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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

jus read both the parts, they r cool madhavi

looking forward for nxt parts
sry for late reply.. was busy
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
gr8 update...
loved d way u have shown present and flashback...
Its gud to see that mayank is concerned for nupur.....
mayank will surely come to see nupur...nupur ko bukhar hai aur mayank nehi aayega..aisa to hi nehi sakta...
nyway update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
loved the mayur part
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Yaar kya baataoon.... Its wonderfull.... I mean mayank n sammy are in same gang... Wow.... Am so happy i am reading ur ff's... Bec usually i dont..
Very good job dear... keep continuing....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Hi all this is my heart felt thank you to all those who liked my ff .THANK YOU.

@ piya dee, lipsa, preethi dee,shweta, shinella, sonia, zoah, mithila, nishi and rabbia thnx for liking my style

@ kavya and navi appreciation keeps me going so appreciate me

@Yoshita, roshni good u read both and liked them………….thnx

@Sana u manage a detail appreciation thnx …………I love to know at u all like.

@cool28d yes u kept ur promise thnx

@maria(gr8_mms) ro mat ill come up with updates soon

@priya- ab im trying for romance but it will be very subtle till when mayank proposes w8 for him to propose

@hgrhr, jeni, lekha, afsha, roshni, yoshita, heena and priyanka check the pm list u guys hv been added

@hgrhr (nidhi)- U liked the ragging ……….i hated it……..but it was for a reason

@ rinky thanks but ur fff is way better

@mishu, Arjun_mayank, shafoo, sunny, fats, afsha, navi, neelam, nikki, naina, surbhi- thnx for loving it………sounds amazing ………..esp when some1 else loves what u do

@anthara- Well I wanted them to be buddies, since the beginning, thank you for appreciating that

Thank you all

Love

madhvi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Hi all ......This is the third part. I hope u enjoy it. But its longer than the other 2 parts.
Thank you all for appreciating my work. Im glad u all liked it. I hv a thank you note in the previous pg, plz check that. Also the pm list has been updated too.
If u wud like to read some part or u hv some suggestion come up with it. Also i was thinking of naming every part of my ff.............help me with names plz.....thanks.
For now read the ff😃
Part 3- Gadbad hui

Mayank, after pondering over the idea over a lakh times, decides to go to Nupur's place to see her. He could not resist his desire to meet her and he is pretty irritated bout that.

Nupur arranges all her history files over her dining table neatly''..As if to show she was studying'''She is waiting for the door bell to ring'''.Suddenly it rings

She runs to the door sees through the eye hole''' sees mayank.

She gets super excited'''''''..cools herself and opens the door with a rather tired face.

Nupur: MMayank tum yaha

Mayank:Haan who''..

Nupur: Kyu?? Acha toh project file ke liye aaye ho'.

Main abhi wahi kar rahi thi

Mayank: Kya?? Tum aisi halat main bhi project kar rahi thi??

Nupur: Haan who Monday ko project report deni hai na'''.

Mayank: Nupur woh sab chodo'''(touching her forehead)'''tumhe toh bukhar hai'''..

Nupur: (to herself) acha hai??

Mayank: Dawai li?

Nupur: Gunjan ne kadha banaya tha

Mayank: Kadha?? Iss jamane mein bhi kadha?? Kounsi sadi mein hai woh?? Medicine box kaha hai'''.

Mayank was now rather angry

Nupur doesnot want to spoil her plan and increase mayank's anger. She just points at a drawer. Mayank gets the medicine and makes Nupur sit''''..

Mayank: Tumhare badan mein dard hai

Nupur: Nai dil mein hai

Mayank: Kya?

Nupur: Nai hai'.

Mayank is about to give her a medicine and then pulls back.

Mayank: Nupur tum ne sawere se kuch khaya

Nupur: Haan chaye pi thi

Mayank: Matlab kuch khaya nai'''''chaye se kuch nai hota Nupur, Chalo phir pehle kuch kha lo'''..khali pet dawai nahi lete

Nupur and Mayank go to the kitchen

Nupur: Mayank kya bana rahe ho??

Mayank: Veg soup

Nupur: Cheee''.kuch aur banao

Mayank: Toh kya khaogi''.Maggie, sandwich??

Nupur: Butter Paneer and phulka''.

Mayank: Mujhe paneer banana nai aata

Nupur: Kyu?

Mayank: Kyuki woh mujhe nai pasand (yells at her)

Nupur: Acha thik hai, thik hai toh sandwich bana do'''..

Mayank: Ab batao butter kaha hai'..bread''cheese

Nupur: Woh sab mujhe nai pata '''Dar-asal ye department Gunjan ka hai na

Mayank gives her a tum nai sudharogi look and proceeds himself''''..

After sometime he gives Nupur some cucumbers and a knife.

Mayank: Kato'''Aata hai na??

Nupur nods and sits on the kitchen table. Mayank sees her start the work and is happy''''.

He eventually goes on to think''''..how they interacted for the first time in a proper manner''''. how she became friends with his mom and so on.

Nupur in the meanwhile is trying to cut her finger with the knife''''.She was trying to see if mayu was really affected by her''.

After a lot of unsuccessful tries she just threw the knife

Mayank noticed that: Tumse ek kaam theek se nai hota na

Nupur: There is some problem with the knife''.

Mayank picked it up and started cutting the cucumbers''''.

Mayank : Koi problem nai hai knife mein

While saying this Mayank cuts his finger with knife''''..

Nupur is shocked''

Nupur takes his finger and starts sucking the blood

Mayank was lost for several minutes'''''

He enjoyed the new type of sensations that hit him''...

Nupur had figured that out''and she continued''.

Mayank pulls his hand out suddenly: Nupur ye kya kar rahi ho''

Nupur: Kyu?? kya hua?

Mayank has no answer ''''or the answer to this question was something that he dint want to believe'''.

Mayank comes back from his thots and notices Nupur staring at him

Mayank: Jis tarah se chus rahi thi, laga ki mera sara khoon pijaogi

They both giggle at this and continue with sandwiches ''''.

After sandwiches and medicines are over Mayank is bout to leave'.but it starts raining heavly''''''Nupur is jumping with joy'''but she says

Nupur: Mayank itni barish mein kaise jaoge

Mayank: (Instantly) haan main ruk jata hu

Nupur is shocked at his answer, she dint expect such an answer, that too in such a tone

Nupur thinks aag waha bhi lagi hai

They both sit at the window''..

Nupur: Rain makes me nostalgic''''.

Mayank: Acha kya yad aa raha hai tumhe Nupur?

Nupur: Abhi mujhe yaad aa raha hai''''.last year humare project discussions

FB:

Second day at college ''''.Nupur is very harassed after yesterdays ragging.

Class starts

Deodhar sir declares a project for all

Deodhar sir: Hmmm new students ke liye partner hai Mayank aur Samrat''..Baki apne partner's khud chun sakte hai.

Samrat tu kisse chunoge

Samrat: Gunjan sir

Samrat named her coz Sheena was insecure of Nupur'..

The class ends

Nupur: Toh main aur mayank partners hai

Nupur goes to Mayank whose about to leave the class room.

Mayank: Library aa jana thodi der mein

Mayank leaves'.

Nupur: By god Mayank tumne toh mujhe kuch bolne hi nahi diya'..Apni kahi aur chal pade'''

FB

At the library

Mayank had taken out a total of 6 books

Nupur comes: Yeh sab kya hai

Mayank: Hum jo project kar rahe hai, ussme ye sari kitabein help karengi, Tum do lejao, main char lejata hu

After a pause

Mayank: Issme se sab padhne ki jaroorat nahi hai, just read the chapters on position of woman in the society''''.Tum in kitabo se notes kab tak banalogi Nupur?

Nupur is so amazed'''that she cannot speak

Nupur: By god Mayank tum itna saara kaise bol lete ho?

Mayank gives her a stern look

Nupur: Kal tak ho jayega

Nupur: Uske agle din hum project ki shopping par gaye the

Yaad hai kya hua tha

FB

Nupur and Mayank are entering a shop''.When they see a man push a middle aged woman and she falls. Nupur reaches out to the aunty for help''..And then goes to the man.

Nupur: Aankhe hai ya button, dekh ke nai chal sakte'''''''..

The guy is about to say something but Mayank interrupts and asks him to go

Nupur: Aunty lagi nai na, Yeh ladke samjhte kya hai apne aapko'''..

Aunty: Nahi beta im fine, Kya naam hai tumhara?

Nupur: Nupur

Aunty: Toh ye tumhari project partner hai??

Mayank: Haan ma''..

Nupur: Namaste Aunty..

Aunty: Beta tum Mumbai ki nai ho na (Nupur nods in approval)

Tabhi ye namaste'.arre hi bolo yaar'''.Continue shopping sham ko ghar pe milte hai '''.bbye

Nupur: By god Mayank, tum aunty jaise dikhte hi nahi ho, aur unke jaise ho bhi nai, kissi ko bhi dhokha ho jaye, us din toh jaise mera bakra bana tha..

She giggles

Nupur suddenly notices Mayank, he was not bothered bout wat she was saying'''.

He way more of lost into her'''.he was staring at her

Nupur felt his eyes stare''as if they were caressing her'''

She was blushing ''''''.as she felt his gaze ''.

Suddenly Mayank realized he was staring at Nupur''''..He tired to look some where else in order to hide his awkwardness '''''Nupur realizes this'.

Nupur: Pata hai Mayank uss din mujhe Mumbai mein pehla acha dost mila''

Mayank: Koun?

Nupur: Tumhari mummy, Aunty kitni achi haina.unhone'

Mayank interrupts her: Aur main?

Nupur: Tum bhi na Mayank''..tum toh tab kitne sadu the

Tumhari aur meri dosti toh tab hui jab''..

Suddenly the door bell rings''

Nupur goes to open the door and Mayank sits back staring at Nupur


Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Awesome part Madhvi!! Loved it!! Continue soon plz!!

Edited by -Neelam- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
hey!
really sweet part. loved it. plz continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
heyyyy cuteee part.....do update sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting for more update... very good part enjoyed reading it.. thinking of the old memories...

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