MayurFF-Aya Mausam Dosti ka-Pt-44 updt completed - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
Okay.To finally ice cream khatam ho gayi.......Too good.Pls update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART - 12


(Sara band surprise hai k nupur ne btana tak zaruri nhi samjha. Per koi nupur ko kuch nhi kehta bcoz nupur pretending k wo girls hostel me rehna chahti hai. Mayank ki mom bhi nupur ko nhi rokti. But nupur jaate whqt itna roti hai mayank ki mom aur gunjan k gale lag kar k jaise unse ab kabhi nhi milegi Samrat nupur ko girls hostel chodne jaata hai kyunki mayank bahana bana kar already bahar chala jaata hai)

Raste me

S :- nupur yeh tum thik nhi kar rhi ho. Arre mayank k ghar me koi problem thi kya

N :- nhi samrat aisa nhi hai. Wo to ab mujhe apne ghar jaisa lagne lga hai. Per mujhe kya pta tha meri seat confirm ho jayegi. Ab huyi hai to jaana to padega na

S :- great tum khud bhi nhi jaana chahti. Aur fir bhi tum jaa rhi ho.

N :- Haan. Aisa hi kuch soch lo. aur waise bhi 1 week baad to college start ho jayenge. Tab to main wahaan roz aaya karungi. Bas 1 week ki hi to baat hai. Bas yeh 1 week nikalna hai. Kaise bhi karke

S :- hmm. Per tumhe pta hai tumhare bina band ka kya hoga. 1 week me

N :- band ka to pta nhi. Per lagta hai tum mujhe zarur miss karne wale ho.

S :- sirf main hi nhi hum sab.

N :- haan. Main hu hi aisi. Waise yeh sab chodo. Kabhi gunjan tumhe chod k gyi hai kahi bahar

S :- nhi. Main mayank thodi na hu jo aise hi jaane dunga. Chismish kahi nhi jayegi mujhe chod k. Chahe chismish ko psnd ho ya na pasnd ho.

N :- Hmm. Pta hai kya mujhe hamesha se pta tha. k tumne wo psnd hai.

S :- Mujhe to tum bhi psnd ho.

N :- haan. Per mere jaane se tumne syad kam fark pade. Per tum gunjan ka jaana sun bhi nhi sakte.

S :- haan yeh to hai wo hai hi itni achchi. Mujhe uske bina rehne ki adat nhi hai.

N :- ek baat kahu aur yeh adat padne bhi mat dena. Kahoge to main tumhari help kar dungi. Afterall main gunjan ki room mate reh chuki hu. Mujhe kafi kuch pta hai. Chaho to meri help le sakte ho.

S :- love guru samrat ko kisi ki help ki zarurat nhi hai

N :- as u wish. Per main tumhare kaam aa sakti hu. Waise ab to hostel aa chukka hai. Soch k batana.

(Samrat nupur ko hostel chod kar mayank k ghar aata hai bcoz mayank ki mom aaj ghar per hai aur mayank abhi tak bahar se laut kar nhi aaya hai)

S to MM :- Kya aunty aapne bhi nupur ko ek baar bhi nhi roka.

G to MM :- Haan maa. Aapko ek baar to rokna chahiye tha. wo aapko mana nhi karti

MM to both :- Dekho bachcho. Jo tum log karna chahte ho wo main tumhe karne deti hu na. Aisa hi nupur k sath hai wo agar girl's hostel me rehna chahti hai to koi baat nhi. Waise mujhe nhi lagta wo 1 week se zyada wahaan ruk payegi. Jis tarah se wo roke gyi hai. Aur ek aur baat girl's hostel k incharge ko maine keh dia hai k wo nupur se 1 week tak koi fee na le uske baad agar wo submit karwati hai to thik hai.

S to MM :- kaise. Wahaan to pehle fee submit hoti hai

MM to S :- arre tumhari aunty bhi koi cheez hai. Meri girls hostel k incharge se achchi khasi dosti hai. Aur mujhe pta hai nupur one week se zyada wahaan nhi tik payegi. Aur jab wo one week baad aayegi to main usse nhi milungi. Mujhe official kaam se out of Mumbai jaana hai Waise badi hi pyari bachchi hai. Uski to adat ho gyi hai.

G to MM :- haan maa. Sach me. Ab to mujhe apne room me akele hi rehna padega.

S to G :- kaho to main aa jau wahaan rehne k liye.

(Gunjan shocked k samrat keh kya rha hai )

S to G :- relax chismish just joking yaar. Tum mere ghar aa sakti ho. Aur apne itne bade ghar me mujhe bechare k liye thodi si jagah nhi de sakti kya

G to S :- samrat yeh ghar jitna mera hai utna tumhara bhi hai. Aur hum tumhari nhi nupur ki baat kar rhe the.

S to MM :- to yeh ghar nupur ka bhi kar do. Usse iss ghar me hi basa lo.

MM :- main bhi yahi chahti hu. Arre yeh dono ladte itna hia k pta nhi kya hoga

S to MM :- great aap bhi wahi soch rhi ho. Jo main soch rha hu

G to MM :- Maa aap yeh kya bol rhi ho. Mayank ko pta chal gya to bas''. Aapko to pta hai na usse career k siva kuch nhi sujhta

MM to G :- beta main tumhari maa hu. Mujhe tumhare career k siva aur bhi tumhare liye bahut kuch sujhta hai.

G to MM :- Per agar mayank ko'''(interupped by samrat)

S to G :- chismish.. kya tum bhai behan ne kisi aur k bare me naa sochne ki kasam khai hai kya. Arre kya burai hai nupur me

G to S :- Burai aur nupur me'. Wo to kitni achchi hai. Aur hum sab ka kitna sath de rhi hai aur hume koi problem na ho isliye hostel me shift bhi ho gyi hai

S to G :- hmm. To nupur me koi burai nhi hai. To iss se achchi ladki mayank k liye kahaan milegi bas ab pta yeh karna hai k mayank aur nupur ek dusre k bare me kya sochte hai.

MM to S :- haan yeh to tum hi pta kar sakte ho. Kyunki mere bache to iss mamle me fail hai.

S to MM :- aunty aap tension mat lo. Main yeh pta karke rahunga. Aur agar haan hua to

(at this moment mayank enters the house. )

S to M :- to mayank fir main baat pakki samjhu

(mayank ko pta nhi hota k kis bare me baat chal rhi hai. Wo nupur k khayalo me hi gum hai. )

M to S :- haan. Waise main abhi thoda sa rest karne k mud me hu

S to MM :- ab to mayank ne bhi haan kar di hai. Ab to aap khus hai na

M to MM :- maa waise kya baatein chal rhi thi

S to MM :- lo isse to yeh bhi pta nhi hai baat kya chal rhi hai. Aur humne to baat bhi pakki kar li

MM to M :- kuch nhi beta. Hum bas nupur k bare me baat kar rhe the.

M to MM :- ok maa. Main abhi apne room me jaa rha hu. Baad me baat karte hai

(Mayank upset hai nupur k jaane se. Per wo yeh kisi ko bta bhi nhi sakta. Isliye aur zyada pareshan hai )

TO BE CONTINUED''''''''


PART 13 - PG 24

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awsome update dear........sanu scenes vr rockin..........n also i lovd d trio scene of sajan+mom.....god...ab sab razi ho gaye....ab bas mayur ki han ki der hai....hehe....nywz plz continue soon....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow maynk ke mom to genius hai
mazaa aa gaya update read ker ke
soon update the next
and sam conversation is too sweet
love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb yaar
Chalo apne guru sam kuch karege toh sahi
But nups ko nahi jana chaihiye tha yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
vwry nice update dear....as always sanu scenes were tooo goood.....n samrat istooo good with mayu;s mom....loved them...mayu be bhi haan kar di...sooo cute..
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow very sweet..............i m waiting for nupur to come bak.....or rather for maynk to get her bak
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing update!! i was feeling so bad ki nups jaa rahi hai 😔
for mayank especially!!
par woh wapas aa jayegi ..for sure!!
par pls jaldi update kardo?😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Annu
Great update.
Hmmm now mayank missed nups a lot.
And now he can realize his feelings 4 nups.
lets see what happened?
Update soon

Posted: 16 years ago
lovely updt
the sanu scene n the sajan+mom scene were rocking!
i can't wait for them to find out mayur's feelings for each other
continue asap, i really can't wait

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