MayUr FF - You Are My Life (Last Part - Pg 47)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: naina_mayur
hey kanky!!!
twas fab yaar!!act i got a shock wen i thot mayank was in d plane...phew..😆..

keep writing more of des...luv it!!n ya pm if possble k..??

take care...

-naina

Well, as of now toh am not continuing it . . . but will make sure that when I do so . . . I PM u! 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@Kunal - Thanks bro!! 😊

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You Are My Life . . .

U guys wanted me to continue this FF . . . so how could I refuse?? 😉 Here I come . . . with another MayUr FF - "You Are My Life" . . . which would be based on MayUr's courtship . . . I can't promise if I'd continue it after the wedding takes place but I'll make sure I provide u guys with some very nice updates!! 😛

Character Sketches -

Mayank:
He is a 23 yr old pilot . . . he's very charming, intelligent, sweet, caring and responsible. He's a bit egoistic as well . . . has a short tempered nature! He is soon getting married to his girlfriend, Nupur. 😊

Nupur:
She is a 23 year old interior designer. She's very bubbly, chirpy and outspoken! She has no attitude in her and ver simple by nature! She is soon getting married to her boyfriend, Mayank! 😊

Rannvijay:
He is a 20 year old college going guy, who is Nupur's younger sister . . . Gunjan's boyfriend. He is a very sweet guy! 😊

Gunjan:
She is a 20 year old college going girl . . . she is very introverted, shy, sweet and simple! She is love with her classmate, Rannvijay! 😊

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Part - 2

Mayank and Nupur went inside the room . . . Mayank made Nupur seated . . . and sat beside her . . . holding her hand. 😊

M - Nupur, why are you crying? Look, am alright! Nothing has happened to me! Ab kyun dar rahi ho? 😲

N - Mayank . . . I had almost lost u . . .

M - Wo wo wo . . . almost! Right?? But u aren't that lucky! Am gonna keep on chasing u until . . .

N - Until? 😲

M - We guys don;t get married . . . as in "Tenu Le Ke Main Javanga" . . . 😆😛

Nupur blushed . . . 😳😳

Mayank hugged her tightly . . .

Both Mayank and Nupur were extremely tired . . . Mayank made Nupur lie down . . . she clutched his hand and went off to sleep. 😳
Mayank didn't get up from there . . . he was feeling very happy being with his angel . . .😊

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After an hour . . . Gunjan came up to em . . .

G - Jeej . . . why don't go home?? Uncle and Aunty are waiting for u! 😕

M - Oh man, look at the time . . . maine time dekh hi nahi . . . chalo, I should leave now . . .

Mayank kissed Nupur's hand . . . and got up . . . went up to Gunjan . . . and said, "Take care of Nupur and yourself . . . halat dekho apni! I can't see you guys like this . . . 😕" He kissed her forehead and hurriedly went out . . .

G to herself - Mayank Jeej is so sweet! He not only loves Di but he loves all of us! Di is so lucky! 😛

To Be Continued . . .

Sorry guys . . . I simply have no other ideas in my mind . . . sorry, couldn't write more. 😭

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Divya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

bohot cute thi..
par itni short 😔
pls long updates kiya karo kanky dear..!! hum aur kush ho jayenge 😃

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Mithila

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

thanx kanky for writing this FF.

loved the short n sweet part yaar.

but update soon the next a lil bit long.

very sweet part.

n plz pm me when u update next1.

i really liked this FF.

(not to mention i love ur all FFs.)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@Divya Di - I told u na . . . aur koi idea nahi aaya! Sorry!

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@Miths - Sorry yarr . . . next time . . . I'd update u guys with a longer part! And thanks!! 😊

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her_story

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

hey kanky dear..so u r here vth another ff..ts realy nice yar..u r really gud ...sry tat i dint comment to ur recent updates of d other 2 ffs..they wr gud too..u knw m usin my mobile to access d forum..so its realy difficult to comment always..