Mere Apne3(AR) - Epi51-70 - Note on Pg151 - Page 26

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Aimee
thanx for the pm
u r right as u said it was ⭐️
i ve no words
"zor laga ke hayya"🤣🤣
was just hillarious i couldnt just stop laughing
i was really wishing he sees her eyes at the beginig but u kept it for the last
and what a way to end the part
really felt like strangling u 😡
update soon
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was really good
loved it contd soon
so sweet to see there faith
how he caught her
awwwww
contd soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy aimee !!..
that was an awesome full AR update.. loved it tons !!..
armaan and riddhima's fight and armaan's amusement at riddhima's reactions was cute... his comments and her retorts are always sooo amusing to read !!.. love them...
her panic at finding the doors locked and his cheek during the situation was really nice... and then his way of getting out and then the proximity creating new feelings in both of their hearts :) awww... loved the way u described both their feelings at the moments !!...
an armaan noticing her eyes... yayyy... please let him remember where he saw those pair of eyes before...pls pls pls ;)
a extremely well-written part hun :)
loved it loads !!...
thanks for the pm..
continue soooooooooooooooooon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey amazing update sweety..loved it..totally AR part..hope this will help them form a new bond n trust in each other..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyaa hi aimee
i think this time i actually maid the record for being the last one to reply , hai naa
well in any case , soooooooooooooooooooo sorry , for being sooooooooooooo soooooooooooooo late for the comment
you knew i have read the part the same day you updated it , but don't knew why i not replied to it ,may be i have gone a bit more then reqired mad , hehe , kya karuu , well in any case ,
as per the part 57 , doo you really wanna knew how it was , waise tumhe main kya batooen ki part kaisa tha , after all tumne khud hi to likha hai , to tumhe to patta hi hooga ki part kaisa hai hmm ,well well isse peehle ki tum mere non stop irritating talk se frustrate hoo jaao , man tumhe batta hi dette huu that what i feel about the part
well after reading the part i feel like i m in love , no no seriously i m in love yaar , i loved this , only and only and only armaan and riddhima , and nothing else , that was somethink i ever wish to read
hyeee , the start was like soo sweet , armaan recognized her with her voice no actually that shriek straight in his ears 😆 , lord she had done that a lot of times with him by now
lord, armaan was again the same seedhe uske kaan mein cheekha poor she ,
waise hye i really liked tha fact that riddhima became a bit relaxed knowing that it was armaan , hyee she feel a sence if security while he is being around her
loved them and then armaan's useless comment , i mean noo wonder why riddhima gets soo irritated by them , i mean he said "what happenned to your tounge , uska bhi fuse udd gayaa hai" , i mean lord , tongue ka fuse udd gaaya , gosh that was crazy 😆
again armaan walaa "chuha" waapas aa gayya , for god sake , riddhima chuhaa dhoondnee ke alawa bhi bahut kuch dhood sakte hai
as in she was serching for a candle , with a candle in her second hand 😉 😆
armaan was also too much , the way he said her to search for a candle , handling her a one , lol's they both r definately a totally gonne case for sure
lord , yaar ye riddhima at that time also she was still wearing her glasses , i mean when is she gonna remove them haa ,
waise loved all that a lot , armaan too too much yaar loved that cupboard whole incident ,
hmm chalo kabhi too decent logo ki tarah they talked and helped each other , but not for long lol's , cupboard open hua too room door locked ho gayya , they can now say jahaa jahaa armaan riddhima , wahaa haa musibat hai naa
per yaar that was the best , riddhima tried to open the door the same way armaan openned the cupboard , 😆😆 , oh my goodness that was like the best
hyeee armaan got soo close to her , there close proximity , made her frozen for a while , ohhhh god
and then armaan sitting casully on the bed , i don't believe he even ang that song , hum tum ek kamree mein band , gosh that was like too good , i mean i swear if i ws there at the place of riddhima ,i would have surely kicked him like anythink for behaving like that , hee is too irritating yaar
finally he tried to doo some think to help them get out of there , only after hearing a "please" from riddhima , well in any case , loved that a lot
hyeeeee armaan feeling a different sensation when she holded him tightly while comming out of the room , climbing and jumping here and there like chimpanzee 😆 , ok ok , i seriously liked that a lot
even when she jumped and landed straight in his arms , hyeeeeeee how romantic ,
oh god , finally they had a bit eye lock session , lekin arman didn't recognized her , ohh noo , light koo bhi tabhi aana tha , he should have recognized yaar that she was the one in that hotel party ,
poor he , well chalo atleast light too aa gayee , waiting for armaan reaction on seeing her , i mean the makeover in clothing and all she have done
well in any case i have a question , armaan and riddhima to room se aa gayye , per ek problem wahhe nahi reh gayye , i mean riddhima came to the house to get that kalireee , jo ki i think vo logo in room mein hi rehnee de hai 😆😆 , i mean its not mentioned ki us packet kaa kya hua hmm
yaar , i knew tu hameesha mere comment ke wait mein rehte hai , and its been soo long for you too update ,
i knew i can't say this kyonki main khud terribly late huu over commenting here ,
but in any case , please update please update soon
waiting for the next part
till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey aimee...

busy with exams dear..
so cant update my FF...or can read u r s...really sorry....
will give u a detailed comment after my exams...that will be probably more or less by nov 20...
till then..
keep writing nice stuff..hope AR track continues soon...
and thnks for PM..
take care..
good wishes...
sri :-)

Hey thats ok Sri... All the best for your exams...

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

superb part
i really i enjoyed how they climbed down
lovely part
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

Thanks for the reply Debarita...

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

hey aimee

that really was something.
too cool, i totally loved it.

Thanks dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago

silent reader-------

ress for comment

and big one cuming soooonnn😉

for now....i'm in luv with ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Aimee its really an awesome one mind blowingso cutewoah both r infront of each other but he did not recognize how beautiful she looks and that Candle scene den locked inside & he carry her help her all r so romantic & superb but now let him recognize her eyes plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"I've dreamed of seeing u from two years,
Loving u each day, each hour, each
moment
,
A memory I can feel when I look into ur eyes,
A never fading happiness spreads through my
vibes,

N
ever wanted anything in my life as much as I desired u...
I want to breathe in ur
fragrance
& keep it with me every day long,
I want to taste ur love for me by kissing ur sweet lips...
Ur the one I needed most & ur forever with me,
In my thoughts & also in my dreams...
I need u like a flower needs the rain,
I need u for u can wash away my pain....
I want u to know that I LUV U, need u, miss u & want u.
I want to have u in every single moment of MY LIFE!"



"I cant believe there's such a person,
That can be so perfect,
U have a place in my heart,
Where u will always be,
I'll love u forever....

I know that this love is real,
Because of the feelings I get inside,
It's something I've never felt before
And it's nothing I can try to hide...
Ur the one I couldn't forget,
Even at the last breath I take,
Ur the one my heart longs for,
Because I found real joy in u...
You've shown me love the one thing I want,
Beautiful as a dove u never flaunt,
You'll always be my shining star,
But if ur love for me has gone,
No other love will hear my song..."




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FMV5Rn3R3Fw[/YOUTUBE]


Nidha

Hey thanks for the comments Nidha...
Hmm, lets see if he has recognized those green eyes or not 😉.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow aimee, full on armaan-ridhdima episode! enjoyed it completely!
i am very happy with this part :D i think you did a fantastic job with the romance! Aww, thank a lot dear. I am glad i could make you happy.
it was sooo cute to see them bickering again, and then acting all arrogant over the candle and door situation!
aww ridhima thinks hes a true gentleman! although she stopped herself from admitting it to armaan, he understood :D Yep, Riddhima's inner self has started bending towards Armaan, but she is not aware of anything yet.
im really glad u did this, build the trust and intimacy between the 2 before they fall in love (in fact i think this is a huge step towards love!) trust is sooo important, and what armaan and riddhima went through together. Of course yaar. I have always felt that trust is the most important ingredient of a relationship. If you trust someone, it means you love him/her. What kind of love it is, thats a different thing. climing out to the balcony and jumping, built the foundation to a strong relationship! she trusts armaan with her life, and armaan proved that he would never let any harm come to her! Correct, as i said, her heart has faith in Armaan.
that climbing/balcony/jumping scene was my favorite! very well done with that!
and armaan felt the butterflies when riddhima was pressed against him..the sparks are flying! :D Well, Armaan has been shrugging off his feeling till now. But soon enough, you will see many 'Mere Apne's back into action. But before that, a few moments will be there, which will keep pushing Armaan towards Riddhima.
the last scene made me very excited...he noticed her eyes! finally! lol he knows hes seen them before...now lets hope he realizes where from! Lets see 😉
now that the lights are on, they can see each other very clearly ;)
loved this whole part aimee, you rocked it! looking forward to the next part and more AR! continue soon :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mansibharti



hi aimee awww that was really a nice attempt... Thanks Mansi.

the last when lights came back glowing everything... yaar that was the best part and when he sang the son hum tum ek kamre mein.. that situation was really funny i could imagine ridhhima fuming and armaan enjoying it... I am glad you enjoyed it. what a gentleman he is...😆Hmm, he is a mischievious gentleman 😉 loved it yaar and somewhere i have a faint idea that atul is behind all this... probably... lets see if its fate or fate in form of atul...😉 Mmmm, i dont know. Keep reding to find out 😃.

waiting eagerly for the next part...😃

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