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Heya friends!!! Kaise ho aap sab??
Actually main aapko 2 news dena chahti hoon!
Ek good news aur ek partially bad news.
Pehle BAD news...
I'll may go outstation for work within a week for a long time...may be a month!😭
ab yeh partially bad issliye, bcoz i'm not sure, i MAY go!😊
AB GOOD NEWS!!!!
kyunki mera koi bharosa nahi hai ki main jaaungi yaa nahi, toh main apne 3 laammmmmbe lammmmmbe ( Dhara aur priya ki definition ke hisaab se!😆) updates ek ke baad ek in 3-4 days may post karungi.😃 Hain naa gud news!!
Issliye jaldi jaldi comment karna. Mera barabar dhyaan rahega ki kaun karta hai aur kaun nahi!😆
So here goes, first one of the series.....
PART FOUR :

" Toh phir bulaao usse.... lagao awaaz apne Rajveer sir ko..", he said.

Naina looked at him teary eyed.
Aalekh who had come there in search of Naina heard this and came to stand by her and said, " Sir, apun aapki izzat karta hai. Aapne apun ke capt. sir ke saath jo kiya usske liye apun aapko maaf toh nahi karsakta par phir bhi apun aapki izzat karta tha.Parr agar aapne Naina ki taklif aur badhai naa toh phir..."
" Aalekh... hum... Naina ko iss takliff se bahar...", he was stopped by a loud scream....
Naina stood on a rock and screamed out....
" RAJVEERRRRRRRRR..............."
Somewhere....miles away a person on a hospital bed screamed out...
" NAINAAAAAAAAAAA........"
He suddenly opened his eyes and got up with a jerk.
The patient was agitated. The nurse attending him panicked.
" Bhago...Dr.Keerti ko bulaao... Jaldi....." , she called out a ward boy while she tried to control the patient by holding his wrist tight while another ward boy held on to his legs....
The patient was screaming only " Naina...", repeatedly.
That ward boy rushed to Dr. Keerti....
" Doctor.... doctor jaldi chaliye.... room no.201 ke patient ko hosh aa gaya hai..."
Dr. Keerti left the work at her hands and ran towards Room no.201.
It was a scene in City Hospital, Chandigarh....
It was one of the best hospitals in chandigarh headed by Dr. Keerti.
Dr. Keerti was a very famous and very acknowledged doctor.
She was a determined woman and personified dedication, respect, honesty, integrity to her profession.
She was young, in her thirties , having achieved this success at such a young age.
She was famous as being strict disciplanarian, at times rude with her colleagues when came to her job, but very kind at heart and that's why loved by everyone.
She entered room and asked the nurse,
"Inhe hosh kab aaya?"
" Abhi abhi aaya hai mam.... mai routine dose dene aayi thi jab achanak yeh patient zor se chillaya aur apni aakhen kholi. Kabse ek hi naam pukar raha hai, 'NAINA'....."
" Naina? "
" jee mam.."
The patient was so much agitated and it was difficult to
control him....
Dr. Keerti shouted at nurse," Sister lovely, jaldise calmpose ka dose ready karo and hand it to me...QUICK!"
"Yes Doc..."
Dr.Keerti injected the tranquilizer and the patient began to calm down.....
He kept on calling " Naina....naina...", softly till he dozed off.
Dr. Keerti examined the patient thoroughly and a satisfied smile appeared on her face. The patient was out of coma now. All her efforts, hardwork , paid off. She had spent sleepless nights for mnths, put all her knowledge, all her contacts with the seniors in the profession to a challenge , which she has now won. All efforts were worth it.
But she didn't want to take chances.... She didn't know why but felt an unknown connection with the patient. She has to verify her conclusions and ensure this patient's wellbeing.....
She immediately made a call....
" Hello.."
"Hello, Shubhankar?"
" Keerti? at this hour?is everything alright?"
"yeah... Actually patient of Room.no. 201 recovered from coma and..."
" What ?? Oh god ! I don't believe this ! I'll be there in a jiffy...."
" Okay.."
"Listen... Call Dr.Modi in meantime and ask him to come."
"I won't....he is one unprofessional, arrogant and ..."
"Keerti....Now don't be a kid. He is a well known neurologist and we need to call him at the earliest as patient has been in coma for months...", shubhankar told her while entering a car.
"Okay...I'll do it.you just make it fast."
" Yeah...Yeah....I know!"
Keerti smiled when she hung the phone. Now she had to call Dr. Modi.
Within 20 minutes three of them were in Room No. 201.
Thorough examination was done and it was confirmed that patient was out of coma now.
"Dr.Keerti patient is out of coma now. But I insist you repeat CT and whole body MRI examination and send me the report,so that if there's any neurological abnormality we can detect.", Dr. Modi said.
" Sure sir."
" Well...I must say Congrats.."
" Thanks."
As soon as he left, keerti hugged Shubhankar.
" Congrats Keerti.... you have done it !!"
" We have done it.", she corrected him," If you were not with me then...."
" Oye bass....But really what you did for a total stranger..."
" Shubhankar, I don't know why, But i always felt a kind of bonding with him. But we still don't know his background.I hope he remembers everything and there is no amnesia( memory loss)."
" Woh toh kal usske hosh mein aaneke baad pata chalega."
" Haan...aur tab tak we need to keep his existence in our hospital a secret. I don't know why but I feel like revealing him will put his life in danger."
" Alright. go by your intuitions."
" Yeah... Now go and have some rest."
" Yes. But first I'll drop you home. Now come on.... Aaj ke success ki khushi mein hi sahi, thoda aaram karlo."
"Tum naa....Parr pata nahi, yeh success meri hai ya naina ki."
"Naina? whoz Naina?"
" Patient ussi ka naam cheekhte huye coma se bahar aaya and then was continuously taking that name while dozing off."
" Keerti....come on. you are a doctor for god sake.Tum bhi inn sab baaton ko..."
" Shubhankar.... I believe tum bhi yeh jaante hoge ki coma se recover hona doctor can't predict. plus agar yeh sab baatein bakwaas hain, then why do you ask patient to keep faith on god or pray for our success in case of complicated operations and...."
" Okay...okay...you won!"
"That's better."
And they laughed.

Cut to Naina , Aalekh and Abhimanyu.:-

" Rajveerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr", Naina was shouting for him for the third time now.
" Aalekh....Sambhaliye inhe...humne toh ...."
" Sir...aap yahase jaiye. Agar aapko dekhke bhadak gayi toh...."
" Hum...hum jaate hai. Aap unhe sambhaliye please."
And Abhimanyu left the place,wiping his tears.
Aalekh rushed to Naina and made her sit and hugged her.
He began stroking her head gently to calm her down, while she was crying silently.
" Naina...sab theek ho jayega. Himmat rakh. Apun hai na tere saath..."
"Aa...Aalekh sir jinda hai....mai jaanti hoon...."
" Bass Naina...Issi taraha apna bharosa banaye rakh. Aur himmat mat haar.....Tu tension kaiko leti hai? Tere sabhi dost hai na tere saath."
She nodded. After spending some time there they returned to the tents.
Mean while Huda had arrived with the mechanic. While he repaired the jeep, aalekh made Naina eat something and they all left for the academy.

Cut to Prisoner's Van :-

Huda had got down at a town in search of mechanic. Gunny was sitting besides driver while Ali was sitting at the back. He was dead tired and dozed off. The captured terrorists saw all of them sleeping. Their hand and legs were tightly cuffed.
Terrorist 1:- " Rafiq...ye sabhi so rahe hai..."
T2 :- " Koi faayda nahi....hamara bhagna namumkin hai."
T1 :- " Haan.... uss gunny ka koi bharosa nahi.... Cheete ke jaisa tez hai woh...Boss ne kaha tha..."
Ali got alert at the mention of " BOSS".... He was a true soldier....
" Ek achcha soldier kabhi chain se nahi sota....hamesha alert hota hai cadet!..." , he always remembered Rajveer's teaching.
But he didn't open his eyes....
T2 :- " ShShhhh.... dheere....",he said pointing towards Ali.....
T1 :- "Woh toh so raha hai.."
T2 (whispered) :- " Woh Capt. Shekhavat ke Chooze hai...bhool gaya?"
Ali paid more attention at the mention of Rajveer now.
T2 :- " Inhe kahi se bhi shaq nahi hona chahiye ki Boss ka iss minister ki beti ke kidnapping se koi bhi waasta hai."
T1 :- "Waise achcha hi hua ki hum pakde gaye....warna boss hume zinda nahi chodta....Pehle uss Captain ka kaam tamam nahi kar paaye aur abhi ye minister ki beti..."
Ali couldn't believe his ears....But then...
T2 :- " Parr woh zinda hai jaroori toh nahi..."
T1 :- " Bevakoof... uski laash tak nahi mili.... Poora jungle chaan mara tha humne......Aur aisa koi bhi saboot nahi jo ye saabit kare ki woh jal gaya hai.... nahi uske kapde ke tukde naahi uski haddiyon ke.....issilye toh boss ab bhi pareshaan hai..."
Ali was experiencing a surge of emotions when suddenly he heard sound of firing....
And before he and Gunny could find out what's happening the four captured terrorists were dead..... A bullet hit gunny's left arm while one grazed through Ali's arm.
" Shit.", Gunny kicked the tyre of van in fury.
The driver was dead.
Ali offered to drive the van. His arm was paining a lot, but it was nothing in front of dissappointment of losing those terrorists. They could give important information regarding Rajveer. But nevertheless he was happy today.
He saw a hope..... A hope that may be, Captain Rajveer was Alive.....
While his Heart strengthened his hope.....
He couldn't wait to meet his friends.....
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All of them along with Abhimanyu stood in front of the academy gate.
All of them were going through lot of emotions.
They remembered the day when they first entered academy.......
Each one of them having different motives....
Huda was here as a result of a bet with his mummyjee....
Ali was here as he wanted to be the first one to become officer.....
Aalekh was sent here for reform by the court....
Yudi was here to prove himself to his Dad....
Pooja was here in search of Rohit...
And Naina was here to prove her brother innocent....
But by the time they were thrown out, all of them wanted the same thing,apart from there personal motives.....
To Be A True SOLDIER..........
Like their Rajveer Sir.....
Coz Rajveer was the person who had rekindled the patriotism in them and led them on to the right path........
Then they remembered the day when they were thrown out of the academy for helping Captain Rajveer.......
Their confidence and belief shattered, emotions curbed and their world having a big void without their Captain Sir......
All of them held hands....even Abhimanyu joined them....
Abhi started,
" Bharat ke hum Naujavan..."
And then everybody joined him....
" Bharat ke hum Naujavan,

Hum me shakti aur samman......."

And thus, after completing their march song , all entered the Academy together, holding hands....
With Abhimanyu and Sameera clapping in appreciation as they have won not one but two battles....
One at the detention centre, and another by saving Sameera.....
Dr.Shalini,Suriji,Lolita maam , Ali,Gunny and B.C who were standing on the lawn to welcome them joined
Abhimanyu and Sameera.....
B.C was proud of them....
" Well done Cadets.... The way you have handled this mission, I'm Proud of you.", he patted on their shoulders and left.
" Oye khotte de puttaro....", sureeji called out with tears in his eyes and smile on his face.
All of them rushed to hug that loving old man.
Even lolita maam couldn't hide her tears....
Shalini rushed forward to hug all of them.
" Cadets...i'm so happy today.", she said sobbing.
" Oye suno oye, aaj se training pe dhyaan doge and koi shaitaani nahi. Agar koi shararat ki toh Kaano vich sarr kar doonga..."
" Nahi karenge Sureeji....Ab hame bachanewaala bhi toh nahi hai naa yahapar.", Huda said.
Abhimanyu dropped a tear at this....today he was not jealous, but ashamed of himself.
" Puttar...hum sab hai naa? chalo...andar chalo."
Major Nair who was observing all this from behind the tree smiled wickedly,
" Welcome back cadets....Welcome to the hell."

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That's all for today! jaldi comment karo. I may post next update tonight or tomorrow morning for sure!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: manatated

good Dhara! tumne bilkul SAHI kiya! 😆
agar hum dono ke font ke size compare kiye naa tune priya, toh main updates ki frequency bhi compare karungi!😆
Dhara aur main Jay aur Veeru hai, aur tu...hmmmm(thinking hard)....arey haa! MAUSIJI!!😛
Dhara tum Priya ke emotional atyachaar se distract mat ho! 😆



Priyaaaaaa...... 4 ka double 6 hota hai...????😆
Tune mujhe Thakur bola...thik hai...😡 aaj ke baad tere fics me comments dena bandh....mere haath jo nahi hai...!!!! 😛
Aur mujhe tumhare liye ek hi dialouge yaad aa raha hai..." Nautanki Saala..." 😆


Manali...!!!!!!!! Priya ka emosanal atyachaar.......bilkul sahi kaha....👍🏼
Yeh dostiiiiiiiiiiii,
Hum nahiiii chodenge e.................
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy.......Rajveer ko hosh aa gaya................I hope he isnt sufferening from memory loss....!!!! Bina wajah drama create ho jaega....!!!! 🤢

Terrorrists are dead...Sh*t.😡😡😡 ...anyways, Ali got to know a bit abt Rajveer...!!!😃
Loved the way all the cadets enteresd the academy...the march song still gives me goosebumps.....!!!! 😃

Jaldi update karrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.................
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Hmm....nice part....I really hope thats Raj only. Waise the scene wid the terrorists n Ali.....it was very nice.....Ali now has hopes of having Raj alive....n the last bit was beautifully written.....u knw whenever I read this fic....I feel a certain kind of pride in Raj....well I hav always felt that....but may be u bring that out more.....

Well gud news to achhi hai.....but bad news....ohh....donno wat to say. Anyways, w8ing for the next part now.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina ke pukarne se Raj ko kitna fark padhta hai aur Raj ko hosh aa gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina pukare aur Raj ne sune aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dekha Naina ki pukar Raj ko coma mein se bahar le aaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Only Naina can do this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Dr.Keerti is taking care of this patient aur usse yeh ajnabi insaan koi apna sa lagta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Keerti informs about the patient to Shubhankar!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shubhankar ne kaha Dr.Modi ko bulane ke liye and even though she did not want to she called him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh yeh City hospital hai in Chandigrarh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Thank God yeh Sanjeevani nahi hai kyunki waha ke doctors toh ilaaj kam aur romance zyada karte hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Unka toh ek hi narah hai loveology mein first baaki sab mein fail humko toh aata hai bas yeh dil se dil ka mail!!!!

Keerti is hoping there will be no amnesia!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Keerti rightly thinks they need to keep his existence in their hospital a secret as she feels revealing him will put his life in danger!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Abhimanyu first got Naina excited and now he is unable to handle it aur Aalekh ko bol raha hai sambhalne ke liye!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aalekh ne accha kiya jo usne Abhimanyu ko wahan se jaane ke liye kaha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Aalekh comforted Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ali got alert and heard ke koi saboot nahi hai jo yeh sabit kar sake that Raj is dead!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Isse Raj ke zinda hone ke chances aur bhi solid ho gaye hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Too bad the terrorist are dead!!!!! They could have gotten important information out of them!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Unhe toh marna hi tha akhir woh insaan sach itni jaldi sab ke saamne thode hi aane dega!!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Sab cadets wapas aa gaye hai KMA mein aur academy mein sab ne milkar kya entry maari!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Their reunion with Shalini and Suriji was so emotional and even Lolita ma'am couldn't hide her tears!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh Nair phir se cadets ke saath kuch bura karne li planning kar raha hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Iski toh main!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Pata nahi ab woh kya karega in sab ke saath kyunki ab toh inhe bachane ke liye Raj bhi yahan nahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was awesome
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s



Priyaaaaaa...... 4 ka double 6 hota hai...????😆
Tune mujhe Thakur bola...thik hai...😡 aaj ke baad tere fics me comments dena bandh....mere haath jo nahi hai...!!!! 😛
Aur mujhe tumhare liye ek hi dialouge yaad aa raha hai..." Nautanki Saala..." 😆


Manali...!!!!!!!! Priya ka emosanal atyachaar.......bilkul sahi kaha....👍🏼
Yeh dostiiiiiiiiiiii,
Hum nahiiii chodenge e.................

😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy.......Rajveer ko hosh aa gaya................Rajveer???😕😕

I hope he isnt sufferening from memory loss....!!!! Bina wajah drama create ho jaega....!!!! 🤢fictions matlab drama hi toh hai😆

Terrorrists are dead...Sh*t.😡😡😡sabkuch aasaan toh nahi hosakta naa? Aur Naina and company keliye toh bilkul bhi nahi...
...anyways, Ali got to know a bit abt Rajveer...!!!😃Yeah...that's the best part!!
Loved the way all the cadets enteresd the academy...the march song still gives me goosebumps.....!!!! 😃 mujhe bhi!!!😃😃😃

Jaldi update karrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr................. Haan abhi kuch hi der mein kar rahi hoon....

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....nice part....Thank u😃

I really hope thats Raj only.Hmmm....ummeed pe hi duniya kayam hai 😆
Waise the scene wid the terrorists n Ali.....it was very nice.....Thanks again😃
Ali now has hopes of having Raj alive....
n the last bit was beautifully written.....Thank qqqqqqq😃😃
u knw whenever I read this fic....I feel a certain kind of pride in Raj....well I hav always felt that....but may be u bring that out more..... Even I feel the pride in him.And i'm sooooooo sooooo glad that u feel this fic brings that out more...coz all my efforts are to fill even those aspects of his character that i somehow feel LRL lacked......even to bring out the beauty of Naina's character,coz while watching serial i alwayz felt that they made her look too much selfish!

Well gud news to achhi hai.....but bad news....ohh....donno wat to say. I knw bad news itni achchi nahi hai, but it's good in a way 1mnth updates 1 week me hi mil rahe hai!!😃
Anyways, w8ing for the next part now.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon

thank uuuuuuuuu😃

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