ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 57

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

wow...............amazingggggggggg!!!!!
this was such an mindblowing part.......... i jus loved benji, uday and mayanks scenes.......
mayur were great as usuall!!! lol!! jab we met parts were funnyy... and mango milkshake 😆
awww.awesomeeeee.....loveddd it!!! cant wait fr the next updatee.... lol... i wana see a reaction from benji and uday bout the engagment thing if dey get to kno...dey myt think dat mayank forced her into it!!! lol!!!
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thanks a ton!
lol its almost a must to add ref of film !!!
ahahah they hav no idea of how mayur romance everyday!

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

let me be d first one to comment!!!!!!
great,supereb fantastic work yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it to d core!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job!!!!!!!!!!!😛
mayank requesting nups to take him as her fiance was just superb yaar😳mayank-benji-uday scene was just superb!!! mayu scaring d hell out of them was very funny!!!😆

superb work once again!!!!!!!!

dont worry first or second it doesnt matter..wat matter is ur sweet comment!
thanks!
mayank is enjoying scaring these cartoon...
i love benji and uday to! they have an awesome chemistry with mayu!

Originally posted by: falak01

omg....loveliesttttttttttttttt👏awesome blossom yaar....👏👏👏

and the dialogues are marvellous....👏👏👏

all the scenes were too perfect...😳😳that scene in which nupz was sleeping and mayank went to see her,was sooooooooooo cute...😳😳☺️

here r my fav. ones:

zaroor Hitler ka rishtedar hai yeh🤣🤣🤣benji to benji hai...🤣🤣

pehle sweet good morning, phir bitter anger warning" !🤣🤣🤣nupur nautanki ..🤣🤣

mujhe to apni phool jaisi sister par tarass araha hai,jitna romance ka shok tha ,utna hi unromantic ladka se pyaar kar beti!🤣🤣🤣uday was damn hillarious here...🤣🤣🤣

"agar mayank sharma ho saath to dictionary ko kaun lagahega haath"🤣

and then all those double meaning dialogues🤣

hillarious man....🤣🤣i lovedddddd them....🤣

and "impotent" dat too reference was JWM...🤣🤣🤣

and the way mayank explained her was soooooo sweet...🤣🤣

if u have a boyfriend like him,then i think u shud behave like dat only..as if u don't know anything...🤣

and the way mayank told her dat he is not impotent was just..🤣🤣

but the next scene when he proposed her again was magically romantic....uffff☺️☺️☺️

and dat chunnu munnu...😆😆

and the dance was awesome...☺️☺️☺️

in all one of the best one shots i have read till now coz it is having a perfect balance of romance and humour...😃😃

omg thank u so much for such an animated comment!
i had fun reading it!
im glad u like the dialogue!
my fav is the "dictionary one " too...
im so happy u enjoyed reading it...

Originally posted by: nikki028

by god paris...........wht an update.......kal mayur kiss epi......n nw ur mindblowin.....romantic........superbbbbbbb..awesomeeeeeeeeee......fantabulous oneshot ne maar daala mujhe..............truly u r a heavenly talented writer dear..........i really really njoy all d OS n ff wriiten by u........🤗🤗🤗

thanks u so much!
big hugs to u all...as u r all great supporter!
keep reading!

BY GOD!!!

Hi Paris
its a mind-blowing,super-duper,fantabulas, lovely update.
every scene of this ff made me crazy.
u know what, if the MJHT creative team write the script in that way then TRP must be growing as fast as a jet plane.
the way how mayank try 2 expalin her was fantastic.
nupuz really a innocent girl, and mayank a perfect gentleman.
And benji ka dialogue-im sure nupur ne daar ke mare mayank se pyaar kiya hoga! was so funny.
it has all the thing that made a person very happy.
First 2 last i enjoy a lot.
thanx , thanx 1 lottttttttttttttttttt for ur nice update.

A big hug 4 u.
Faria

Originally posted by: little_dragon

paris wow. I could feel te tingle in te passionate scenes. Gosh u r a ace writer. Passion was filled in air. Kiss had depth n intensity. Oh dear could really feel te essence of te one day shot. Write more. Waitin for next update. And thanks for pm. Drooling over UR one day shot. Love u.

im so happy u felt the passion portrayed..!
thanks pryia

Originally posted by: Kanky

This very up0date was heavenly!! ☺️ I tell u, even I wasn't aware of that Jab We Met thingy! 😆 See, that way am still an innnocent teenager! Nahi? 😳😉 But anyways, this was the best update of your FF so far!! Keep writing!! And please add me to your bubdy list cause I can't add u since am not an active member. 😊

girl u still have a lot more to learn ! hehe
im glad u enjoyed reading it!
im also inactive member thats why i ask ppl to add me...

Originally posted by: parisbynight

omg thank u so much for such an animated comment!
i had fun reading it!
im glad u like the dialogue!
my fav is the "dictionary one " too...
im so happy u enjoyed reading it...

actually i read ur one shot for d first time,nidhi told me abt ur one shots,and also abt the double meaning promo..😆😆

Originally posted by: falak01

actually i read ur one shot for d first time,nidhi told me abt ur one shots,and also abt the double meaning promo..😆😆

i was very much excited to read it...as my mind is full of such double meaning things...🤣🤣🤣

@red:yeah animated comment from an animated person🤣🤣🤣

thanx for such a lovely one shot..😃

lol nupur is very innocent!
so i see nidhi is spreading the word hein?!....she is a sweetheart
lol i love double meaning too!and also ahem ahem...