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sunaena

@sunaena

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

WOW !
This was soo romantic <3
Loved it ! Only AR :)
Please do write more ..pretty please !!
Keep up the good job !

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey nj.. read once.. n again.. wel, read around 4 tomes... hheehhe u cld cal it crazy.. bt dat was d after effectz of gettng bak after ages..
luuvddd itt...
cld u increase d story..... hheehhe

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

woah NJ its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb so sweet one

"I remember how it used to be,
when nothing else matter but KASH and DMG,
KASH Salsa dance, KASH fight, and Basket Ball Match.....
I miss KASH, I wish KASH could see,
although KASH are here, I miss KASH and Original Armaan-Ridhima .
I remember when you both fight,
I remember when you both cry we also cry with u,
I miss those days when Armaan come to meet Ridhima
through Pipe at Night,
I miss those days when you both sit on fire escape and talk,
I don't want to see u again with same charm & passion.
I MISS KASH"

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Nidha

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

another brilliant one from u nj...

how many ever times i read it..i love it even more....

and u totally deserve winning it....

congo again :)

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DMG fan

@DMG fan

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

wow! You amaze me with every piece you write. You should write more....and please continue soon on LNI and AOL.

Thanks for Pm

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Madiha

@Dark Love

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

to put it simply...it was absolutely! wonderful :D

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

LoL how could you make this One shot not sound like you or it'll loose it's charm itself. 😛😉

Fantastic ! 👏

Nats xo.

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

well i guess i wil have to tell nij to have many more of those phone convos wid u if that ends wup wid such delightful reads ;)

newaz just repeating myself fab work like literally n definitely it so wasnt u Ndi but there was this essence which spells NASEEM right from the first para wud love to read more of ur random stuff ;) the intimacy was a different level sumthing u hadnt travelled onto b4......

n yea am in chandigarh sorry cudnt catch u online :( but srsly the weather is mind blowing n so soothing :) n yea there are so MANY places to DEVOUR :D

cheers

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

lovely, lovely, lovely, LOVELY one shot, I absolutely loved it, it was sooooooooooo sweet, so cute, I can't even describe it properly nj, all I can tell you is that you have left me with a huge smile on my face...I absolutely loved this....great one-shot...unfortuntely I wasn't aware of the voting for the summerlove contest, otherwise, a hundered percent you would have gotten my vote, but you won! and you deserved to...

Great one shot...loved it!

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pal234

@pal234

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Woww..!That was simply BEAUTIFUL...to say the least..👏
It was so damn mesmerising that my smile jus kept widening with each line...short, sweet, totalliy drenched in love...😳

Thanx for the pm :)