Mere Apne3(AR) - Epi51-70 - Note on Pg151 - Page 36

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Aimee,
I am really very sorry for commenting late but it's all due to my studies and my own FFs. One more thing, I have to confess, I had been reading your FF as soon as I saw them updated as you I am addicted to your FF.
I really loved all the parts, they were so good. Thats ok dear. I can understand. But please do comment whenever you get time. Else how would i know whatdo you feel about the updates...

You always make me lost in your FF, you wrote them so realistically. I really loved Armaan of your FF, he is truly a different human being with Ridhima, he doesn't behave the same way with other and same goes for Ridhima, she is a different person while being with Armaan. Hmm, this is what i love about both of them. Even though they are different for the world, but some things burried inside them comes on surface only when they are with each other.

Finally, Ridhima has started to look at Armaan, in more like a normal girl of her age would. And Armaan to kab ka kaam se gaya, sirf realization ki zaroorat hai. Haan, wo to kab ka ghaayal ho chuka hai, but he is just ignoring his 'sweet-wounds'...😉

I so hate when people gissips about other peoples, and specially if they say something bad about someone, I mean don't they have a life that they talk in bad way about others. Well, cant help it, there are too many like them.

I guess, now Armaan family has started to look at or will start to look Ridhima with a different aspect 'soon'. I so hope, they'll realize that they love each other. I wish the same...😳

But girl, must have to agree, they are so sweet, completely adorable, their little fight, Armaan teasing her; their staring at each other. Hmm, their unusually usual reactions are what has brought them close unkowingly. 😃 Lol, Ridhima got caught by Yash, and the little kid blurted out everything, hehe, kids are so innocent. he truly did made Ridhma embarrased but her boyfriend came to her rescue before she could be interroged by Anjali. Kids, i tell you, they have BIG-MOUTHS but too tiny stomach to keep secrets...

And yeah forget to mention, Armaan bechara, jab bhi Ridhima ke samne aata hai woh chila ker uske khan ke parde hi par deti hai but again, ismein Ridhima ki ghalti bhi nahi woh hamesha alag style or ghalat time per hi entry karta hai. Lol Haan, correct. Wo to aise hi itni slow hai, phir jab Armaan aise achanak kahin bhi unexpected aa tapakega to wo to chillayegi hi...😆

I completely loved all the parts, as usual, and they way you have started portraying their emotion is just too good. I only wish that they'll realize soon they love each other. They will...😊

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

Originally posted by: Robin_M

WOW aimee!!!!!! amazing part...i seriously loved it! i enjoyed it so much that i re-read it! wonderful :D I can figure that out with the length of your comment dear. 😊
it was very intimate, and i feel you have done a fantastic job! this was such a huge step for armaan and riddhima! they have never been this close and intimate! im really very pleased with the progression! It was ought to be there. I mean i have been dragging things a little too much, so just thought taht before everyone start running after me with a Danda in their hands, i better do something 😆
first...the ladies gossiping about armaan...get a life ladies! geeeez! Disgusting women 😡 lol but armaan as vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce!!!! yummmmyyy! hehe now this i can understand! Hmm, he is irresistable 😳... and OMG riddhima was totally checking him out too! hehe cant blame the girl...he is irristable and hard to ignore! I guess our hero is too very tempting flavor to be ignored...😆
and yash interupting her gawking moment...sooo funny! he thougt they were playing hide and seek!!!!!!??? haha sooo cute! Yash to bas, he is king of blabber-mouths... Just think what could have happened if only his partner in crime Vaibhav too was there to observe everything 😲
and now anjali suspects!!!!! :D yay she even busted armaan staring at riddhima! very interesting...lets see what she does now! Hmm, hope someone do something for real this time
ridz-vib-yash eating scene was damn cute! mom and dadi noticed too! they are right tho...riddhima is such a beautiful girl...if only she removes those specs! lol Yeah, but she is just too much...🥱
and hai hai armaan was checking her out too!!!!!! im really glad that he observed riddhimas loving nature with the boys, he knows shes not like other girls! and OMG when vihbi took her specs off...his heart stopped! he was soo restless to go close to her and see her face and eyes! he is totally smitten! hehe He is, even she is too good to be overlooked... Isnt she?
the end scene was my fav! so armaan was paying close attention to riddhima if he knew that she was still in the hotel somewhere! awwww and he stayed back to wait for her and find her!!! sooo sweet of him! :D
loved how he went on and on describing ridz to the hotel lady...even she figured out he likes her! armaan really is clueless! He is a love-lorn puppy who doesnt know which way he is heading towards...😆 Too blind to see the ovbious 😳.
and seriously, riddhima always screams when armaan comes infront! lol but i guess it was good this time...because it forced armaan to grab her and cover her mouth...bringing them extremely close and now they shared such a beautiful and intimate scene! both lost in each others eyes!! haiiiii sooo romantic! I am soooooooo happy that you liked the short little romance between our lovely couple. I will try my best to improve further in future as well...
i really loved it aimee (as u can tell by the length of my response!) im really excited for the next one...pleaseeeee continue soon!

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

*reserved...

will be back sooon :)

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heyyyy aimee !!...

that was an awesome penned update... !!! Thanks 😊

the ladies wisphering abt armaan and having a heated argument abt his choice of a girl :) Hmm, talk of the town...😆 and then riddhima staring at armaan...awww... I am glad you found it good. and feeling certain tugs at her heart ... yayyy... Yes, feelings are budding... finally, she's thinking abt him in that way :) feelings starting to show up... great...thats wonderful !!... Well, the couple-to-be already belong to each other, but all that is burried deep inside. and the male-bonding was penned beautifully thro riddhima's eyes :) Its all about relationships. Some people goo for the EXTERIOR LOOKS ONLY, but the character of my story are different in that sense. They look out for inner beauty, which is evident only when they see your behavior towards your loved ones...

yash innocently spilling the beans abt riddhima staring at armaan...and vibhi intervening cutely... loved the bonding time between the three if them...dadi and arthi noticing riddhima's different attire... and their convo was good :)

anjali's shrewd eyes not missing out riddhima's reaction and also not armaan's act of gawking at his PA... wow... awesome... this is gonna be interesting... You are right, Anjali is shrewd but in a positive way. Hope her shrewdness workds out something.😃

and armaan getting tensed abt riddhima... and the way he was describing riddhima to the staff... he sure feels for her deeply... and yayyyyyy their eyes meet finally... and both of their feelings and actions of getting lost in one another's eyes was penned really welll... Thanks again for encouraging me with your comments...😊

a great update hun :)

loved it loads.... continue sooooooooooon !!...

thanks for the pm :D

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Aimee the update was just superlative. Hey thanks Sona...

The gossiping ladies and the girls were surely irritating but at least some good came out of it. Hmm, even some nasty things may result in something good at times 😊... Finally Ridz noticed Armaan. After all she did have inspiration after being him described as vanilla ice cream with chocolate topping. YUMMY!!! LOL 😆, yep she was inpired to looks at him at once atleast...😆

Yash was just brilliant. He caught his bua playing chupa-chuppi with his superman. And Muskann genes in him just couldn't let him keep his mouth shut. Correct, absolutely correct. Like mother-Like son... 😆... Poor Ridz, she was completely embarrassed in front of Anjali with his "Kyun abhi to aap wahan pillar ke piche chupi hui thi aur Superman ko dekh rahi thi." Thanks to Yash's comments Anjali was in total 007 mode, and was able to observe Armaan's silent appraisal of Ridz. Right, Anjali is sharper with a few things as compared to others. Maybe her 007 skills pulls out something good very soon. 😃 Ab Armaan to gaya, Anjie will not spare him, she is going to tease him to death. I am sure everyone will be happy if his life sentence ties him up WITH Riddhima...😉

So Armaan kept tabs and knew that Ridz has not left the party. Though unconsciously, the protective lover was in full action. Of course he does. After all our Majnu in disguise is totaly taken over by our Laila... The way he described Ridz was brilliant. The fact that he was ready to face Minnie's ire should make him sit up and realise how important Ridz is to him. I think you are the only one who interpreted it in such way. Yes, he was ready to face anything to protect Riddhima... in a sense.

And he finally saw her eyes. Looks like his dreams will soon have face. Aur aab to Ridz par bhi asar ho raha hai. Look like the romance is gonna start pretty soon. Yes it will 😊

Hugs all the way.

Update soon.

Sona