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Posted: 16 years ago
good news finally Mayur will fall in love 😳
can't wait to read
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Aditi
Keya Promo hey yaar.
i think its going to be really amazing
cant wait more.
so plz update soon and PM me.
faria

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Posted: 16 years ago
GOSH! ur promo is killing me
update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
such a lovely concept adi....great.....love to read more on mayu's change ahead, he should realize that hatred towards nupur is wrong....promo made little bit cool....waiting for mayur romance.......but am really angry on u now u havent pmed me.....very bad...i got it when am searching for some other link...i was really mad that u havent pmed me....u had forgotten me.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

promo
oh yaar she is so hot why ,how fool im ,i dont notice it before,and look them yaar
well plz hold me i cant controll
plz some one hold me hey friends in next part you will se some change and love blossom between both of them and also a new entry to provide spark in their love and make them passinate lover

Ur sur na Additi u'll do this
Toh why waiting Yaar update jaldi plz
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Posted: 16 years ago

part 4
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next day maynk wake up and saw no signe of nupur

M-thx to god ,farly morning i dont want to see her ugly face well this morning is look to good
why i make this morning best ,he smile evily

at dinning table

M mo-nups so what u made today

N-today i made suji ka halwa

g- mom why r u asking ,dont you smeell that whole house is filled with the frgarance of halwa

n-well now no chattering eat otherwise ,i will eat it

maynk made his way downstair

m-wow mom kya smell hai,muhh mein pani aa gaya halwa

g- bhai muh band kar le varna ............

M-shut up,muhhhaaaaaa ,wow mom u dont made this ,well who made this i want to kiss the hands

Mom-then kiss nups hand she made this

M- stand up and kiss her hand

nupur was blush by this act of maynk and also shocked that whats going on

well they all left for their work nupur for her buteque an gunjan college and maynk mom to visit her friend

nupur on the way to buteque
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last year me and cj open this buteque " ANGEL" , we used to suggest others for their cothes ,style and then mom and dia suggest ma and cj that why sholdn't open a buteque ,then with the help of mom and dia ,cj we open it
and now it's working very well
in last six months our buteque get good response in lakme fashion week and good huge response and got a contract with one singhs company and today this is our second project and today i will meeet the md of company to present my designe.

our one room buteque change into a two store and now in few month we will be here with a big office,she thought and was very happy that she can make her mom dream true

tax-mam we reach she pay ang go inside buteque

N-hi cj , so ready for the presentation

CJ( with sad expression) - sorry babes , i hav some work today , so today you hav to represent designe

n- no problem ,but i dont know where i hav to go

cj- dont worry , i will tell the driver and tell him to leave you there
(nupur becoz of marrige dont able to meet the md before)

at ss(maynk company -sharma and sikand. well banji is partoner of amynk in business)

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N-oh my god, this is may's office
she call cj

N to cj- why dont you tell me that we are dealing with maynk's company

Cj-chill babe, i want to give you surprise , i know you will be happy , now if we select then you will spend more time wid maynk so go ,and good luck

n-( with scary expression) is maynk company accompany us in this fashion week
whatever , nupur focus ur work she said to herself and go inside

benji-hey nu, what a pleasent surprise ,what happen everything ok ,you look worried?

N-nothing benji, today , i have to present my designe to md , im nervous

be-dont worry, ur the best ,well becoz how u organize mays cabin ,i know your designe shallbe the best
good luck ,im coming in ten minute
(benji and maynk are chadi buddy, )

n- thx benji , benji words made her cheery

in meeting room
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when mya saw nups he was surprised but was very professional with his work so never say anything

m-plz sit mrs. nupur

n- thx

man1- hey look at that girl ,she is looking benhenji , do you think she can able to reprsent the designe in fashion week

man2- i'm agree with you she is so low standard
nupur and maynk both listening the persone who talking
this talk increase nupur confidence and maynk was feeling happy that the person insult her.
so after 5 minute benji arrived and took his seat with maynk and the presentation start

nupur's design ,her presentation her attitude, everything was the best and soon the presentation finish
everyone in the hall fascinate with her presentation ,and two member who said harsh words to nupur were guilty
nupur - dont jugde a book with it cover ,and people with their clothes
m(in mind)- however i dont know that she is a fashion designer ,wow quite interesting and impressive too , so the girl has talent too, beauty with brain

m to n- shake his hand with her , we will be glad to work with you
n- we r also sir
b- wow congrats ,so got the contract

n- thx benji ,thx for ur support
b- well nups ur my friend and second my best friend wife too, so double relation
(in office only benji know that nupur is maynks wife,he is a complete professional at the time of work and not want his personal life to discuss in office, some member of nupur family, friends and maynk family were there in marrige)

after conversation nupur left office

M-i must say this girl has spark ,very proficient in her work , im impress
and benji and maynk talk about their other deals
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Nup-cj we got it , we got the project

cj- well i know ,becoz you r the best

n- cj we r the best(both were happy becoz now their dream come true)

nupur phone ring,dia calling

dia-nups how ru
nup-(she was crying)im fine di, how r u dii, i month ho gaya dii ,you dont call once dii, im very worried for u

dia-dont worry nup, im fine and ,i married to rv and we r happy we got job in delhi and yes life is cool nupr im very happy becoz of u ,agar tu muje nahi samjati to mein kitni badi mistake kar deti, nupur is ma still angry with me

nu-no dii ,she miss u alot ,plz talk to her , she will be happy, di today we got a big contract dii our dream come true,plz come home di
dia-and maynk
nupur kept silent and then tell her everything

dia-nupur is he love you

nu- di ,he is a nice guy and respect me ,im happy with this marrige
dia-nupur ,im the reason for this
n-no di ,im very happy with maynk,and whereis jiju
dia-well he is making pakora for me
n- how sweet but why ,he making y,what r u doing
dia- he lovesme alot so dont want me to work,
nupuer eyes clouded with water to hear this she was very happy today,im very happy for u dii,plz come back home dii
dia-nup to bhool to nahi na ke kal mom ka birthday hai.or vo gift

nu-di dont worry im going today to purchase the car ,yes dii
dia-ok i will call you tomoarw, miss u nup

cj- congrats yaar so we hav three reason to celebrate
nup-three reason

cj-first contract, second dia's marrige,third aunti birthday
nup-well dont spilt it infront mom ,then the surprise will be out ,lets go to restro.i wll call ridz and gunjan too
restro
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ridz-congrats yaar ,so now maynk and your company work together
n and cj-yes

gu-im very happy for both of you
n to ridz and gu- tomorrow mom ka birthday haibefore she complete
ridz- i know dont worry ,cake ka order de diya hai
gu-or decoration ke saman aa gaya hai
cj-or aunti ko ghar se bhar rakni ka intezaam ho gaya hai.
nupur was very happy to have such a nice friend
n- well meri life ka sabse badi strength tum sab ho ,agar tum sab na hote to mera kya hota

cj,gun,ridz-stupid tere bina hamra kya hota,and they share a big hug

n-lets go car select karne janna hai
ri-vo ,aaj muje kaam hai ,vo armaan aa raha hai
nup-kasse blush ker rahi hai ,mangater jo aa raha hai,armaan kya aaya hume hi bhool gayi

rid-shut up nup,you know i never leave you
n- sprry bab ok you go
ridz-nahin aaj muje hospital mein work hai,armaan ko uska best friend pick ker legaa
cj - or cattering ke responsibility meri
g- don;t worry mom ne sab arrange ker diya hai
n- what aunti also
g-if mom hear this she will kill you
n-oh mom but
g- vo unki bhi friend hai,bhabi i will drop you lets go with me
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and she drop her one of the maruti showroom,best showroom in bombay
per-hello mam how can i help you
nu- i want to purchase a car and the person show her different model and she like"chevrolet spark" and tell the color which she like and ask the amount
n- sir i want this car tomorrow how much time you take for this paper work
per-mam ,the color u tell us ,are not available here so may be you hav to wait for two days
n-plz sir try ,i need the car urgent
well she was talking
(this showroom owned by one of maynk friend sameer and this time benji also their when he saw nupur he go there with sameer)
ben-nupur any proiblem
n-benji ,i need this car and they said that they dont hav the color
b-dont worry i will help you
b to sa- hey sameer yaar
s- ypou know her
be-yes she is maynks wife

sm-oh sorry bhabi, dont woorry i will do this work ,and tomorrow you will get the car,she thanks benji and left

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well armaan is maynks best friend his parents lives in newyork and he was returing frm there and maynk pick him
in car
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maynk told armaan everything becoz armaan was not attend the weddingand everthing about the marrige
ar-mayn, do you think ke us ladki ne bhi kitni dreams dekhe honge apni shaddi ke, maynk she also suffering so be nice with her,and e verything willbe allright.i thnk she is not bad
and after the conversation he drop armann to his house
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on the way his mobile ring
m-hi samer after long time

s- well .im angry with you ,yaar tune shaddi kar lie not even invite me
m-well sub kuch itne jaldi hua
s-ok,yaar just kidding ,aaj bhabi se mila tab pata laga (and he tell the car incident).jb muje pata laga ke vo teri wife hai how can i denay her yaar, tell her that she forget to tell me where we hav to delever the car
m-dont worry i will take it
s- next time if u need any help then call me
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m- how cheap she used my name for her work , i will not leave her, i was thinking to behave good with her damn.........
quite late nupur was working today was the best day of her life. she discuss about tomorrow with mom and gunjan ,and she hav to tell maynk about the party too

maynk came and stright go to their room and saw nupur smiling her smile iritate him
maynk rudely grab her hand and pinned her to wall she was scared with this sudden attack she saw maynk and anger surely visible frm his face
m- nupur idont see cheaper then you in my life ,you and your sister ,first sis left marige and second use another person name for her work how cheap
nupur was tottering with his outbrust ,in cold blood he was saying her sneered her disdain her self respect.

nupur vigorously free herself frm the grip and with frown look at maynk
n- maynk i dont know what r u saying but let me clear one thing that maynk sharma i hav my money,my job and im not money minded ,i have not all luxirory that u hav but i hav my values,moralsand blessing of my parentswhy i need your name ,now if ur drma is finish i want to sleep and she fallen asleep.she was crying today he disshonered her seem everything is finish
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next day
so every body went to their work only maynmk and his mom left
m-sorry me aaj late ho gaya
mom-dont worry
m- wheer is gunjan
mom-vo party ke prepration mein busy hai
m- konsi party
mom-arrey muje lagta hai nupur bhool ,aaj uske mom ke birthday hai,so she purchased a car to present her mom
m- he felt today he was very harsh with her
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in mynk office

benji-good morning maynk, ur looking sad
m-nothing benji
be- acha kya vo car deliver ho gayi
m-you know about the car
be-yes ,im ther with sameer ,or jab muje pata laga ke nupur ko mhelp chaiya to mene he samer ko bataya ke vo teri wife hai ,or phir usne kaha ab to karna he padga,you r very lucky maynk ,she is not money minded

maynk was shocked to hear this ,he was wrong he hurt her ,when she was not at all mistaken , he was restless and decide to call her to say sorry

nupur dont pick her phone becoz she dont want to spoil the moment
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in evening

so everything is ready
well all prepration and everythind was ready when cj arrived with nups mom she was shocked to see all the decoration and hug nupur and then ridz ,armann, sam and gunjan and then maynk mom
nmom-nu where is maynk,he is not coming
and they turn
m-mom how i forget your birthday ,and he smiled and touch her feet and take ashirwad
nm-beta im very happy today my family is complete ,but she was crying

n-mom di is fine and happy dont worry.she hug her mom

m-nupur plz come with me for two minute
n-yes maynk,he gave her the key of car and also flower

m-nupur plz forgive me,i know i hurt you ,plz sorry
n- its ok now lets go

ma-arman tu
ar-well nupur is my good friend
and now boys were chatting and the cake arrive
and n mom cut the cake and she was very happy when nupur gave her her the car keys ,she hug her and
nmom-nupur i dont want it beta
n-mom this is my and dia dream to give you this

m mom-and here is some gift for my bahu and she handle her a key
n-for what mom
m mom-your car key ,i know you got the contract
n-but mom i dont need

m mom-shut up ,ur my bahu ,and now if u dont stop i will dont talk to u
n- touch her ear and said ok mom
anmd now all were happy then sam said that now everyone plz start dance and first dance will be presented by maynk and nupur
and they start

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Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

(nupur had placed one hand on maynk's broad chest and other in his hand. maynk placed one hand on her waist holding her other hand in his hand. When maynk's hand came in contact with nupur's bare skin it gave her chills in all her body)


Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
(maynk watch her face when he put his hand on her bare waist ,he fell heat and some unknown feeling )
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan
( He twirled nupur who was totally lost in his eyes)
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
(Why maynk… why i love you so much? She thought lost in his eyes)
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

he was feeling something different and they lost in each other eyes)
and back to rality with sound of clappings
and then all dance and night pass all return to their home
nupur mom was very hapy to see her daughter happy
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in maynk room
nupur was surprised and watch the flower which maynk give her and happy
here maynk feel less guilty and happy too that she forgive him
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so here is the forth part
friends give you view to tell me you like it or not
well in next part maynk will change and a surprise trip also there
so wait for the next romantic part

with love
*********adi

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Posted: 16 years ago
friends in next part well mayu fall in love with her
and they all go for a good picnic
and how he confess his love thats so interesting so wait for this
i will try to update tomorrow but it will be a short part
friends if u like this part then give me dil kolkar comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

such a lovely concept adi....great.....love to read more on mayu's change ahead, he should realize that hatred towards nupur is wrong....promo made little bit cool....waiting for mayur romance.......but am really angry on u now u havent pmed me.....very bad...i got it when am searching for some other link...i was really mad that u havent pmed me....u had forgotten me.....

oh sorrow plz dont get angry well this is my mistake but next time i will not do this ok😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AFSHA18

Ur sur na Additi u'll do this
Toh why waiting Yaar update jaldi plz

yes yaar well the part give you full mayu love and romance too

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey!
really nice part. loved it.

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