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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the support guys
shekhawat house zor shor se godh bharai ke taiyari ho rahe the ghar ke sab log he busy aur excited haai n ke godh bharai ko lekar par n uska mann toh bohot he udhas haai n bas din bhar yehi sochte rahete haai ke raj ko achanaak kya ho gaya haai kun ho aase behave kar raha haai uske saath par n ko koi jabab nahin milta
kal subhe n ke godh bharai haai isliye sab log last min mein sab taiyari thik se dekh rahe haai
madhuri-laxmi
laxmi-jee baare maa
madhuri-tune n ko dhoodh pila diya haai na
laxmi-baare maa main n memsahab ke liye dhoodh leekar gaye toh the par unhone dhoodh pine se maanna kar diya
madhuri-hmm thik haai tu mujhe dhoodh laa kee de main n ko pila dunge
laxmi-thik haai baare maa main abhie dhoddh laa kee dete hu
madhuri n ke liye dhoodh leekar uske kamre mein jaate haai n adi ko sulaa rahe the
madhuri-n beta (madhuri jaake n ke shoulder par haath rakhte haai)
n -are mama aap aap kab aaye
madhuri-beta yeh main kya sun rahe hu
n-kya hua mama?(n gets tensed)
madhuri-beta mainne laxmi ke haatho tere liya dhoodh beja tha tune pine se maana kun kar diya?
n-woh mama mera mann nahin kar raha tha isliye
madhuri-beta ab kuch dino bad tu ek naye zindage ko is duniya mein laane baale haai agar tu aapna khayal nahin rakhege toh raj toh yehi sochega na ke humne tere khayal rakha
raj ke zikar se n ka mann udhas ho jaate haai
madhuri-n beta kya hua ?
n-kuch nahin mama
madhuri-aacha beta main ab chalta hu bohot raat ho chuke haai kal subhe tujhe jaldi bhi toh uthhna hoga naa tu ab yeh dhoodh pike so jaa
n-jee mama
madhuri n ke forehead par kiss kar ke neeche chale jaate haai
madhuri ke jaane ke bad n phut phut ke rone laagte haai
n-mama ab main aapko kaise baatau ke raj ko ab mere koi fikar nahin haai woh toh mujhe dekhna bhi pasand nahin karta
agle din subhe se shekhawat house mein guests anne suru ho gaye
nandini aur tia n ko taiyar kar rahe haai
nandini-n tuna aaj bohot khubsurat laag rahe haai
n nandini baate sunke bas ek fake smile dete haai
nandini-kya hua n tujhe koi tension haai kya tu itne udhas dekh rahe haai ?
tia-are nandini bhabhi aap bhi naa kuch nahin samjhte ho ghar mein duniya bhar ke log toh aa gaye par n bhabhi ke aakhen jisse dhundh rahe haai woh insan toh abhie aaya nahin na isliye n bhabhi itne udhas dekh rahe haai kun bhabhi main sahi bol rahe hu naa
n tia ke baato ka jabab dege usse samajh nahin woh bas chup chap aapne aakhen jhuka leete haai
tia aur nandini samjha jaate haai ke n yehi baat ko leekar dukhi haai so cheer up n tia n se kahete haai"bhabhi aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye raj bhaiya zarur aa jaayenge "
voice-aa jayenge nahin aa gaye
tia turns and see raj is standing behing them
tia dur ke raj ke pass
tia-raj bhaiya yeh kya haai aap ko pata haai n bhabhi ka mann kitna udhas haai
raj-sorry lil sis maaff kar de mujhe
tia-maaffe mujhse nahin n bhabhi se maageye
raj looks at n and says"sahi kaha tune tia maaffe toh mujhe maagne he parege "
tia-good aacha ab dono baate kijiye hum chalte haai
tia aur nandini chale jaate haai ab kamre mein sirf raj aur n haai
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Shekhawat house mein zor shor se godh bharai ki taiyaari ho rahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Naina is very sad and is thinking ke Raj ko achanak kya ho gaya hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Madhuri Naina ko doodh pilane aati hai when she hears that Naina has refused to drink milk!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is now crying ke ab Raj ko uski koi fikar nahi!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Nandini aur Tia Naina ko taiyaar kar rahe hai and Nandini compliments Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Seeing Naina's fake smile Nandini was concerned while Tia teased her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tia assured Naina ke Raj zaroor aa jayega to cheer her up!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj tabhi aata hai and said ke aa jayenge nahi aa gaye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Raj is back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj looked at Naina and said maafi toh usse maangni hi padegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure he was referring to his behaviour of the past few days!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Now that Raj and Naina are alone I hope Raj talks to her and all the misunderstandings are cleared between them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Dear
Nice update...I hope all the misunderstandings r cleared between Raj n Naina.😊
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
so finally raj is back
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice...

now waiting for RN convo...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina was about to say something to when Madhuri calls!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Madhuri tells Naina ke panditjee ne kaha hai godh bharai ke liye 25 tareek bahut accha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina talks to Raj but he refused to go aur Naina ke paas aasu bahane ke alawa aur koi raasta nahi tha!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj Major Nair ko ghar pe laata hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

I am sure Raj is trying to befriend Nair so that he can find out about Aalekh!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

But why is he behaving so badly with Naina??😕 😕 😕 😕

At this stage of pregnancy he shouldn't be rude like this to Naina!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Agar woh Naina ko sach bata dega then Naina can help him!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had to obey Raj and make pakoras for Nair against her own wishes!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina is angry at Raj for being friendly with Nair and this results in a quarrel!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ne Naina se kaha that she can leave the house!!!!!!

Naina yeh seh nahi paayi and came to a decision!!!!!!

I think ab Naina wakai ghar chhod kar chali gayi hai!!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔


thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Raj ki neend 11 baje khulti hai with no Naina to wake him up!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He starts shouting as usual par aaj na toh Naina aayi aur nahi hi usne koi awaz di!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Not finding Naina and Adi, Raj gets worried and doesn't know what to do!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Just as I had guessed Naina Raj ke behaviour se tang aakar Adi ko lekar apne ghar Mumbai chali gayi hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's mom is worried to see her alone and so Naina does not tell her the truth!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Dia is very happy to see Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dia has missed her very much and hearing this Naina has tears in her eyes and she hugged Dia!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Why has Raj not come to Mumbai to look for Naina??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina is going back to Shekhawat house kyunki uski godh bharai hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Dia doesn't want her to go and so Naina promised her ke godh bharai ke baad woh aake wahan rahegi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dia is very happy to hear that and hugged Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗


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Posted: 15 years ago
nice again...
ab intezaar hai ki RN k bich sab kuch kab pahle ki tarah hota hai...!!!
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear good that you have cont the fic
very nice update
now cont soon and post the next part soon
waiting eagerly.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part
Naina tries to hide her feelings from eveyone in the house because all of them are very excited about the good-bharayi
Hope all the misunderstandings betweem RN are solved
please continue soon

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