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Posted: 15 years ago


Mai Tumhaare Pair Pakadti hoon..... Plz update kar da....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Aimee!
How R U!
I wish u r gud
....

woah dear
its really a nice one hats of to u i think its best oneso so she too staring himand his Nephew seen and also blurted out in front of Anjali true Muskaan son Armaan want to see her when she is feeding kids and he got so crazy to see her without specks so sad not able tooo and also wait for her Oye hoahcool and she is room not aware of this world but he can't stop teasing her woh at last seen her eyes now what going to happen next but its rocking oneplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm

"Thank u Guys for being there for showing me the path,
Thank u for always forgiving me for mistakes,
Thank u for always staying by my side,
Thank u for giving me the courage,
Thank u for listened to my problems,
In a kind and caring way,
I'm only complete when u are near,
Guys I couldn't forget all of u,
Even at the last breath I take,
Coz u'll always have a special place in my heart."









Nidha

Hey Nidha...
Yaar thank god you liked it, i wasnt too sure before posting it. Thanks for the reply sweetie...

Originally posted by: nidha1983

mera Dushman kaha hai tu aur tera update






LOL... this was too good yaar. I loved it and am still laughing.

Originally posted by: nidha1983



Mai Tumhaare Pair Pakadti hoon..... Plz update kar da....

Arey-arey, mere pair pakadne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai yaar. Sorry, lekin mujhe thoda kaam pad gaya tha, isliye pahle update nahi kar payi... But i will update the next episode very soon. Agar light ne problem nahi ki, to shayad next two hours mein. Warna aaj raat tak to pakka promise. Love ya...
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh wow Aimee ... I wish electricity ki koi problem na ho :) My comments for last part are not updated yet and have just reserved a space, which I won't waste and use it now after this update. 60th episode ... sounds cool!!! Ummm ... after 15 more episodes of this fic we will have some celebration.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: janu1610

Aimee too cool ,u know i just filled my previous reserved nd that very moment i got ur pm .What a coincidence. Lol, thats good. Well u narrate views of girls was amazing Vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce, delicious in lemon ,hair,smile,body.oh!!!!!!!!!!! obsessed girls kuch to chhod do.😉LOL 😆, haan, else Riddhima will complaint to HIS parents and they will throw you out of the party...

Yash nd vaibhav two little monsters or Angels donno but i love them and even i love the way she treated them. They are really BIG mouths. Abhi to bas trailer hai, aage pata nahi kya-kya bak denge ye dono...

oyye-hoyye!!!!!!!!! Armaan tried to approach her and that with rose .hmmmmmmmmm may this flower bloom soon . It has already, its just the flower is under sheds. Lets see when will the other people realize its presence.

Hey he kept an eye on Ridzi. Means his sub conscious mind knows his feelings to whom he is still unaware.

His description about her was too cool

"oh, I am sorry. She is... she is a young, fairly but slightly wheatish, cute looking girl... Wearing this creamish-yellow dress, with a long braid, and... and yes, this big specs... silly looking specs that hide her big eyes. And she keeps pushing them back again and again. She goes a little fidgety when someone stares at her. And... and her voice is very sweet, she laughs like a child. And... and..." he kept blabbering things, trying to describe Riddhima in every possible way he could think.

Loved every bit of this story nd yeah u r too gud in these scenes. Thanks a lot for liking it dear.

When the morning sun
strikes the sill,
I think of you
and my heart stands still.
And when my flesh is caressed
by the warm spring air,
I think of your touch,
and how your hand rested there.
Through the day,
I only have to hear your name,
and my heart leaps to you,
my pulse aflame.
Sweet music in my soul,
your voice has set for me,
for you're all I think of,
all I hear, feel, or see.

Hey nice poem huh... suits the episode.
thanks for pm.
love

ritu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Arey-arey, mere pair pakadne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai yaar. Sorry, lekin mujhe thoda kaam pad gaya tha, isliye pahle update nahi kar payi... But i will update the next episode very soon. Agar light ne problem nahi ki, to shayad next two hours mein. Warna aaj raat tak to pakka promise. Love ya...



Light problem mein samaz sakti hoah ok no problem

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

oh nooo

me late
main 4th number pe 😭😭
i wanted to be first Arey to kya hua... atleast you arent LATE like always... LOL... sorry just kidding.
chal koi nahi
reserved , part padnee doo pehlee comment bhi kar dungee
------EDITTED------
heyaa hi aimee , kaise hai aap ji ,
i knew aap to teek hi honge , Yes, I am fine sweetie... theek to hum jaise log nahi hoote hai , app aise aise part likhenge to unhee padkee hum theek kaise rehh sakte hai hmm Achcha? thats great 😆
ye part kya likhaa yaar , it was complete hatkee , i knew this , ab i have read 58 parts by you earlier , and i can surely find that this was different , I know yaar i have been quite lazy with it 🥱... yaa , too good yaar ,
mujhe nahi patta tha you can write with this romantic type things soo soo nicely ,
gosh i loved reading it soo soo much , Kya karun yaar, ye sab mere inexperienced hone ka kasoor hai 😕. Phir main thoda tube-light hu, to pahle ye sab Romantic cheezein nahi aati thi, ab thoda-bhot seekh rahi hu. 😉 😆
ok ok , starting from that ladies chat , hyeelaa , these ladies i tell you , kya kya kehhe jaa rahhe the , 😆😆 armaan not getting married , kahhe vo vo to nahi 🤣🤣 my god , ye ladies aise bhi soch sakte hai kya , i hate them , armaan ke baare mein aise sochha bhi kaise 😡 , Sach mein, they could be over-imaginative with stuff 🤣... anyways leave that , aagee
and that girls lol's 😆 😆 wait 🤣 , 2 minutes 😆😆 , oh my god , tumne ye saare dialouges kaise likhee hmm Even i dont know... main to ab tak soch rahi hu ki mee dimaag mein ye aya kaise? 😕
"Ok-ok aunty, but don't you think he look absolutely delicious in Lemon yellow?" the girl cooed again with a dreamy look.

Another one sighed, "Absolutely... just like vanilla ice-cream."

armaan and vanilla ice-cream , lord , and riddhima ne sunn liyya ye sab , great tht was the best think you did
and she observing him , challoo thank godddddddd , for the first time in her life , usne armaan ko us tarah see dekhaa too sahhe , finallyyyyyy kuch too huaa 😆😆 Arey aage bhi hona hai, start thoda late hua hai bsa...
well that whole strring scene from behind the pillar was great ,
Armaan and a Vanilla Ice-cream, garnished with chocolate syrup... wow... the combination does sound tempting, she thought amusingly. 😆😆
ye he he , riddhima thinking the same . armaan to hot chocolate fudge bann gayya 🤣 🤣 Hmm, bechaari kab tak itni tempting cheez se dur rahegi 😛
ye yash , bhi naa . aa gayaa riddhima ko disturb karne , hailaa per bahut achee cheez kar dee usnee
"Main Bua aur Superman ke saath hide and seek khelunga." Yash replied insistingly
heyaa , that was the best , anjali kee saamne chaloo , finallyyy kisse ne armaan and riddhima ka naam saath saath too liyya Yash to bilkul apni maa pe gaya hai. Muh band hi nahi rahta uska 😡 😆.
i soo wish ab anjali kaa mind jet speed see chalnee lagge , thodaa bahut too hoo hi gayya hai , shak hua hai , lets see kahha tak jaata hai yee Dekho kaun ab kya karta hai...
mujhe personally vo yash and anjali scene bahut achaa lagga , when anjali asked ki vo sirf riddhima ke aath se khaate hai , baake sabmein kaantee lagge hai kya , lord i loved his answer , ki superman mein bhi nahi lagge hai , 😃😉 oww , that was soo sweet , innocence at its best I also liked it 😃.
hyeee chaloo, aarti and dadi too talking about riddhima ki voo bahut achee lagg rahhe hai and all , great , lets see anjali ki thinking in sab baatoo ke saath kahaa tak jaate hai , ...😊...
oh my god , armaan looking at her observing each and everything about her ,
the way she was ejoying , and laughing with the kids , tacklling them . wow yaar , great , Uski nazar to bas Riddhima se hut ti hi nahi. Bas zabardasti hatane ki koshish karta rahta hai...
hyee she removed her glasses , chal for a minute hii sahhe , and armaan was lost , lost in her for that , oh hoo , very nice yaar , too good,
lovely part ,
the end , hmm wow armaan noticed that she have not gone yet from the marriage hall , soo he stayed back to wait for her , to take her , wow yaar , loved that , itana are itna caring for her , and anjali sensed something , i really wish to knew ki usse kahaa tak sab kuch sence hua hai Hmm, di-ding, di-ding, di-ding, di-ding... tan-ta-nan, tana-nana... Detectives at work 😆 🤣
lovely , he was finding her and then ,
"oh, I am sorry. She is... she is a young, fairly but slightly wheatish, cute looking girl... Wearing this creamish-yellow dress, with a long braid, and... and yes, this big specs... silly looking specs that hide her big eyes. And she keeps pushing them back again and again. She goes a little fidgety when someone stares at her. And... and her voice is very sweet, she laughs like a child. And... and..." he kept blabbering things,
hyee how sweet , this was the best , he described her soo soo well , the way he found it all to be
finally she was there , hey bhagwaan sisnce last 1 hour riddhima was just trying to clear that mark on her dress , Nahi yaar, pahle to wo bag lene gayi, jismein use 15 minute lage, phir jab bahar ane wali thi to kisi bewakuf ne uska dress kharaab kar diya. I think she has been doing that for about half an hour... gosh usse patta bhi nahi ki sab usse chod ke jaa chukee hai , thanks to armaan aggar vo nahi hoota too , she is too much You are right, even 30 minutes are too much, budhdhu ladki... lekin chalo, is se humaare hero ko to fayeda hi hua na 😉 ...
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
there laughts r for , same old , usuall reaction , kuch nayya tha hii nahi
again screamming at the top of her voice , usse aur kisse tarah react karnaa aata hii nahi hai naa , per armaan was also at fault , aise hii enterred the bathroom , without a knock too , too bad ,hmm
ab iskee baad mein joo bhi tha , with that , i m sorry don't have much words for that , gosh , too too too too good , eyes to eyes contact , mein hua dil se dil ka connection ,
"tere naiinaa bas gayye , mere dil mein tere nainaa "...............aage kaa aapke liyye , Perfect song yaar 👍🏼
well i m leaving it here for now , kyonki baake ka comment main next part mein hi karne waale huu , after seing the whole lot , ki actually what will happen next now , kyonki i hate you , for ending it up here , i mean main paagal hoo jaaonge sochtte sochtee , ki aage kya hoone waala hai ab , LOL, i know, if i was there with you, i would have been in hospital once again for doing so...😆 🤣
chaloo abhi ke liyye maine kuch jyada hi lambaa comment kar diyya hai , actually soo sorry kuch jyada hi emotions mein behh gayye the main 😆 , ab waapas aa gayye hu , Arey yaar, koi baat nahi, main bhi bhot emotional hu 😆 🤣soo good bye ,
take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi , 😆 , bye

Originally posted by: simi2

heyaaa hi sweety

updated my comment on page 43 , doo read it
love you lots
simi

Hmm, dekh liye yaar...😃

Originally posted by: simi2

aimeeeeeeeeeeee where r you sweetyyyyyyyyyy
please update de doo naa , update kar doo naa , kar doo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaa , i m waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
love you lots
simi

Sorry yaar, i was busy with some chores for the last few days. But i will update today...😊

Originally posted by: simi2

aimee , 😭
mere itane saare request karne ka koi phayada nahi hua , kahaa hoo tum madam , please update karoo naa ,
waiting
love
simi

Kaan Pakad ke Sorry ... Once again... I am soooooooooooo sorry to keep you waiting...
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ab bhi? 😊

Originally posted by: aarora

hey very nice update sweety..finally Riddhima is also liking Armaan..seriously hope now atleast one of them will realize its love..n yeah Anjali PLEASE help them..lol..continue soon..
thanks for PM..

Finally you commented... Thanks a lot dear😊

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

a very lovely update.

to anjali ko shaq ho gaya hai. i hope saare ghar wale milkar koi plan banaye dono ko milane ka

update soon

Lets see what can they do... Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: maggie131984

Amazing part. loved it. Thanks a lot for it. I love the whole FF

Thanks for liking it Maggie 😊

Originally posted by: sushi1987

amazing update yaar.... again waiting for the next update...

y dont u update everyday yaar like daily serials.......😃

hmm anyways waiting for your next update...

Sush

LOL, If it was possible, i would have loved doing so, but unfortunately iys not. Thanks Sush 😊

Originally posted by: daring66

wow ammi it is greate i am really

fan of urs for writting this beautiful
FF
it is grast and every ditail And
waitin.........
KEEP IT UP
LOVE YA GIRL

Thanks Heaven... I hope i remember you correct name... 😊
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

tadaaaaaaaaa...here um..once again reserving the spot....!!😉

di um so ******* sleeepy.....wil b bck soon... Lazy Girl 😃
ur late ashu😉
edited~~
nt late di...nt on time either...!buh yhhh b4 u atleas dis time...!!lol I know 😆
so cuming bck 2 chap...!!
las tym i told u i din lyk the convo btw de ladies...dis tym it ws funny in a way...esp the gay convo..!! Right, but how could they even think like that? 😡 n yhh hw cn i 4geh our knave heroine ,the chhupi rustum...!!Hmm, wo to hai 😛 tat ws srsly good...vanialla icecream di kya baat hain....hw thoughtful...!!😉I am happy that you liked it.
chhupi rustum once again bck on track ...staring sxy vanilla iceream...!! Seriously, Minnie ki sangat ka thoda asar ho raha hai shayad...😆
anjali,dadi,aarti ,atul,rahul all these added as a icing in a cake...!!
n role reversal di ws awsum...armi staring at ridzi...!!gawd...!!luvd it...!! He cant keep his eyes off her, Stupid guy is just keep trying to control his reflexes...😕
n the tang kheechna of anjali....wich our dear hero ws oblivious of...!!
n wowwww di....👏👏....luks lyk ur reli getting on to sumthing called romance...!yippy...!!it ws pretty good di....!!hope he realises sumthing abt the eyes...!! Lets see when will his tube-light lit up...
all in all...i luvd the part....very entertaining...!!
chalo thn...i guess um bakogfying...!!u take care di...
n yhhh GIVE US A LONG chap di......wid thoda romance....!!lol😉😆 Hmm, theek hai... romance ki maari... Ashu bechaari 😆
thx a ton 4 de pm
luvya di
ur late ashu😉

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

di..............?!!!UPDATE CHAHIYA....!!TAT 2 SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN.............................

JALDI KARO DI....!!

Karti hu yaar. Ruk to zara...

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

di....!!nt fair...............kahaan ho yaar.............!!!??????

😲 You crazy gal... Patience naam ki cheez hai ya nahi 😆... Anyways, i will update today sweetie...
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

wow....awesome one
both having the attraction...good
Hmm they are 😳
loved the scenes...yash n vaibhav are the monsters but they are really cute Kids are always cute 😃... err, well mostly 😃
loved this part armaan observing her...n ridhima too observing him...
it was a great one
i just loved it
Thanks for the reply...
update soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita
[may be the last comment for ur ff]
Thats ok...

Thanks Sanjana 😊

Originally posted by: sadique137

hey Aimee

nice part Thanks
looks like Armaan is really besotted by Riddhima
just like the waitress said LUCKY GIRL Yep she is 😃
waiting for ur next part.
update soon.
p.s. i may not b able to write any comments for next few parts but pls dont stop sending ur pms Ok, i will keep PMing you for the next 2 episdes atleast, hope you are free by that time, but please try to reply whenever you get time.

Originally posted by: shweet29

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr 59 episode kay baad thora intimate howa n u stoppppeeedddddd yyyyyyyyyy????:'(....jaldi jaldi update karna plzzzz was loving the part......awsummm awsummm simply fantastic!!!!!!!!11 Aww, thanks a lot dear 😳... I am glad you liked it so much.
loads of love
shweet29

Originally posted by: suv.patki

I have a backlog of comments for this fic. This part was awesome. Just holding this place and will come back Aimee.

Thanks a bunch for PM.

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Oh wow Aimee ... I wish electricity ki koi problem na ho :) My comments for last part are not updated yet and have just reserved a space, which I won't waste and use it now after this update. 60th episode ... sounds cool!!! Ummm ... after 15 more episodes of this fic we will have some celebration.

Hey Suv...
No Problem, I will wait to read your comments...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ** L.U.S.H **

hey aimee im already on ur buddy lsit so cud u plz pm me wen u next update :) adn i seriously love this ff plz continue it for like threads and threads if possible each episode is like an actuual drama episode i seriously love it good job hun cont soon x

Hi there...
Sure i will send you PM next time. And thanks for the appreciation. 😊

Originally posted by: huda14

omg....what an update....i loved it...srsly it was just great...keep writin..sorry for the short comment but ill get back to you...i am in a hurry so......just take it as a reserved thingy...k chao

Hi there... Thats ok...
Thanks for the reply. 😊

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

amiee,..that was really great one dear,....

describe armaan like vanila lol... I hope you like Vanilla too 😛

yash was really like muskan.... Of course, he is. Beta bhi to usi ka hai 😉

loved the cute boyes... Me too 😃

finally anjie's mind is working on it...thas cool..

but the best thing was that finally ridz realize something strange for him...wow that was just amazing..

and armaan dazed stage was the....fab..

loved the update plz update next one soon...Aww, i am happy to know that you like it.

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

resserved!!!😛

EDITED!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the pm

i have sent a buddy request!!!!!

plzz accept ...I have accepted it 😊

now the part

I loved the cartoon 😃

superrbbb part

aimmee u have done a amzinn jobbb Thanks a lot dear...

awwwwww ridhii was looking ammy " soo cute"😳😳Yeah she is...😳

but then yash caught her .................--- hmm looks like someone is trouble😆😆😆Wooh, Yash, good going boy... 😆

&& but ammy saw her feed the boyss

soooooo sweet!!😛

&&&& her glass off gudd job boyss...........smiley face for u😛 Thanks for this 😊

the fave part was

in washroom at the end starring at each other awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

😳

FINALLY WE ARE GETTING SOMEWHERE😆😆😆 They have to... Else how will they realize what they feel for each other...

con't soooonnnnnnnn

-Sanam=

-sanam-

Originally posted by: yogithasingh

As usual...Aimee di..................I loved it.................
Thanx for pm...........

Thanks Yogitha...😊

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