Hi guys.... Here's da last update of this FF...
Part-13:
He closed his eyes....sitting lonely on a bench outside in the garden..he opened his eyes...he gazed at da sky.....looking 4 da brightest star up there...he knew she was looking at him....a tear rolled down his cheek....he then closed his eyes again...n went back 2 those tough moments of his past...
Wen da operations had ended on both da sides, Mayank went first 2 his mom's room...da doctor had told him:"She just had half an hour left!!"----he was shattered...he went 2 her room n was helplessly crying...his sobs hindered in his speech...he cud manage 2 speak in broken wrds 2 his mom...who lay there smiling at him n taking a deep sigh...
Mayank:"Maa...ye...akela...main....kaise..."
His mom cud understand da meaning of his wrds n all she whispered silently was:"Bas beta....rona band kar.."
Mayank wiped his tears bt again his eyes were refilled with tears..she then asked him 2 pick up her diary...n wen he picked it up n opened da last page as he was asked to...he read them:"Khush naseeb hote hain wo log jin ki aakhri khwahish poori hoti hai...main nahi jaanti k ye meri aakhri khwahish hai ya nahi..par agar hai...toh..."he paused 4 moment 2 look at his mom n then looked at da diary again n continued:"toh bas..."he stopped again...swallowed hard n read while crying:"toh bas yehi chahti hoon...k zindagi le jaa kar apne bete ko uski saansein de jaon!!"
Tears rolled down his cheeks:"Ma...kyun?nahi...main.."
Mayank's mom:"Ssssshhhhhh....tune hi kaha tha naa...k main agar teri zindagi hoon toh nupur teri saansein hai..koi saans liye bina kaise ji sakta hai?"
Mayank, in a slightly high complaining tone:"Koi zindagi k bina bhi nahi ji sakta maa!!tum.."
His mom smiled n whispered:"Pagle....jab tere papa chale gaye the naa toh tu meri saans tha...toh main tere bina kaise ji paati?tujh mein main ne ek nayi zindagi paayi...aur tune Nupur mein...beta!!main kaheen nahi jaa rahi...tu bachpan aasmaan mein apne papa ko dekhta hai naa...wo sab se zyada chamakne wala taara tere papa hain naa...toh ab un k bilkul paas ek aur taara hoga....aur wo teri maa hogi...."
Mayank took his mom's hands in his own...kissed them...n cried harder....sobbed endlessly...
His mom took her last breath n smiled:"Bas mayu!!Aur nahi beta....main hamesha tujhe dekhoon gi...."
With this...his angel closed her eyes....this time...FOREVER!!!
He opened his eyes n found his vision blurred with tears....he remembered his mom...da moments he had with her were unforgettable...
<CREDIT FOR THE ABOVE VIDEOMIX GOES TO CuteGirl14...thanx asmoo...>
Mayank then realized a soft hand on his cheek..there to wipe his tears...n it was his wife...Nupur...evn Nupur had tears in her eyes....she said:"Jaate jaate maa mujhe zindagi de gayi..."
Mayank completed:"Aur mujhe saansein..."
He kissed her on her forehead...they went bak home....
At home Mayank went 2 da kitchen...he called "Nupur" 4m behind n in hurry Nupur got a cut on her hand 4m da knife she had in her hand...Mayank immediately took her to da room...he put a bandage on her hand...then Nupur saw a slight tear in his eyes which he tried 2 hide 4m her...b4 Nupur cud question, Mayank got up 4m da bed n stood near da window in their room...Nupur went 2 him n askd him:"Kia hoa?"
Mayank:"Nupur....shukar hai tum theek ho.."
Nupur smiled:"Mayank...sirf ek choti si chot hai..."
Mayank:"Main is chot ki baat nahi kar raha..."
Nupur understood wt he was tokn abt...Mayank continued:"Ek zara si chot par mera ye haal hoa hai...tumhein andaaza bhi nahi hai k jab tum OT mein thi toh main ek pal mein kitni mautein mara hoon....."
Nupur:"Pata hai mayank....sab pata hai...par maa?"
Mayank:"Pata hai Nupur...us din OT mein aur bhi kuch kaha tha maa ne jo main ne abhi tak nahi bataaya tumhein....unho ne mujhe samjhaaya tha k kis tarah un k liye papa zindagi aur main unki saansein tha....aur kis tarah car accident k baad jab main aur papa dono critical the toh papa ne apni jaan k badle meri jaan maangi thi...aur phir maa ne kaha k unke jaane k baad kaise maa ne mujhe aur sharma enterprises ko sambhaala tha...kyunki unhein hamesha lagta tha k papa humein dekh rahe hain..."
Nupur went closer to Mayank, put her hand on his cheek n Mayank said:"I love u Nupur...."
Nupur:"I luv u 2 mayank..."
And they looked towards the sky...knowing their mom was looking at them....
Part ends...
FF ends...
Comments please...😳
~Thank you note~
Hey all wonderful, amazing n lovely buddies i made here via my FF....i want 2 thank u all 4m da bottom of my heart...its been a while since i hv strtd it nw...n as i end it 2day---wen i luk back at these 13 parts FF...i guess its all bcoz of da appreciation i received that has encouraged me 2 kp writing...so...
And a thanks to CuteGirl14---asmoo...🤗
For making a vm on Mayank n his mom 4 me...n that too without any delay....thanx sweetie...ppl please view da vm n do tl us ur comments on it....
Will be missing these comments guys...bt i hp i ll b bak soon with a new idea...new concept...till then....tk care guys...😊
Cheers--Kiran😳
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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