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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

i loved it soooo much

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

amazing one shot👏!

thnx for telling me about this, hope you write more one shots⭐️

and cont. your other ffs soon😳

Edited by .x.Saira.x. - 16 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Beautiful NJ! You are a wonderful writer. U captured the simplest but most precious moments of their lives very well.

congratulations once again

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KASH_rocks

@KASH_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

that was an awesome piece of writing loved it to the core!!!!!

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Alia

@SimplyNice

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Wow nj!! nij surely is ur catalyst 👍🏼

Simply BEAUTIFUL dear.had i known abt this contest i surely wud hav voted 4 u cz u deserve it sachi. thnx 2 u nj bt i'll also thank nij 2 :) BRILLIANT WORK,bt dan it wz bound 2 b cz its ur work vr tokin abt

great going girl,

ur A genious :)

love,

Alia

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Hi Nj! 🤗 My aologies for the delayed comment but logged into IF only this morning...have been caught up with work and haven't been online fr a while...

In fact am at the airport waiting to board my flight to London (again on work!) and logged on, saw your message so had to read it!

What can I say other than I loved it? Being "lost in transit" 😆, I didn't even realise there was a contest, but you so desreved to win...reminded me of a few lines.....it just evoked a lovely feeling so here they are....

somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond
any experience, your eyes have their silence:
in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,
or which i cannot touch because they are too near

I do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens; only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses
nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands...

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

hey nj,

to say that i ve loved reading this will really be an understatement.

must say, each fic of urs is equally diff. but equally unique.

just loved each and every bit.

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

nice one NJ!! loved it! simple, sweet, romantic and it felt special...armaan was sooo haye, kya bolu ab....i dint read it before, basically wasnt active here to know abt the contest, congratsss on the win!!!

ye le NJ, i m making a shapat now, my next comment on IF will be on AoL, done! decided! see u soon....this one shot was awesome!!!

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smriti

@smriti.tweety

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Updated my comment on pg 2
Finally :D

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Sneha Desai

@-Sneha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Heyy NJ..... *hugs*

Well I won't say sorry for being emmm mahhaaa late!!... I know it'll seem like stupid excuses... Just will say was really caught up with school stuff!!... Finished my last physics test today and rushed to IF!!... Had to....

The One Shot was amazing... Just one problem.. I found it a bit too short, especially when we are so used to nice long ones from you... But then I guess that's what we call a "one shot" right?? Hahahahahah... I loved the part where AR are married, especially since its so not happening in so many FFs round here... I could see them in the scene somehow... Two angels in that bedroom... Loved th part....

What I like about your style of writing, and I hope getting there someday, is thatyou are so real in your approach... There's immediately that sense of reality once someone starts reading... The perfect equimolar relationship between "fiction" and the "real"... That's what enthralls me at least!!....Looking forward to some more like these... And sorry wasn't able to vote, I wasn't even aware... Haven't read the other, but I guess I have to say you deserved to win anyways!!....;))

Hugs,
Snehaa