I have a backlog of comments for this fic. This part was awesome. Just holding this place and will come back Aimee.
Thanks a bunch for PMs for all the parts.
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Part 59
Ok ... I know I end up starting my comments with a ravan-like hahaha everytime, but I cannot hold yaar. I mean the way ladies/gals were talking about Armaan was sort of funny. I mean a lady thinking that he is .... 😆 FUNNY!!! And another one trying to propose her award winning gal ... Waise that description of skinny-pillar like tall gal had me in splits. So like you see ... u put in so many things to crack me up and then I start my post with a Hahahha. Anyway ... enough with these women. But loved the way you have depicted a typical high class Indian marriage.
The ladies did one good thing though, they got Riddhima curious about Armaan and she ACTUALLY was staring at him. Its a biggggg thing she noticing his personality, his smile, his dimples .... ooo and she wanting to poke his dimples. 😳 How cute !!! The scene that followed again had me in splits. Hide and seek. Yash ka jawab nahi ... and to top it all, Anjali is around. Ab Riddhima kya karegi. The three Joshi ladies observing Riddhima .... hmmm, will they be the ones to propose AR marriage????
I know, I know ... am again rushing. But kya kare, real DMG mein toh baat yahan tak (I mean Marriage tak) pahuchi hi nahi. So kinda wanna see them getting married for once. 😕 Maybe
Ooooo ... love is truly in air. Armaan ke gestures and the way he is looking at the trio. Hayye ... The after effects are like total give aways - music, low heart beat, Armaan desiring of seeing Riddhima without specs and then as always Atul catching him. Atul ke paas itne evidence hai ... why is he not talking to Armaan :( So many people are getting hints ... later on in this part even Anjali is speculating something ... bas, jinn do logon ko samajhna chahiye wohi anjaan ban rahe hai.
I can literally go analyzing each and every line you have put it. So I'll take break here for this part. Loving the way events/people around are conspiring for AR to come together.
Part 60 (Finally)
AR so close to each other is like the first time in this fic. I mean they have been alone together many times, but then this was like totally lost!!! The way you have described the situation, while reading it actually feels everything around has stopped and the reader is more or less part of whatever we are reading. Hypnotizing effect. AR's daze, Riddhima's awkward expressions, Armaan's coming back to his own witty self, phew cool description. Armaan knows well, how to break the awkward moment ... the way they get started on smallest of things is really very funny. U have maintained light-hearted banter very well in this fic.
Hey Raam ... this time Anjali, Atul and Rahul all caught Armaan together. Bechara ko kitna embarrass karrenge. :) Even Riddhima joined the trio.
Ok ... kaleerien abhi bhi nahi aayi hai. Bolo na kiske sir par giri? Whose the next gal???
Armaan's behaviour in office was sort of confusing. On one hand he is trying to keep distance from Riddhima and on second hand he is angry/agitated with some random call to Riddhima. Was he jealous of whoever Riddhima was talking to? And who was Riddhima talking to??? And whats with Miss Gupta??? He was always bubbly with her even in office. Oh God, phir se U-turn kyon le liya Armaan ne?
All of a sudden he felt that he was all alone in this world. As if someone has stolen something very precious from him.
This was like a punch-line for the part. Oh and a major turn in the fic also. The sooner Armaan accepts this feeling the better it will be for him. Atleast his internal fights will stop.
Edited by suv.patki - 15 years ago
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