Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! I bloody love you! Finally something new to read. I was getting less irritated at you and more bored for getting nothing at all and now finally here we are!
But woman, would you get over yourself already! I don't see what's so bad that you thought this shot didn't deserve to see the light. It's not so bad. Infact, it's not bad at all. I admit it's not your best but that doesn't automatically put it in the 'trash' pile. Talk about extremes! I understand that after the hype of CR (still my fav BTW), things weren't going to be so easy to put together...especially with Sakshi and I pestering you to world's end and with you still hazy in your block. But you're well and truly out now and I can't wait for your next, planned one! Yes, yes, I'm already hyped. Bring it on!
Now onto this one shot:
As Sakshi said, I don't know what it is you do with Atul but everytime you write about him, he seems like a new yet the same dude. Here he seemed so calm and control unlike the others but when I think back to the others, he was the same then as well. See what I mean? No? Writers!
Loving Atul's and Yuvi's relationship. I've always waited to see the relationship develop between the two in the show, they're both mature and understanding enough but alas, we never got it. Loving how supportive Yuvi is for Atul and how Atul never takes advantage.
Yuvi- Kya khaak theek hai?! Tu meri baat...(stops abruptly) Maan gaya???
LOL! I'm guessing this convo happens way more than often that Yuvi just went off on his usual roll. So I probably can estimate his surprise at Atul willingness to hear out. But clever of him to use Anjali's birthday celebrations as an excuse to chide him out.
And I'm glad Yuvi slightly forced him to go out. Atul needed it more or so to put it to bed that the world was definately not for him and that no matter how much Yuvi insisted henceforth, he knew he would have to wrestle on to win his case. But Yuvi needed to see Atul out and about one last time as well. The dude's too worried about his best friend and why not? But at least now Yuvi has confirmation and could put some of his worry to rest. Would have loved to see his reaction to Anjali actually being a real person though. Maybe you could write a small paragraph? Just a tinsy winsy one. Please? Oh pretty please. Please with a Chandini Raatein on top? PLEASE?!
Loved the lullaby. I haven't seen Casper in years. So long that I've forgotten about it. Obviously I've downloaded the track. Thanks!
Ha! Sakshi tried but failed. But at least she gave Atul a smile. Jen on the otherhand...*smiles...a lil too smugly*.
The end, where he discovers Anjali in the flesh? The part where he inwardly chuckles? Yeah, that part. Well, I have to say that part surprised me more than Anjali being a real person. Well, because I thought the guy would freeze in shock. All these years he resided with the fact that Anjali could not exist outside his imagination and now all of a sudden here she is. That should be a shocker. A major shocker. A knock-your-breath-outta-your-body shocker. But what did he do instead? He chuckled inwardly. Wow, he's a lot more calm and collected and definately alot more sure of himself than I previously thought. Infact, I think that tiny sentence alone shows Atul strength the most.
Aah, I've written quite alot. Truthfully I didn't think I would but now after all my bakwaas, I'm kinda missing Borna's comment. Is the girl alive?
Oh, and sorry for not knowing about the existence of this one shot. It's not my fault. You normally shove all this stuff in my face. What happened this time?
Edited by Jenifer. - 15 years ago
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