Rahul-Muskaan & Atul-Anjali Collections updt pg 51 - Page 36

You're very welcome. Yeah, I wasn't planning on letting this story see the light of day. Quite frankly, I didn't like it, but I had to write SOMETHING to come out of my writer's block. and this is what came of it. Hopefully my next one won't disappoint me so much!

keeping you in mind, i kept hindi to a down low. only some of the dialogues were, other than that i kept it as English as I could.

Komalllllllllllll......!!!!🤗

SUR!!! I knew you'd be the next one to comment. lol. This is a one-shot so it will have no more parts. it's kind of an open ending. I'll put up a new story as soon as I get a new inspiration.

KOMZIIIIIIIIIIIII 🤗

resrved spot*

*UNRESERVED SPAAT*

wah wah meri behen! kya khoob likha!
u know i liked it alot!
but as u keep telling me & i keep reading EVERYWHERE that THIS is just something random where as Chandni Raatain which is by far ur best piece & should not be missed at any cost! so i'll go read that but frankly i really liked this one too!

thx jaani for dedicating this to us :) ur sucha sweet heart!
& lolz the best part was the sudden entry of JEN & SAAKSH! & saksh was trying to pataofy atul without success? haye haye my heart goes out to u saksh hehe :P Jen is lucky though! she got yuvi!

*saksh & komz glaring at alia* AAAAAND i better shut up & leave *both nod slowly* RIGHT! m out *leaves quickly hehe*

all in all, not bad maza aya muje!
next...TO CHANDNI RAATAIN! cya in a while i hope!

Adios Amigos 😉

Komal!!! After so long... *hugs*. Glad to see you writing again.

Very nicely written Komal!

The Yuvi-Atul interaction was written wonderfully, and Atul's thoughts, actions, feelings, and gestures were described really well.
Esp his dream was sooo sweet!

Amazing writing! Hoping to see more soon :)

Ahaha, welcome back after soo long!

@Prasanthi: I just wanna say that I LOVE you! i'm so happy that you gave me an honest review. I completely agree, it's not at all up to my mark. This is what happens when you write something like Chandani Raatein, get such beautiful comments, and then go into a massive case of writer's block. I personally hated this one and wasn't at all planning on putting it up, but Sakshi and Jen bugged me for so long to update with something and I posted. Next one will definitely be better, PROMISE! Thanks for being such a loyal reader hun!

@Shilpu: You came!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks babe. I always felt that Atul-Yuvi would have a stronger connection on the show, but they barely showed that. They're both so intense, it would've fit nicely.

@Sara: haha yes. Last time I wrote was in the end of March, so I'm excited to be back! thanks for reading!

you didn't know i had a collections thread??? Sana you've got a lot of reading to do my dear. go check the 1st page of this thread. there's an index. you might want to start with Chandani Raatein. that was the one i wrote right before this one and then i got writer's block cuz everybody praised it too much. rofl. i hate living up to expectations. too difficult!!