FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 11

Originally posted by: zoya_me

you write amazingly....loved it

please continue soon........ and please add me to your PM list

thanks a ton! i;ve already added u, so please read and review :)

great part yaar.. their haterate was so passionately described..
just loved it... waiting for the next one...

this is simply the most well written ff ive read....love it!!!!!!! the characters ways of talking reacting is just soo spot on!! i cant explain how amazing this is!.....i really wana knw wht happend to them...please dont make it all mayanks fault...i dnt know but for sum reason in ffs when they have broken up for years it always turns out to be something mayank did....please make it misunderstanding on both accounts...
and I LOVE NEEV....he is with out a doubt mayanks kid....thats exactly how i wud imagine him....im guessing his mother left them and deep down hes scared of his daddy doing the sme...thats why he was soo hapoy to see his dad dot on 5...just guessing!! update soon...
heena

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

this is simply the most well written ff ive read....love it!!!!!!! the characters ways of talking reacting is just soo spot on!! i cant explain how amazing this is!.....i really wana knw wht happend to them...please dont make it all mayanks fault...i dnt know but for sum reason in ffs when they have broken up for years it always turns out to be something mayank did....please make it misunderstanding on both accounts...
and I LOVE NEEV....he is with out a doubt mayanks kid....thats exactly how i wud imagine him....im guessing his mother left them and deep down hes scared of his daddy doing the sme...thats why he was soo hapoy to see his dad dot on 5...just guessing!! update soon...
heena

awww...thank you soo much for your wonderful review...it totally lifted my sprits..and ur right, I wanted neev to be someone who everyone imagines mayank's son to be :) and u'll find out abt the past soon :)

Chapter 7

Nupur stared at Sonali in complete astonishment. Don't reveal anything, Nupur. Tread carefully. "That is so, so not it, Sonu. You have no idea how off the mark you are."

"Then why do you hate him? He seems like a nice guy, I mean, look how great he is with his son, who is adorable, by the way. A guy who's that nice to children can't be that bad," she said.

Alright, Nupur. You can't do this to her. She's meant to be your best friend! Best friends don't lie! But, you don't have to let the entire cat out of the bag…just the head will suffice.

"He is the most arrogant, prejudiced, self-centered, pompous, evil human being to ever walk the earth. I can't even begin to list the awful things he did. Let's not forget, he was so ridiculously mean to me and to my friends back when we were in…in college."

"Ouch, Ms Bhushan, that was a bit below the belt, don't you think?" Mayank's low drawl sounded from the doorway of the school.

Nupur spun around on a gasp and stared at the intruder of her conversation. "What are you doing back here?"

"Neev forgot his jumper, so I came back to fetch it," Mayank sneered. "You're lucky he's standing outside petting a cat and not here to know how his teacher truly feels about his father. That would have been psychologically fun for us all."

"You'll gave to excuse her," Sonali hurried to explain. "She's had a long day."

Mayank rolled his eyes and shook his head, fuming at her audacity, walking to the line of hooks along the wall where the children hung their jackets and sweaters. He grabbed the navy sweater that belonged to Neev and left the school without a word to either woman.

Nupur was left rooted to the ground, dumbstruck. Oh my God, no matter how annoying that prat was, he was right. If Neev had heard what she'd said, she would have instantly shattered the image of the loving, caring and 'righteous' father Neev held in his innocent eyes. Despite her hatred towards him and everything that transpired between them, she simply could not deny what sort of a father he was.

"Oh, dear," Sonali bit her lip.

Nupur spun around to face Sonali.

"Why didn't you warn me that he was behind me?"

"I didn't see him!" she replied.

"Didn't you hear the tinkling when the door was opened?"

"You were near yelling, Nupur, and the tinkling is only heard from our office," Sonali explained.

Nupur scratched her brow and sighed. Nupur, this is a tough time for you, no doubt about that, what with he entering your life once again to create havoc. But that's no way you should have behaved when you knew Neev might be present.

Before Sonali knew what was happening she watched as Nupur practically ran out the door after Mayank. With a bewildered laugh she sat back down behind the desk and opened the magazine. "Oh, Vicky, if only you could pop out of that magazine and save me from this crazy day."

Nupur slowed to a stop as she caught up with Mayank and Neev as they walked along the quiet Francis Downing street. Mayank turned around at the sound of heavy footfalls behind him. To say it was a shock to see Nupur standing there would have been an understatement. What does she want now? Hasn't she had enough of confrontations for a day? Or does she deliberately desire to come in front of me so that I gain even fewer hours of sleep. With the rate this is going, it's pretty obvious my slumber schedule is going to be destroyed for another few days. Damn you, Nupur Bhushan.

"Miss Noopurr!" Neev yelled, forgetting to slow down the name so he could get it right.

Nupur took a deep breath and looked Mayank in the eye. "I just wanted to apologize."

The first sign of a drizzle was beginning to surface. Great, perfect timing God, Nupur thought.

Mayank stared back at her, his face devoid of any clue as to what he was thinking. "Apology not accepted."

The drizzle was beginning to pick up it's pace. Terrible timing, Mayank thought. He hated the rain. He's hated it for 5 years now. After all, it was the rain which first made him realize his love for….

Nupur almost laughed. God, he was immature. But she wasn't backing down. Agreed, he's done his fair share of inflicting enormous amounts of pain on me. But what I did today wasn't right. I'll never forgive him, but I won't be able to forgive myself if I didn't let him know I was truly guilty for my actions today. This way, I could be the bigger person. "I said some rude things and I'm sorry."

Mayank raised a perfectly shaped eyebrow. Damn him and his flawless features. "Neev, go inside that sweet shop and pick out a candy. I'll be in to pay for it shortly."

Candy Heaven, which was one store down from where they were standing proved a great distraction. Neev zoomed into the store as fast as his short legs could carry him. Plus, he also had to escape from the rain, otherwise he'd get sick.

The minute Neev was out of sight, Mayank turned to Nupur. "Listen here, Nupur, and listen well. I don't care what you think of me or who you decide to preach your grievances to, but if I so much as hear that you're saying these things in front of my son, then I will have your school shut down so fast you won't even know about it until I get to personally hand you the eviction notice."

Nupur had to stop herself from dropping her jaw…and slapping the jet black stubble off of the arrogant prat's face. "How dare you assume that I would ever be so unprofessional and irresponsible enough to say something disparaging in front of your child or any child for that matter? I care very much for my students and I would never belittle their parents in front of them, no matter how much said parents deserve the belittling."

Mayank clenched his jaw and fist tight. "Go to hell, Nupur."

With that, he turned on his heel and walked away.

Oh, hell no…Nupur planted her hand on his shoulder and forced him to face her. "I hate you. I always have and I always will. I take back my apology because I meant every word I said before."

And with that, Nupur turned on her heel and walked away, leaving Mayank to scowl and curse under his breath in the pouring rain.

kainath
it was wonderful
the only thing is i cannot see them seperate for a longer time
i have somewhat gyessed the twist abt the other women
but plzzzzzzzzzz let my mayur be together
it really hurts to see them like this
and u r weeesome girl

Originally posted by: shinella

kainath
it was wonderful
the only thing is i cannot see them seperate for a longer time
i have somewhat gyessed the twist abt the other women
but plzzzzzzzzzz let my mayur be together
it really hurts to see them like this
and u r weeesome girl

Thanks soo much for the review...awww....i'm so sorry, but u've got to wait for just a few more chapters....then u'll see what i have in store for them *rubs her hands in glee* lol....haha

ahem ahem
you have got me all excited
so post your mysterious chapters soon sweety

Originally posted by: shinella

ahem ahem
you have got me all excited
so post your mysterious chapters soon sweety

i'll do that asap...if i can manage it :)