ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#791

thats awesome!

will be waiting!

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parisbynight

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Posted: 15 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
hehe.. ur note makess sense to me!
=-D

😉 LOL

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minalpink100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#793

hi friends i knw u all r waiitng for my update tomorrow i m going to update date part i hope u will lyk it that part
thank u so much paris to given me this opportunity thanks lot

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minalpink100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#794

mayank nupur date scene
mayank finally arranged one beautiful date for nupur but this time he choosed one different place to nupur it is hills station mayank wear black shirt &jeans nupur wear red color slawar kammez sleevless dress 😊but when nupur come to that hill station she see no one is there then nupur start talking herself
nupur:- ye mayank bi na mujhe yaha bulake gaya kaha mujhe to yaha akeli dar lag rahi hai
then suddenly lights start like one by one nupur amazed then flowers start falling on her she suddenly shocked see back side mayank is standing there she go & hug him tightly said ILOVE YOU MAYANK THEN even mayank also told ILOVE YOU NUPUR they both hugged tightly
then mayank:- nuput tumhe nahi lagta yaha kuch kami lag rahi hai
nupur:- kya mayank ?
mayank:- music ki
nupur:- ha o to hai but kyun
mayank:- kept her waist & told dance ke liye so lets dance
then song also starttttt
music starts
tu mile dil kile aur jeene ko kya chahiye
tu mile dil kile aur jine ko kya chahiye (both mayank & nupur dancing together)
na ho tu udas tere pas pas me rahunga zindgi bar
na ho tu udas tere pas pas me rahunga zindgi bar
sare sansar ka pyar maine to jeene paya

tum mile dil kile aur jine ko kya chhaiye (then mayank bring his face close towards nupur nupur fully blushed & gone away from mayank)
then again music starts mayank also follow to nupur again pulls her towards him
chanda tuje dekne ko nikla karta hai
ayina bhi didar ko gharsa karta hai
itni hasi koi nahi itni hasi koi hasi (slowly mayank kept nupur hairs to back side of her ears)
utna dono jaha ka ek tujme se matke aya
again music came (mayank give one kiss to nupur forhead again to her check)
pyar kabhi ho marta nahi hum tum marte hai
hote hai o log amar pyar jo karte hai
jitna utni wafa jitni ada utni wafa(mayank start giving kiss to her neck)
ek nazar pyar se deklo fir se zinda karlo
(then suddenly give kiss to her lips even nupur also respond positively)
tu mile dil kile aur zine ko kya chahiye
na ho tu udas tere paspas me rahungi zindgi bhar
sare sansar ka pyar maine to jine paya
tum mile dil kile aur zine ko kya chahiye

then they both kissed deply but suddenly when song over suddenly they both broke apart
nupur fully blushed as usuall
but mayank again pulls her towards him & asked
mayank:- nupur tum aaj bahut achhi lag rahi hu
nupur:- tum bi
mayank:- but tum sharmati ho na aur bhi achhi lagti hu means specially me tumhe jab kiss karne ke bad
nupur:- hmmmm tum bin na
mayank:- are baba sach to bol raha hu
then both r laughed
mayank:- I MISS YOU NUPUR
nupur:- even me also mayank
& hugged him
mayank:- dont worry nupur ek mahina ke bat hai jald se jald katam ho jayega
nupur:- ha but mujhe ek sal ki tarah hogi
mayank:- kyun mere gift hia na tumare pas
nupur:- kaunsa ?
mayank:- mere kiss
nupur:- aur meri bhi then both r laughed 😊

hi friends how is my update i hope u lie it sorry due to my bad health i cant able to write long update i m so osrry paris i hope u understand please yar thanks lot for giving me such a wonderful opportunity
once again thanks lot friends for u r support i hope u lyk my update 😊

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parisbynight

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Posted: 15 years ago

#795

hey minal i am so glad i chose you to do this part!
gosh it was so romantic
one of my fav song on top of that

and the gift...ie/ the kiss was just perfect line !!!

well done!

Edited by parisbynight - 15 years ago

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#796

hey minal wow wow wow man, that date was sooo sweet and damn romantic, i truly lovedddddddd it. Awwwwww that is my favourite song from the movie bombay na, i am kind of bad with movie names but i lovedddddddd everything about the update, the attire which mayur had, the flowers, music, dance and all the romantic scenes.

minal it was toooo good, you should write more often. thanks for the pm paris, you are a gem.

Minal keep it up!