MayurFF-Aya Mausam Dosti ka-Pt-44 updt completed - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
HI Annu
very nice update dear.
lovedddddd it.
eagerly waiting 4 the concert.
Hope the gang will be rock .
thanx 4 ur PM.
Faria
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update..!!!
loved it..!!
thnks fr d PM..
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome dear.. lovely song.. loved it...

keep rocking...
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwweome
update next part sooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Really superb,
Noops itna nervous ho rahi thi i samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki gaa bhi paayegi ki nahi? But she did it, chahe Mayu k kehne ki vajah se chahe Sheena koi bhi reason ho apni Noops kabhi kisi se peeche nahi rehti hai. Us ne accha sabak sikhaya Sheena ko jo jaroori bhi tha.
First time Gunjan danced vow, ek saath itne saare surprises, g8 .
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART ' 11

(Nupur pareshan hai sheena ki baato ko lekar aur band k result ko lekar. Usse nind nhi aa rhi hai. Gunjan so chuki hai. Mayank apne room me book padh raha hai. Aur mayank ki mom bhi so chuki hai)

Raat k 2.30 baje Nupur kitchen me pani lene jaati hai. Wo light on nhi karti. Wo jaise hi pani fridge se usse lagta hai k ghar me koi chor ghus gaya hai. Wo fridge k piche chip jaati hai.

N to herself :- By god. Aaj to yeh chor pit k jayega. Use bhi pta chalega k kis ghar me chori karne aaya hai. Aaj use din me tare correction raat me hi tare nazar aayenge. Per yeh aise kyun chal rha hai jaise ghar ka kona kona pta ho ise. Kahi koi jaan pehchan ka chor to nhi hai ''''''..hey bhagwan'..

(aur jaise hi wo shadow nupur k pass aati hai aur nupur jaise hi uss shadow ko marne lagti hai wo mayank hai)

N (shocked) :- tummmmmm???????😲

M :- ssssssshhhhhh. Haan main.

(Mayank apna hath nupur k muh per rakh deta hai. Dono ek dusre k bahut kareeb hai. Nupur bhi uska hath nhi hathati. Mayank nupur ki aankhon me dekhta hai. Aur there is eyelock. )

M :- Tumhari aankhen kitni khubsurat hai. Bilkul jheel jaisi ghehri aur badi badi. Yeh kitni gehri hai yeh to jo inme dubega usko hi pta chalega. Hamesha yeh kuch na kuch kehti hai chahe tum kuch kaho ya kaho. "Bahut khubsurat hai aankhen tumhari, Inko bana dijiye kismet hamari"

(now mayank came to his sense. K wo kar kya rha hai. Try to do everything normal. Piche hat te huye)

M :- wo main galib ki book padh rha tha. aur tum itni tension me kyun ho. Aur itni raat ko tum jag kyun rhi ho.

N :- wo main pani lene aayi thi. Aur tum apne ghar me choro ki tarah kyun gum rhe ho. Light on nhi kar sakte the.

M :- Haan taki maa aur gunjan jag jate. Tum bhi to light on kar sakti thi.

N :- maine isliye nhi ki k mujhe laga sab so rhe honge. Mujhe to laga tum bhi so rhe honge.

(nupur bhi normal behave karne ki koshish karti hai)

N :- Waise tum kab se aisi books padhne lag gye.

M :- wo main kisi ne di thi to padhne lag gya. Kyun main aisi books nhi padh sakta kya

N :- shakal se lagta to nhi hai. Per ho bhi sakta hai. Ab main sone jaa rhi hu.

M :- main bhi

(Nupur jaane lagti hai, mayank usse piche se awaz lagta hai.)

M :- pani to le jao.

N :- haan main bhul gyi thi.

(nupur pani lekar apne room me chali jati hai. Aur mayank bhi )

M to Himself :- Wah mayank sharma ab yeh kya kiya tune. Wo to sahi time books yaad aa gyi. Agar usne wo book maang li to kahan se dunga. Aur tujhe kaha tha na uss ladki se dur reh. Jitna mana karo tu uske uthne hi kareeb pahuch jaata hai. Aur kya tune aankhen aankhen laga rakha tha. Samjh gaya. Uski ankhon me mat dekha kar. Tu wahi kho jaata hai. Aur waise bhi tu uss se dur to nhi reh sakta. Per uski aankhon k jadu se bach k rahega to aaj se bewakufi nhi karega. Pta nhi wo kya soch rhi hogi.

On the other hand

N to herself :- by god nupur. Tu yeh kya soch rhi hai. Mayank aur tujh se. Sambhal jaa abhi bhi. Wo to usne book padhi thi. Isliye bol rha tha. Aur tu bhi na nupur kuch bhi sochti hai. Kahaan wo akdu, sadu'. But caring, intelligent bhi to hai. Per wo tujhe kyun psnd karega. Tujhe to bilkul bhi nhi karega. Itna jhagda jo karti hai uss se. Aur waise tu kyun chahti hai k wo tujhe psnd kare. Tujhe kya ho gya hai. Tera dimag to thik hai na. Yeh sab na sone ka natija hai. Ja aur so ja.

Next day in the morning

MM to G :- gunjan beta aaj nupur kahan hai

G :- Maa syad kal raat ko wo der se soyi hai isliye abhi tak uthi nhi hai. Aur maine usse jagaya bhi nhi. Kal wo itni tension me thi to maine socha usse thodi derr aur sone du.

MM :- badi pyari bachchi hai. Dekho na tum logo ki bhi help kar rhi hai. Thode hi din me iski adat si pad gyi hai.

G :- haan maa. Iske aane k baad mayank bhi thoda bahut muskurane lag gya hai. Warna wo to bas'''.

MM :- haan. Achcha ek kaam kar tu mayank ko chai deke aa. Main nupur ko. Waise bhi wo yahaan akele hai ghar ko miss karti hogi.

G :- thik hai

(Gunjan k room me )

MM :- Nupur beta, uth jao subah ho gyi hai.

N(in sleeping tone) :- kya hai maaaaaayyy'..🥱

(Nupur correct time per uth jaati hai )

N :- aunty aap. Aap kyun aaye. Aur aaj pta nhi kyun main itni derr soti rahi. Sorry aunty.

MM :- koi baat nhi beta. Per tum nind me mayank ko yaad kar rhi thi kya

N (shocked) :- nhi aunty. Wo sapne me maine maa ko dekha to bas maa ki hi yaad aa rhi thi

MM :- oh. Mujhe lga k mayank. Beta agar maa ki yaad aa rhi hai to ek baar unse baat kar lena. Abhi yeh chai pee lo. Aur haan tujhe ice-cream psnd hai na fridege me rakhi hai tere liye. Tu kha lena. Yeh rishwat ki ice-cream samjh le.

(mayank ki mom chali jaati hai )

N to herself :- by god nupur tujhe kya ho gya hai. Tujhe din raat iss sadu k siva kuch nhi sujhta. Aaj to bach gyi. Tujhe aur koi nhi mila kya. Iss sadu me aisa kya hai.aur ab yeh sab chod jaldi se ready ho jaa. Band k members aate hi honge.

(nupur taiyar ho kar aati hai. Tab tak mayank ki mom office jaa chuki hoti hai. Gunjan, nupur aur mayank b'fast karte hai. Nupur ko yaad aata hai k mayank ki mom uske liye ice-cream rakh kar gyi hai wo fridge me se ice-cream nikal ka khana start hi karti hai. Mayank uss se ice-cream le leta hai. Aur khud khana start kar deta hai )

M :- ab tum band ki female singer ho. Itni sari ice-cream khaogi to gala khrab ho jayega.

N :- per wo ice-cream meri jhuti thi.

M :- to kya hua. Tumne bhi to meri jhuti ice-cream khayi thi.

(Tabhi gunjan aa kar mayank se ice-cream le leti hai aur khud khana start kar deti hai )

G to M :- per tum bhi band k lead singer ho. Itni ice-cream mat khao. Nupur ko to mana kar rhe ho aur khud kha rhe ho.

(itne me band k sare members aa jate hai aur samrat gunjan se ice-cream le leta hai aur khud khana start kar deta hai )

S to G :- pr chismish agar tumne zyada ice-cream khayi aur tum bimar pad gyi to tum bimar bhi pad sakti ho. Jo mujhe bilkul achcha nhi lagega.

(ab dia sammy se ice-cream le leti hai aur khud khana start kar deti hai)

D to S :- Aur tumhe kuch ho gya to band me kisi ko kuch bhi achcha nhi lagega. To yeh ice-cream main bhi khaungi.

(Dia se ice-cream benji le leta hai aur khana start kar deta hai )

B to D :- sweety tum already itni sweet ho. Zyada sweet hone se samne wale ko bhi utha sweet hona padega. Aur wo kaise hoga. To yeh ice-cream main bhi khaunga.

(Benji se ice-cream uday le leta hai aur khana start kar deta hai aur finish kar deta hai)

U to B :- yahaan sabse zyada khane ka shuak mujhe hai to main hi yeh ice-cream ka asli haqdar hu. (uday ice-cream finish kar deta hai )

S to N :- kya hua tum chup chap kyun ho.

N to S :- nhi. Main yeh dekh rhi hu k tum sabne mil ke jo ice-cream mujhe rishwat me mili thi kitni safai k sath tum sabne saaf dar di.

N to all :- I think hume practice bhi karni chahiye. Meri ice-cream to finish ho gyi.

(Sab apni position lekar practice karte hai. Practice k finish hone k baad mayank k pass call aata hai k kal raat ki performance ka result next week tak milega aur tab tak koi performance nhi hai. Sab khus ho jaate hai. Tabhi courier wala nupur k liye courier de kar jaata hai jo uske liye college se hota hai. According to courier nupur ne jo girl's hostel me seat k liye apply kiya to jo usse pehle mil nhi rhi thi uski seat confirm ho gyi hai. Wo girl's college me shift ho sakti hai. Yeh sab sunke sab hairaan hai k nupur ne bataya tak nhi k usne girl's hostel me seat k liye apply bhi kiya hai )

To be continued'''''.

Kya nupur jayegi ya nhi''''.


PART 12 - PG22

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nahiii dont allow nupur to go to girl's hostel... this part was good.. waiting for next part.... everybody taking the ice cream was wonderful...
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Posted: 16 years ago
icecream sequence wow just love it
maynk ko dekh ker muje ye yaad aata hai
"ishq ne nikamma ker diya varna hum bhi aadmi they kaam ke"
poor maynk
love this part
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely part.
loveddd a lottt,specially the ice cream wala scene.
it was so funny.
Now nupz going 2 be stayed in Girls hostel,hmmmmm feel bad 4 mayu.
ok keep it up and update soon.
Faria

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Posted: 16 years ago

Great part!!

Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!!

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