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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Terrific, continue as soon as possible! 😊

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

my god gr8 part adi thanks lot for pm me i m really glad to see writer like you i hope in u r next part all problems will sort out 😊 please update soon i cant wait

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Hey adi, i am sooo sorry for the late reply. i just finished reading both chapters 2 and 3. Wow mayank and his evil plans. this is sooo exciting, what is he planning to do and why does he want to find out where is dia?

mayank was and is such a sweetheart, circumstances have definitely played reallly hard on fhim and he has changed soo drastically.

His internal struggle is very well narrated. Oh gosh nupur loved him from before and mayank, you blind men you just can't see.

mayank turning good, i hope its gradual and i am eagerly waiting for the part where he realises nupur is the one.

wow i definitely have butterflies in my tummy.

thanks for the pm and Great job, keep it up.

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bollyrockstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

interesting story so far!! cant wait to see how it continues! update soon plzzzz (:

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nishi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

hi!

OMG....so, this is the case. nupur is already in love with mayank.

I seriously dont know what made mayank fall in love with dia. and he is behaving like a jerk.

but thank god.......in the next part, everything will sort out.

oh! I forgot to say, awesome part!!!!

continue soon.

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afsha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Hi Additi

Supreb start sorry culdnt comment first

But plz will u mak Mayu lil less anger on Nups and toecher her Lil only

Plz yaar it really hurts to c Nups crying

Plzzzzzzz its feels its Sour revenge than Sweet revenge yaar

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

promo
oh yaar she is so hot why ,how fool im ,i dont notice it before,and look them yaar
well plz hold me i cant controll
plz some one hold me hey friends in next part you will se some change and love blossom between both of them and also a new entry to provide spark in their love and make them passinate lover

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Priyanka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
promo
oh yaar she is so hot why ,how fool im ,i dont notice it before,and look them yaar
well plz hold me i cant controll
plz some one hold me hey friends in next part you will se some change and love blossom between both of them and also a new entry to provide spark in their love and make them passinate lover

yahooooo !!!!!!........😳update soon.can't wait😳