FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1041

Hey Kainath...hope u r in the best of health now!!! 🤗

missed u loads!!!

You are a marvelous writer, have i told u? (yes I have, I kno, in all ur earlier 25 updates as well)

But this update was different and incredibly amazing....I could feel myself choking up at certain junctures. The love Mayank and Nupur have for each other is really very touching..ITs getting to me. its affecting me in a strange way !!

They are in love with each other..sigh..but their minds are just so practical sometimes they should just listen to their hearts...!

I loved the way their conversations have changed into a normal couple kind of convo...its interesting how they treat each other as a couple and parents to neev.

Coming to sonali, she is classic..wew..first time she meets her vicky she gets him to kiss her and ask her out!! WOW!! Plus her excitement and Mayank's reactions were hilarious

Neev ..how can i not comment on this li'l darling..what with his tampoon antics with harsh (that had me ROFL'g especially Mayank's reactions and Nupur's counter reactions)..
Plus he nearly set up Vicky n Sonu LOL ..good job Neev!!

Please do update the next part as soon as u can...cos its getting soooo intriguing by the minute..I'm getting nervous thinking of the 3 months LOL

Thank u for the long update..u r very considerate 🤗

Divya

Edited by myownarea - 15 years ago

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tinkertoesreads

@tinkertoesreads

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1042

Ok, I can't find words enough to describe how much I loved it... I've been grinning ear to ear the whole time I've been reading it... Kainath, that was fabulous... I can't believe Mayank doesn't remember anything from the night before - and I wonder what his reaction will be when he does remember... And I love the way Nupur jumped on him when she saw the rugby tickets... The Sonali-Vikram sequence was awesome too... I think I'm going to stop commenting and go re-read the whole thing

p.s: Am glad you are finally feeling better. Take care and don't over exert yourself...

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1043

Your PM made my day....then i saw the length and thought...no actually thats made my day.....finished reading it....its made my frikin weekkkkkkkkkkkkkk............what an update....ur back with a bang....and dnt ever wonder if were loosing interest....i dnt think i cud if i wanted to!

i dnt understand how you make it serious and funny at the same time.....i love their thoughts....its always so real.....and the way they talk to them selves....sooo real again...and humourous! neev as always is a darlinggggg.....and u can never not be entertained with sonali....even when shes depressed!!!....im loving how nupur is slowly realising she cant do with out them. i mean she knew it before but she had her anger an hurt from the past to help her shield it....but now the shields gone, tho mayu dusnt knw, she cant stop it! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! and i love mayank even more!!!!!!!!

i was in fits with the tampons....LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOO.......my hubie thought i was having some wierd attack...n got worried thinkn i was having pregnancy pains...which made me laugh mre! it was hillarioussssss!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN.....ok ill calm down now!

heena
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ps i hope your feeling loadsssssss better!

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1044

i was thinking abt this ff today, n i got this feeling that u were going to updt today, n u did! i feel like a psychic lol
coming to the updt, it was fabulous as usual!
ur an awesome writer n i can't say that enuf times!
this part was soo long n i loved reading it!
neev is soo cute, i feel like hugging this kid every time i read abt him! i missed him!
i found the whole tampon fiasco hilarious! esp cuz the same thing happened w/ my bro, it was soo weird!
i loved mayank n nupur's reaction to that!
they r acting more n more like a couple now, that is absolutely wonderful!
all they need now is jst verbalize their emotions! they r absolutely heads over heels in love w/ each other n thinking abt each other all the time n both of them want to get back together, all they hav to do is jst tell each other that, but thats what they don't do! i wish they wud soon tho
mayank helping out nupur w/ her n sonu's friendship anniversary was very sweet
n the luck sonali has! she got asked out by vikram raina, the man himself!
over all the updt was spectacular n mind-blowing!
i can't wait to read more
continue soon

P.S - glad ur ok now

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1045

Ahh, ohmygod, Kainath I love the fact that Vicky is crazy over Sonali already! *collapses into giggles* So cute!

I love the confusion on both Mayank and Nupur's parts. It's realistic, and well-written. I cannot wait for Nupur to just blurt out that she still loves him, and wants to be with him. I think soon, her fear of losing him will be overcome by the love she has for him, and she'll let it spill.

Continue soon!

Love,
Radz

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#1046

kaitzz.................🤗...............
WB dear..............n u r back wid a bang..........n tht too on a vry vry vry hiiiiiiiiiigh note............u truly truly rocked to d core man this time............duniye ke saare thnxxx to u for this much awaited update n makin it d biggest of all d timesssssssssss.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗....................
n i thoroughly thoroughly njoyed each n evry line of it.......ek pal ke liye bhi i din thought tht this one is surely long........n when it ended,..........i really wanted to c few more scenes.....bt then onli i realised just nw i hv finished readin d most lengthiest update in any ff........n i still wanted it to continue???😲😆..........kya karu i cudn resist.....tere updates jitna bhi lambe ho......bt yeh dil hamesha mange moreeeeeee....................coz they r d updates of a heavenly rockin perfect awesome MN ff...........

ok nw comin 2 d update.................1st of all...this is 4 this update(bt ur har update deserves this though).....
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wht a fabulous.............fantabulous...........rockin,..............xtremely xtremely awesome update dear......
poor mayu..............he dnt remember a single thing he last nite,huh?evn though he badly wants to knw wht he had done.....oh god.......dono dilse chahte hai to hear frm each other i love u.........bt still keh nahi paa rahe na......

hw long they r gonna behave lik this,huh??????????????
ki nothinggggggggg had happnd b/w them n they really dnt care abt each other....evn though each other's presence hv a huge impact on each other?????????????????????
hw long r they gonna resist these mutual feelings???????

by god.....mayur r truly vry gud actors..........lets c yeh dono apni actin kab tak continue karta hai.......

neev ws rockin as usual........i lovddddddddddd d scenes of him wid Vicky.d most........by god usne toh Sonu ka band hi bajaya tha by literally messin up Sonus plan........bt Vicky's behaviour ws truly a surprise for me..........aww.........i'm really really happy for Sonu...........she must b in Cloud 9.......😳😳😳

nywz so next update DMP drama firse ho ga na?n my my..........3 months r already ovr?????😲😲😲.....
by god....d next 3 months r truly d most crucial months for both mayur n us....**fingers crossed**......plzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooon.............n next time make it more bigger than this1...😆😉(only if u hv no prob.......coz v loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee readin d bigger updates of ur FF....😳😳😳..........)

Edited by nikki028 - 15 years ago

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Bronze.

@Bronze.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1047

awww... you updated.. and glad to know you ve recovered now..

anyways getting ready for work.. i will read and review in the evening :)) Thanks a ton man....