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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

plz check page 20 for my Reply

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Hey .... extremely sorry for not responding on the earlier update. Whatever reasons we all give, its not correct to not respond even after reading the part. But truly, Diwali preparations and office were like hectic and hence faltered.

This was like a complete AR part. Loads of them ... though fighting most of the time. The best bit has to be Armaan's realization of Riddhima referring him as 'TUM' when they are fighting or are alone.

Something about the word made him feel that she is closer to him... Close... The very thought tingled his blood vessels. He smiled to himself --- supercool line

Finally, Armaan pe kuch toh asar ho raha hai ...

Minnie is such a sweetheart, though she is getting married that day, she is not missing on how different her brother's behaviour is towards Riddhima. She is cho chweet ... scolding him and fighting with him.

Waise, am assuming the person mentioned in last bit is ATUL. And I love him for scheming against AR and planning to extract all information about Armaan.

But not to forget, Armaan is not leaving any opportunity of irritating Riddhima. Poori kasar bhar raha hai ...

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sonakap1

@sonakap1

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Hey! Just read both the parts. The story is certainly coming along very well. Both the parts were written brilliantly. Loved the AA scene. Armaan is missing Ridz and has even started dreaming about her. Atul has caught on and now with Minnie also getting sniff of the things, very soon these two will get to the truth. Engagement as the trailer looks like its going to be fireworks at the wedding and the love story will start soon. But who is this mystery man keeping tabs on Armaan? You have certainly piqued my curiosity. Please update soon so that we can have our answers.

Cheers!!!

Sona

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shamla sadique

@sadique137

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

hey aimee

looks like everyone in the family is having doubts abt Armaan

first it was Atul now Minie

looking forward for the marriage

really love to know wht is going to happen

it is always explosion when AR meet 😆

''Chooha'' and ''Billi'' was funny 😉

update soon

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

hi aimee just read the part and it was really nice.. the mouse and camel thing was so sweet and funny i liked it very much but the best part was the man who was watching Armaan.... now this sounds like some action is going to take place in this boring wedding... great ... ridhhima unknowingly is getting very close to Armaan waiting for the day she realises what actually it is between the two... hope they both realise it soon...

and dear delaying just bcoz you got few responses is not the solution... you know we all love you and this story... as u said probably due to festivities the response was low or another thing... you need to make something happen in the story, probably it feels like it is being dragged on... though this time you had me glued to it and i will wait eagerly for the next part especially to know about that man....😃

and one more thing thanks for the comment you gave on my FF wasn't expecting it actually... didn't knew u read it... and this time please do update soon...😃

love u 🤗

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princess52

@princess52

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

hye .....aimee...

wow part 55.....i was suprised when i saw a pm from u ...tht wow tht was fast lolzz

and abut the part as usual it was fantastic....

the camel bili nmouse thing was so hillarious i m still laughing

it was beautifully written

thnzkz for the pm

n plzz continue soon

love habs

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

hiya di...!!

gr8 part...wanted 2 read more..buh nah...!!u stopped it rt their wr i wanted u 2 cont so badly...!!

sry di phir se maine socha meine comment kiya par nahin as usual bhulakkad ne comment nahin kiya tha...!!

sry...................!!

luvd the part...esp AR interaction...!!ridz isnt feeling nyhing 2wds armaan ahh??di thoda uske side se bhi dikha dona...some signal...!!

lol.....i dun wan u 2 change the plot ..!!lol..js tat i like it wn its mutual...!!

wil b waiting 4 ur update...n haan di wn ur done wid the chap pls post it...!!plssssssssssssssssss.....sry once more...!!

take care...

luvya di

crazy ashu

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Hey aimee

thanxs a ton for the dedication and also for the PM

loved the part

indeed armaan n ridhima's metting was quit intersting

loved their banter on mouse and bili 😆😆

i guess ridhima has seen another side of armaan while absirving him with minnie

lookes like armaan does not have a problem with getting CLOSER to ridhima

i think that is onw of the reasin why he irrited her this much

i think that 2 eyse which were observing him belongs to his dear brother ATUL

its just a guess

the part was just mind blowing

loved it very much

updat the next part soon

will b waiting

lods of luv

nruti

Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago

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DMG fan

@DMG fan

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

the story is taking a nice shape...waiting for the next part

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#160

heyyyyyyy aimee !!!!!!!!!!!...

that was a fabulous update...

AR bickering...awww...that was really cute..he leaves no stone unturned to tease her and make her fume with anger...their Billi and Chuha fight was nice...nicely written...

and minnie intervening and supporting riddhima...and then her irritation at armaan for being late... her vent out at ridzi and ridzi consoling minnie was all beautifully penned...minnie reflection of armaan's behaviour towards riddhima and her final conclusion to ask atul was penned really well...

and wow another AR meet...or rather bickering...it was again cute... armaan loves those display of expressions on her face, doesnt he??... loved his thoughts abt her...

armaan getting forgivness from minnie and the bro-sis bonding moment was chooo cute...reminded the moments of me and my bro...

and minnie getting curious by the minute to armaan's behaviour and riddhima's reactions...awww...and armaan's concern towards riddhima...feelings brewing...thats nice...

and whose that man???...hope he causes no trouble to armaan or the family...

and u dedicated this part to me ....awww...thats soooo sweet of u... thanks a bunch...

again a fantastic update !!..

and thanks sooo sooo much for the pm...glad ur health getting better...

awaiting the next parts...

continue soooooooooooooon :D