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Lali

@.lali.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

hey ridds... thanks!!!

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Lali

@.lali.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: sannila
nice...

thank u soo much...!

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Lali

@.lali.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: a2zahid
AMAZING...loved every bit of it n thanx 4 da pm

aww how sweet thank u soo much..!!!! THANKS!

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pari

@pari_smile

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Posted: 15 years ago

#274

lali di aapke parts ko mein sirf ek hi comment de sakti hun

Don't worry bura comment nahi hai😆😆

ur parts r always awesome and superbly written👏👏

love u diii and thanx for pm🤗

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Lali

@.lali.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: pari_smile
lali di aapke parts ko mein sirf ek hi comment de sakti hun
Don't worry bura comment nahi hai😆😆

ur parts r always awesome and superbly written👏👏

love u diii and thanx for pm🤗

hey pari... awwwwwwwww ur such a sweety pie ur too sweet yaar
lol hehe anything u say i will accept it.. as its wat i should do.. to improve.. lol 😛
THANK U SOOOOOOOO MUCH... i wanna say more than this but there is no such a thing more than this but really thank u soo much.. u r really sweet!
aww luv u too.. thanks for taking time to comment

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@star_fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#276

I am too much late...I am an late latif...😆 But i have read it day before yesterday but replying now.

Why the part is so short ? It start and end with it as well.

Riddhima and Muskaan scene : It is a FANTASTIC scene. It was so funny. Muskaan and her antics.

At Niki house : First, i want to ask that why Muskaan had came into the room through the window ? *confuse* lol
But it was another piece of entertainment after Ridz and Muski scene. It is also FANTASTIC.

The talks over Raj Kumar and all just fabulous. Nik's your DREAM MAN will be coming to you soon. 😉

Both the scene of girls were just so funny and enjoyable and the dialogues and the scene is written awesomely. Great job !

Mailk Residence or Malik brothers : I must say this first that the Abhi scene means describing his emotions, feeling towards the presentation, it was written BRILLIANTLY. You have OUTSTANDING job in writing that part.

Armaan room scene was mind blowing. Greatly described.

Even i think you have done extra effort in writing 'Malik Residence' scene.. I mean both scenes mean whether Abhi's one and Armaan's one both described awesomely. You really have SUPERB...BEST job in writing it.

The conversation between both brothers were so great. The dialogue and comedy was fantastic. Everything used nicely and perfectly.

*cough* *cough* Mr. Suspense Lover ???

PRECAP : Hmm something really interesting going come, yes or no ?

Overall part is short BUT it is written SUPERBLY. And it is very enjoyable and interesting in reading. And also so funny.

Continue soon and next part should be long in length with some interesting scenes and interactions.

Edited by star_fan - 15 years ago

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@star_fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: LaLi17

glad u liked it.. its hard to put my feet into her character lol..
Yeah i know it's a hard job and done it greatly...
hey ur not bothering me at all u understand that?!? lol well u didnt ask me so im not gona tell u.. keep it for leter.. when they meet u'll understand.. well atul not just hate Anjali for her attitude well yeh but not JUST that.. Atul hold a grudge over Anji cause she played with his love before.. ok me giving u too much info so wait n see..
Yes Ma' am. Hehe......Yeah keep it for later but girl you told a lot enough now...Nothing is suspense for me now........Are you surely planning to write a flashback of their past ?
hehe yep dont but sumtimes think good too have seen ow my cousin bro fight with his sis. lol but its fun hehe.. yep THANKS! 🥱 but i will mangae sumthing.. like armaan forced them to come.. well atul is already interest on comming.. u can see that in their convo..
Oh i can't even say 'Main hoon na'...😆
Yeah through Atul's words he will glad to join it and even after hearing about it Rahul is also interested little bit but not completely....I think you should make his father to force him to send there.
nahiiiiii.. ok ok.. np u dont know the whole story so its kk.. everything under control...
what r we on abt.. sorry i lost track lol..
Remember you asked me whether to make AR meet before Sanjeevani or not...Then i told you something and when i asked you what you decided so you say me to read it when you update but no use you told already....

i know yaar.. mayb thats why she is sab se alag.. 😆

Exactly....Even all early DMG girls are different from each other...

oh yeh we did.. then y u.. urghh.. lol its fine then.. 😃
Uff....My GOD why she don't understand jokes ?

ok then but.. oh alright np.. ur such a sweet heart glad to have a friend like u.. n me lucky to have such a ood readers..

You are also so sweet person...Me to glad to be friend with you..😊

see y i call u the IM lol.. well its a diffrent story the name was invented by u but still lol.. see we know each other quiet well now lol.. u know how much eagerly im waiting to read ur comment.. lol..will surely do and try to update soon.. probably today..

LOL...Thank you so much..Haha...Yaar this IM is just a joke kind....Well you already updated so i will read it soon and leave my comment soon.