-Bollywood ka Maara Armaan Bechara-Updated Pg 130 - Page 33

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

hey Sim

fantastic update
you wrote the part very well
Ridhima just doesn't miss a chance to tease Armaan
I loved the basketball scene...Ridhima is sooo adorable
so now Ridhima is saying palat...that made me remember one sweet scene from dmg
I hope Armaan does turn
thanx for the pm & plz continue soon
Rabia

Heyyy Rabia
Thanks so much! I know I love that scene in DMG as well...one of the best I think! lol i know Hopefully Armaan turns! 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Agli part kab update hogi? if possible do it soon
love ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
luved the part.........
keep updating like this............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part. Loved the ending because its usually armaan who says palat but this time its ridz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow superb part.
the basket ball scenes reminds of AR first date. too good
and funny doing that palat palat.
let's see if he turns around.
continue soon.
takecare.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Whoops ... late comments this time. Palat palat ka end kya hua??? You truly using everything possible - DMG, movies, SRK. Gosh ... u r a riot. Loving all your updates.
And thanks for the PM. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahahaha..arnt all ridi's line supposed to be guy lines in normal fairly tales?? lol..amazing and funny part :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guys, So sorry for the delay! Hope you like it!

R: palat………please please palat

Armaan was still walking straight towards the door, no sign of palat! Riddhima was very disheartened, she closed her eyes, but then she felt it, she knew it, it had to be, her eyes were still closed, but somehow she knew it…………she opened her eyes and……………..nooooooo he was still walking, he's at the door, about to open it, he's turning the knob…………but wait he stopped! He He He turns!!!!!!!!!

Riddhima smiled! She opened her arms out wide and let the rain soak her! She was spinning in the rain!

R out loud: YESSSSSSS……………..

A to himself: crazy girl!

R in her head: ta ra ra ra ri ra……..ta ra ra ra ri ra……………….tu zindagi……….

A: YO!

R in her head: tujhse main kya kahoon tu hi mera junoon………………………

A: YO!

Riddhima heard him this time!

R: bolo! She had the biggest smile on her face!

A in his head: Wierdo!

A: keys!

R: haan haan mere dil ki chaabi tumhare paas hai!

A: what? I cant hear you!

He walked up to her……………..

R: aaja aaja main hoon pyar tera……………………….She was still smiling!

He now stood up right in front of her!

A: keys!

She smiles!

A: KEYS!!!

R: keys? Kaunsi keys?

A: house keys!

R: kya?!?! Ghar ki chaabi? Kyon?

A: usually keys are used to OPEN the door!

R: huh?

A: OH GOD! The door is locked I need the keys!

Riddhima stopped smiling!

R: oh no!......no no no no no no

A: what happened!

R: she put her hands on her face and continued………………no no no no no no

A: STOP! She shut up and looked at him! ……….What is it!

R: har raat Di sone se pehle saare doors lock kardeti hain!

A: so?

R: so……….abhi time kya hua hai!

A: 11

R: di adhe ghante pehle sone gayi hain isi liye saare doors locked hain!

A: no!

R: yes!

A: no!

R: yes!

A: phone!

R: kiska?

A: yours!

R: kya?

A: where is your phone!

R: mera phone………ummmmm…..……pata nahin…………..

A: great! Thanks for the help!

Armaan started pacing here and there!

R: tum itna pareshan kyon ho rahe ho?!?!?!

A: because we are LOCKED OUT IN THE RAIN!

R in her head: hum tum ek court mein band ho aur chaabi kho jaye……..

A: what do we do now

R in her head: chalo ishq ladaye…………..chalo ishq ladaye sanam

A: god why is it raining…………..I hate the rain! Locked out and its raining!

R: KYA?

Armaan was taken aback by Ridhima's sudden outburst

R: tumhe baarish pasand nahin?!??!

A: no NOT AT ALL!

R: yeh nahin ho sakta

A: what!??!?

R: asmaan ki taraf dekho

A: what?!??!

R: Armaan! Just look up!

A: why?!?!?

R: main tumhe baarish ka maza dikha rahi hoon

A: im okay thank you!

R: UPAR DEKHO

A: ughh I give up……………..he looks uo at the sky so now the rain is falling on his face………

R: ab open your arms out wide

A: bu………

R: do it!

He does…………………He opens his arms out wide

R: aur ab baarish ko enjoy karo

Armaan for the first time in his life was enjoying the rain but he didn't accept it!

R: maza aya

A: ummmm whatever………….

She giggled!

Ridhima did the same, closed her eyes, looked up at the sky, opened her arms out wide and continued to enjoy the rain.

A: you know……………………….he was about to say something but stopped he saw Riddhima, she looked absolutely gorgeous in the rain………….he smiled

A in his head: she's crazy!...........................and beautiful!.........................just one little problem her……

DIL TO PAGAL HAI………….DIL DEEWANA HAI……………….

A: what!?!??!

Ridhima opened her eyes!!!

A: what is that?!??!

DIL TO PAGAL HAI………….DIL DEEWANA HAI……………….

R: MY PHONE!!!

Ridhima ran to where she took of her heels and found her phone!

A in his head: why why?!?!?! I wish she was still here…………………..HOLD IT HOLD IT……………what am I saying?!??!..................I am loosing it!

Just then Nikki ran out!

N: Ridzy tum……tum………I was just calling you …………Armaan!??!?

R: di!

N: tum dono bahaar kya kar rahe ho!

A: I was playing basketball………….dont know about her! He walks off……………….

R in her head: pagal!

Nikki looks at Ridhima: Kya kar rahi ho?!?!?

R: sorry di woh time ka pata hi nahin laga………………..

N: itni baarish mein…………….yahaan…………..Armaan………………..what is going on!

R: di dinner pe jo hua uska baad Armaan kaafi upset tha aur main use akele nahin chod na chahati thi……

Armaan was still at the door he heard this!

N: pagal……………..kitne logon ke liye soche gi…………..

R: sirf unke liye jo mere liye bahut bahut special hain……………

Armaan heard that too and just smiled!

A in his head while walking back to his room: Special?!?!? …………………..special?.............

He was just about to enter his room when he saw Ridhima on her door, she looked at him and smiled, he returned the smile………………he walked in…………and then immediately stepped out again she was still there

A: thanks!

R: kis liye?!??!

A: just thank you! He smiled and walked in!

He was in his room and almost right after there was a knock on his door! He opened the door and it was Abhimaan.

Ar: Hey…..Armaan could not remember the kids name…………..ummm

Ab: Thanks Chachu…………..

Ar: ummmm…………..what!?!?!

Armaan had never been called that, infact he had only ever been called Armaan or Mr.Malik or maybe sometime Ammy but Chachu………….wow this felt weird!

Ab: thanks aaj BAHUT LUCKY tha…………….mama ne mujhe do cookies di, school mein humne tag khela aur main sabse FAST tha…………..

Armaan was so confused by this kids' excitement and was also finidng him very cute!

Ar: what?!?!

Ab: aap ki good night kiss bahut(he takes his arms and stretches them as wide as he can to express the "bahut") lucky thi…………………

Ar: oh! Your welcome?!?!?

Ab: good night……………

Armaan laughed, he picked up Abhimaan, kissed him on the cheeks

Ar: Good Night Buddy!

Abhimaan laughed.

Ar: what so funny?!?!?

Ab: Ridzi masi hume chupke dekh rahi hain…………………

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Posted: 15 years ago
wooow awesome part really good
continue sooon tnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey me the first one to comment...
so another really sweet part...
keep updating

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