Hi!
I'm finally back! 😛... Sorry I couldn't comment earlier... There was so much going on with MED SCHOOL and all, But i am finally about to go on a little break after couple of more days, I LOVE MY semester breaks like favorite ice cream!... Still enjoyed reading both one shots immensely... Especially "More Saiyaan" with full on intensity and all... SO TOUCHING
As for Suno Susarjee... When I read the title i was like wow AND rolling on the floor laughing... Couldn't believe you'd updated so fast (or maybe reading it back to back was just aN AMAZING treat i wasn't able to handle with all the excitement. YOUR WRITING IS AWESOME) ... I hope IT continues 😉 😆...
Now coming to the actual part... It was AMAZING! As simple as that... I adored Rahul and Muskaa's characterization especially in the first one (More Saiyaan) thinking how brilliantly you drove me to tears by reading it.. I could just imagine everything clearly ⭐️...
I could almost feel Rahul's pain when "...She felt the ground disappear from underneath her feet, no longer being able to feel the soft snow. She reached out for Rahul with a desperate, fearful expression as he ran forward to grab her…" You've explained his emotions BRILLIANTLY... It was heart wrentching but worth it...
The Second one was a complete reliever after the first one, light hearted and cute... "Aur tu… tu toh crime ki poori factory hai, factory! (Rahul pops his collar with a proud smile) Oye halkat! Khush kis baat pe ho raha hai? Teri wajjah se na, main marroongi." 😛... I wonder if you would ever run out of "Muskaaness" or not...LOL...it was HILARIOUS
Rahul and Muskaan's chemistry left me absolutely speechless... It was SO INTENSE! in "Morey Saiyaan" and FUN PACKED IN "Suno Susarjee" Really... I have no words... You are one AWESOME writer! 👏...
"Yaar yeh tera baap mere raste ka kaanta banaa hua hai. Sochta hoon buddhe ko utthvaadoon. Eik baar shaadi hojaaye, usske bad chod denge." Seriously my jaw hurts by immense laughing, (MY roommate thinks i am HIGH)
LOVED it! I sense a hint of of masti comping up as well 😆... Seriously if you ever open up a production house do give me a call, I'll leave my General Surgery just to come and work for you....BUT make sure "MAYANK ANAND" is the main lead...Only he'll understand the Punjabiness we want to see in him...I wouldn't mind sharing him with "DRASHTI DHAMI" or YOU...lol 😊
Take Care,
LOVE YA LOADS....😉
Shiv Shakti
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