Michi FF: An Order From A Gentleman-Lady Epilogue - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: _ishaara_

🤣🤣 Kuku u rock!!! U ROCK!!! how do u do that every time???🤗 here take some flying kisses too , mwah mwah mwahOMG!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️thank you so much🤗🤗

your Prachi is a such a nut case, and on the whole Milind is a BIGGER nut case
im telling u, u r the only writer who had made MILIND, the great Milind question about his own sexuality!!!!!🤣 LMAO! Milind will sort out his sexuality soooon😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: siya..



ok since me FURST, m commenting sooo late...dont kill me for this..LMAO!!! hmmmm but i love this part! thank you😃Prachi had made a decision like a GIRL to become A GIRL🤣 LMAO! we girls are smart!😉lolz ayesha, so cute here...thanks to her that prachi is all set to transform into the lastest sensation of the country😆LMAO! yeah she will be the latest sensation😉😆😆...milind mishra is the next rakhi sawant...cute! lolz nice name to him though fits really well to him! hahahaha he is also all rage! after all being forcebly kissed by a 5 ft 3...PHEW!!! almost raped in his own car😆and aaah! milind's kiss had pushed the feminine buttons in her, glad she took the WISE descision of kissing a MAN rather than a WOMAN😆 gosh imagine if it was other way around😲🤢LMAO! who wud have she kissed if she wanted to kiss a woman? herself?😆
so Milind Mishra in distress..am i gay? no i cant be gay! OH MY GOD i'm gay🤣 goodnesss he is so confused about his own sexuality...prachiiii...yeh tuneh kya kiyaaa🤣hahahahahaha when Prachi cleared her confusion, Poor Milind got into a new confusion😆😆😆 cant wait to see how Milind Mishra's jaw drops on seeing his Shah as Prachi😆ahahahhaa next part😃
fab one..do cont soon🤗thanx Sia..will update it in a bit
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

dude first of all my hugs as i have missed it in last comment🤗LMAO! shocking tht u missed it huggy!😆😆😆🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

ok now the new comment😉 okay😃..... awesome, not at all boring👏thank you😛

prachi is now a mission to prove herself as a girl for her new love - milind😳yes she is!😳 ....... wow, their kiss has that much effect😆 one kiss tht was!😆😆😆 ....... so she has come to this conclusion & inder has set her free yup!...... ayesha & prachi will now make milsi drool over prachi😉 Milsi will go bonkers for a bit😉😆...... please kuku dude don't bring that sawant in this🤢 ....... specailly my boy as sawant😡 hehehe sawant will be mentioned twice or thrice more😳 sorry yaar😳...... now milsi is counting - wheteher he is a gay or not😆 ....... poor boy hahahahahahaha... he will stop counting once he meets P😃😆...... thank god that he called her & wish her😃 ..... now what happen when they finally meet😕u will see in the next part😛

plz continue soon😃will update it in a bit😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: azam12neelab

That was a superb part kuku👏 thank you so much hun😃but it was really short😔 this is a very short fic... so all the parts are very small😳

but anyway i loved everything about it from prachi wanting to be a girl to ayesha helping her outthank you😃
i seriously can't wait to see wat happens when milind returns, the surprise that prachi would give him!😉 he will be too shocked!😆
awww poor milind still confused about being guy!🤣 hehehhee poor guy... but it will be sorted out in the next part😛
he surely has fallen in love with her already...i guess he kind of loved her from the beginning but the kiss just exposed him to it😳 he always loved her but was never aware of it😛
the last part was sweet..she is talking more lady like!😆 hehehe she is becoming lady like.. gentleman has turned to a lady😉😆
plz update soon kuku🤗 will update in a few minutes😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#65


Part 3


Ths part is dedicated to all Amarjeet (Bhaskar Bharati) fans😃😃😃

A week before Milind was to come back home, Prachi reached her home and became the latest sensation in her locality with all the guys drooling over her and also Ayesha who had accompanied her to see how everyone would react seeing the new Prachi. Inder was pleasantly surprised seeing his daughter look like a daughter in a beautiful skirt and top with long hair, ear rings and high heels looking nothing less than a model. The only person who had no difficulty recognizing her was Inder because she had run to him the moment she saw him at the airport screaming "Dad!" rest nobody recognized her. Prachi had met with Milind's parents and forbidden them to tell him about her change as she wanted to surprise him. Prachi was happy and finally back at home but then two things irritated her the most one Milind was taking forever to get back home and second the guys she grew up with has started calling on her all the time in one pretense or other, even Ranvir who had always made fun of her inspite of Milind bashing him up many times, suddenly seemed to be very interested in her. The only one who didn't show any romantic interest in her was Neev, because he was a goner ever since he laid his eyes on Ayesha.

Finally thursday arrived and Prachi along with Ayesha went to pick up Milind. Ayesha had got Prachi ready with extra care making sure she looked her best. Prachi wore a black saree just so Milind will know how much of a girl she is now. After Milind left they had talked only four times, twice on her birthday and twice on his birthday, and now that she was finally going to meet him and her heart was slamming against her chest as she thought of Milind's reaction. "Why is it taking him so long?" Prachi asked Ayesha nervously. "He will be out in a bit. Relax." Ayesha says as she adjusted Prachi's long ear rings. "I'll go see that side." Prachi says and without waiting for a reply walked towards the other side.

Milind walked out wondering who would have come to pick him up; a part of him wanted Shah to pick him up while a part of him wanted to stay away from Shah as much as possible. What will his parents feel if they find out that their son is on the verge of becoming a gay? Milind starts looking around when he saw a girl waving at him excitedly, he turns back to see if she was waving at someone else but she seemed to be waving at him with a hesitant smile he walks towards her. "Hello Milind." "Hi." Milind says confused. "I'm Ayesha." Ayesha says as she put her hand forward for a shake hand. Milind shakes her hand and asks "How do you know me?" "I came to pick you up." Ayesha explains. "Me?" Milind asks shocked. "Yes I came with Pra... Shah." "With Shah?" Milind asks shocked and couldn't help feeling jealous as he wonder whether Ayesha was Shah's girlfriend. Shah had the nerve to kiss him, and start dating other girls. Ayesha notices the pain and anger Milind was trying to hide but she didn't understand why he was feeling like that, and he looked like he wanted to kill her but why? "Where is Shah? And are you Shah's friend or....?" "Or?" Ayesha asks confused. "Shah doesn't talk to girls much, so I was wondering are you his girlfriend." Milind bits out. Ayesha looks at him shocked and then starts laughing "How did you guess? Oh there comes my He-man!" Ayesha says pointing behind Milind. Milind turns back to look for Shah as he suddenly felt his eyes filling up and he didn't know why he was feeling so sad about Ayesha and his Shah. His? His Shah?

"Hey! We are here!" Ayesha screamed out from behind Milind towards Prachi. As he scanned the airport swiftly he didn't see Shah anywhere around. "Where is he?" Milind asks as he tried to hide the hurt...caused of what? "Hello Milind!" Prachi greets him with a smile. Milind turns to the girl wondering why so many girls were coming up to talk to him today. Is she another girlfriend of Shah? Bloody Casanova! Wait a minute! He can never mistake that eyes, that smile and bloody hell not that voice! "Shah?" Milind croaks as he stared at the beautiful girl in front of him. With mischief in her eyes, Prachi corrects him as she flipped her hair back very elegantly "Prachi." "Bloody hell!" Milind says shocked. "You are a girl!" Milind accuses her. "Yes I am." Prachi smiles at him. "And not my boyfriend." Ayesha says grinning. "WHAT?" Prachi asks shocked while Milind turns to Ayesha in shock and then remembers what he had just asked her. Ayesha winks at Prachi "Sawant thought I was your girlfriend." What?" Prachi turns to Milind and remembers how Milind used to suggest that she date other girls and burst out laughing. "Sawant?" Milind asks Ayesha trying to hide his embarrassment. Hearing that Prachi starts blushing while Ayesha winks at him "Prachi will explain later. Let's go everyone will be waiting for you at home." Ayesha says as she turns to walk out. Having no other option and nothing else to do Milind and Prachi follows her with Milind giving Prachi curious, confused and shocked looks.

They walked towards the car park, seeing the car park brought back memories of their kiss for Milind and couldn't help glancing at Shah who was blushing? "I had told Baba and Mama to take good care of your car, and they did." Prachi says as she offered the keys to him. Milind just looked at her as if she was an alien. "Here take the key." Prachi says. Nodding Milind takes the key and walks towards the car.

The drive home was silent with Ayesha messaging Neev, Milind and Prachi glancing at each other every now and then. As he drove into his locality Milind was practically gone bonkers with the shock of Shah being a girl, then she looking gorgeous and her very feminine glances and smiles had drove him crazy. He himself didn't know what he was doing or what he should be feeling. As he entered his house his parents and Inder uncle were waiting for him, and after all the hugging and welcoming home, they all wanted to know Milind's reaction to the new Prachi. And Ayesha quickly got into an animated explanation of every single thing that had happened at the airport making everyone laugh, Prachi blush and Milind just simply too shocked to react to anything. As she finished recounting Prachi's and Ayesha's local fans started coming into the house to meet Milind. Milind watched in shock as his so called friends were running around like love sick puppies around Prachi and Ayesha doing their every bidding. The only person who seemed to be there genuinely to see him was Neev.

Milind didn't know why he wanted to smack off Protheek's grin when he saw Shah laughing to something Protheek had said. Before he did anything dangerous he wanted to be alone. "Guys! Thanks for coming over to welcome me. I think it is the jet lag I need to take a nap. Sorry guys will see you all later." Milind said loudly to all his friends. Soon everyone started leaving while Prachi wondered whether she should leave, before Milind would ask his friends to leave but he always wanted to her stay back with him whatever the reason was. But he didn't even talk to her much today but still asks him "Milind, do you want me to help you unpack?" "No Shah, I will manage. Thanx for asking." Milind says. Prachi was hurt and couldn't mask her hurt from showing on her face, he seemed so distant. Nodding her head she walked to her house with Ayesha while Milind wondered why he was feeling sad seeing her go away like that.

Prachi couldn't help control her tears after Milind had behaved so distant with her. She had been waiting for him all these days and he didn't seem to like her like this. In between she saw him looking at her so angrily while Protheek was talking to her, did he not like the change in her? she had thought he was attracted to her though it had been two years ago she thought he would still feel something deep down for her or maybe he will develop some feelings for her or the least be happy to see her but he just looked confused. Confused! "Oh God!" Prachi mutters, that was the reason. He just needed time to accept her as her. He is just shocked, and once he comes out of his shock he will be her Milind and maybe... maybe he will return her feelings. But at this point, even if he didn't love her it was fine she just wanted her Milind back.

Milind was lying on his bed as he fumed thinking about what had happened today. His Shah is a girl! That too a beautiful one at that how can that be? He was supposed to be his Shah! Not some beautiful girl. But why is he getting angry over that? He is such a confused person. He needs psychiatric help. He needed his Amarjeet Sir, his school teacher who was his guide, role mode and philosopher and suddenly Milind could hear Amarjeet Sir speaking inside his head "Bhaaai Milindey... What is this HULLABALLO? Stop this JUVENILE behavior and get into the DEPTH of the CONTAAXT and make a STRATERGY to PRIORITIZE your PRIORITIES! Otherwise UNTHINKABLE COMMOTION will happen! So instead of thinking of the UNTHINKABLE EXPLOITATION think about the STUPENDOUS and EVERGREEN TRANSFORMATION Shah has made!"OH MY GOD! Milind leans up balancing himself on his elbows. "What the hell is wrong with me? Shah is a girl! That means I'm not gay! Then why the hell am I cribbing? I am such an idiot what my body recognized that day it took my mind so long to realize that my Shah is a girl." Milind lays back on the bed and with a smile softly whispers as he closed his eyes "Prachi." Then quickly opening his eyes he looks at the ceiling "Bhagwan, please long haired saree wali Prachi should come in my dream and please make my dream as long and as nice as possible. No rushing please...huh?" closing his eyes Milind wondered whether he should be praying to Satan also for the same.


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Kuku😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Hey Lizzy mama I want to be first😳😃😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
@Mayuri: updated! will check ur pm tomorrow:) going to bed now😳
@lizy: thank you🤗
Edited by kuku.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Congrats👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
He was so shocked..OMG
Hilarious...he got jealous of Ayesha...LOL
He also got jealous of Protheek
Amarjeet was just Funny with his Long words..LOL
He finally realised that she's a girl
So it seems like he has fallen for her..Cool
Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: kuku..

@Mayuri: updated! will check ur pm tomorrow:) going to bed now😳
@lizy: thank you🤗

Good Night Kuku🤗

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