MayUr FF - You Are My Life (Last Part - Pg 47) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
very sweet update. loved it. but plz make the next update a bit longer. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mujhe plz pm karna ..........i loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part Kanky. Pls continue and ya pls give long updates. 😃 And do PM me whenver u update.
Edited by cutie_nikki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
SO SHORT!! ahhh but can't wait for u to cont : ) xSonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys!

I'd make sure . . . I update u guys with a longer part next time!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was gr8...waitin 4 d next long update😉
kanky..cud u do me a favour???cud u jus pm d links of all ur previous mayur ffs???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part - 3

Early next morning . . .

AT THE BHUSHAN MANSION -

Nupur was the first one to wake up . . . she was extremely delighted! Mayank was alive, he was perfectly alright and was still there with her, her sister had an extremely caring and understanding boyfriend and she was soon getting married! Nupur had all the reasons to be happy! She was on top of the world.
Nupur woke up Gunjan, both of em got ready and went downstairs to have their breakfast, their mother was ready with it and wanted to talk about something . . .

NM - Girls, I want to tell u something! 😊

G - Jee Ma . . .

Nupur smiled and was all excited . . . (she knew that whenever her Mom spoke the above mentioned line, she always did something really very surprising!

NM - Maine aaj Sharma's ko dinner pe invite kiya hai. We'll be deciding the date of Nupur's marriage along with the discussion of other functions.

G - Wow ! Congo Di ! 😃😃

Nupur was extremely happy . . . she blushed a little and then hugged her mom and sis. 😳😛


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AT THE SHARMA PALACE -

Mayank was still sleeping . . . after all . . . that poor guy was extremely tired. His mom went up to his room . . . and saw him sleeping . . . 😆

MM - MAYANK!! IT'S 12 NOON! WHAT ARE U UPTO! WAKE UP SLEEPY HEAD!! 😡

M - Go away Nupur, lemme sleep!

MM to herself - Nupur! Accha bacchu! 😆

She picked the water bottle from the side table opened it . . . and was about to out in on Mayank when all of a sudden, he stood upright with a jerk.

M - MAA! Man, u scared me! 😕

MM - I did, beta . . . ye kya ho gaya tujhe? Apni Maa mein bhi Nupur! 😆

M - Maa! 😕

MM - Okay baba, accha listen . . . Mrs. Bhushan has invited us to her place tonight for dinner! We'll be deciding the date of ur wedding along with some other functions! 😃

M - What? Wedding?? 😲😃😛

MM - Haan beta! VIVAH! SHAADI!

M - Even, I know that! what I mean to say is that I haven't even talked to Nupur! She might ebknowing all this!! Sheesh! 😕

MM - Huh? Oh . . . ab samjhi . . . karle karle! 😆

M - Maa, now will u please leave?? 😉😕

MM - Theek hai, am going! 😆

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Mayank called Nupur up . . . 😊

N - Hello?

M - Hi Jaan! 😉

N - Jaan??

M - Kyun ye nick aacha nahi laga?? How about . . . umm . . . darling?? 😉😆

N - Shut up and come to the point! 😛

M - Kya yarr . . . baat to theek se kiya karo!

N - Accha, sorry . . . bolye Fiance jhi . . . kya kaam hai?? 😆😉

M - Arey yarr . . . u know what?? I just now woke up and Mom told me that Rashmi Aunty (Nupur and Gunjan's Mom) an Mom-Dad are gonna decide the date of our wedding today!! Man, am so happy!! Aren't u??

Nupur blushed. 😳

M - Phone pe toh blush mat kiya karo yar . . . itna accha expression dekhna miss kardeta hun main! Aur ab gussa mat hona . . . ohir ek cute expression miss kardunga!

N - Whatever! 😛😛😛

M -Ya ya, by the way . . . did u miss me?

N - Jhut bolun yan Sach?? 😆

M - Kuch bhi chalega! 😆

N - Okay . . . well in that case, am still missing u! 😳😊

M - Huh??

N - Ya, ise kehte hian adha jhut aur adha sach! 😆

M - Pardon??

N - Mayank . . . u're such a tubelight! That to, a fused one! 😆

M - Shut up!

N - Okay . . . baba . . . fine, chalo . . . I have to go now . . . it's urgent . . . Maa is yelling! 😕 Bye . . .

M - Sirf bye??

N - Oho, alright . .. bye, love ya.

M - Love ya too, bye! And miss me! Alright!

N - By God!! Kitni bakwas karte ho tum! 😆 Bye!

M - Bye! 😊😆

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AT THE BHUSHAN MANSION -

It was 7 in the evening and Sharma's had arrived. Mrs and Mr. Sharma had already come while, Mayank was busy finding aplce to park teir car outside the house. 😊

R - Namastey!

MM - Namastey! Kaisi hain aap??

R - Main bilkul theek hun, aap kaisi hai?? Aur bhai sahab aap bade kamzoor ho gaye hain?? 😆

MM - Ye toh humesha se hi aise hain! 😆

MD - Udalo mazak, dekhna . . . meri bacchiyan mere mazak nahi udayengi!

Nupur and Gunjan enter . . .

G - Bilkul uncle!!

N - Woh toh Gunjan, hum uncle na mazak udayenge na kisi ko udane denge!!

MD - Dekha, ye hai meri bachhiyan! 😆

Nupur and Gunjan greeted Mrs. and Mr Sharma and welcomed em inside. 😊

N - Aunty . . . Mayank nahi aaya? 😲

MM - Beta, he was more excited than both of us to come . . . aaya hai . . . he's trying to find out a place to park the car!

N - Main dekh k aati hun! I'll be right back! 😛

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Nupur went outside, she knew that this parking thingy was a trick, an old trick of Mayank! He always did it . . . he had already aprked the car but was waiting for Nupur to come so that he could be alon with her for sometime. 😳😆
Nupur saw Mayank inside the car . . . sitting and humming songs . . .she yelled, "MAYANK" . . .😡

M - Kya hua??

N - Are u nuts?? Phir se wohi trick . . . am not that mad alright?? Come on in . . . chalo . . . don't waste time.

Mayank stepped out of the car . . .

M - U knew it?? Mere plan ki toh wat lag gayi.

N - you know what?? You're very cute! 😊 (while pulling his cheeks)

M - Whatever!

N - Lets go inside now . . . 😆

Nupur turned around and was about to move when Mayank caught hold of her wrist . . . 😳 He puuled her towards him and said, "And u know what?? You're very beautiful!"

Nupur blushed.😳😳

M - Tum sharma kyun rahi ho?? Bolte samay toh tumhe kcu nahi hota! Ab kya ho gaya?

Nupur had no answer. 😳

Mayank kissed her on her cheek and said, " Ab to plan kam kara, chalein?" . . .😉

Nupur blushed. 😳😳

M - Ab chalo bhi . . . or u wanna stay here like this . . . well, I won't mind! 😉

N - U are so mean!

M - I know that! Now, lets go!

They both giggled. 😃😃 And went inside, hand in hand. 😊😳

To Be Continued . . .

How's it guys?? Click on the "Like" Tab if u liked it, I'd be highly obliged. Do comment and let me know how you feel about this part! 😊





Edited by Kanky - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

i loved it dear... i was also blushing... wonderful update dear.. waiting for the next part....

Edited by preethis - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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simply sweet and very nice part

nupur poor mayu ko to bolne he nahi deti really nice part thx for the pm😊
Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
hey kanky!!
very sweet part. loved it.

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