownarea
Hey Debby 🤗

HAppy Valentine's day 🤗

Missed u loads!! Now am gonna miss this FF as well!! I just love this one so much ...makes me sad and happy for MAyank and Nupur, These 2 are hardly characters of fiction anymore, they have a special place in the heart (as sappy as it may sound) ..its true :) so it makes me happy to c that they are together:)

It was good to know that u'd come back for this update, but now? I dunno, u r hardly around :(

Do keep dropping in :) miss u:)

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Divya

@Divya: Hey!! Hope you had a terrific Valentine's. :D Thanks a lot ya, as always. I love hearing from you. The Mayank and Nupur in this story are close to my heart for various reasons... that is why I don't mind their flaws and have often rambled on and off. Its so good to know you liked them too! 😃

Miss you too. Lets hope we stay in touch.

🤗

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#719

Debby, i didnt knw u have updated........

Missed u loads and i will miss this ff too......

It was one of my favs......... the way u brought MN to life in this was simply amazing.......

Plz do keep dropping in, so tht we can still be frnds......

Love u loads for the lovely V-day part

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: shinz
hey debby...*hugs*....so good to see u yaar..!
and i missed this FF so much LOL..i am in love with it right o..!~
and the VDAY treat that u gave...is so awesome ....like totally tres cute.....and somehow warm...the homely feeling is so seeping into me i dunno why.......his caring side...hayyeee...i always knew....our mayank is like...such a perfect hubby na..!!
am so ...SO glad u updated...but now i'll miss this FF even more..! this one was beautiful......!!
i dunno when may we expect something more from u.....seeing that u are really busy....but whenevr it is........u remember whom to PM na? LOL..!
Lovely end......!!!
BTW..i wrote an FF too..not upto ur standards...but yeah.....my first attempt..!

Hey Shinz! 🤗

How have you been?? Ooh I am so glad you used the adjectives you did. Warm and homely is exactly what riding into the sunset does to me and its great to know you felt that way! *smug face*

Sure thing sweetie. Will PM you whenever I come up with something else.
You started an FF too? How cool is that! Oh come, considering how romantic you are, I am sure it will be amazing... will read asap.

Thanks once again!

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