FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 77

omgg..amazin update....really one of the bestfic i hve read in ages..plz cntinue soon...tthe first i do evrday is to check whether u hve updated or nt...amazin fic....

Originally posted by: debolinaroy08

good one yaar....hilarious!!! i can just imagine mayu's "wtf" expression when nupur told him to get the door....shirtless!!! and poor soul madam rashmi blushing her soul out seeing mayank.....aww too gud lolz!! haha neev is the hero!! always uniting his mummy and daddy...aww the little cupid.....!! looking foward to the next one kainath!!

Hey, thanks a ton for the review! and yes, Mayu def must have been like wtf....haha...but poor guy wishes this soooo much...just doesnt realise it yet....tsk tsk.... :)

Rashmi really must have been totally flustered...lol....I actually feel bad for her now ;)

The next one.,...umm...really not sure how soon I can put it up!

Originally posted by: nikki028

wowwwwwww............another rockin update..........neev is gettin more n more more jaaaaaaaaanuable day by day.....once again he had bcome d Cupid in d new lov story of Mayur....😳......

by god........kaaaaaaaash mein Ms Walia ke jagah hoti......😆😆.........toh atleast i cud also hv gt d GOLDEN CHANCE OF THE CENTURY to c Shirtless Mayu(other than nupsi).....😳..............

truly when they r 2gether,they alwz make a rockin team.........tabhi toh Ms walia ko in logon ne itnaaaaaa embarass kiya ki shayad Ms walia apni khud ki suhag raat mein bhi itna nahi sharmayegi jitna she did here.....😆

alll in al.....once again awesome fab superb update........👏.........

plzzz plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon...........😃

Hey Nikki thanks a ton! Neev is januable indeed! :D and who the heck wouldnt want to be in place of rashmi? Actually, I'd rather be Nupur - that ways the feeling would be reciprocated ;)

Lol..the suhag raat comment was a good one... :D very true! I'm not sure when the next update would be...

fab part!!!

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Hey!

This part had sooo many drool worthy bits.. literally.

At the start i was like Neevs wats up your bum? Nupz handled him perfectly.. he kinda of reminded me of my sister.. ahah.. i expected Mayank to be angry at Nupz for talking to Neev like that but glad he was strict too.. i was in shock with the spanking bits.. i was like WAT! nooo! but thank god only few slaps across the bum..

Dinner scene was cute, the fact that they had a normal husband-wife scene was reallllyyyyyyy sweet.

: )

When Neev came into the room at night time i thought that was sooo sweet of him, poor kid has a conscience.. and the fac he couldn't go to sleep.. was even cuter.. it was funny how he forced Nupz to sleep in Mayu's bed.. i'ts warm and toasty... hahah

I agree so much with Mayank that strange things always happen while he's sleeping and strange things are always there when he wakes up..

But! My fave bit was the whole DMP thing.. hilarious that nupz yanked his shirt off and made him go out shirtless.. i kinda had a feeling that she would be like hunny come back to bed. :P

Can we please have a mayu fantasy of nupz? i mean u always have the little monologues of him saying... imagine wat i could have done with her in the towel etc.. a dream would be funny and just very romantic..

Thanks soo much for the PM

xSonia

Hey Sonia! Thank you sooo much for the review! Drool-worthy, definitely! what with Mayank being shirtless and that whole scene with Nups in bed...LOL....

Nups and Neev's relationship has certainly strengthened...wonder what'll happen to all of them in 4 months :( Well, you'll see soon anyway!

Glad you liked the dinner scene - for once a normal convo without any stupid fights! :D And Neev really was super cute in this chapter wasnt he? I had fun writing those moments :) Warm and toasty indeed. ;)

Mayu having a Nups fantasy? hmmm....well, you'll see what happens soon anyway ;)

Originally posted by: bronze

wow.. amazing part, sorry i cudnt write abt the last one.. been really busy..

Anyways, Neev sure was in a bad mood !! but he is so thoughtful for such a young kid. He definitely has his fathers temper.
Loved the bed part, feel sorry for mayank, he soo in need of the normal life. poor guy.

They ve started to be so civil with each other. the three of them form such a cute family.

Poor rashmi, shirtless mayank and the the bedroom bit.... 😳

Cant wait to see what happens in the party. and still waiting to know and the past...

you didnt PM 😔, plz do next time..

Hi thanks a ton for the review! It's ok, I completely understand :) Glad you liked the chapter! Neev certainly was acting weird today - but kids get cranky all the time, so his actions were justifiable...Mayank though was pretty harsh! The bed part was my personal fav too :) And the bedroom bit...ahahah...I can totally sympathise with rashmi...poor girl must be terribly scandalized!

I couldnt pm you coz I didnt knw u'd changed ur profile! but I've added you now :)

Hey Kainath,

Sorry for being MIA, and commenting recently. I have been reading the updates, but always in such a rush, that I haven't gotten around to commenting....

And it was fantastic as usual. Seriously, I feel Ms Walia's pain. Mayur are seriously having an awesome time at her expense... And using her as an excuse for doing what deep down they actually want to be doing...

And lil Neev is such a sweetie. He's actually can't sleep for being rude to Nupur... Now that is a well brought up kid...

Love the way you are going about with his fanfic...

Originally posted by: hgrhr

oh my god...! you updated and that too that very day..!!

you really are the sweetest..!! You didn't have to but still you did....thank you so much..!!

this made my day..!! seeing the update PM..!! hehe....

god...Neev was very cranky....i was actually very surprised that what happened to him all of a sudden...he's calling his mom and dad stupid..! LOL but nupur handled it so well...!! She was completly behaving like a perfect mother...!! hehe

But mayank was furious..! i really liked that scene....they both were behaving so totally like parents...! and the conversation after when she was trying to talk to him....like a usual husband and wife...seeing all these scene made me grin like anything..!! LOL

they were such a perfect family but they just didn't realise it..!!

and awwwww....Neev is such a sweetheart...poor kid got a spanking and no dinner and was feeling so guilty..! I was feeling bad for him...and when he came in the middle of the night to say sorry to Nupur...i just wanted to give him a bear hug!!

sooooooo he made his mom and dad sleep in the sam bed huh..!! LOL

that was such a sweet child logic he used....what could Nupur say to that,,..? hehe...

Mayank's started seeing them as his complete family....he's getting used to this...I'm so happy..! wow....i could just imagine them all sleeping in the same bed...awwww.....

and then that DMP...god she's always getting on their nerves..!! But what a plan of Nupur's even mayank was in shock..!! who wouldn't..? hehe....

one more this kinda stunt and they won't be able to control themselves..!! LOL

can't wait till the soiree..!! something big is gonna happen...i have a feeling and Neev won't be here...? hmmm....did you send him out deliberatly kya...? LOL

do continue soon....!!

Love you for this spectacular update..!!

Thanks a ton Nidhi! Actually you've been the sweetheart around here, recommending this FF to others! I really really appreciate the kind gesture :)
Neev cranky - definitely a surprise, lol, but kids do get whiny at times....and this was actually the perfect way for Neev to show how much he loves his parents! He apologized so sweetly didn't he? lol.. ;) Poor Nups and Mayank, with Neev around their lives are going to be hell...haha

And you're right - this is indeed a picture perfect family! Just two members of the trio need to get their brains working again to realise it...sigh... :)

I agree - the whole DMP scene must have been a very very tricky situation for MN...lol....i thoroughly sympathize with Rashmi ;)

And yes, the Soiree's next chapter - and sending Neev out was a clever observation ;)

Originally posted by: debby

Neev in a cranky mood is even more fun.. If I was Nupur, I wouldnt mind his new found love for sharing at all. Not that Nupur did either. But I agree, Mayank was too harsh on the kid. He needs to tone down that temper of his...

Rashmi's defences have been by her side till now. What the poor woman must have felt seeing Mayank like that and Nupur in bed.. jealous? LOL Mayank's 'hormones' shudnt be blamed all the time though. He conveniently incriminates them each time... Its not just his hormones but his soul and his flesh and everything that desires her. But the egotist wont admit.. well he will one day though.

So the soiree is being built up to.. aha! Sounds really interesting.. esp with Neev being out of the way and no sharing to be acomplished.

Lovely update as always Kainath. I am green with envy. :)

Hi Debby! I was searching for your review! Found it finally lol... :) Thank you soo much! lol...Nups definitely didnt mind sharing and caring :) who would when the guy in question is Mayank Sharma? Sigh....

LOL....I whole-heartedly agree with you about the Rashmi comment...poor girl, I feel very very bad for her...haha ;) And how long will Mayank play the blame game with every other thing in this universe, other than himself? He has to realise everything soon - and he will, but I just dunno how soon...lol :)

The Soiree is next chapter! And yes, Neev's not there....go crazy with all the possibilities! lol...but, I'll try to update by tmr :D

Originally posted by: just4coll

Hey Kainath,

Sorry for being MIA, and commenting recently. I have been reading the updates, but always in such a rush, that I haven't gotten around to commenting....

And it was fantastic as usual. Seriously, I feel Ms Walia's pain. Mayur are seriously having an awesome time at her expense... And using her as an excuse for doing what deep down they actually want to be doing...

And lil Neev is such a sweetie. He's actually can't sleep for being rude to Nupur... Now that is a well brought up kid...

Love the way you are going about with his fanfic...

Hi dear! No probs I totally understand :) Thanks for your review! Glad you liked the chapters up till now! :)

Haha...completely agree about Mayur flustering rashmi - scandalizing the DMP was super fun to write as well! :) And Neev is of course a complete gentleman ;)