#2 Dill Ki Chahat... NOT UPDATING SOON - Page 31

Originally posted by: star_fan

Updated my post with comment on page no. 38<br>

Originally posted by: flaming_saphire

hey...... sorry 4 da late comment.

well da part was awesum.

really enjoyed reading it.

waiting 4 da next part.

plz continue soooooooooooon.

n thnx 4 sending da pm.

..PROMO 13..

Niki – I… I… she stammered, choking on her own words I… will miss you

Riddhi – hugging her tightly mujhe pata hai… I will miss you too… apna kyaal rakh… aur … aur… tears were starting to form in her eyes too, making it hard for her to keep them back

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Bi – yeh loh… handing something in a small container but rapped around with a foil tightly

Riddhi – Bi.. eek aur.. hamara bag mein bohot sara khaana hai.. Bi hum abroad thodi jaarahi hai hum toh Mumbai…

Bi – arey pagli yeh tum dono keliyeh nahi Riddhi's excited face fall yeh toh Shashank keliyeh… mere haatho ka khana use bohot pasand hai…

Riddhi – Shashank…?Oh Chachu..?

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Originally posted by: LaLi17

lol dont worry im a late bump than ur... 😃 well i have red the comment the day u said u posted it.. just couldnt be bothered too u know wat i mean...
You are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late than me...I thought you aren't fine.

is it oh im sorry.. i think giving u parts like 100th special n etc now u made it a habit to read longer updates...
Nah..I like only long updates....Almost of the writers whom i had read are long updaters.

I will try to keep my amount of thanks giving speech low.. 😆. Glad you enjoyed it thanks.. hehe yep thats muskaan..
Good girl ! lol Yeah i really enjoyed it.

urmm let me guess.. urm i think cause muski just wanna be diffrent u see jungly billi style.. well my question to u why cant she come through the window.. lolz
Oh then you should have mentioned that somehow. I mean i was thinking that she came from window then must be doing something but nothing happen. Sorry to say, if you don't mind you just lack a little here only in this part. Becoz i think she enter in unique way so she will do something or if not then you should have mentioned Jungly Billi thing. Hope you don't mind.

well see entertainment keliye kuch bhi.. 😆 THANKS!!
Do 'Sony' channel pay you to promote their shows ?

THANK U SOO MUCH glad u enjoyed it this much it encourage more to write these kind of scenes n that im not bad at it 😳😳
It was fantastic over all. And yeah you aren't bad at it..Even you great at it....😊

lol malik brothers i like that hehe thanks again.. wow lol i really cant believe i did it well..! i wanted to give it all like in a film or tv thing so im glad it worked
Yeah you did it amazingly. Nah not in films or TV thing becoz it's like in a novel or book. I don't read novels and all but i can say that the way you wrote Abhi's part is like that. BEST part of you FF in writing POV.

wow r u seriosue? i guess i get more into writing it spot on as im not a boy or dono all the boy stuff so i dont really think much before writing the girls part.. more effort thats the word lol.. aww how sweet ofu ur really sweet like a sugar candy.. dont wory i wont eat u tho
Yes, i am totally serious. Yeah right ! Thank you. Sugar Candy, please no otherwise flies will be on me. lol

I truly say this must part is must be a short one but it's a SUPERB one. Awesomely written ! Or i say I am amazed with the part. The only place where you lacked is the part i mentioned you that is nothing, just 0.1% of this part. And this part is such awesomely written that you can't notice that 0.1%. It rocked 99.9% in writing POV.

*cough* *cough* Mr. Suspense Lover ???
when did i said that..
You need to check the part to find this.

YES a big yess lol btu not wat u thinking.. lolz..
Ok what I am thinking ? Bolo, Tell Tell.

i'll try to do soon n im sorry for not doing as i promised to do.. well i'll try my best to.. yes mam.. there will be some interactions..

Yeah please be soon. I am longing for AR interaction scenes. Please get there fast !

Originally posted by: star_fan

I am too much late...I am an late latif...😆 But i have read it day before yesterday but replying now.
lol dont worry im a late bump than ur... 😃 well i have red the comment the day u said u posted it.. just couldnt be bothered too u know wat i mean...

Why the part is so short ? It start and end with it as well.
is it oh im sorry.. i think giving u parts like 100th special n etc now u made it a habit to read longer updates...

Riddhima and Muskaan scene : It is a FANTASTIC scene. It was so funny. Muskaan and her antics.
I will try to keep my amount of thanks giving speech low.. 😆. Glad you enjoyed it thanks.. hehe yep thats muskaan..

At Niki house : First, i want to ask that why Muskaan had came into the room through the window ? *confuse* lol
But it was another piece of entertainment after Ridz and Muski scene. It is also FANTASTIC.
urmm let me guess.. urm i think cause muski just wanna be diffrent u see jungly billi style.. well my question to u why cant she come through the window.. lolz

well see entertainment keliye kuch bhi.. 😆 THANKS!!
The talks over Raj Kumar and all just fabulous. Nik's your DREAM MAN will be coming to you soon. 😉
yep thats a good advise mahu.. hehe she will she will..

Both the scene of girls were just so funny and enjoyable and the dialogues and the scene is written awesomely. Great job !
THANK U SOO MUCH glad u enjoyed it this much it encourage more to write these kind of scenes n that im not bad at it 😳😳

Mailk Residence or Malik brothers : I must say this first that the Abhi scene means describing his emotions, feeling towards the presentation, it was written BRILLIANTLY. You have OUTSTANDING job in writing that part.
lol malik brothers i like that hehe thanks again.. wow lol i really cant believe i did it well..! i wanted to give it all like in a film or tv thing so im glad it worked

Armaan room scene was mind blowing. Greatly described.
oh thanks!! yahooo

Even i think you have done extra effort in writing 'Malik Residence' scene.. I mean both scenes mean whether Abhi's one and Armaan's one both described awesomely. You really have SUPERB...BEST job in writing it.
wow r u seriosue? i guess i get more into writing it spot on as im not a boy or dono all the boy stuff so i dont really think much before writing the girls part.. more effort thats the word lol.. aww how sweet ofu ur really sweet like a sugar candy.. dont wory i wont eat u tho

The conversation between both brothers were so great. The dialogue and comedy was fantastic. Everything used nicely and perfectly.
lol hehe 😆 thanks.. i guess im getting good comedy now

*cough* *cough* Mr. Suspense Lover ???
when did i said that..

PRECAP : Hmm something really interesting going come, yes or no ?
YES a big yess lol btu not wat u thinking.. lolz..

Overall part is short BUT it is written SUPERBLY. And it is very enjoyable and interesting in reading. And also so funny.
hehe srry.. thanks dude.. ur chooooo chweet

Continue soon and next part should be long in length with some interesting scenes and interactions.
i'll try to do soon n im sorry for not doing as i promised to do.. well i'll try my best to.. yes mam.. there will be some interactions..

Originally posted by: star_fan

You are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late than me...I thought you aren't fine.
awww that much care lol i know i know u dont need to say it.. i was stuck with soo much skl work so yeh n i didnt had that excitment to come IF anyways srry abt the post orde i had to edit the first post for the promo.. hope u dont mind

Nah..I like only long updates....Almost of the writers whom i had read are long updaters.
lol now thats no suprise for some1 who has so many to say must like longer parts.. just like the comment 😉... well im not in that list for this time lolz

Good girl ! lol Yeah i really enjoyed it.
thats good great to know

Oh then you should have mentioned that somehow. I mean i was thinking that she came from window then must be doing something but nothing happen. Sorry to say, if you don't mind you just lack a little here only in this part. Becoz i think she enter in unique way so she will do something or if not then you should have mentioned Jungly Billi thing. Hope you don't mind.
oh yeh i didnt thought abt it then but now i get wat u mean.. yeh well i think i didnt wrote that part or post that bit.. i remember writing somethign like she wanted to scare her off u know give her the suprise but she failed because niki was already in sleep so she cant get the shock of her lifetime.. u know wat i mean..? probbaly i didnt typed it in here.. of course i dont mind but i love it cause letting me know my weakness is the whole point commenting n it will make me improve no one is perfect u see lolz n beeing a good friend that wat u should do right.. see it's hamara 'Pyar ka Bandhan'

Do 'Sony' channel pay you to promote their shows ?
i wish yaar.. but wat to do things come to which goes on sony although i dont watch them haha

It was fantastic over all. And yeah you aren't bad at it..Even you great at it....😊
thank u my sweet friend mwaah love u but not in that way 😆

Yeah you did it amazingly. Nah not in films or TV thing becoz it's like in a novel or book. I don't read novels and all but i can say that the way you wrote Abhi's part is like that. BEST part of you FF in writing POV.
hehe thanks well i imagine it in filmy ways where u can actually see how the character get nervouse n blah blah so i try to get everysingle thing lolz but yeh probably give me five i dont read novels but luv readin story books well i was.. tell me story book n novel arent the same right..? lol me ms confusion u see.. woohooo well wait for ar specially cause u gona see/read lot more..

Yes, i am totally serious. Yeah right ! Thank you. Sugar Candy, please no otherwise flies will be on me. lol
serious face 😳 haha no dont worry i'll hide u sumwhere 🤗

I truly say this must part is must be a short one but it's a SUPERB one. Awesomely written ! Or i say I am amazed with the part. The only place where you lacked is the part i mentioned you that is nothing, just 0.1% of this part. And this part is such awesomely written that you can't notice that 0.1%. It rocked 99.9% in writing POV.
THANKKKK YOUwhy u have to be shweety pie shonu..!? why why why? please give some sweetness frm u sugar candy please i beg u!!

You need to check the part to find this.
oh i remember now.. i meant like he loves to do suspense u know so armaan said you lover of suspense tell me wat is happening u know...

Ok what I am thinking ? Bolo, Tell Tell.
u mite be thinking its Niki..? am i rite..

Yeah please be soon. I am longing for AR interaction scenes. Please get there fast !
kk i'll try to now i updated a promo so that mean i will be updating a part soon too

Originally posted by: princess52

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Originally posted by: vruls

pls continue soon any of ur ff
cant wait to read them
thanks
Love Sanam