Rahul-Muskaan & Atul-Anjali Collections updt pg 51

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Hey guys. Nothing new here unless you haven't already read these, but there will be soon! I just thought I would put my previous one-shots into one topic so it would be convenient for me and then I can just add on to this when I write more one-shots. I know I told a lot of you that I would be doing this back in like December when I wrote Rishta, but I couldn't get around to it. So sorry for that, but I'm doing it now so smile! 😊

I'd also like to take this opportunity to mention that you guys are free to leave any suggestions or requests for what you want me to write on RM or AA or both in one. Just write down the situation and what mood you would like it to be... painful, light hearted, romantic, comic, whatever you guys want. Also don't forget to leave your name in case I don't already know it. 😛 You'll be given credit for your suggestions. 😊

Okay, so enough said. Below are the one-shots I've written in the past year that I'm sure most of you have probably read already. So bring on the suggestions and I'll try to do as much justice to them as I can. Thanks again! 😃

Enjoy!

Love you all!

Komal❤️

~~~Updates~~~

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pg. 4 - Morey Saiyyan (RM)

pg. 7 - Suno Sasurji (RM)

pg.11 - Suno Sasurji part 2 (RM)

pg. 15 - Suno Sasurji last part (RM)

pg. 19 - Saawariya part 1 (AA)

pg. 22 - Saawariya part 2 (AA)

pg. 25 - Saawariya part 3 (AA)

pg. 32 - Saawariya part 4 (AA)
pg. 35 - Saawariya last part (AA)
pg. 37 - Chandani Raatein (AA)
pg. 39 - Chandani Raatein part 2 (AA)
pg. 40 - Chandani Raatein part 3 (AA)
pg. 42 - Chandani Raatein last part (AA)
pg. 47 - Khwaahish (AA)
pg. 51 - Kuch Meetha Hojaaye (AA)

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It was late after a hard day's work at Sanjeevani, and everyone had left for the night. Muskaan's Dhanno was having some trouble starting so Rahul offered to give her a ride seeing her struggle with the scooty. On their way back, it started to rain lightly, but eventually... What they thought was going to be a normal ride home turned out to become a night they would never forget.

Rahul- Yeh baarish ko bhi abhi shuru hona tha?

Muskaan- Phitte moo! Mera toh bad luck hi kharab hai. Aadhi raat ko tere saath ghar jaana padh raha hai aur raste mein baarish shuru hogayee. Iss se zyaada bura aur kya ho sakta hai?

THUNDER AND LIGHTNING STRIKE!!!!

Rahul- Tu jab bhi bolti hai naa, kuch na kuch bura hota hai.

Muskaan- Haaye Rabba ji!!! Bas ab yehi baaki reh gaya tha?! Toofan! Ab please iss ke aage aur kuch na ho!

Rahul- Hogaya.

Muskaan- Kya???

Rahul- Oye gaddi kharaab hogayee.

Muskaan- RABBA JI!!!!!! Aap mere saath aisa nahi kar sakte. Mujhe iss piddhe ke saath nahi phassa sakte.

Rahul- Oye tu thodi der apni bakwaas band karegi toh main jaake dekhoon ke gaadi ko hua kya hai.

Muskaan- Toh jaata kyun nahi hai. Jaldi jaa!

Rahul- (gets out of the car and slams the door close) Eik toh toofan mein gaddi kharaab hogayee aur uppar se yeh musibat mere sar chad gayee. (opens the hood of the car and looks in)

Muskaan- (comes out) Oye! Teri khataara ko kya hua hai, tujhe yeh bhi nahi pata?!

Rahul- Oye tu chup kar samjhi. Vaddi aayee. Meri gaddi noo khataara kain toh pehle apni DHANNO noo vi vekhle.

Muskaan- Oye! Khabar daar meri Dhanno ko kuch bola toh! Khotha naa hove the.

Rahul- Oye kam se kam meri gaadi nayee toh hai. Teri Dhanno toh tujhse bhi puraani hai.

Muskaan- Dekh Rahul, yahaan pe tere aur mere siva aur koi nahi hai. Agar main tujhe maar doon toh kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega ki tu kahaan gaya.

Rahul- Yeh dhamki vamki kisi aur ko dena. Gaadi garam hogayee hai. Thodi der intezaar karna padega.

Muskaan- Haiye Rabba. Pe gaya naa syaapa!

RAIN STARTS TO POUR DOWN AND THUNDER AND LIGHTENING STRIKE LOUDER!!!

Rahul- Abbey yaar!

Muskaan- Ab kya karein??? Main toh poori bheeg gayee!

Rahul- Oye main koi water proof hoon??? Bheeg rahi hoon ki bachhi. (Muskaan makes a face) (he sees a hotel nearby) Woh dekh saamne.

Muskaan- Kya hai?

Rahul- Hotel hai. Wahaan jaake behat jaate hain. Chal. (they run inside)

Manager- Hello Sir.

Rahul- Hi. Actually humaari car kharaab hogayee hai aur bahar toofan hai. Kya hum thodi der yahaan behat sakte hain?

Manager- Yes of course sir. Lekin aapko main bataa doon, ki yeh toofan pata nahi kab khatam hoga. Aise mausam mein aapka kahin bhi jaana unsafe hai. Behtar yehi hoga ki aap aaj raat yaheen ruk jaayein. Humaare paas do rooms bhi available hain.

Rahul- Theek hai. Dekhte hain. (goes to Muskaan who was sitting at a distance) Oye sun. Manager keh raha hai ki toofan pata nahi kab khatam hoga.

Muskaan- Toh main kya karoon?

Rahul- Tu gidda pa. Oye humein yaheen rukna padega!

Muskaan- Theek hai. Chal.

Rahul- (at the front desk) Excuse me. Aapke paas jo do rooms available hain woh hum book karna chahte hain.

Manager- Sorry sir. Ab humaare paas do nahi sirf eik hi room available hai. Abhi abhi eik couple ne room book kiya hai.

Muskaan- Kya matlab eik hi room hai? Tu chahta kya hai? Main iss ke saath eik hi room mein rahoongi?!

Rahul- Muskaan, chup kar. Main baat kar raha hoon naa. (to manager) Dekhiye, I'm very sorry. Lekin aap eik baar aur check kijiye. Shayad koi naa koi room available ho.

Manager- I'm sorry sir. Sirf eik hi room hai. Aur agar aapne yeh room book nahi kiya toh koi aur karlega. Aur iss mausam mein toh shayad aapko aur kisi hotel mein room bhi naa mile.

Rahul- Theek hai. Aap humein yeh room de dijiye.

Manager- Okay sir. Aap apni information de dijiye.

Rahul- Yeah just one minute. Muskaan, tu jaake behat. Main aata hoon. (Muskaan goes and sits back at her previous spot and Rahul comes after finishing up the formalities)

Muskaan- Kya hua?

Rahul- Kuch nahi. Chal. (both go to the room)

Muskaan- (puts her jhola on the bed) Rabba ji! Jaldi se yeh toofan muk jaaye aur mujhe iss kaan khajure se chutkaara mile!

Rahul- Oye mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tere saath rukne kaa. (sees her trying to dry off. R-M music playing) Uhhh... tu jaake change karle nahi toh thand lag jaayegi. (she had an extra pair of clothes in her jhola)

Muskaan- Hmph! Main apna khayal rakh sakti hoon samjha! (stomps off to the washroom to change)

Rahul- (to himself) Mujhe bhi iss hi ke saath phassna tha. (rolls his eyes)

Muskaan- (coming out of the washroom) Oye piddhe. Jaa. Change karle jaake. (he takes his clothes which he took out of his car and went into the washroom to change)

Rahul- (comes out after a while) Oye sun. (as he's buttoning up his shirt)

Muskaan- (turns) Bol. (sees him buttoning up and turns back around with her hand on her eyes) Oye! Poore kapde pehen ke kyun nahi aaya?

Rahul- (gives her a strange look, then finishes buttoning up) Oye haath hataale. Hogaya.

Muskaan- Tu itna besharam kabse hogaya?

Rahul- Kapde pehene hue hain maine. Main keh raha tha ke tujhe bhook vook lagi hai toh khaana order kardoon?

Muskaan- Mujhe bhook nahi lagi. Tujhe lagi hai toh khaa le.

Rahul- Nahi. Mujhe nahi lagi. Tera pata nahi tha issiliye poochliya.

3 HOURS LATER!!!!

Muskaan- Bas ab main jaa rahi hoon!

Rahul- Oye kahaan jaa rahi hai?

Muskaan- Ghar!

Rahul- Bahar mausam dekha hai. Tera dimaag kharaab toh nahi hogaya?

Muskaan- Mausam gaya bhaad mein. Main jaa rahi hoon. Tu ruk yaheen pe!

Rahul- Haan toh theek hai. Jaa.

Muskaan- Jaa rahi hoon!

Rahul- Ruk!

Muskaan- Kya hai?!

Rahul- Tu... sach mein jaa rahi hai?

Muskaan- Nahi. Jhoot moot mein jaa rahi hoon.

Rahul- Mujhe laga ki tu mazaak kar rahi thi.

Muskaan- Oye! Tera mera koi mazaak nahi hai samjha.

Rahul- Jo bhi ho. Chup chap behat jaa. Tujhe kuch hogaya na toh tere mummy papa mujhe nahi chodenge.

Muskaan- (was about to say something then sits down) Kyun? Tune mera theka liya hua hai?

Rahul- Nahi. Lekin tu yahaan mere saath hai. Aur agar unhe pata chal gaya toh main maroonga.

Muskaan- Achha hai. Marr jaa tu! (heads towards the door)

Rahul- Oye ab kahaan jaa rahi hai?

Muskaan- Jahannum mein! (goes out the room and slams the door behind her)

2 HOURS LATER!!!

Rahul- (to himself) Do ghante hogaye, Muskaan pata nahi kahaan gayee. Kahin sach mein toh nahi chali gayee. Abbey yaar, woh toh eik number ki paagal hai. Kuch hogaya toh main kya karoonga? Dekh ke aata hoon. (goes out of the room)

IN LOBBY!!!

Rahul- Muskaan... Muskaan??? (goes to manager) Excuse me.

Manager- Yes sir? Any problem?

Rahul- Nahi. Woh actually, mere saath jo ladki thi, aapne usse kahin dekha?

Manager- Yes sir. Woh kuch do ghante pehle hotel ki library ki taraf gayeen thi.

Rahul- (strange look) Library? Hotel mein library?

Manager- (laughs lightly) Yes sir. Unka reaction bhi kuch aisa hi tha.

Rahul- Oh. Anyway, aapki library kahaan hai?

Manager- Seedhe jaake left pe sir.

Rahul- Thank you. (heads towards the library)

IN LIBRARY!!!

Rahul- Muskaan??? (to himself) Pata nahi hai bhi ke nahi? Itni badi library mein kahaan kahaan dekhoon? (calls out) MUSKAAN??? (was looking around when he saw her sleeping soundly on the sofa by the fireplace with a book in her hand) (smiles softly) Ajeeb paagal kisam ki ladki hai yaar. (goes over and takes the book from her and puts it on the table, then picks her up and heads back towards the room)

BACK IN THE ROOM!!! (R-M music playing the whole time!!!)

Rahul brings her back inside and gently puts her back down on the bed. She moves a little while he goes and switches off the lights. He comes back and pulls the covers over her and sits down on the ground next to the bed and admires her sleeping figure. He smiled and moved a strand of hair that was falling on her face. She turned on her side in her sleep and within a few minutes Rahul fell asleep sitting on the floor with his head on the bed.

20 MINUTES LATER!!!

Muskaan woke up slowly, sat up, and looked around at her surroundings.

Muskaan- (to herself) Main yahaan kaise ayee? (looks around until her gaze finally falls on Rahul sleeping peacefully) Rahul? (R-M music playing)

She looks at him sleeping and smiles to herself. Laying back down, she rested her chin on her hand as she reached over and caressed Rahul's hair and again smiled softly. Eventually she rest her head back down close to Rahul's head and continued caressing his hair while she drifted off to sleep.

NEXT MORNING!!!

Rahul slowly opened his eyes and groaned. As he was about to lift his head he felt something. He looked up and saw Muskaan sleeping about 4 inches away from his head and she was STILL caressing his hair even in her sleep. (R-M music playing) Again he admired her sleeping and then he gently grabbed her hand and set it back on the bed. Her hair was falling over her face and again he moved it slowly. As he did this, Muskaan opened her eyes and slowly sat up. She looked over and saw Rahul looking at her. They sat in silence for about 2 minutes just staring at each other...

Rahul- (breaks the silence) Uhhh... tu... tu jaake fresh hojaa. Phir nikalte hain.

Muskaan- Hmm. (she watches him stand up and go out the door)

Muskaan goes and freshens up and soon after Rahul comes in...

Rahul- Tu... tayaar hai?

Muskaan- Haan. Woh... gaadi...

Rahul- Haan. Theek hogayee. Chal.

AT THE FRONT DESK!!!

Manager- Checking out sir?

Rahul- Ji.

Manager- Did you have a nice stay?

Rahul- Yes. Thank you very much.

Manager- You're welcome sir. Come again!

IN THE CAR!!!

Rahul- Tu raat ko theek se soyee?

Muskaan- Haan... Uh... Rahul?

Rahul- Haan?

Muskaan- Mujhe... library se tu laaya?

Rahul- Haan. Tujhe... neend ayee thi toh room mein so jaati. Library mein kyun...?

Muskaan- Woh main padhte padhte so gayee.

Rahul- (surprised that she didn't put up a fight) Teri tabiyat theek hai?

Muskaan- Haan. Mujhe kya hoga?

Rahul- (surprised again. Put his hand down and accidentally put it on top of

Muskaan's. She looked at him and Rahul-Muskaan music starts) Sorry.

Muskaan- It's okay.

Rahul- (stops in front of her house) Le. Tera ghar aagaya.

Muskaan- Thanks.

Rahul- (gets out and opens her door for her) Chal main tujhe tere darwaaze tak chod deta hoon. (R-M music playing)

Muskaan- (thinks to herself) Isse kya hogaya hai? Aaj aise kyun baat kar raha hai? (to him) Nahi koi baat nahi main chali jaaoongi.

Rahul- Nahi nahi. Koi baat nahi. Main chod deta hoon. (thinks to himself) Yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai? Main kyun nahi chahtha ki Muskaan jaaye? Kyun main isske saath jaana chahta hoon?

Muskaan- Theek hai. Chal. (they reach her door) Thanks. (they stand there awkwardly not knowing what to say) (R-M music playing)

Rahul- Theek hai toh main... chalta hoon.

Muskaan- (not wanting him to go) Okay... Bye.

Rahul- Bye. (turns to leave and goes and sits in his car and rolls down his window) Kal... hospital mein milenge.

Muskaan- (smiles) Haan. (thinks to herself) Yeh mujhe kya hua hai? Aye paagal, tu kyun nahi chahti ki yeh yahaan se jaaye? Kyun bahaane soch rahi hai isse rokne ke? (R-M music playing)

Rahul- (honks his horn twice while she was drifting off into his thoughts) Kya hua tujhe?

Muskaan- Huh? Nahi kuch nahi.

Rahul- (smiles) Bye.

Muskaan- Bye.

They both go their own ways, but at the same time they both had the same thought running through their minds. Why did they not want to leave? Why did they WANT to be with each other? While Rahul was driving home and Muskaan was walking upstairs to her room they both couldn't help but wonder...

Rahul-Muskaan- (both in separate places but at the same time) Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Kya... yehi pyaar hai?

Edited by AshiYuvi4life - 15 years ago

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Rahul- (to himself) Abbey yaar. Pata nahi aur kitni der lagaayegi... Abhi tak ayee kyun nahi....

Muskaan- (comes in singing) Piche piche aunda
Meri chaal be na ayeen ve
Piche piche aunda
Meri chaal be na ayeen
Dilvaleya vekhda ayeen ve
Mera laung gavacha

Rahul- (sees her) Aagayee!

Muskaan- (looks at him smiling and stops) Oye! Daanth kyun dikhaa raha hai?

Rahul- (stops smiling) Kyun? Main tujhe hansta hua achha nahi lagta?

Muskaan- (sweetly) Rahul... tu naahi mujhe hanste hue achha lagta hai aur naahi kuch aur karte hue. In short... (normal Muskaan) TU MUJHE BILKUL ACHHA NAHI LAGTA! (walks away)

Rahul- (to himself as he watches her walk away) Baat bhi nahi ki aur kudi bhi gayee! Chal oye, abhi uska mood bhi theek nahi lag raha. Baad mein baat karoonga.

At the nurse station!

Dr. Keerti- Good morning everyone.

All- Good morning ma'am.

Dr. Keerti- Dr. Atul aur Dr. Riddhima aap dono Children's Ward mein. Dr. Armaan... OPD. Dr. Anjali... I.C.U. Dr. Rahul... General Ward. Dr. Muskaan aap Dr. Shashank ko surgery... (Muskaan has a terrified look)

Nurse- Dr. Keerti...

Dr. Keerti- Yes sister?

Nurse- Dr. Keerti, Dr. Shashank ne kaha hai ki woh patient jiski small intestine mein nfection tha uski surgery cancel karvaa di gayee hai kyunki woh patient ab stable hai.

Dr. Keerti- Okay. Thank you sister. (nurse leaves) Well, Dr. Muskaan... aapko aaj Dr. Shashank ko uss hi surgery mein assist karna tha... lekin kyunki woh cancel ho chuki hai toh ab aap bhi Dr. Rahul ke saath General Ward mein rahengi. (Muskaan nods) You may all leave.

General Ward!!!!

Rahul- (with patient) Ab aapka BP normal hai. Aap apni medicines le lijiye, uske baad... (looks at Muskaan checking an elderly patient who is giving her aashirwaad)

Patient- (jokingly) Kya baat hai Dr. Rahul? Aaj aap baar baar atak rahe hain...

Rahul- Huh? Oh sorry.

Patient- (jokingly) Kaafi der se dekh raha hoon. Aapki nazarein ghoom phir ke seedhe Dr. Muskaan pe aake ruk jaati hain. Yeh kya chal raha hai?

Rahul- (blushes) Nahi nahi. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Woh main...

Patient- Baat vaat bani ke nahi?

Rahul- Aisa kuch nahi hai. Aap apni medication lijiye aur araam kariye. (smiles and sees Muskaan going) Okay take care. (goes behind her) Muskaan!

Muskaan- (gets scared from his sudden scream) Oye! Koi marr raha hai kya?

Rahul- Hein? Nahi toh...

Muskaan- (angry) Toh phir tu cheekha kyun?!

Rahul- Woh... woh mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai.

Muskaan- Dekh piddhe... mujhe tujhse koi baat nahi karni. Samjha! (turns to leave)

Rahul- Muskaan... sun naa. (walks next to her) Dekh, waise bhi abhi humaari break hai. Toh chal naa. Cafeteria mein behat ke baat karte hain.

Muskaan- Mujhe... tujhse... koi... baat... NAHI KARNI! Kaan kharaab hain kya tere? Khotha na hove te!

Rahul- Oye tu meri baat sunlegi toh tera kya jaayega?

Muskaan- Dimaag aur time. Aur yeh dono hi mere liye bohot keemti hain.

Rahul- Please yaar. Sun toh le. PLEASE!!!! (falls to the floor and grabs her feet) PLEASE!!!!

Muskaan- (embarrassed because people were watching) Oye kya kar raha hai? Utth! Abbey utth...

Rahul- Pehle tu bataa ki tu meri baat sunegi ya nahi?

Muskaan- Dekh, sab log dekh rahe hain. Tu utth.

Rahul- Sunegi toh utthoonga.

Muskaan- Haan sunoongi. Tu pehle utth.

Rahul- (stands) Ab chalein?

Muskan- Kitthe?

Rahul- Cafeteria. (Muskaan goes with him)

Cafeteria!!!

Atul- Arre Anjali please.

Anjali- Atullll...

Atul- Achha toh phir tumhaara favorite sprout sandwich laaoon?

Anjali- Atul, please. Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Atul- Nahi? Achha theek hai. Lekin tumhe khaana chahiye Anjali. Dekho kitni kamzor hogayee ho.

Anjali- Atulllll...

Riddhima- Di... itna keh raha hai toh khaalo naa. Bechaara kitne pyaar se bol raha hai.

Anjali- Ridzie please. Ab tu bhi mat shuru hojaa.

Ridz- Okay. (gives a sympathetic look to Atul)

Armaan- (walks in) Hey Champ, hey gorgeous!

Anjali-Atul- Hi Armaan!

Armaan- (sits next to Ridz) Hey basket.

Riddhima- (smile) Hi.

Armaan- So... kya chal raha tha?

Anjali- What else? Atul ke hote hue kuch exciting ho sakta hai? (Armaan laughs)

Atul- Main kya itna boring hoon?

Anjali- Haan.

Riddhima- Achha, kisi ne Rahul aur Muskaan ko dekha?

Armaan- Aate hi honge. (sees them coming in) Yeh lo. Aagaye.

Rahul- Hey guys.

Muskaan- Hi!

All- Hey.

Rahul- (thinking) Inn sab ko bhi yehi time mila tha aane ke liye?

Armaan- (notices him thinking) (whispers) Oye... tujhe kya hua?

Rahul- (disappointed) Kya yaar, tum sab ko bhi abhi aana tha?

Armaan- Kyun? Tune iss time ke liye cafeteria reserve kiya hua hai?

Rahul- Abbey chup kar yaar. Mujhe Muskaan se bohot zaroori baat karni hai.

Armaan- Zaroori baat? (Rahul tells him) Ohhhhh... have no fear. Armaan is here! Main in sabka kuch karta hoon.

Anjali- Atul! Stop it naa.

Atul- Arre Anjali please. Tumhe zaroorat hai.

Muskaan- Kyun footage khaa rahi hai? Jo khilaa raha hai woh toh khaa nahi rahi.

Riddhima- Please Di.

Armaan- Abbey Champ usko nahi khaana toh kyun force kar raha hai?

Anjali- Exactly! (pagers ring) You know, first time I'm thankful ki yeh pager baj gaya. Warna Atul ne toh mujhe khilaa ke hi chodna tha. See you later guys. (all leave except R-M)

Armaan- (leaving) Okay Rahool. See you. Bye Muskaan. (she smiles at him)

Rahul- (stops him and whispers) Oye. Yeh kaise hua?

Armaan- Abbey tu aam khaa naa. Woh kyun gin rahaa hai?

Rahul- Woh?

Armaan- Abbey woh... badi badi gol gol.

Rahul- Guthliyaan?

Armaan- Haan haan wohi. Ab tu jaayega yaan sabko wapas bulaaoon?

Rahul- Jaa raha hoon naa.

Back at the table!!!

Muskaan- Oye. Tu kya khusar phusar kar raha tha Armaan ke saath? Tujhe toh koi zaroori baat karni thi naa.

Rahul- Haan woh...

Muskaan- Dekh oye. Agar baat zaroori nahi hui naa toh main tera galaa dabaa doongi. Sabke saamne jo tamasha kiya tha naa tune...

Rahul- Tu apni bak bak karti jaayegi ya meri bhi sunegi?

Muskaan- Bakko.

Rahul- Woh main... Muskaan main... main...

Muskaan- Kya bakri ki tarhaan main main kar raha hai. Seedhi tarhaan bolna hai toh bol warna main chali. (gets up to go)

Rahul- (grabs her hand) Muskaanagartuaajfreehaitohmeresaathicecreamkhaanechalegi?

Muskaan- Kya?

Rahul- Agarnahitohkoiproblemnahihai.

Muskaan- Abbey oye! Break maar! Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya. Araam se bol taaki mere jaise normal insaan samajh sakein.

Rahul- (deep breath) Main keh raha tha ki... agar tu... Tu aaj shyaam ko kya kar rahi hai?

Muskaan- (gives him an awkward look) Duty...

Rahul- Duty ke baad yaar.

Muskaan- (sarcastically) Gidda paoongi. (rolls her eyes) Ghar jaoongi aur kya? (impatiently) Kyun?

Rahul- Nahi woh main soch raha tha ki... agar tu busy nahi hai toh... (expectantly) ice cream khaane chalegi mere saath?

Muskaan- (confused) Tere saath...

Rahul- (worried she'd say no) Dekh ab yeh mat kahiyo ki tu mere saath zeher bhi nahi khaayegi.

Muskaan- (uncertainly) Ice cream?

Rahul- Haan... kyun?

Muskaan- Nahi... tujhse... khayee jaayegi?

Rahul- (thinks about what she says) Kya keh rahi hai yeh yaar? (remembers)

Childhood Flashback: Age 5!!!!

Rahul- Uncle uncle... mainu ik chocolate ice cream cone davo.

Ice cream vendor- Aelo puttar ji.

Rahul takes it and happily starts walking eating his ice cream. As he's walking, he sees Muskaan coming towards him.

Rahul- Phitte moo. Yeh yahaan kyun aa rahi hai? Chipkali.

Muskaan- Oye kaan khajure! (Rahul stops walking and looks at her) Tune mere baal kheeche the naa? Yeh le! (throws his ice cream on the floor)

Rahul- Oye! Tune meri ice cream kyun phenki?

Muskaan- Kyunki tune mere baal kheeche!

Rahul- (pulls her hair again) Ab kya karegi?

Muskaan- (evil look) Ice cream khaani hai? Yeh le! (pushes him on the floor and he falls face flat onto the ice cream) (starts laughing) Ice cream kaisi hai Rahul? (laughs even harder then walks away while the other little kids stand around and laugh at an embarrassed Rahul)

End of flashback!!!

Rahul- (smiles thinking about how much they used to fight and looks over at Muskaan who was trying really hard to control her laughter by not making eye contact) (he smiles again) Haan... Khayee jaayegi. (smiles)

Muskaan- (looks up at him and shrugs still trying to control her laughter) Teri marzi.

Rahul- (excited) Matlab... tu chalegi?

Muskaan- (sighs) Haan... Chaloongi. Lekin woh waali baat dobaara nahi hogi, uss ki koi guarantee nahin hai. (evil smile)

Rahul- Perfect! Uh... mera matlab... hum duty ke fauran baad chalenge.

Muskaan- Dimaag kharaab hogaya hai kya? Meri Dhanno ka kya hoga? (walking out of the cafeteria together)

Rahul- Abbey haan yaar. Teri Dhanno... achha theek hai. Tu naa, apni Dhanno pe ghar jaana aur main tere peeche apni car mein aajaoonga. Tu apni Dhanno wahin chod dena aur phir meri car mein chalenge. Theek hai naa?

Muskaan- (in the corridor) Haiye Rabba. Mera dimaag ghoom raha hai tere iss plan se. Ab tu meri baat sun! Main jaoongi ghar. Apni Dhanno pe.

Rahul- Aur phir main tujhe baad mein aake pick up karloonga.

Muskaan- Pehli baar akalmandi ki baat ki hai. Mera hi asar hai.

Rahul- (excited) Toh phir theek hai. Main tujhe 7:30 pe pick up karoonga. Bye... (backing up and smiling)

Muskaan- (trying to stop him) Rahul....

Rahul- (laughing and backing up) Bye... (waving)

Right then Rahul trips off something and falls into someone's arms.

Lovely- (holding Rahul in her arms with the biggest smile on her face) Oh ji Rahul ji aap!

Rahul- (looks at her and screams) Ahh. Mera matlab Lovely ji... thank you. (smiles nervously while she's still holding him in her arms)

Muskaan- (throwing her head back and laughing as she watched all of this from 20 feet away) (says to herself) Paagal munda. (walks away laughing)

Rahul- (admired her as she laughed and watched her walk away, but she turned around once to look back at him and smiled before walking back to the General Ward) (remembering his position) Lovely ji... (smiles nervously) zara chodengi please. Mujhe duty ke liye jaana hai.

Lovely- (smiles) Oh ji koi baat nahi. Tussi jaao. (smiles)

Rahul- Tussi... chaddoge taz hi taan jaavanga. (smiles)

Lovely- Oh sorry ji. (let's him get up)

Rahul- Okay... bye Lovely ji. (pinches her cheeks out of happiness)

Lovely- Bye ji. (blushes and leaves)

After duty outside Muskaan's house!!!

Rahul- (waiting outside) Kya karoon? Horn bajaoon ya phir phone karoon?

Muskaan- (comes out and sits in the car as he's STILL deciding what he should do) Oye! (snaps her fingers in front of his face)

Rahul- Tu kab aayee?

Muskaan- Main toh abhi abhi ayee... lekin tu bahar kabse behata tha? Bataa toh deta ki tu aagaya hai. Woh toh maine by-chance bahar dekhliya warna tu toh yaheen behata rehta.

Rahul- (expectantly) Toh tu... mera intezaar kar rahi thi? (flirty smile)

Muskaan- (nervous) Nahi toh... main tera intezaar kyun karoongi? Uhh... ab chalein?

Rahul- Haan. (starts driving) Music?

Muskaan- Yeh gaadi teri hai naa? Toh jo teri marzi ho woh kar. Mujhe kyun pooch raha hai?

Rahul switches on the radio and a really beautiful love song was playing. Even though neither Rahul nor Muskaan are too fond of love songs, neither one of them complained to what was playing. Maybe because they felt the magic that the song was supposed to bring. And what more could they ask for than the fact that just then... it started raining. Not a storm but a light beautiful rain.

Pehla yeh pehla
Pyaar tera mera soni
Pehli yeh mulaqat hai...
Pehli yeh mulaqat hai
Jo keh rahi hain aankhein
Woh keh rahi hain baatein
Jaagi tu bhi saari raat hai...

Pehlaaaa... haiye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar

Dil pe chala naa jab zor koi...
Dil pe chala naa jab zor koi
Tu mere paas aa gayee... haiye
Main tere paas aa gayaa

Pyaasi hain teri saansein...
Pyaasi hain meri saansein...
Uspe yeh barsaat hai...
Uspe yeh barsaat hai

Pehlaaaa.......haaye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar

Kab se the hum tum (Rahul looked at Muskaan)
Tanha akele...
Kab se the hum tum (She looked straight ahead unaware of his gaze)
Tanha akele
Aaj tujhe chain mil gayaa....
Aaj mujhe chain mil gayaa....

Baahon mein meri tum
Baahon mein teri hum
Aur yeh jawaan raat hai...
Aur yeh jawaan raat hai

Pehlaaaa.......haaye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar

Ruk si gayi hain... (Muskaan looked at Rahul wondering how he felt)
Teri meri raahein
Ruk si gayi hain
Teri meri raahein
Hum jo saath aa gaye... haaye
Manzil ke paas aa gaye

Aaye the kahaan se dono
Jaayenge kahaan pe dono
Yeh toh ab kisse yaad hai...
Yeh toh ab kisse yaad hai

Pehlaaaa.......haaye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar

Pehla yeh pehla (Muskaan put her hand down on the seat)
Pyaar tera mera soni
Pehli yeh mulaqat hai... (Rahul unknowingly put his hand on top of hers)
Pehli yeh mulaqat hai
Jo keh rahi hain aankhein (they both looked at each other for a while)
Woh keh rahi hain baatein
Jaagi tu bhi saari raat hai...
Jaagi tu bhi saari raat hai

Pehlaaaa.......haaye pehla... (Rahul said sorry and moved his hand)
Tera mera pyaar (Muskaan avoided eye contact)
Haaye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar
Haaye pehla...
Tera mera pyaar

Rahul and Muskaan were both so spell bound by the song that they didn't even realize when they reached the ice cream parlor. Rahul parked the car and came out to open Muskaan's door. Muskaan came out slowly not knowing what she should say. They stood there for about 2 minutes while Rahul and Muskaan both avoided eye contact and were looking around.

Rahul- (breaking the awkward silence) Andar... andar chalein?

Muskaan- Huh? Haan. (they go in)

Rahul- Tu behat main ice cream laata hoon.

Muskaan- Par...

Rahul- (cutting her off) Mujhe pata hai. Bachpan se eik hi flavor toh pasand hai tujhe. (smiles) (Muskaan smiles)

Rahul comes back with the ice cream. Muskaan ki mango flavor aur Rahul ki chocolate, and then he sits down...

Muskaan- (surprised) Tujhe abhi tak yaad hai...

Rahul- Hairaan kyun ho rahi hai? Bachpan se jaanta hoon tujhe. Itna toh main shayad khud ko nahi jaanta jitna tujhe jaanta hoon. (Muskaan laughs)

Muskaan- Sorry.

Rahul- Kis liye?

Muskaan- Maine tujhe dhakka maara tha naa.

Rahul- Log ghalti karne ke fauran baad sorry kehte hain.. tu pehli ladki hai jo 17 saal baad sorry keh rahi hai. (both laugh)

Muskaan- Oye, maine sorry kehdiya wohi bohot badi baat hai. Warna main har kisi ko sorry nahi bolti.

Rahul- Pata hai. (smiles)

Muskaan- Oye Rahul!

Rahul- Kya hua?

Muskaan- Chocolate ice cream bhi hai, tu bhi hai, aur main bhi hoon. Kya kehta hai? EIk baar phir hojaaye? (laughs)

Rahul- Lekin tere paas koi wajjah nahi hai. Aa, pehle main tere baal kheechta hoon. (evil smile)

Muskaan- (laughs) Achha eik baat bataa... aaj yeh ice cream... koi khaas baat?

Rahul- Ainwainyee...

Muskaan- Ainwainyee toh tu mujhe ice cream ke liye nahi bolega... sach sach bataa Rahul. Tune iss mein kuch milaaya toh nahi hai?

Rahul- Muskaan... main...

Muskaan- ...Itna bura bhi nahi hoon. (laughs) Oye thand rakh thand. Apni shakal dekhi hai? Main toh mazaak kar rahi thi yaar.

Rahul- Muskaan... kya hum dost nahi bann sakte?

Muskaan- Dost? Nahi bann sakte.

Rahul- Kyun?

Muskaan- (laughs) Jhalle, dost nahi hoti toh tere saath kabhi nahi aati. Jhagadti hoon, lekin tujhse nafrat nahi karti. Samjha? Gadhaa. (laughs) Par haan, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki hum dono ke beech mein kuch bhi badlega. Agar tune mujhse zyaada bak bak ki toh main tera band bajaa doongi. (laughs)

Rahul- (smiles) Muskaan teri naak pe ice cream lagi hai.

Muskaan- Kya? Aur tu ab bataa raha hai! (rubs the tip of her nose) Hogaya? (Rahul puts ice cream on the tip of his finger when she's not paying attention)

Rahul- (evil smile) Nahi. Eik minute. (leans forward and puts the ice cream on her nose) Ab theek hai.

Muskaan- (feels the cold ice cream on her nose) Abbey oye! Yeh kya harkat hai?

Rahul- (dying of laughter) Tu badi cute lag rahi hai.

Muskaan- Tujhe toh main chodoongi nahi!

Rahul- (laughing) Itna ghussa karti hai. Dekh, ice cream bhi pigal gayee. (wipes it off her nose) Hogayee saaf. Thand rakh. (both smile)

After a while they both leave...

In the car, on the way back, both of them talk about their childhood and how much they used to fight. Eventually they reached Muskaan's house. It was 7:30 when they left and now it was about 10:00 p.m.

Rahul- (stops in front of Muskaan's house) Le. Aagaya tera ghar.

Rahul smiles and turns to look at her and sees that she's fast asleep. He didn't want to wake her because already she was tired from the heavy work load at the hospital today and she'd have to wake up early for work tomorrow. At first he admired her sleeping and then he decided to take her inside. He took the keys of her house out of her jhola (Punjabi style bag) and got out of his car to open the door. Then he came back and slowly lifted her out of the car and took her inside the house. He carried her up the stairs to her bedroom and gently put her down on her bed. He put her jhola on the table next to her and took off her juttis. Slowly, he pulled the covers over her and turned to leave when he felt something tug at his sleeve. He thought that Muskaan woke up and when he turned around to see what she wanted, he saw that her bracelet was stuck on his sleeve. He smiled and slowly untangled her bracelet from the thread on his sleeve. He kissed her on the hand and slowly laced his fingers with hers. He kneeled down next to her bed and sat there for about 10 minutes. At about 10:30 p.m. he decided to leave, so he got up and made sure she was still sleeping. Before leaving, very slowly, he unlaced his fingers from hers and set her hand back on the bed, and gently kissed her on the cheek before turning to leave. As he headed towards the door of her bedroom, he heard her stirring. He went back to make sure she didn't wake up and saw something that left him mesmerized. She had the sweetest smile on her face. Rahul took one last look at her and moved a few strands of hair from her face and kissed her on the forehead and once again, turned to leave. Once again, Muskaan moved around a bit with the same sweet smile on her face, but this time she seemed to be glowing. Her hand hit the remote control of her sound system and the radio turned on.

V.J.- Aur humaari next request hai eik love song. Enjoy guys!

It was the same song that Rahul-Muskaan had been listening to in the car. While the song was playing, Muskaan's smile became brighter, as moments of the time she and Rahul had spent that day were going through her mind. Unknowingly, in her sleep, she said what she might not have been able to say while she was in her senses.

Muskaan- (smiling a cute smile still in her sleep) Rahul...

Rahul- (kept walking but smiled) Neend mein kabse bolne lag gayee? Jhalli kudi.

Muskaan- (still smiling) I love you Rahul...

Rahul stopped dead in his tracks. He was going through so many phases at the same time. It hit his body like lightening. Happiness, excitement, longing, shock, love... He quickly looked back at Muskaan and went to her side.

Rahul- (talking to her sleeping figure) Kya kaha tune?

Muskaan- (repeating her words over and over while she smiled) Rahul I looooove you... Main tujhse bohoooooooot pyaar karti hoon.

Rahul- (smiling the brightest smile in the world) (holds her hand) Main bhi tujhse bohot pyaar karta hoon Muskaan. (kisses her hand and smiles) Muskaan...

Muskan- (says this one last time and then drifts off to a quiet, peaceful sleep) I love you Rahul...

Rahul- (laughs to himself) Kaash tu jaagte hue yeh kehthi. (smiles) I love you Muskaan... (gets up and switches off the radio and walks out humming.... Pehla yeh pehla... pyaar tera mera soni...)

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Kabhi kabhi jinn se hum duniya mein sabse zyaada pyaar karte hain woh humaare liye sirf eik yaad bann ke reh jaate hain. Pyaar toh har koi kar leta hai, lekin usse zinda rakhna ahsaan nahi hota. Maine zindagi mein bohot rishtey bannte aur toothe hue dekhe hain. Pyaar ke jhoote vaade aur jhooti kasamon pe khade rishton ko bikharte hue dekha hai. Pyaar... kitna chota lafz hai naa? Lekin iss chhote se lafz mein poori duniya samaa sakti hai. Bachpan mein suna tha ki har kahaani ka anth hamesha khushi nahi deta. Lekin kuch kahaaniyaan aisi bhi hain jinka anth kabhi hota hi nahi hai. Kuch aisi hi hai yeh kahaani. Main... Rahul. Aur yeh kahaani kisi eik ki nahi hai. Yeh kahaani humaari hai. Meri aur uss ladki ki jo mere saath hamesha rehti hai... mere chehre par. Muskaan...

Muskaan... meri zindagi ki pehli aur akhri ladki. Aati hai kabhi kabhi mere sapnon mein, mujhse milne. Jhalli kudi. Kabhi nahi bhool sakta main woh badi badi masti bhari aankhein aur hamesha muskurata hua chehra. Rab ne sabke liye kisi na kisi ko banaaya hai, aur mere liye woh koi Muskaan hai. Kitna jhagadti thi mujhse, lekin main... deewanon ki tarhaan pyaar karta rehta tha uss se. Sach kahoon toh, Muskaan mere liye eik sapne se kam nahi hai. Eik aisa sapna jo bohot log dekhte hain, par sach sirf kuch logon ka hota hai...

Aaj chaar saal baad eik baar phir lauta hoon yahaan... Shayad iss umeed se ki yahaan mere beete hue pal mujhe wapas mil jaayein. Khwaabon ka yeh sheher... Kasauli. Himachal Pradesh ka yeh hill station jahaan maine apni zindagi ke bohot se yaadgaar pal bitaaye. Mera college... kya din the woh bhi. (laughed lightly as he slowly walked past his college seeing the newer generation of students walking around with their respected partners or just hanging out with their friends at the usual hangout.) Aaj inn sabko dekhta hoon toh sochta hoon... aaj se chaar saal baad, yeh sab kahaan honge? Inn mein se kuch lawyers honge toh kuch meri tarhaan doctors. (sighs) College. Eik ajeeb sa sukoon mil raha hai mujhe yahaan aake. Kabhi socha nahi tha ki dobara yahaan aaoonga. Iss hi sheher mein maine sab kuch kho diya tha, aur aaj, eik baar phir, zindagi ne mujhe yaheen laake khada kardiya hai.

Iss canteen se bohot yaadein judi hain meri. College ke dinon mein, yaheen behat ke padhta tha aur Armaan ko dekh ke sochta tha ki pata nahi, yeh apni zindagi mein ladkiyon se aage badh paayega yaa nahi. (laughs) Shehnaaz Bi... (smiles) kitna khayaal rakhti thi woh mera.

Rahul- Suniye bhai saab...

Worker- Ji saab?

Rahul- Shehnaaz Bi hain kya?

Worker- Ji abhi bulaata hoon.

Shehnaaz Bi- (coming out) Arre kaun aaya hai? Kaun hai?

Rahul- (bright smile) As salaam alaikum Shehnaaz Bi.

Shehnaaz Bi- (teary eyed) Rahul... mera bachha. Waa alaikum asalaam mere bachhe. (kisses him on the forehead)

Rahul- Kaisi hain aap?

Shehnaaz Bi- Badi jaldi yaad ayee tujhe apni Bi ki.

Rahul- Aisi baat nahi hai Bi. Aap toh jaanti hi hain ki hospital mein kitna kaam hota hai.

Shehnaaz Bi- Haan haan. Bohot bada doctor bann gaya hai naa.

Rahul- Bi...

Shehnaaz Bi- Achha yeh sab chod... (gets a depressed look on her face) Kaisa hai tu?

Rahul- Zinda hoon. Khush rehne ki koshish karta hoon. Iss se zyaada main kar bhi kya sakta hoon?

Shehnaaz Bi- Yahaan aake apne dukhon ko kyun badhaa raha hai mere bachhe?

Rahul- Socha toh tha Bi, ki dobara kabhi yahaan nahi aaoonga, lekin kuch toh hai jo mujhe yahaan keech laaya. (distant look) Shayad meri yaadein... aur shayad... woh.

Shehnaaz Bi- Tu kab tak hai yahaan?

Rahul- Jab tak kismat mujhe wapas nahi le jaati. Jaane se pehle milke jaoonga.

Shehnaaz Bi- (runs her hand over his head) Khush rehna beta. Aur aate rehna apni Bi se milne.

Rahul- Ji. Khuda hafiz.

Shehnaaz Bi- Khuda hafiz... (watches him walk off with tears in her eyes) Ya Allah, mere bachhe ke dil ko sukoon dena. Uski hifazat karna.

Yahaan kuch nahi badla. Sab kuch waise hi hai jaisa main chod ke gaya tha. Bas kuch chehre naye hain. (smiles at the sight before him) Mera ghar... mummy toh chahti hi nahi thi ki main hostel mein rahoon. (lightly laughs and heads towards the entrance of the small, white wooden fencing that was surrounding the beautiful garden of the gorgeous house. He goes inside and inhales slowly) Itne saalon baad bhi uski khushboo hai yahaan. Mehsoos kar sakta hoon main usse. Yaheen kahin hai woh... mere kareeb. (he hears the sound of payals as he puts his bag down)

Rahul- Mujhe pata hai ki tu yaheen hai. Bahar aa.

Muskaan- (goes close to him) Boo. (laughs)

Rahul- Very funny. Aise milta hai koi?

Muskaan- Waise toh mujhe tujhse baat hi nahi karni chahiye.

Rahul- Kyun???

Muskaan- Tujhe ab yaad ayee meri? Kabse tera intezaar kar rahi thi.

Rahul- I'm sorry. Sanjeevani mein bohot kaam tha warna...

Muskaan- Warna tu aajata hai naa? Jhoot toh mujhse bol hi mat. Agar main tujhe nahi bulaati naa, toh tu kabhi nahi aata.

Rahul- Tu mujhe bulaaye aur main naa aaoon, aisa ho sakta hai?

Muskaan- (smiles) Tere aane ki khushi mein maine poora ghar chamka diya.

Rahul- Hmm. Woh toh dikh raha hai.

Muskaan- Achha, tu araam karle. Bohot thak gaya hoga naa. Main baad mein aaoongi.

Rahul- Theek hai.

Yeh ladki bhi bohot ajeeb hai. Pata nahi kya karoon main iss ka. (rests on his bed with his eyes closed) Thak gaya hoon, lekin sona nahi chahta. Eik ajeeb sa darr hai jo mujhe chain se sone nahi deta. Pichle chaar saalon mein aisi eik raat nahi jab main sukoon se so paaya. Roz roz, wohi sapna. (falls asleep)

Rahul- (in his sleep) Muskaan... (tossing and turning with a fearful expression) Nahi Muskaan. Muskaan please! (wakes up in a cold sweat) MUSKAAN!

Muskaan- (by his side) Shhh... kya hua?

Rahul- Muskaan? Tu... tu kab ayee?

Muskaan- (soft smile) Kuch der pehle. Tu so raha tha issiliye main tere paas hi behat gayee. Par tujhe kya hua? Tu theek hai naa?

Rahul- (runs his fingers through his hair trying to get over his nightmare) Haan...

Muskaan- Achha sun... abhi mujhe jaana hai. Lekin main phir aaoongi.

Rahul- Pakka aayegi naa?

Muskaan- Aaoongi. (smiles softly and then leaves)

Chali gayee... aur jaate jaate eik baar phir mere chehre pe apni chhaap chod gayee. Apni muskaan. (sighs) Bohot din hogaye jeeye hue. Aaj bohot saalon ke baad, eik baar phir jeena chahta hoon. Eik baar phir inn hi pahaadiyon mein bhatakna chahta hoon.

Maine kahaa tha ki yeh kahaani kisi eik ki nahi hai. Hum dono ki kahaani hai. (walking towards the mountain areas) Meri Muskaan... bachpan se jaanta hoon usse. Kabhi socha hi nahi tha ki jis ladki ke saath main bachpan mein khel ke bada hua, uss hi ladki se mujhe itna pyaar hojaayega. Bachpan ki dushmani jo Sanjeevani mein aane ke baad dosti bani, aur wahin pe... pyaar. Muskaan kab meri dushman se meri dost aur dost se meri zindagi bann gayee, pata hi nahi chala.

Mujhe ab bhi yaad hai woh din jab humaari shaadi ki baat pakki hui thi. (smiles to himself) Kitni khush thi woh. Agle hi din poore Pindh ko pata chal gaya tha ki humaari shaadi hone waali hai. Teen hafte baad humaari shaadi thi aur Muskaan? Muskaan kahin ghoomne jaana chahthi thi. Bohot ziddh ki thi ussne. Kehti thi ki shaadi se pehle, woh har uss jaggah ko dekhna chahthi hai jahaan maine apni zindagi ki sabse yaadgar saal bithaaye. Kasauli dekhna chahthi thi. Maine bohot samjhaaya ki shaadi ke baad lejaoonga, lekin Muskaan ke aage kisi ki kahaan chalti thi? (smiles to himself) Teen din baad hi hum Kasauli ke liye nikal gaye. Maine usse har woh jaggah dikhaayi jahaan main apne college ke dinon mein jaata tha. Shehnaaz Bi se milvaaya, college dikhaaya, kuch puraane classmates se milvaaya, aur... apna ghar dikhaya. Woh ghar jahaan college ke time pe main rehta tha. Woh ghar jo main Muskaan ko gift karna chahta tha...

Muskaan- Wow! Rahul, yeh ghar kitna sundar hai naa?

Rahul- (smiles and hugs her from the back) Tera hi ghar hai.

Muskaan- Mera?

Rahul- Hmm. College ke dinon mein main yaheen rehta tha. Mummy nahi chahti thi ki main hostel mein rahoon.

Muskaan- Toh yeh tera ghar hai?

Rahul- Nahi. Tera ghar hai. Achha laga?

Muskaan- (kisses him on the cheek) Bohot!

Kasauli mein aane ke baad koi yahaan ki pahaadiyaan na dekhe, aisa toh ho nahi sakta. Muskaan ko bohot shauk tha pahaadiyon mein ghoomne ka. Eik din plan banaake chale gaye hum... long drive pe.

Rahul- (driving) Tujhe pata hai, college ke dinon mein main yahaan bohot aata tha. Sukoon milta tha. Padhaai ke baad thoda waqt yahaan bitaata tha apne doston ke saath.

Muskaan- Kaun? Woh tere champu dost jo bilkul tere jaise the?

Rahul- (laughs) Tab ki baat thi. Ab toh nahi hoon naa.

Muskaan- Rab da shukar hai.

Rahul- (stops the car) Chal. Yahaan se 1 mile ki hike hai top tak. Chal sakegi itna?

Muskaan- Of course! Tune mujhe apne jaisa kamzor samjha hai kya? Chal abhi.

Theek hi kaha tha ussne. Mujhse pehle toh wohi pohonch gayee thi. Kya din tha woh bhi. Hum dono kaafi der tak uppar the. Bohot baatein ki. Kuch bachpan ki aur kuch shaadi ki. Lekin, unn sab cheezon se zyaada, Muskaan mere baare mein jaan na chahti thi. Jab main yahaan aaya tha college ke liye, tab main aur Muskaan achhe dost nahi the, lekin uss waqt, Muskaan har eik chhoti se chhoti baat jaan na chahti thi mere baare mein. Main bolta gaya, aur woh muskuraate hue aur poochti gayee. Pata hi nahi chala kab andhera hone lag gaya. Bohot kehne ke baad, finally Muskaan utth gayee neeche utarne ke liye.

Muskaan- Rahul, main kuch likh rahi hoon.

Rahul- Kya?

Muskaan- Lyrics hain. Par sirf kuch lines hi likheen hain. Aage kya likhoon?

Rahul- Tere dil ka gaana main poora karoonga. Pehle jitna likha hai, utthna toh bataa.

Muskaan- Theek hai. (says lines in a poetic way, but does not sing them)

Tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura
Tu dhoop ki tarhaan badan ko chu zara
Shareer se yeh muskuraahatein teri
Badan mein sunnti hoon main aahatein teri...

Rahul- Aage?

Muskaan- Bas itna hi hai. Aage kya likhoon?

Rahul- Sochke bataoonga.

Woh din shaayad Kasauli mein humaara sabse achha din tha. Sab kuch eik sapne jaisa tha. Koi dukh nahi, koi pareshaani nahi. Bas hum dono, humaara pyaar, aur yeh vaadiyaan. Neeche aate aate eik baar phir ussne mujhse gaane ke baare mein poocha...

Muskaan- (resting her on his shoulder while he was driving) Rahul...

Rahul- Haan?

Muskaan- Gaana.

Rahul- Uh... abhi kaise bataaoon Muskaan. Thoda sochne ka time toh de.

Muskaan- Theek hai. Pata hai, yeh gaana mere liye bohot special hai, aur humaari shaadi se pehle yeh gaana poora hojaana chahiye.

Rahul- Kyun?

Muskaan- (looks at him) Kyunki shaadi ke baad mujhe wapas yaheen aana hai. Apne ghar. Tere saath. Aur uss din main yehi gaana gaoongi. Yahaan pahaadon mein... tere liye.

Rahul- (smiles and kisses her on the forehead) Theek hai. Shaadi se pehle tera gaana poora hojaayega.

Muskaan- (smiles and looks forward again) RAHUL!!! SAMBHAAL!

Humaari gaadi ke saamne eik aur gaadi thi... jiska accident ho chuka tha. Woh gaadi neeche gidne waali thi aur uss mein do log phasse the. Muskaan chillaayee aur saamne dekhte hi maine jaldi se break maari. Samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karoon... Woh log itni buri tarhaan se phasse hue the... kuch bhi ho sakta tha. Dekhte hi dekhte, Muskaan gaadi se bahar nikli unki madat karne.

Muskaan- Oh my god! Rahul! Jaldi aa! Yeh log marr jaayenge!

Rahul- (running out of the car) Muskaan!

Muskaan- Rahul jaldi rassi laa!

Rahul- (grabs rope from his car) Don't worry! Aapko kuch nahi hoga! Just relax! (throws the rope down to them)

Muskaan- (clutching onto his arm panicking) Rahul, 2,500 ft fall hai. Kuch bhi kar Rahul. Inn ko uppar keech!

Rahul- (looks down at the fearful faces of the couple stuck in the car which was going to fall completely off the cliff very fast) Rassi pakadiye!

Uss aadmi ne bohot samjhaane ke baad apni biwi ko uppar bheja. Woh jaana hi nahi chahti thi usse neeche chodke. Kaise bhi karke maine unn dono ko uppar keechliya lekin'

Woman- Mera bachha kahaan hai?!

Man- Munna? Munna kahaan hai?!

Woman- (screaming and crying) Please mere bachhe ko bachaao! Mera bachha!

Muskaan- Bachha? Rahul bachha!

Rahul- Muskaan bachha kaise aayega?

Woman- (crying louder) Mera bachha!!!

Rahul- (to the man) Dekhiye, hum dono doctors hain. Aap please inhe sambhaaliye. (trying to control her) Muskaan tu' (looks around) MUSKAAN!!!

Bohot der ho chuki thi. Muskaan ne thaan liya tha ke woh uss bachhe ko bachaa ke laayegi. Jab tak maine mudhke dekha' Muskaan rassi pakadke neeche uttar rahi thi.

Rahul- (running towards the edge with the horrific sight in front of him) Muskaan!!!! Paagal hogayee hai kya?! Uppar aa! Muskaan uppar aa!

Muskaan- Rahul main bachhe ko nahi marrne de sakti!

Rahul- (crying) Muskaan please!

Muskaan- Rahul hum doctors hain! Humaare liye sabse zaroori doosron ki jaan bachaana hai!

Rahul- Muskaan tu uppar aaja! Main le aaoonga usse!

Lekin ussne meri nahi suni... woh uttar gayee mauth ke moo mein uss bachhe ki jaan bachaane ke liye. Do minute baad eik dhamaaka hua aur aisa laga jaise mera dil dhadakna bandh hogaya... sirf eik hi cheez dikh rahi thi. Woh gaadi uss unchaayee se gir chuki thi aur ahista ahista neeche jaa rahi thi. Meri Muskaan...

Rahul- (falling to his knees) MUSKAAAAANNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Agle teen minute tak kuch nahi. Koi awaaz nahi, sab kuch jaise ruk sa gaya tha. Phir achaanak...

Muskaan- Rahul!!!

Usski awaaz sunnte hi maine neeche dekha. Woh bachha aur Muskaan, dono 2,500 ft ki unchaayee pe latak rahe the, sirf eik rassi ke sahaare.

Muskaan- Maine bacche ko bachaa liya Rahul! Unnka bachha theek hai!

Rahul- Muskaan ruk! Main rassi keechta hoon!

Meri samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki main kya karoon. Uss eik pal mein maine apni poori zindagi ko apni aankhon ke saamne se guzarte dekha. Muskaan ko khone ka darr jaane ka naam hi nahi le raha tha. Meri Muskaan theek thi.

Muskaan- Rahul bachhe ko pakad!

Rahul- Haan. (pulling the child up) Bhai saab aapka bachha theek hai!

Woman- Mera bachha!

Rahul- (pulls the child up and lets him run to his parents) Muskaan main rassi aur keech raha hoon! Apna haath de mujhe!

Muskaan- Rahul rassi tooth rahi hai!

Jo khauff meri aankhon mein tha uss waqt Muskaan ki baat sunn ne ke baad, mera dil aur kamzor hota jaa raha tha.

Rahul- Muskaan tujhe kuch nahi hoga! Tu apna haath de mujhe!

Muskaan- (grabbing hold of his hand right when the rope broke) Rahul!

Rahul- Muskaan tujhe kuch nahi hoga. Kuch nahi hoga tujhe. Tu haath mat chodna. Main hoon na. Sab theek hojaayega Muskaan.

Muskaan- Rahul... Rahul mera haath choot raha hai. Main zyaada der nahi pakad sakti.

Rahul- Muskaan main tujhe keech raha hoon uppar. Kuch nahi hoga... kuch nahi... (starts to slip as well because where he was kneeling was all ice)

Muskaan- Paagal mat bann Rahul! Tu yahaan se gir sakta hai. Tu phisal jaayega. It's all ice!

Rahul- (crying) Kuch nahi hoga Muskaan. Tu uppar aaja!

Muskaan- (smiling at him) Rahul... tu mera gaana poora karega naa.

Rahul- (crying) Hum dono poora karenge Muskaan. Milke poora karenge. Tu pehle uppar aaja.

Muskaan- (still smiling) Main tujhse bohot pyaar karti hoon Rahul... (her hand was slipping)

Rahul- (crying) Muskaan main bhi tujhse bohot pyaar karta hoon. Please uppar aaja Muskaan.

Muskaan- (smiles) I love you Rahul... (slips completely and falls looking at him with a smile)

Rahul- (terrified) MUSKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meri Muskaan... hamesha ke liye chali gayee. (tear rolls down his eye) Mere saamne hote hue bhi woh mujhse itni door thi. Main usske liye kuch nahi kar saka. Kabhi nahi bhool sakta main uska muskuraata hua chehra. Jaate jaate bhi woh muskuraate hue gayee... dobaara kabhi naa lautne ke liye. Apne saath sab kuch le gayee woh. Sab kuch. Kuch nahi bacha tha. Bachi thi toh sirf uski yaadein... aur uska woh adhura gaana.

Aaj poore chaar saal ke baad main uss hi jaggah khada hoon jahaan maine apni Muskaan ko aakhri baar muskuraate hue dekha tha. Apni zindagi degayee woh mujhe. Jaanti thi ki agar main aur aage aaya toh main bhi phisal jaaoonga. Lekin uss waqt, mere liye Muskaan ki zindagi se zyaada zaroori kuch nahi tha. Meri apni zindagi bhi nahi. Dil mein usska woh adhoora gaana liye, main wapas aaya hoon aaj. Ussne kaha tha ki shaadi ke baad jab wapas aayenge toh wohi gaana gaayegi. Woh toh apna gaana adhoora hi chod gayee, lekin maine apne vaada poora kiya... Aaj ka din, bohot khaas hai mere liye. Aayee thi mere sapnon mein. Baar baar mujhe bulaati thi yahaan. Mujhse milti bhi thi, lekin main usse choo nahi sakta tha. Sirf dekh sakta tha, mehsoos kar sakta tha, baat kar sakta tha, sunn sakta tha... Jab bhi haath badhaaya choone ke liye toh woh ghayab hojaati...

Rahul- (smiling as he looked into the distance from the same spot he lost Muskaan) Dekh Muskaan. Main aagaya. Tera gaana poora kardiya hai maine. (recites the words)

Tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura
Tu dhoop ki tarhaan badan ko choo zara
Shareer se yeh muskuraahatein teri
Badan mein sunta hoon main aahatein teri
Labon se aake chude ab yeh labh zara
Tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura...

Uski khushboo ne inn hawaaon ko mehakaa diya hai. Aisa lag raha hai ki woh yaheen kahin hai. Mere paas...

Rahul- (closes his eyes and breathes in her scent) Happy birthday Muskaan...

Muskaan- (holds his hand and kisses his cheek) Rahul...

Rahul- (opens his eyes to find her next to him) Muskaan... tu mujhe...

Muskaan- (smiles) Choo sakti hoon... tune apna vaada poora kardiya.

Rahul- (kisses her forehead with tears in his eyes) Happy birthday.

Muskaan- (holds his hand and smiles) Main apna poora din tere saath bitaana chahti hoon. Wahin, jahaan se yeh gaana shuru kiya tha.

Rahul- Chal. (both walked to the top, hand-in-hand as she rested her head on his shoulder)

Muskaan hamesha kehti thi ki jab hawaa chale toh samajh lena ki main tujhe choo ke guzar gayee, jab suraj ki pehli kiranein tujhpe girein toh samajh lena ki main tujhe jagaane ayee hoon, jab baarish ho toh samajhna ki main teri yaad mein aansoo bahaa rahi hoon, jab phool kilein toh samajhna ki main tujh tak apni khushboo bikheir rahi hoon, aur jab raat ko chand nikle, toh usse dekh ke eik baar muskura dena... kyunki tujhe dekh ke main bhi muskuraoongi.

Meri zindagi mein sirf eik hi ladki ayee aur eik hi ladki rahegi... Muskaan. Zindagi hai jahaan Muskaan hai. Khushi hai jahaan Muskaan hai. Dil hai jahaan Muskaan hai. Pyaar hai jahaan Muskaan hai. Aur... Rahul hai jahaan Muskaan hai.

Maine kaha tha naa, yeh kahaani kisi eik ki nahi hai. Yeh kahaani hum dono ki hai. Haan yeh sach hai ki meri Muskaan aam logon ki duniya mein nahi hai, lekin woh meri duniya mein hai. Doosron ko chahe meri Muskaan naa dikhti ho, lekin woh hamesha mere saath hai. Mere sapnon mein, mere khayaalon mein, meri soch mein, mere dil mein, aur meri yaadon mein. Yaadein bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hain. Zindagi ne mujhse meri zindagi hi cheenli, aur uske badle mein de gayee yaadein.

Kehte hain ki "When someone you love becomes a memory, the memory becomes a treasure." Muskaan meri sabse khoobsurat yaad hai. Din kisse yaad rehte hain? Sirf yaadein hi rehjaati hain. Aaj meri Muskaan ka birthday hai aur woh naa hote hue bhi mere saath hai. Mere paas. (looks down at her and smiles as she continues walking with him with her head on his shoulder)

Jitni bhi der jeeyoonga iss ehsaas ke saath jeeyoonga ki meri Muskaan mere saath hai. Inn vaadiyon mein basta hai humaara pyaar. Humaari kahaani adhoori nahi hai... alag hai. Yaadon mein bassi hui yeh pyaar ki kahaani. Kaha tha naa... kuch kahaaniyaan kabhi khatam nahi hoti. Kuch aisi hi hai humaari kahaani. Iss ka koi anth nahi hai... kyunki pyaar ka koi anth hi nahi hota. Marr ke bhi zinda rehne waala pyaar... humaari kahaani...

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Riddhima- Di... aap jaao. Meri night duty hai.

Anjali- What? Night duty? Gabbar ne bhi kya din choose kiya hai tujhe night duty dene ka... anyway... have fun Ridzie. (sympathetic smile)

Armaan- Wow. Aaj toh bohot mazaa aayega. Meri bhi night duty hai. (evil laugh) Mwahaha.

Riddhima- (whines) Di dekho naa.

Anjali- Armaan... don't you dare bother Ridzie. Bechaari already bohot thaki hui hai.

Armaan- Okay okay. Fine. Main toh mazaak kar raha tha yaar.

Atul- Hi guys... Hi Anjali (blushes and smiles)

Anjali- Hi and bye.

Atul- Why?

Anjali- (smiles) Why nahi bye. Bye guys!

Armaan- Bye Anji.

Riddhima- Bye Di. Dhyaan se jaana.

Anjali- Don't worry Ridzie. (hugs her)

Rahul- (enters fighting with Muskaan) Oye tu chup reh samjhi.

Muskaan- Main naa teri band bajaa doongi. Kaan khajura!

Anjali- (rolls her eyes) Not again guys. Please.

Atul- Tum dono kyun ladh rahe ho? Anjali ko achha nahi lag raha naa.

Rahul- Oye chup kar Anjali ke chamche!

Muskaan- Oye tu chup kar piddhe. (goes to Atul) Koi gal nahi yaar. Laga reh. (winks)

Rahul- Okay bye guys.

All- Bye.

Anjali- Okay ab main bhi jaa rahi hoon. See you!

Muskaan- Oye Anjali. Ruk yaar. Main bhi aa rahi hoon. (leaves)

Atul- Main yahaan ruk ke kya karoonga? Anjali bhi gayee. Bye Armaan. Bye Ridz. (leaves)

Outside...

Anjali- (driving when she hears a loud hissing sound) Yeh kya hua? (gets out of the car) Oh no! Tire flat hogaya. Woh bhi eik nahi do do. Ab kya karoon? Aas paas koi hai bhi nahi. (she was driving on a quiet, dark, sunsaan sadak) What luck! Aur yahaan... andhera kitna hai. (scared)

She hears someone singing in the distance...

Anjali- (scared) Oh my god. Bhoot... Eik toh yahaan koi hai nahi aur uppar se itna andhera bhi hai. Aur ab... kisi ke gaane ki awaaz aa rahi hai.

Distant person- Chali aa ho chali aa.
Mere sapnon ki raani kab aayegi tu
Aayee rut mastaani kab aayegi tu
Beeti jaaye zindagaani kab aayegi tu
Chali aa ho chali aa...

Anjali- Yeh awaaz itni suni suni kyun lag rahi hai?

Distant person- (coming closer) Gaana change kaarta hoon yaar...
Hey hey hey, oh ho ho, ah ha ha ha
Yahaan kal kya ho kisne jaana...
Zindagi eik safar hai suhaana
Yahaan kal kya ho kisne jaana
(Yodeling)

Anjali- (face brightens up) Atul?

Distant person- (sees her car) Arre arre. Kisi bechaare ki gaadi kharaab hogayee hai. Madat karni chahiye yaar. (to Anjali) Suniye bhai saab...

Anjali- Atul!

Atul- Anjali!!! (afraid she'd be angry) Sorry Anjali (nervous)... woh yahaan bohot andhera hai naa... bas issiliye... ghalti se...

Anjali- (hugs him) Shut up! I'm so glad ki tum ho! Pata hai, mujhe darr lag raha tha ki yahaan koi bhoot voot hai.

Atul- (surprised that she was hugging him) Nahi nahi Anjali. Main toh zinda hoon. Bhoot nahi hoon. Promise.

Anjali- (stops hugging him) Shut up Atul. Waise... tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Atul- Arre Anjali main toh roz iss hi raaste se jaata hoon. Gaate gaate. (smiles) Lekin tum yaahan pe akeli kya kar rahi ho?

Anjali- Woh meri car ke do tires flat hogaaye.

Atul- Do flat hogaaye? Yeh toh bohot badi problem hai yaar. Eik hota toh main change kardeta. Tumhaare paas do spare tires hain kya?

Anjali- Atul mere paas eik bhi spare nahi hai. Pichli baar jab tire flat hua tha toh spare lagaa ke flat peeche rakh diya tha. Peeche sirf flat tire hai. (worried and tensed)

Atul- (notices) Achha koi baat nahi hai Anjali.

Anjali- What do you mean koi baat nahi hai? Atul... main iss sunsaan road pe hoon jahaan itna andhera hai aur aas paas koi aur hai bhi nahi. Aur tum keh rahe ho koi baat nahi hai. (getting really worried)

Atul- (tries to calm her down) Anjali, please... relax. Main hoon naa yahaan. Tum darro mat. (hesiteates, but hugs her)

Anjali- (hugs him back) Please Atul tum yahaan se jaana mat. (A-A music playing)

Atul- (surprised she hugged him) Anjali... eik kaam karte hain... main... main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon.

Anjali- (looks at him) Tum... tum mujhe kaise ghar chodege?

Atul- (motions to his bike) Apni cycle pe. (smiles)

Anjali- Atul... cycle?

Atul- Arre tum fikar mat karo Anjali... yeh bohot wafadaar hai. Kabhi mujhe dhoka nahi diya iss ne.

Anjali- Woh sab toh theek hai Atul lekin... agar main tumhaari cycle pe behatoongi toh tum kahaan behatoge?

Atul- (scratches his head) Arre haan yaar. Yeh toh maine socha hi nahi. Koi baat nahi Anjali. Tum uppar behat jaao aur main bike ko dhakka maarta hoon. (innocent smile)

Anjali- (smiles at his sweetness) Nahi Atul. Main kuch aur sochloongi.

Atul- Eik kaam karte hain naa. Tum yahaan aage behat jaao. Aur main peeche behat jaata hoon. (hit himself lightly on the head) Main bhi kitna paagal hoon. Aao naa behato. (she sits and then he sits) Sorry... thoda uncomforatable lagega tumhe.

Anjali- (smiles) Koi baat nahi Atul. I'm fine.

Atul- (starts pedaling) Achha Anjali, tum naa ghar jaake kisi ko phone karke bol dena apni gaadi ke baare mein.

Anjali- Yeah, kardoongi. Atul...

Atul- Haan Anjali?

Anjali- Tum itni zor se gaana kyun gaa rahe the?

Atul- (laughs) Oh woh... haha... main apna own personal radio station hoon.

Anjali- (laughs really hard) Oh my god. Atul, you're too funny.

Atul- (mesmerized by her laughter) Sach Anjali? Main tumhe funny lagta hoon?

Anjali- Haan. (laughs)

Atul- Anjali... eik baat boloon?

Anjali- Of course Atul.

Atul- Tum hansti hui bohot pyaari lagti ho.

Anjali- (smiles) Atul... main jo bhi karti hoon tumhe achha hi lagta hai.

Atul- Wohi toh kamaal ki baat hai. Tum jo bhi karti ho woh itna pyaara lagta hai issiliye toh... (bright smile)

Anjali- (laughs) Atul... I'm sorry.

Atul- (innocently) Kyun Anjali?

Anjali- Main jaanti hoon ki tum mere liye kaisa feel karte ho aur phir bhi main...

Atul- Tum sorry kyun bol rahi ho Anjali? Main toh tumhaare liye hamesha intezaar kar sakta hoon. (sweet smile)

Anjali- (smiles to herself) Yeh bhi mujhe pata hai.

There was a bump in the road and when the wheels of his cycle it, the whole bike kind of jumped. Anjali quickly put her hand on top of Atul's which sent a spark through his whole body. He started pedaling a bit faster as well. The wind was making Anjali's hair lightly hit Atul's face. He was enjoying the aroma of her hair. It sent butterflies in his stomach... and he closed his eyes for a few seconds to take in the scent.

Anjali- (slowly moves her hand off of his) Sorry.

Atul- Huh? (sweetly) Koi baat nahi Anjali.

Anjali- (trying to ease the awkwardness) Atul... tum mere liye koi gaana gaao naa.

Atul- (excited) Arre yeh toh meri specialty hai. Toh bataao. Kya sun na chahthi ho?

Anjali- (shrugs) Kuch bhi.

Atul- (confused) Aisa toh koi gaana nahi hai.

Anjali- Atulll...

Atul- Sorry Anjali. (Anjali laughs) Theek hai... main naa tumhe eik sweet sa love song sunaata hoon.

Anjali- How sweet. (smiles)

Atul- Okay! Toh aap sun rahe hain Atul FM aur yeh gaana dedicated hai to the very beautiful, Ms. Anjali Gupta.

Anjali- (smiles) Thank you very much.

Atul- Mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hai
Mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hai
Bataoon tujhe kis tarhaan
Kitna pyaar hai
Tera intezaar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyaar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyaar hai
Tera intezaar hai

Tanhaaiyaan bhi hain
Bechainiyaan bhi hain
Tanhaaiyaan bhi hain
Bechainiyaan bhi hain
Masoom dil bhi hain

Majbooriya bhi hain
Sadaayein teri
Kyun mujhe aati nahi
Woh yaadein teri
Dil se kyun jaati nahi
Tera intezaar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyar hai
Tera intezaar hai

Le aayenge sanam
Tujhko manaake hum
Le aayenge sanam
Tujhko manaake hum
Paagal se ho gaye
Dil ko lagaa ke hum
Deewane ko toh
Ek naya koi naam de
Subha pyaar ki

Pyaar ki koi shyaam de
Tera intezaar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyaar hai
Mujhe tujhse pyaar hai
Tera intezaar hai

Anjali- (claps) Very nice.

Atul- Aur yeh gaana dedicated tha Ms. Anjali Gupta ko. (normal Atul) Tumhe achha laga Anjali?

Anjali- Bohot.

Atul- (innocent smile) Sorry Anjali. Ab tak toh tum ghar pohonch chuki hoti.

Anjali- Tumhaari ghalti thodi hai. Tires toh mere flat hue the. Agar tum nahi hote toh pata nahi main ghar kaise pohonchti. Thanks a lot Atul.

Atul- Maine tumhe kaha tha naa Anjali. Tumhe kabhi bhi koi problem ho, toh mujhe yaad karlena. Main hamesha tumhaari madat karoonga.

Anjali- (smiles) Eik baar phirse tumne mujhe musibat se nikaala. Tum bohot achhe ho Atul.

Atul- Lekin sabse achhi toh tum ho naa Anjali?

Anjali- What?

Atul- Nahi kuch nahi.

They rode in silence for some time and then Anjali got a phone call.

Anjali- Hello? Haan Naani. Main theek hoon. Woh naani, meri car ke do tires flat hogaye the aur thank god mujhe raaste mein Atul mil gaya. So wohi mujhe ghar chod raha hai. Haan naani main bilkul theek hoon. Okay bye naani.

Atul- Kya hua Anjali? Sab theek toh hai naa?

Anjali- Haan. Woh actually, kaafi der hogayee thi naa issiliye naani thodi pareshaan hogayeen thi.

Atul- Oh. Koi baat nahi. Hum tumhaare ghar pohonchne hi waale hain. Bas bees minute.

Anjali- Okay. Arre Atul... I totally forgot. Tumhaara ghar toh opposite direction mein hai naa. Aur itni door sirf mujhe ghar chodne ke liye aa rahe ho.

Atul- (smiles and blushes) Yeh toh kuch nahi hai Anjali. Agar tumhaara ghar Lonavala mein bhi hota naa... toh bhi main tumhe chodne aata.

Anjali- (smiles) That's so sweet Atul.

Atul- Sach Anjali? Main sweet hoon?

Anjali- Of course! Achha Atul, tum toh itna achha gaate ho. Toh phir tum doctor kaise bann gaye?

Atul- (laughs) Main toh apne papa ke liye doctor bana hoon. Bachpan se main apne papa ki tarhaan bann na chahta tha. Jab papa ne mujhe bataaya ki main adopted hoon tab mujhe dukh toh bohot hua tha lekin mera pyaar unke liye kabhi kam nahi hua. Phir mujhe pata chala ke papa ko AIDS hai aur unhe laga ki main unse pyaar nahi karoonga, lekin, unke liye mere dil mein izzat aur badh gayee. Woh kisi ki zindagi kharaab nahi karna chahthe the issiliye unhone mujhe adopt kiya. Jab papa chale gaye toh main bohot roya, lekin phir maine socha ki papa chale gaye, iska matlab yeh thodi hai ki main unke jaisa nahi bann sakta. Issiliye main doctor bann gaya. Aur mujhe pata hai ki mere papa jahaan kahin bhi hain, iss waqt mujhe dekh ke bohot khush honge. Unka beta doctor bann gaya. (smiles)

Anjali- (with tears in her eyes) I'm really sorry Atul. (her tear falls on his hand)

(Atul-Anjali music playing)

Atul- (stops the bike and looks at her) Anjali... tum ro rahi ho? (wipes her tears) Ro mat Anjali. I'm really sorry. Meri wajjah se tum...

Anjali- (hugs him) Nahi Atul. You know... kabhi kabhi hum itne busy hojaate hain ki doosron ke dukh dekh nahi paate.

Atul- (smiles) Anjali. Mujhe koi dukh nahi hai. Main toh bohot khush hoon. Papa nahi hain iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki main dukhi hoon. Haan, unki kami mehsoos hoti hai kabhi kabhi, lekin tum sab ho naa mere liye.

Anjali- (looks at him and smiles) Haan. Hum sab hain tumhaare liye. (smiles and puts her hand on his cheek) Ab chalein? Der ho rahi hai naa?

Atul- Haan haan! Chalo. Iss poore emotional scene mein toh main bhool hi gaya ki naani ji tumhaara intezaar kar raheen hain. (starts pedaling)

Anjali- Atul... Atul slow down. Itni tez kyun chala rahe ho?

Atul- Woh tumhe der ho rahi hai naa Anjali. Issiliye maine socha ki...

Anjali- Atul mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai. Waise bhi, mujhe tumhaari company bohot pasand hai. (smiles)

Atul- (extremely happy) Tumhe meri company pasand hai Anjali?

Anjali- (smiles) Haan.

The rest of the way to Anjali's house, they talk and have a good time. Just... enjoying each other's company. Soon, they reach her house.

Atul- (stops) Baaton baaton mein pata hi nahi chala ki tumhaara ghar kab aagaya.

Anjali- (gets off the bike and smiles) Thanks a lot Atul. Tumhaari wajjah se main ghar pohonch gayee. Warna main toh abhi tak wahin phassi hoti.

Atul- No problem Anjali. Mere hote hue tumhe kabhi koi problem nahi hogi. (smiles and blushes)

Anjali- (smiles and touches his cheek) Tum bohot achhe ho Atul. Andar aao naa.

Atul- (smiles a bright smile) Nahi nahi Anjali. Bohot der hogayee hai. Meri land lady ka toh tumhe pata hi hai. Mujhe chalna chahiye.

Anjali- (laughs) Okay. Goodnight.

Atul- Goodnight Anjali.

(Atul-Anjali music playing)

She made her way to the door, but Atul decided to wait a while to make sure she gets in okay. A few minutes later he saw her come onto the terrace. He looked up at her and smiled and waved as she looked around frantically to see if he was still there. She finally saw him waving and smiled the brightest smile that she ever had around him. He noticed this and admired how beautiful she looked with the wind blowing in her hair and her face glowing with happiness when she saw him. Only someone who cared for him so much could have been that relieved to see him still standing there. She called down to him.

Anjali- Atul... thank god tum abhi tak yahaan ho. Mujhe laga ki tum chale gaye. (smiles)

Atul- Haan Anjali woh maine socha ki eik baar tum andar chali jaao toh phir main jaata hoon.

Anjali- Achha hi hua ki tum nahi gaye. Maine socha eik baar dekhloon ki tum theek ho ki nahi. Bohot raat hogayee hai naa issiliye.

Atul- Don't worry Anjali. Main theek hoon. Tum jaake so jaao. Bohot der hogayee hai. Subha jaldi utthna hai naa duty ke liye. Aur agar tum der tak jaagti raheen toh phir tumhaari neend poori nahi hogi. Aur agar neend poori nahi hogi toh aankhon ke neeche dark circles hojaayenge. Aur agar aankhon ke neeche dark circles hogaye toh....

Anjali- Atulll... bas. Samajh gayee. I'm going. (smiles) Aur haan. Meri skin ke liye tumhaare Aloe Vera plants hain naa. (laughs)

Atul- (bright Atul smile) Of course Anjali. Mere bachhe toh tumhaare hi bachhe... mera matlab mere plants tumhaare hi plants hain.

Anjali- (laughs and shakes her head hopelessly) Goodnight Atul.

Atul- Goodnight Anjali. (both wave goodbye to each other)

Atul slowly started towards his house. Anjali turned to leave, but then she stopped. Just to take one last look at Atul to make sure he'd be alright. She saw him grinning and happily singing as he went his way.

Atul- Tum aaye toh
Hawaaon mein eik nasha hai
Tum aaye toh
Fizaaon mein rang sa hai
Yeh rang saare
Hain bas tumhaare
Aur kya
Aur kya
Aur kya.....(Atul-Anjali music playing)

Anjali couldn't help but smile to herself as she watched the one person who could make her laugh even in the worst times ride away as if he had no worry in the world. Was this the person that could keep her happy forever? Would she be able to handle his extremely cheery nature for the rest of her life? She didn't have an answer to these questions yet... but she couldn't help wondering and thinking just maybe... She went off to bed with thoughts of the night going through her mind. And Atul's song... the song that he had dedicated to her... his unique way of telling her that he would wait for her and love her... always.

Tera Intezaar Hai... Mujhe Tujhse Pyaar Hai...

Edited by AshiYuvi4life - 15 years ago

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lovebapu18

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome collection of one-shots!!

hope u right more one-shots!!

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks guys!

and Shifu I'll be waiting yaar!

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rahulcccmuskaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

Great collections yaar...😊 All of these shots have their own flavor in it which makes us wanna read more...😛 All of them were wonderful...😳

Hope u write more of these mini-stories...⭐️ ⭐️
Oh and thanks for the PM 😊

Luv Vikshu...😉

Edited by rahulcccmuski - 16 years ago

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Rhea

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy! i havent read them yet so m definitely planning on doing it now that i'm on vacation. so will comment once again when im done reading! :D thanks for the PM!