#2 Dill Ki Chahat... NOT UPDATING SOON

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Zahra

@Xiahtic-5

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

Hey Lali,

waow yaar that was a surprise n congrats for completing one year on IF,

wel that was awesome the part was superb brilliant yaar,

ooh so sad Nikki, Muski, n Riddhi part was funny but a bit sad as well i hope they will stay like this,

hm secret abt adoption papers looks liks Armaan is adopted because KD never paid any attention to him n Ridhi n Abhi part was also fun opposite,

n precap is looking really interesting do continue the next part plz Lali don't make us wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

Nice Part!! 👏👏👏
Really liked it!!

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@star_fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

Reserved (Hope i won't be Ms. Late Latif this time 😉)

Happy 1st Anniversary on IF (Sorry i forget to wish you but i have planned to wish but unfortunately spilled from my little brain. *holding ears*)

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Armaan and his dad scene starting was so sweet but ending was sad. I like the way you written. Great !

Hmm Who is adopted ? As you written, it shows Armaan being adopted and also the relation KD and Armaan have shows that but i still wanna know as i don't trust your suspense mind.

One more question as Dadi asked KD why he let Armaan go in the library alone but Abhi must go there usually due to work then why she asked when Armaan went there ?

Daadi and Armaan scene was so cute and lovely. It was nice and greatly written. Nice dialogues and all. I like it !

The girls trio Rocks ! Always fighting but love each other with no limit. I love the bonding between them or i say love this kind of friendships.

The scene between them was awesome. Especially the emotional part was mind blowing. Superb job done Ms. Lali. 👍🏼

Hello hello Madam !!! Excuse me, What is this ? First you totally changed the evergreen falling style and then you also changed the heroine. I mean you made and the girl hold the boy from falling and then the girl turned to be Riddhima instead of Nikita. Why ? What is in your suspense mind ? But anyways it was nice but not nice scene as it wasn't Armaan. 😵 Greatly written, i can't deny that.

Malik's family emotional scene was awesome as well. It was superbly written like of girls one. I like it ! Well done !!!

Can i say AR meeting scene is coming soon in next part ? If yes then do tell me when you updating. Today or tomorrow ? 🤔

Haha Muskaan being so funny as usual and Riddhima and Nikita can't stop teasing her. Haha Preet tried to hold her.

Overall it was awesome part. Very very very nicely written and interesting and enjoyable. I like it but definitely more excited and looking forward for next part. 😃😛

Precap: Do i shout ? AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!! AR meeting is coming...coming...coming very soon. AWESOMEEEEEEEE precap. I am definitely looking forward.
When you updating ? Please be soon.

I know i know somehow Riddhima and Armaan will miss their bus ? If yes then they must be going on same bus ? Means they must be sitting together and then BLAST !

Waiting for both updates ! 😉

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Nadz_YuNalover

@Nadz_YuNalover

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#324

Awesum update wow, i simply loved it! plz do continue soon!

luv
Nadz

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#325

grt part continue soon

tnx for the pm

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#326

awesome part lali.. :D aww.. the departure scene was too emotional.. :(( but the precap is to wait for.. :D continue soon... :D

soni <3

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vruls

@vruls

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Posted: 15 years ago

#327

really nice part
loved the interaction of the 3 girls
pls continue soon
n thanks for the pm
Love Sanam

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Tamanna

@dmg 4lyf

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Posted: 15 years ago

#328

heyy lali

m extremely sorry for such a late reply

i knoe i am the limits really

m soooo sorry

bt yaar dse days i was very bzy

many exams and projects

ur update was really awesum

luved the girl trio

and congratulations for ur 1st anniversary

m saying that soo late i know

n m damn excited for the next part after seeing the precap

update soon 😊 😊

luv-tamanna

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#329

Lali..
Congrats for turning one :) 🥳

I loved this part.. you portyayed so many relationships and interactions in this one.. all so beautifully..

I was thinking AN would meet in this one but you devil... do you feel happier to keep us waiting 😃

But the part between abhi and ridhima was hillarious.. i still cant stop smiling about it.. reverse roles :) very nice..

You got muskaan and her crazyness towards their bags so well..

I also wonder if niki knows about the land she owns ? :o probably not i guess...

I am just ran through the other 2 FF parts you pmed and saw no AN in them at all... 😡 So i am going to read those parts probably over weekend when I have little spare time.. will post comments for them then :)

And last but not least Update sooon..

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