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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really good
loved it contd soon
so sweet to see there faith
how he caught her
awwwww
contd soon
thanx for the pm

Thanks for the reply Sanjana.

Originally posted by: yogithasingh

Awesome di.................Loved it.................

Thanks Yogitha.

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix

pretty nice part...
soo cutee..
loved it to bits...
plz continue sooon..
thnxxx...

Thanks dear. I will update soon.

Originally posted by: aarora

hey amazing update sweety..loved it..totally AR part..hope this will help them form a new bond n trust in each other..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

Thanks for the comment dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sadique137

hey Aimee

thanx for the pm
u r right as u said it was ⭐️
i ve no words Thanks a lot.
"zor laga ke hayya"🤣🤣 LOL, I am sooo happy that you enjoyed it dear.
was just hillarious i couldnt just stop laughing
i was really wishing he sees her eyes at the beginig but u kept it for the last
and what a way to end the part Aww, 😆
really felt like strangling u 😡LOL, i know, but cant help it, aadat se majbur jo hu 😆
update soon
cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

reserved..wil b bck soon...........

edit~~
um bck.....alas...!!4got tat i din comment once again...lol...buh luckily i js hapn 2 check on the page...!!
so alas a AR update.....solely ar...!!LUVD it....!! Yep, i have been ditching you all for such a long time, to socha ki thoda sa sudhar jaun...😆
fights alwyz is an attempt to depict their understanding...so true....!!i nva enjoyed AR fighting so much....it ws welll penned 4 sure....!!the wy u hv spun the words,god..!!it js kept me hooked 2 de comp....!! Thanks dear. It feel so good to know that you enjoyed it.
thou ther ws too much of description n stuff...i liked the way u hav tried 2 show the budding feelings...!! Yes, when i read it later, even it felt that it got a little over-descriptive. But then instead of deleting stuff, i prefered to post it as it is.
appreciate ur attempt to squeez in some romance...!!way to go di....u cn do it....gals r meant 2 b hopelessly romantic di...!!lol....Oh really, LOL, i am sure they are. But i am a little weak on those lines. But now a days, even i am learning to be one 😳. iska matlab ye hain ki mujhe romance jaldi hi chahiye....hehe...!! Wo to dikh hi raha hai Crazy you 😆.
ya toh phir one romantic scene per update....one romantic dose 4 de survival....!lol tum to sach mein kabhi nahi sudhrogi 😆
hope u update soon...
luvya di
crazy ashu😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

heyaa hi aimee

i think this time i actually maid the record for being the last one to reply , hai naa Sach mein 😲
well in any case , soooooooooooooooooooo sorry , for being sooooooooooooo soooooooooooooo late for the comment Chal koi baat nahi yaar 😊
you knew i have read the part the same day you updated it , but don't knew why i not replied to it ,may be i have gone a bit more then reqired mad , hehe , kya karuu , well in any case , I think ye to tumhari speciality hai 😆.
as per the part 57 , doo you really wanna knew how it was , waise tumhe main kya batooen ki part kaisa tha , after all tumne khud hi to likha hai , to tumhe to patta hi hooga ki part kaisa hai hmm ,well well isse peehle ki tum mere non stop irritating talk se frustrate hoo jaao , man tumhe batta hi dette huu that what i feel about the part Hmm, chalo batao 😊
well after reading the part i feel like i m in love , no no seriously i m in love yaar , i loved this , only and only and only armaan and riddhima , and nothing else , that was somethink i ever wish to read Aww, that is so sweet of you.
hyeee , the start was like soo sweet , armaan recognized her with her voice no actually that shriek straight in his ears 😆 , lord she had done that a lot of times with him by now Yes, i think ye uska koi automatic response mode hai, jo Armaan ke aas-paas hote hi apne aap chalu ho jata hai 😃.
lord, armaan was again the same seedhe uske kaan mein cheekha poor she , Armaan peeche rahne waalon mein se hai kya 😛
waise hye i really liked tha fact that riddhima became a bit relaxed knowing that it was armaan , hyee she feel a sence if security while he is being around her
loved them and then armaan's useless comment , i mean noo wonder why riddhima gets soo irritated by them , i mean he said "what happenned to your tounge , uska bhi fuse udd gayaa hai" , i mean lord , tongue ka fuse udd gaaya , gosh that was crazy 😆 *sigh*, you know ye dialogue mujhe tab sujha tha, jab humare are ka fuse ud gaya tha. I mean electricity failure hua tha .
again armaan walaa "chuha" waapas aa gayya , for god sake , riddhima chuhaa dhoondnee ke alawa bhi bahut kuch dhood sakte hai Is budhu ko ye nahi pata na.
as in she was serching for a candle , with a candle in her second hand 😉 😆 LOL 😆
armaan was also too much , the way he said her to search for a candle , handling her a one , lol's they both r definately a totally gonne case for sure Arey yaar, pray mein achche khaase log pagal ban jaate hain, ye dono bhi waise hi hain. Bas in bewakufon ko ye pata nahi hai.
lord , yaar ye riddhima at that time also she was still wearing her glasses , i mean when is she gonna remove them haa , Lagta hai, Armaan ko hi kuch karna padega.
waise loved all that a lot , armaan too too much yaar loved that cupboard whole incident ,
hmm chalo kabhi too decent logo ki tarah they talked and helped each other , but not for long lol's , cupboard open hua too room door locked ho gayya , they can now say jahaa jahaa armaan riddhima , wahaa haa musibat hai naa Absolutely right 😃
per yaar that was the best , riddhima tried to open the door the same way armaan openned the cupboard , 😆😆 , oh my goodness that was like the best Hmm, i wonder where did i get that idea from 😲. But i also enjoyed it when i re-read the episode.
hyeee armaan got soo close to her , there close proximity , made her frozen for a while , ohhhh god 😳
and then armaan sitting casully on the bed , i don't believe he even ang that song , hum tum ek kamree mein band , gosh that was like too good , i mean i swear if i ws there at the place of riddhima ,i would have surely kicked him like anythink for behaving like that , hee is too irritating yaar LOL, bechara Armaan. Hey all, i have a warning. If Simi's boyfriend or that special one in her life is reading this, please make sure you dont behave this way. Pata chala agle din doctor ke paas jana pad raha hai 🤣.
finally he tried to doo some think to help them get out of there , only after hearing a "please" from riddhima , well in any case , loved that a lot
hyeeeee armaan feeling a different sensation when she holded him tightly while comming out of the room , climbing and jumping here and there like chimpanzee 😆 , ok ok , i seriously liked that a lot Cheel-Cheel, chilla ke kauwa sunaaye... i dont remember rest of the song 😆
even when she jumped and landed straight in his arms , hyeeeeeee how romantic ,
oh god , finally they had a bit eye lock session , lekin arman didn't recognized her , ohh noo , light koo bhi tabhi aana tha , he should have recognized yaar that she was the one in that hotel party , Wo bhi hoga, bas thoda sabr karo yaar.
poor he , well chalo atleast light too aa gayee , waiting for armaan reaction on seeing her , i mean the makeover in clothing and all she have done
well in any case i have a question , armaan and riddhima to room se aa gayye , per ek problem wahhe nahi reh gayye , i mean riddhima came to the house to get that kalireee , jo ki i think vo logo in room mein hi rehnee de hai 😆😆 , i mean its not mentioned ki us packet kaa kya hua hmm. Arey thoda sabr karo, main nahi bhuli. Is episode mein jagah nahi thi, isliye wo sab next mein accomodate kiya hai. You will get to know what happened to Kaleereins very soon. Aur dekhen kaun bhula, aur kise yaad raha 😉.
yaar , i knew tu hameesha mere comment ke wait mein rehte hai , and its been soo long for you too update , I know, you still make me wait for so long 😡. Chal koi nahi, late hi sahi, atleast comment to karti hu.
i knew i can't say this kyonki main khud terribly late huu over commenting here ,
but in any case , please update please update soon I am going to update next episode today.
waiting for the next part
till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

silent reader-------

ress for comment

and big one cuming soooonnn😉

for now....i'm in luv with ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1👏👏👏

Sure i will eagerly wait to read it.

Originally posted by: nidha1983

When r u going to update

In less than an hour...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Aimee nice story .i enjoyed every bit of this .u had written it very sweetly .Even my breath was stuck in middle when Ridz jumped .

finally he found that familiar green eyes but hope soon he realize when nd where too.

love their intimacy ...thanks for these lovely moments .I really need these pretty moments after watching that sad end of AR.

I look in your eyes and forget I forget all the pain you''ve cause me before.

love

ritu


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: janu1610

Aimee nice story .i enjoyed every bit of this .u had written it very sweetly .Even my breath was stuck in middle when Ridz jumped .

finally he found that familiar green eyes but hope soon he realize when nd where too.

love their intimacy ...thanks for these lovely moments .I really need these pretty moments after watching that sad end of AR.

I look in your eyes and forget I forget all the pain you''ve cause me before.

love

ritu


Hi Ritu...
Thanks for the comments dear. I hope you also like the next part and comment back soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserve ,
see i m gonna be first one to comment this time will edit shortly
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hehe aaj to main apna khud kaa hi record break karee waale huu , itana jaldi reply karnaa mere habbit nahi hai kya karuu , per ajj man kar rahha tha ,
hyeeeeeeeeee i was just dying to read this part, per yee kya armaan not for once noticed that riddhima was lokkking soo preety today in that lehangaa and all hmm
chal koi nahi mujhe waise bhi koi problem nahi kyonki ye part allready bahut bahut achaa tha
my goodness the start was like the the the best , i mean armaan left in daze , khoyya khoyya chaand type ,
loved that , hyeeeee riddhima ran away from there she also don't understand what's happenning hmm
kya yaar , kis janam mein they r actually gonna realize that they r in love , hyeeeeee waiting for that yaar
gosh that scene was the best , and then even the car scene was like great , loved that , silently ek doosree ko dekh rahhe the hmm
😆😆😆 kalereeroo kee baat karre ab , lol's loved that , atlab dono itane intelligent the that they have actually bought that earlier only , per riddhima usse wahee chod ker bhaag gayye , hehe , armaan ko mil hii gayye voo , loved that ,
gosh this armaan is to much mill gayye the jaan bhujh kar itana naatak kiyya usnee , hehe , again yahaa bhi aggar main riddhima ki jagaah hootee to ek baar to uskaa muh tod hii dete , waise is baar too riddhima bhi karnee hi waale the aise hii , per before that armaan bach gayya kyonki baraat aa gaaye 😆
well loved that scene with kirti and shubhankar , armaan abhi bhi riddhima per hii ultee seedhe comment kar rahha tha , bechaaree riddhima kahaa phas gayye hai
hmmm mujhe patta nahi kyon aisee lagta hai that minnie is definately gonna play an important role in armaan and riddhima relation in future i mean jab voo armaan ki tareef kar rahhe the , and unintentionally she said that armaan is only fr someone special hyeeeeeee😳 someone really special , riddhima getting nervous and uncomfortable over that , soo cute and that minnie kii saare friends armaan ki tareef kar rahhe the , wo dimple , wo smile , wo aankhee , wo body , wo ...... , sach sach battana ye aapke personal tareef the naa, i mean ye tumhaara persenal view hai naa armaan kee liyye
hmm minne wore that kaleerrien and ab ye jisper bhi girrengee , that girl goona be lucky , noo actually kehte hai ki jisper ye kaleerein girte hai us ladkee ke bahut jaldii shaadi hoo jaate hai , as in kehttee hai ki next mumber usse kaa hoota hai , well i personally dn't believe this , kyonki mere didi kii shaadi mein kaleerein mujhper girre the , per aisa kuch nahi hua kyonki is baat koo 5 years hoo chuke hai ,and still noo chance here 😆 , chal joo bhi hoo lets see riddhima kaa kya chance aata hai yahaa
well hyee harsh and minnie also were nice , chal shaadi hue too atleast she got a chance to blush warnaa minnie ka character was like ki usse sharmaana and all too aata hii nahi tha
god i hate that ladies , typical high class soo called polished womens 😡 i serously hate them a lot , they r like too much , kisse ko dekhkar khush too hoo hi nahi sakteee voo sab ,
waise ek baat sahhe kahhe unhonne riddhima should think of removing her that irritating specks , you said armaan will doo somethink over that , per kya and kab , yaar you allways say mee have patiens have patiens , you knew what i don't have that at all , ye wait mujse jyada hoota nahi hai , allready tumhaare is ff ke case mein meine kuch jyada hii wait kiyya hai , ab aur nahi , ab bilkul aur nahi , please jaldi jaldi aage kaa part likhdoo
waitinggggggggggg , for the next update
please try and update with it soon , nahi nahi supersoon see maine is baar kitne jaldi reply kiyya hai , mujhe bhi ab aise hi jaldi see next part chahiyee
please update soon
waiting for that , till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi
Edited by simi2 - 15 years ago

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